(Okay, so how do you people who have read the original like the revising?
Good? Bad? Let me know.)
Luna hadn't returned for sometime now, Inuyasha and the group were beginning to worry, "We have to camp for the night, if we go to far from where we were, and Luna returns; how is she to find us?" insisted Miroku. Sango nodded in agreement,
"He's right, for once, Inuyasha, we have to make camp for the night." Kagome looked at the ground, 'What if something has happened to her? What if she's hurt? What if she's been kidnapped? What if she's in trouble? What if she's...what if she's' Kagome didn't want to think about what could be happening to Luna at this very second. Inuyasha looked at Kagome then put his hand in her shoulder gently,
"They're right Kagome, let's just make camp here..." he said softly. Kagome nodded,
"K." she said, "But as soon as the sun is up we continue to search!" she added quickly. Inuyasha smiled,
"Of course."
Kagome sat away from the others, she kept her eyes on the forest, every time the wind would blow causing the leaves to rustle she would smile anxiously, but then when she saw it was just the wind, she would sigh heavily and continue to wait. Miroku, Sango, Totousai, Shippo, and Kirara had all gone to sleep; Inuyasha walked over to Kagome and sat next to her.
"You should get some sleep..." he said.
"No, not while my daughter is..." Kagome stopped herself, she looked at the ground, "I mean, not while Luna is out there all by herself." Inuyasha studied her closely,
"Kagome...do you feel like she is your daughter?" She smiled softly,
"I can't help it, she's just so childlike, and I feel as if I'm responsible for her. I mean she does call me Momma; right? Or am I wrong for thinking this, I mean she is Kikyo's not mine; hell she thinks I am Kikyo. Don't even know why I feel that way. But when you, I, and Luna are together, I feel like...I feel like..."
"A family." He said finishing her sentence. She nodded,
"Exactly." Inuyasha put his hand on hers; Kagome scooted closer to him and rested her head on his shoulder. He put his arm around her and held her close, 'Maybe we can be a family.' He thought to himself. Inuyasha and Kagome fell into a peaceful sleep, whilst in each others arms.
(Sorry this was a short chapter, but it was just a semi-romantic scene between Kagome and Inuyasha.)
Luna hadn't returned for sometime now, Inuyasha and the group were beginning to worry, "We have to camp for the night, if we go to far from where we were, and Luna returns; how is she to find us?" insisted Miroku. Sango nodded in agreement,
"He's right, for once, Inuyasha, we have to make camp for the night." Kagome looked at the ground, 'What if something has happened to her? What if she's hurt? What if she's been kidnapped? What if she's in trouble? What if she's...what if she's' Kagome didn't want to think about what could be happening to Luna at this very second. Inuyasha looked at Kagome then put his hand in her shoulder gently,
"They're right Kagome, let's just make camp here..." he said softly. Kagome nodded,
"K." she said, "But as soon as the sun is up we continue to search!" she added quickly. Inuyasha smiled,
"Of course."
Kagome sat away from the others, she kept her eyes on the forest, every time the wind would blow causing the leaves to rustle she would smile anxiously, but then when she saw it was just the wind, she would sigh heavily and continue to wait. Miroku, Sango, Totousai, Shippo, and Kirara had all gone to sleep; Inuyasha walked over to Kagome and sat next to her.
"You should get some sleep..." he said.
"No, not while my daughter is..." Kagome stopped herself, she looked at the ground, "I mean, not while Luna is out there all by herself." Inuyasha studied her closely,
"Kagome...do you feel like she is your daughter?" She smiled softly,
"I can't help it, she's just so childlike, and I feel as if I'm responsible for her. I mean she does call me Momma; right? Or am I wrong for thinking this, I mean she is Kikyo's not mine; hell she thinks I am Kikyo. Don't even know why I feel that way. But when you, I, and Luna are together, I feel like...I feel like..."
"A family." He said finishing her sentence. She nodded,
"Exactly." Inuyasha put his hand on hers; Kagome scooted closer to him and rested her head on his shoulder. He put his arm around her and held her close, 'Maybe we can be a family.' He thought to himself. Inuyasha and Kagome fell into a peaceful sleep, whilst in each others arms.
(Sorry this was a short chapter, but it was just a semi-romantic scene between Kagome and Inuyasha.)