Disclaimer- I don't own any of the Inuyasha characters.
Okay, I've tried my hardest to give detail on this part. It was really hard since this is an action scene but I've tried my hardest. Okay, I have a few questions for the end of the story for you to review;
Did I do well on explaining the characters personalities?
Did I do better detail then before?
Do you have any suggestions for making this story better?
What should I add more detail on?
Lets have a vote on this. Should a villager or something rape Inuyasha if he gets caught? (And no Sesshoumaru is not a part of the something for raping him.)
Well, I'd better let you get to the story. In the next chapter or so I'll give messages to reviewers. Well goodbye!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~
A DEMON
Inuyasha starred at the field. It was covered with hay and such. There were about eight men chopping the hay down and two horses pulling the bales. Two women were picking at the seeds trying to get them into baskets and six children running around having fun.
It was almost evening and Inuyasha was getting hungry. He wouldn't have that much energy to get by them if they tried to capture him. But then Sesshoumaru would Probley starve him as a lesson. Sesshoumaru was getting closer. Much closer.
Inuyasha knew he had only one choice. It was either the town's people or Sesshoumaru practically beating him to death. 'Sesshoumaru, or people?'
Without really thinking of what he was doing or where he was going he flung himself into the clearing. Everyone stopped what they were doing and looked at him with fear filling in there eyes. The children stopped and all ran behind the adults seeking protection. The woman and men all stood frozen trying to register if the demon was dangerous.
Inuyasha just glared at them trying to show he didn't want them to hate him or like him. He edged a little bit forward trying to get passed. All the people took a step back. Some forgot about having children behind themselves and knocked them over. Inuyasha took another step forward by crawling on all fours showing he didn't really want to attack. Everyone yet again took a step back. After about a minute of step forward everyone goes back, one man was brave enough to speak by then yelling to the people around him and the villagers, "A demon run! Hide the woman and children."
Everyone had looked like they were frozen but after the man yelled they fled. Men came out of the village on horses with ropes and tons of dogs coming with them.
'Great. I could just run forward but they'd probably catch me. I could then run back into the forest but then Sesshoumaru would find me. Speaking of him, I can smell him near me. I'd better run fast!'
But before Inuyasha had a chance to start running he then felt ropes going all around him. About five went around each arm making it impossible to scratch them, seven around his left leg and eight around his right and one around his neck making him struggle even more.
Slowly he was able to almost reach a guy to scratch him but out of nowhere a board came up and hit him in the face knocking him down. He got back up and flung at another guy but only got hit on his head by another board. Two dogs made their way and bit him on the waist and arm. Another came over and bit his right leg.
'Sesshoumaru! I can smell him. He's almost here. Okay, right now I'd rather have him beat me then this. I need him so much right now. Hurry Sesshoumaru!' Inuyasha screamed abit as he felt a few more dogs biting all over him.
Inuyasha fell to the ground practically giving up. More blows were being hit across his body. He felt one smack into his ribs making it almost impossible to breathe. 'They're going to kill me! What do they want? I've already surrendered to them. I was hoping they'd stop hitting me but my hopes aren't coming true yet. Sesshoumaru where are you? I can't breathe.'
Inuyasha saw little black dots floating around in his eyes. They continued to get bigger as he struggled to stay awake. Inuyasha was slowly falling asleep. The last thing he saw before he passed out was a white blur attacking the humans, and then everything went black.
Okay, I've tried my hardest to give detail on this part. It was really hard since this is an action scene but I've tried my hardest. Okay, I have a few questions for the end of the story for you to review;
Did I do well on explaining the characters personalities?
Did I do better detail then before?
Do you have any suggestions for making this story better?
What should I add more detail on?
Lets have a vote on this. Should a villager or something rape Inuyasha if he gets caught? (And no Sesshoumaru is not a part of the something for raping him.)
Well, I'd better let you get to the story. In the next chapter or so I'll give messages to reviewers. Well goodbye!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~
A DEMON
Inuyasha starred at the field. It was covered with hay and such. There were about eight men chopping the hay down and two horses pulling the bales. Two women were picking at the seeds trying to get them into baskets and six children running around having fun.
It was almost evening and Inuyasha was getting hungry. He wouldn't have that much energy to get by them if they tried to capture him. But then Sesshoumaru would Probley starve him as a lesson. Sesshoumaru was getting closer. Much closer.
Inuyasha knew he had only one choice. It was either the town's people or Sesshoumaru practically beating him to death. 'Sesshoumaru, or people?'
Without really thinking of what he was doing or where he was going he flung himself into the clearing. Everyone stopped what they were doing and looked at him with fear filling in there eyes. The children stopped and all ran behind the adults seeking protection. The woman and men all stood frozen trying to register if the demon was dangerous.
Inuyasha just glared at them trying to show he didn't want them to hate him or like him. He edged a little bit forward trying to get passed. All the people took a step back. Some forgot about having children behind themselves and knocked them over. Inuyasha took another step forward by crawling on all fours showing he didn't really want to attack. Everyone yet again took a step back. After about a minute of step forward everyone goes back, one man was brave enough to speak by then yelling to the people around him and the villagers, "A demon run! Hide the woman and children."
Everyone had looked like they were frozen but after the man yelled they fled. Men came out of the village on horses with ropes and tons of dogs coming with them.
'Great. I could just run forward but they'd probably catch me. I could then run back into the forest but then Sesshoumaru would find me. Speaking of him, I can smell him near me. I'd better run fast!'
But before Inuyasha had a chance to start running he then felt ropes going all around him. About five went around each arm making it impossible to scratch them, seven around his left leg and eight around his right and one around his neck making him struggle even more.
Slowly he was able to almost reach a guy to scratch him but out of nowhere a board came up and hit him in the face knocking him down. He got back up and flung at another guy but only got hit on his head by another board. Two dogs made their way and bit him on the waist and arm. Another came over and bit his right leg.
'Sesshoumaru! I can smell him. He's almost here. Okay, right now I'd rather have him beat me then this. I need him so much right now. Hurry Sesshoumaru!' Inuyasha screamed abit as he felt a few more dogs biting all over him.
Inuyasha fell to the ground practically giving up. More blows were being hit across his body. He felt one smack into his ribs making it almost impossible to breathe. 'They're going to kill me! What do they want? I've already surrendered to them. I was hoping they'd stop hitting me but my hopes aren't coming true yet. Sesshoumaru where are you? I can't breathe.'
Inuyasha saw little black dots floating around in his eyes. They continued to get bigger as he struggled to stay awake. Inuyasha was slowly falling asleep. The last thing he saw before he passed out was a white blur attacking the humans, and then everything went black.