Lord_Sun: Ok... I've pretty much abandoned my old fic, it being a disaster.
I've also decided to shorten my author's comments, and much more changes.
Thanks especially to Destiny Kerogg (sorry if I mispelt that), of whom I
unjustly insulted for making fair comments. I like this idea. Please go
easy on the insulting words, but I will eagerly take any constructive
criticism.
Isaac: Camelot owns Golden Sun!
"And so, running through the warm water, with the soft mud playing at their feet, the newly weds Isaac and Mia ran up to the winged ship, and, laughing carelessly, with their friends already on board the ship, they flew off to the skies, and the people of Contigo never saw them again." The long brown haired man finished. "Is it true, daddy? Did Isaac and Mia fly away after they killed the giant dragon and got married?" Will asked breathlessly. Laughing, the man, Felix, got up from the children's bed. "Ask me no questions, and I'll tell you know lies." Felix told him. Lisa, Felix's other child, sighed. "I love a happy ending", she sighed. "Bed time" Felix told the two. "Ok!" The children cried, scuffling into bed. Felix sighed, and` turned off the light, kissing the children. Lisa, the younger child, a mere four years old, turned and looked at her older brother, Will, who had been six for a week. Will had hair like their mothers, Sheba, whose hair was short and blonde, though his body more like his father's, which was tough and muscular. Lisa had her father's hair, long and brown, though much tidier. Her body, though, was similar to her mother's, stronger than it looked, though taller. But the thing that set Lisa apart was that while her family all had brown or blue eyes, she had a light, shiny, gold to hers.
Felix stepped out of the children's room, and, spotting Sheba, pulled her close into a hug. "Did you tell them Isaac and Mia's story again, dear?" She whispered. Felix nodded, hugging her tighter. "They're never coming back, hon. Never. They're gone." She whispered again, tears blurring her blue eyes. Felix paused. "I know... I know." "The kids don't even have the powers. Adeptry is gone. We're the last." Yet another pause from Felix. Longer, this time. "Lisa has powers. Adept powers." She pushed away from him. "What?" Sheba whispered urgently. "I can sense it." This time Sheba said nothing for a time. Then—"They might not be strong enough to channel through her body. Her powers, they might—""They might, they might not. We can only wait and see." Felix interrupted her. "Yes... I suppose" And, with a kiss, they went to bed.
"Lisa! Lisa! Wake up! Wake up, now!" A voice came, drifting into her sleep and tearing her dreams. "Mmmmmhh?" Lisa murmured. "Wake up!" Felix said. The adept hunters are here! We must flee!" "The what?" Lisa asked. Without answering, Felix scooped up her brother and her, and ran outside, promptly dropping the children in some large bushes. "I'm going to get your mother. She is in the shelter, helping evacuate. Stay here, don't move." Felix said quickly, and ran off, drawing his sword out, disappearing into the shadows. "Will, what's going on?" Lisa asked. "We're being ransacked." Will said, his face white. Ten minutes passed, and the Felix and Sheba came running. Felix tripped, and fell, laying sprawled across the ground, a bloody arrow protruding from his back. "Felix!" Sheba screamed, running to his body. " Stay their, children!" Sheba cried through her tears. And then an arrow was protruding her back, too, then another, in her leg. Sheba fell promptly, blood running around her body, steam lifting from her blood into the crisp night air. Will staggered forward, mouth hanging open, and half ran, half stumbled to his parents, while Lisa, frozen in fear, tears streaming down her face, watched as a large bald bandit ran up to him, grabbing Will by the cuff. Will struggled, but the bandit only laughed, shaking Will, checking him for possessions. When nothing dropped, the bandit shrugged, and clubbed him in the head, and even Lisa could here the crack from where she hid, and Will fell, falling into the sleep in which he would never awaken, to join his parents. And Lisa, four years old, sat in the bushes, and as bandits burnt everything she new, and destroyed her whole world, she closed her eyes and she cried. And she cried all night long.
Lord_Sun: Wow... that's....sad.... I can't believe I wrote that. Mudshippers rule!!!YAAAAH!
Isaac: Camelot owns Golden Sun!
"And so, running through the warm water, with the soft mud playing at their feet, the newly weds Isaac and Mia ran up to the winged ship, and, laughing carelessly, with their friends already on board the ship, they flew off to the skies, and the people of Contigo never saw them again." The long brown haired man finished. "Is it true, daddy? Did Isaac and Mia fly away after they killed the giant dragon and got married?" Will asked breathlessly. Laughing, the man, Felix, got up from the children's bed. "Ask me no questions, and I'll tell you know lies." Felix told him. Lisa, Felix's other child, sighed. "I love a happy ending", she sighed. "Bed time" Felix told the two. "Ok!" The children cried, scuffling into bed. Felix sighed, and` turned off the light, kissing the children. Lisa, the younger child, a mere four years old, turned and looked at her older brother, Will, who had been six for a week. Will had hair like their mothers, Sheba, whose hair was short and blonde, though his body more like his father's, which was tough and muscular. Lisa had her father's hair, long and brown, though much tidier. Her body, though, was similar to her mother's, stronger than it looked, though taller. But the thing that set Lisa apart was that while her family all had brown or blue eyes, she had a light, shiny, gold to hers.
Felix stepped out of the children's room, and, spotting Sheba, pulled her close into a hug. "Did you tell them Isaac and Mia's story again, dear?" She whispered. Felix nodded, hugging her tighter. "They're never coming back, hon. Never. They're gone." She whispered again, tears blurring her blue eyes. Felix paused. "I know... I know." "The kids don't even have the powers. Adeptry is gone. We're the last." Yet another pause from Felix. Longer, this time. "Lisa has powers. Adept powers." She pushed away from him. "What?" Sheba whispered urgently. "I can sense it." This time Sheba said nothing for a time. Then—"They might not be strong enough to channel through her body. Her powers, they might—""They might, they might not. We can only wait and see." Felix interrupted her. "Yes... I suppose" And, with a kiss, they went to bed.
"Lisa! Lisa! Wake up! Wake up, now!" A voice came, drifting into her sleep and tearing her dreams. "Mmmmmhh?" Lisa murmured. "Wake up!" Felix said. The adept hunters are here! We must flee!" "The what?" Lisa asked. Without answering, Felix scooped up her brother and her, and ran outside, promptly dropping the children in some large bushes. "I'm going to get your mother. She is in the shelter, helping evacuate. Stay here, don't move." Felix said quickly, and ran off, drawing his sword out, disappearing into the shadows. "Will, what's going on?" Lisa asked. "We're being ransacked." Will said, his face white. Ten minutes passed, and the Felix and Sheba came running. Felix tripped, and fell, laying sprawled across the ground, a bloody arrow protruding from his back. "Felix!" Sheba screamed, running to his body. " Stay their, children!" Sheba cried through her tears. And then an arrow was protruding her back, too, then another, in her leg. Sheba fell promptly, blood running around her body, steam lifting from her blood into the crisp night air. Will staggered forward, mouth hanging open, and half ran, half stumbled to his parents, while Lisa, frozen in fear, tears streaming down her face, watched as a large bald bandit ran up to him, grabbing Will by the cuff. Will struggled, but the bandit only laughed, shaking Will, checking him for possessions. When nothing dropped, the bandit shrugged, and clubbed him in the head, and even Lisa could here the crack from where she hid, and Will fell, falling into the sleep in which he would never awaken, to join his parents. And Lisa, four years old, sat in the bushes, and as bandits burnt everything she new, and destroyed her whole world, she closed her eyes and she cried. And she cried all night long.
Lord_Sun: Wow... that's....sad.... I can't believe I wrote that. Mudshippers rule!!!YAAAAH!