Chapter 7
Unexpected
AN: Alright first off I have to say I got my first bad review.. From: super gotenks()
what the hell was that that sucked
That is exactly what was written. Now I agree.chapter 6 sucked ass, but for future reference, how bout being a lil more creative. Like telling me why. Comprende?
Of course now I actually have to say thanx, because right after I read that I started on the next chapter. This is hopefully be a lot better then the last two, I keep changing from messed up angst to humor, but alas I think I finally found a happy medium. Anger, angst, w/ comic relief thrown in for my own amusement. So here it goes. Please please please, review!!! I want to know, whats good whats bad.where do u want the story to go.
*************************** She moved as fast as she could. Kagome knew he could follow her sent; it was inevitable that he would catch up to her, but she wanted to have made it to the others by then.
The thudding of her own heart was deafening her ears. She didn't want to be alone with Inuyasha again, anytime soon. She had pushed him one too many times. He was in short, pissed.
She could hear Sango. "Miroku, you letch!" She surged foreword with a renewed sense of urgency. She flew into the clearing of the campsite.
She tripped over Shippou, and sailed head first, into a hard masculine body. Shit, she thought. Miroku's not that buff. She kept her head bent, pressed into the hard stomach. Not particularly wanting to look up.
"Kagome, first you're taking off my pants, and then you're just falling all over me. If you want me that badly, you should just say so.'
She felt the heat rise up her face. "Kagome?!' Sango asked. "It's not how it sounds Sango. I ripped his pants, because he wouldn't put me down. Honestly"
Shippou stepped up to Inuyasha, now that he had pushed Kagome off him. "Where are the prayer beads?" Asked a slightly fearful Shippou. The hanyou's only response was a wide toothy grin that suggested one too many things.
It took an hour to explain the situation, another hour to get Inuyasha to leave Shippou alone.
It was late night before everyone was ready to settle down. Inuyasha was asleep in his tree. Sango was lying down by Kagome. Miroku was on the other side of the fire, upon the death threats of the girls. Shippou was snuggled into Kagome's sleeping bag and all was well.
(Yeah right.) "Pst..Pst Sango." Kagome hissed to the dozing girl beside her. She opened her eyes, and almost opened her mouth before Kagome silenced her. She pointed to the silver haired creature in the tree. Sango caught on.
Together Sango and Kagome crept out of the campsite. Once they were a good football length away Sango finally spoke. "So what's this about Kagome?"
"Sango we need to find another necklace to bind Inuyasha. He's impossible. I can't stand it anymore. He won't ever let me go home, until all the jewel shards are collected."
Sango raised an eyebrow. "And this is a new development?"
Kagome sighed exasperated. "Well now I can't sit him, so yeah slightly new development." She said with irritation.
"Alright Kagome, there's a witch about days travel from here. Its rumored she knows all these ancient spells. Maybe she can create a new necklace, or perhaps tell us who created the first one."
Kagome looked hopeful for a minute, and then her eyes clouded. "Yeah, but Inuyasha will get suspicious. He knows the jewel is around the western border."
Sango thought for a moment, and then seemed to hesitate, even though she looked like she had an answer. "What if..Miroku and I, go to find the witch and another necklace? You and Inuyasha stay here, looking or the jewel shard. That way he'll never suspect what we're doing."
"That could work, except what we would say you are doing when you leave us."
"There's another jewel shard in the village. The witch is guarding it."
"Another jewel shard?"
The voice was not Kagome's. "Inuyasha!" "Yes, and just what do you two think your doing out here. This is the fucking western boarder if you haven't forgotten, unless you were looking to meet up with my brother."
His voice was icy. Anger boiled just below the surface of his eyes. "We didn't want to wake the others. Miroku and I will leave tomorrow to collect the other jewel shard, while you and Kagome try to pinpoint this one." Sango raised her eyes defiantly daring him to argue the plan.
He did not. "Fine, now get back to camp."
Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's arm, and just about dragged her along. "Hey you jerk let go!"
Sango followed carefully concealing her amusement, laughing wasn't going to get the hanyou to cool down anytime soon.
They reached the campsite, and Kagome tried to pull free of Inuyasha, so she could lie down, but he held tight.
"Inu.ahhhhhhhhhhhh"
He leapt into the tree, Kagome along with him. Before Kagome could say a word he stated firmly. "I don't think I can trust you to stick around, so you're staying where I can keep an eye on you."
Kagome's face was completely indignant. Then like an angry child she pointed to her friend. "But she went with me! How come I'm the only one in the damn tree?"
"Because it was your idea to leave in the first place."
"You heard us leave?!" Inuyasha pulled Kagome's back to him. "The dead could have heard you leave."
Sango was muffling a laugh in her blankets. Those two were made to each other she though, before drifting off.
Kagome stayed awake long into the night. She was Very much aware of his heat. The warmth of his muscular body, pressed against her own. His heart beat, steady, comforting in way.
She moved back against him, reclining more to get comfortable. Why the hell did he have to sleep in a tree?
As she moved she felt him respond. (Not that way!) He moved his hands up her arms, his clawed fingertips grazing her chest. The gesture seemed only meant to comfort for her brought his hands back down slowly, Holding her to him as he brought his arms around her middle, lightly. She sighed. It was now past midnight, and she was tired. Her head rolled to the side as she fell into slumber.
Inuyasha awoke as he heard Movement down below.
It was the group. Shippou was whining about being up so early. Sango hushed him and delivered a smack to Miroku, his wandering hand had brought him another bruise. It was a wander he didn't have brain damage yet. Meh.maybe he did.....
Inuyasha watched as they left. It was still early and there was no need to get up so he settled back down.
He inhaled the scent of the black haired vixen's hair. She smelt of vanilla and a light trace fruit, Sweet enough to eat. Her slender neck exposed to him, the dark tresses had blown aside in the night.
Her could here her pulse, the blood rushing through her veins. Her own natural smell intoxicated him. He bent his head forward and nuzzled her soft flesh. Then he licked her, Just tasting the slightly salty tang of her skin.
His eyes lulled to the side. What was this feeling? His arms tightened around her middle. He went to her neck again, this time delivering an open mouth kiss. The blood just below the surface of the skin rose a little at the heat of his mouth. He felt his fangs elongate, and did not think as he pressed them into her soft neck.
The metallic tang of blood drugged him. He felt her stir but held tighter. "Inuyasha!"
"Stop please!"
He heard her, but a part of him, a very primal part ingnored her,
until he heard another's presence. The smell of his dear brother assaulted him.
"Yes Inuyasha, do stop, I don't think she can take much more blood loss."
It was not concern for Kagome which lead to this statement, but pure malice for his brother, and a chance to insult his weakness.
"Put the bitch down little brother, I have no quarrel with her." His tone was deadly and sharp. Fluffykins was standing on his branch only a few feet from him. How had he messed up this badly?
He took the shaking Kagome and jumped to the ground. His brother followed. He set Kagome down then moved away from her. This wasn't going to be a pretty fight.
************************** So watcha think? Any suggestions would be good. I'm not quite sure what to do for the fight scene, so any input would be great.
Happy Holidays!
Unexpected
AN: Alright first off I have to say I got my first bad review.. From: super gotenks()
what the hell was that that sucked
That is exactly what was written. Now I agree.chapter 6 sucked ass, but for future reference, how bout being a lil more creative. Like telling me why. Comprende?
Of course now I actually have to say thanx, because right after I read that I started on the next chapter. This is hopefully be a lot better then the last two, I keep changing from messed up angst to humor, but alas I think I finally found a happy medium. Anger, angst, w/ comic relief thrown in for my own amusement. So here it goes. Please please please, review!!! I want to know, whats good whats bad.where do u want the story to go.
*************************** She moved as fast as she could. Kagome knew he could follow her sent; it was inevitable that he would catch up to her, but she wanted to have made it to the others by then.
The thudding of her own heart was deafening her ears. She didn't want to be alone with Inuyasha again, anytime soon. She had pushed him one too many times. He was in short, pissed.
She could hear Sango. "Miroku, you letch!" She surged foreword with a renewed sense of urgency. She flew into the clearing of the campsite.
She tripped over Shippou, and sailed head first, into a hard masculine body. Shit, she thought. Miroku's not that buff. She kept her head bent, pressed into the hard stomach. Not particularly wanting to look up.
"Kagome, first you're taking off my pants, and then you're just falling all over me. If you want me that badly, you should just say so.'
She felt the heat rise up her face. "Kagome?!' Sango asked. "It's not how it sounds Sango. I ripped his pants, because he wouldn't put me down. Honestly"
Shippou stepped up to Inuyasha, now that he had pushed Kagome off him. "Where are the prayer beads?" Asked a slightly fearful Shippou. The hanyou's only response was a wide toothy grin that suggested one too many things.
It took an hour to explain the situation, another hour to get Inuyasha to leave Shippou alone.
It was late night before everyone was ready to settle down. Inuyasha was asleep in his tree. Sango was lying down by Kagome. Miroku was on the other side of the fire, upon the death threats of the girls. Shippou was snuggled into Kagome's sleeping bag and all was well.
(Yeah right.) "Pst..Pst Sango." Kagome hissed to the dozing girl beside her. She opened her eyes, and almost opened her mouth before Kagome silenced her. She pointed to the silver haired creature in the tree. Sango caught on.
Together Sango and Kagome crept out of the campsite. Once they were a good football length away Sango finally spoke. "So what's this about Kagome?"
"Sango we need to find another necklace to bind Inuyasha. He's impossible. I can't stand it anymore. He won't ever let me go home, until all the jewel shards are collected."
Sango raised an eyebrow. "And this is a new development?"
Kagome sighed exasperated. "Well now I can't sit him, so yeah slightly new development." She said with irritation.
"Alright Kagome, there's a witch about days travel from here. Its rumored she knows all these ancient spells. Maybe she can create a new necklace, or perhaps tell us who created the first one."
Kagome looked hopeful for a minute, and then her eyes clouded. "Yeah, but Inuyasha will get suspicious. He knows the jewel is around the western border."
Sango thought for a moment, and then seemed to hesitate, even though she looked like she had an answer. "What if..Miroku and I, go to find the witch and another necklace? You and Inuyasha stay here, looking or the jewel shard. That way he'll never suspect what we're doing."
"That could work, except what we would say you are doing when you leave us."
"There's another jewel shard in the village. The witch is guarding it."
"Another jewel shard?"
The voice was not Kagome's. "Inuyasha!" "Yes, and just what do you two think your doing out here. This is the fucking western boarder if you haven't forgotten, unless you were looking to meet up with my brother."
His voice was icy. Anger boiled just below the surface of his eyes. "We didn't want to wake the others. Miroku and I will leave tomorrow to collect the other jewel shard, while you and Kagome try to pinpoint this one." Sango raised her eyes defiantly daring him to argue the plan.
He did not. "Fine, now get back to camp."
Inuyasha grabbed Kagome's arm, and just about dragged her along. "Hey you jerk let go!"
Sango followed carefully concealing her amusement, laughing wasn't going to get the hanyou to cool down anytime soon.
They reached the campsite, and Kagome tried to pull free of Inuyasha, so she could lie down, but he held tight.
"Inu.ahhhhhhhhhhhh"
He leapt into the tree, Kagome along with him. Before Kagome could say a word he stated firmly. "I don't think I can trust you to stick around, so you're staying where I can keep an eye on you."
Kagome's face was completely indignant. Then like an angry child she pointed to her friend. "But she went with me! How come I'm the only one in the damn tree?"
"Because it was your idea to leave in the first place."
"You heard us leave?!" Inuyasha pulled Kagome's back to him. "The dead could have heard you leave."
Sango was muffling a laugh in her blankets. Those two were made to each other she though, before drifting off.
Kagome stayed awake long into the night. She was Very much aware of his heat. The warmth of his muscular body, pressed against her own. His heart beat, steady, comforting in way.
She moved back against him, reclining more to get comfortable. Why the hell did he have to sleep in a tree?
As she moved she felt him respond. (Not that way!) He moved his hands up her arms, his clawed fingertips grazing her chest. The gesture seemed only meant to comfort for her brought his hands back down slowly, Holding her to him as he brought his arms around her middle, lightly. She sighed. It was now past midnight, and she was tired. Her head rolled to the side as she fell into slumber.
Inuyasha awoke as he heard Movement down below.
It was the group. Shippou was whining about being up so early. Sango hushed him and delivered a smack to Miroku, his wandering hand had brought him another bruise. It was a wander he didn't have brain damage yet. Meh.maybe he did.....
Inuyasha watched as they left. It was still early and there was no need to get up so he settled back down.
He inhaled the scent of the black haired vixen's hair. She smelt of vanilla and a light trace fruit, Sweet enough to eat. Her slender neck exposed to him, the dark tresses had blown aside in the night.
Her could here her pulse, the blood rushing through her veins. Her own natural smell intoxicated him. He bent his head forward and nuzzled her soft flesh. Then he licked her, Just tasting the slightly salty tang of her skin.
His eyes lulled to the side. What was this feeling? His arms tightened around her middle. He went to her neck again, this time delivering an open mouth kiss. The blood just below the surface of the skin rose a little at the heat of his mouth. He felt his fangs elongate, and did not think as he pressed them into her soft neck.
The metallic tang of blood drugged him. He felt her stir but held tighter. "Inuyasha!"
"Stop please!"
He heard her, but a part of him, a very primal part ingnored her,
until he heard another's presence. The smell of his dear brother assaulted him.
"Yes Inuyasha, do stop, I don't think she can take much more blood loss."
It was not concern for Kagome which lead to this statement, but pure malice for his brother, and a chance to insult his weakness.
"Put the bitch down little brother, I have no quarrel with her." His tone was deadly and sharp. Fluffykins was standing on his branch only a few feet from him. How had he messed up this badly?
He took the shaking Kagome and jumped to the ground. His brother followed. He set Kagome down then moved away from her. This wasn't going to be a pretty fight.
************************** So watcha think? Any suggestions would be good. I'm not quite sure what to do for the fight scene, so any input would be great.
Happy Holidays!
