HANARELLA. . . AN EVER AFTER STORY
Once in a far away land, there lived a redhaired genki, somewhat handsome young boy that goes by the name of Hanamichi Sakuragi.
Little Hana grew to be a boisterous, loud-mouthed, healthy seven years old boy who was loved by his papa very much. Because of this love, gremio sakuragi decided to marry again to give little Hana a mother who will care and guide his growing up.
And so the day came for Master Gremio and his new wife's arrival. Thus, our story begins. . .
It was a very busy day in the Sakuragi manor. Every single servant was busy making sure that everything is sparkling clean and in the right order. They can't have the new mistress having a bad impression about the master's subjects now, could they? But despite all the gruesome preparations they had carefully planned, there's still one trouble too much for them to handle, or rather too lively to stay put in one place. . .
"Hold still, young master Hanamichi! I haven't finished dressing you yet," ordered Nana Kina, Hanamichi's personal nurse since birth. She's been having trouble putting Hanamichi's trousers on.
Hanamichi only twirled giddily in place. "This is just like noodles, Nana. Just add hot water and look what I got? A new mother and a brother and a sister in an instant!"
Nana Kina shook her head. "Always food with you, ne, young master?"
"Ne, nana? Do you think she'll be beautiful like my mother? Huh? Huh?" Hanamichi asked excitedly, now playing with his shirt buttons.
"I'm sure your new mother will be just as beautiful, young master," Nana answered with a smile though still having trouble about the boy running around with his underwear only and now the added trouble of the unbuttoned shirt. The boy's happiness is contagious indeed.
"What about my brother and sister?"
"Ooohh, just as beautiful as their mother I'm sure," she said absentmindedly.
Hanamichi frowned at the reply. "Boy's aren't beautiful, nana."
Nana Kina's smile widened. "Of course they could be beautiful. You, my boy, is just as pretty as your mother."
Hanamichi deliberately sulked at being called pretty. "I am not pretty!"
"Ooohh, yes you are Ha-na-chan. So I wouldn't be surprised if your brother would be as pretty as his mother," Nana Kina teased.
"I am not! And my brother isn't, too. Pretty are for sissies. And don't call me chan!"
Kina only laughed at the boy's tantrum. She finds the pouting boy cute. But before she could have changed the subject a loud call from outside had caught Hanamichi's attention.
Hanamichi looked out of his bedroom window and found his best friend standing outside.
"What are you doing here, Youhei? I thought I said I won't be playing today?" Chastised the seven years old redhead.
"I know! But these guys wants to check on you," Youhei said. That's when Hanamichi noticed three more people his age outside.
"Yeah, we just came by to see how 'ya doin'," Noma added.
"Uh-huh. What's with all the clothes, Hanamichi? You turning girly now?" Asked Yuji.
"Baka, this is called a suit. This is what you wear for special occasions. But I guess commoners like you don't know that!" Hanamichi lectured. The 'commoner' stuff is between the five of them since only him in the group is from a well to do family. It pisses the other four.
"Ch. We still think you look like a sissy," Takamiya shot back.
Hanamichi's temper flared. "Who'd you calling sissy, baka?!"
"You."
"Temme! Have you no respect to the Tensai!?"
"You're only a tensai in your dreams Hana-kun. And stop calling us baka, baka."
Hanamichi scowled. "You're gonna pay for that You-kun."
"Not with that dress you won't, Ha-na-chan," Noma taunted. They all know how Hanamichi hated being called a girl.
Hanamichi definitely growled at that. "Gentleman or not, this Tensai can still whip the four of you. KYAAHHH!!!"
The war cry was all the warning the four got as Hanamichi jumped off his window and landed on them with a punch and a kick. The fight was on!
Nana Kina was horrified when Hanamichi jumped out of the second story window nonetheless. What could she tell master Gremio if Hanamichi had hurt himself? AARGH! The boys are just too much!
"Young master Hanamichi, stop this barbaric behavior at once! Your father will arrive soon and--" She paused when she heard the loud call from outside. Signalling that the master's entourage is near.
"Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! What will I do? What will I do? YOUNG MASTER! YOUHEI! ALL OF YOU! Stop your fighting this instant!!!!"
But her effort failed to no avail. The five boys just ignored her or most probably could not hear her with all their squabbles that consist of a lot of words and more fists.
'Take that!' 'Hah! You missed' 'Temme! No one can defeat the Tensai!' HEADBUTT! 'Hah! Let's see about that!' and a lot more of: POW! UGH! BLAG! BOINK! HEADBUTTS!! %$#@&#%@!!!! *_*':;
Nana Kina shook her head. She's starting to develop a permanent throbbing vein on her forehead.
TBC. . .
A/N: That's it for the first chap. How d'ya find it so far? I really want to hear your thoughts on this one. I am a reasonable person so I could and will appreciate an educated critique about the story and the writing. But would be hurt deeply if you threw me a FLAME. This is my first time posting any of my stories and I don't want to be discouraged on the first try. ARIGATOU_GOZAIMASHITA!!! *_^ V JA!
Once in a far away land, there lived a redhaired genki, somewhat handsome young boy that goes by the name of Hanamichi Sakuragi.
Little Hana grew to be a boisterous, loud-mouthed, healthy seven years old boy who was loved by his papa very much. Because of this love, gremio sakuragi decided to marry again to give little Hana a mother who will care and guide his growing up.
And so the day came for Master Gremio and his new wife's arrival. Thus, our story begins. . .
It was a very busy day in the Sakuragi manor. Every single servant was busy making sure that everything is sparkling clean and in the right order. They can't have the new mistress having a bad impression about the master's subjects now, could they? But despite all the gruesome preparations they had carefully planned, there's still one trouble too much for them to handle, or rather too lively to stay put in one place. . .
"Hold still, young master Hanamichi! I haven't finished dressing you yet," ordered Nana Kina, Hanamichi's personal nurse since birth. She's been having trouble putting Hanamichi's trousers on.
Hanamichi only twirled giddily in place. "This is just like noodles, Nana. Just add hot water and look what I got? A new mother and a brother and a sister in an instant!"
Nana Kina shook her head. "Always food with you, ne, young master?"
"Ne, nana? Do you think she'll be beautiful like my mother? Huh? Huh?" Hanamichi asked excitedly, now playing with his shirt buttons.
"I'm sure your new mother will be just as beautiful, young master," Nana answered with a smile though still having trouble about the boy running around with his underwear only and now the added trouble of the unbuttoned shirt. The boy's happiness is contagious indeed.
"What about my brother and sister?"
"Ooohh, just as beautiful as their mother I'm sure," she said absentmindedly.
Hanamichi frowned at the reply. "Boy's aren't beautiful, nana."
Nana Kina's smile widened. "Of course they could be beautiful. You, my boy, is just as pretty as your mother."
Hanamichi deliberately sulked at being called pretty. "I am not pretty!"
"Ooohh, yes you are Ha-na-chan. So I wouldn't be surprised if your brother would be as pretty as his mother," Nana Kina teased.
"I am not! And my brother isn't, too. Pretty are for sissies. And don't call me chan!"
Kina only laughed at the boy's tantrum. She finds the pouting boy cute. But before she could have changed the subject a loud call from outside had caught Hanamichi's attention.
Hanamichi looked out of his bedroom window and found his best friend standing outside.
"What are you doing here, Youhei? I thought I said I won't be playing today?" Chastised the seven years old redhead.
"I know! But these guys wants to check on you," Youhei said. That's when Hanamichi noticed three more people his age outside.
"Yeah, we just came by to see how 'ya doin'," Noma added.
"Uh-huh. What's with all the clothes, Hanamichi? You turning girly now?" Asked Yuji.
"Baka, this is called a suit. This is what you wear for special occasions. But I guess commoners like you don't know that!" Hanamichi lectured. The 'commoner' stuff is between the five of them since only him in the group is from a well to do family. It pisses the other four.
"Ch. We still think you look like a sissy," Takamiya shot back.
Hanamichi's temper flared. "Who'd you calling sissy, baka?!"
"You."
"Temme! Have you no respect to the Tensai!?"
"You're only a tensai in your dreams Hana-kun. And stop calling us baka, baka."
Hanamichi scowled. "You're gonna pay for that You-kun."
"Not with that dress you won't, Ha-na-chan," Noma taunted. They all know how Hanamichi hated being called a girl.
Hanamichi definitely growled at that. "Gentleman or not, this Tensai can still whip the four of you. KYAAHHH!!!"
The war cry was all the warning the four got as Hanamichi jumped off his window and landed on them with a punch and a kick. The fight was on!
Nana Kina was horrified when Hanamichi jumped out of the second story window nonetheless. What could she tell master Gremio if Hanamichi had hurt himself? AARGH! The boys are just too much!
"Young master Hanamichi, stop this barbaric behavior at once! Your father will arrive soon and--" She paused when she heard the loud call from outside. Signalling that the master's entourage is near.
"Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! What will I do? What will I do? YOUNG MASTER! YOUHEI! ALL OF YOU! Stop your fighting this instant!!!!"
But her effort failed to no avail. The five boys just ignored her or most probably could not hear her with all their squabbles that consist of a lot of words and more fists.
'Take that!' 'Hah! You missed' 'Temme! No one can defeat the Tensai!' HEADBUTT! 'Hah! Let's see about that!' and a lot more of: POW! UGH! BLAG! BOINK! HEADBUTTS!! %$#@&#%@!!!! *_*':;
Nana Kina shook her head. She's starting to develop a permanent throbbing vein on her forehead.
TBC. . .
A/N: That's it for the first chap. How d'ya find it so far? I really want to hear your thoughts on this one. I am a reasonable person so I could and will appreciate an educated critique about the story and the writing. But would be hurt deeply if you threw me a FLAME. This is my first time posting any of my stories and I don't want to be discouraged on the first try. ARIGATOU_GOZAIMASHITA!!! *_^ V JA!