Author: Fiona Opal
Summary: Ever since they laid eyes on each other, Lily Evans has always hated James Potter, and his group of pranksters. But now one prank is one prank too many. Now in their sixth year, Lily has taken a vow and is determined to catch James, and expel him from Hogwarts. But as she and her friends look for the truth they also discover a very big secret, and an even bigger plan. Now it's up to Lily Evans, to stop the worst from happening.
Disclaimer: Yes I own all of J.K. Rowling's characters and places. What do you think stupid! Of course not! Basically any name or place unknown is mine. Oh and even though Fiona and Hannah are mine, half the names are J.K. Rowling's.
"Finally!" Lily Evans exclaimed as she sat down in a seat of The Hogwarts Express. For 11 years Lily had thought she was a normal girl. But on her 11th birthday she found out she was a witch, and was now starting her sixth year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. "Sister trouble?" Her best friend Fiona Brown asked with a grin. Lily grinned back and answered. "The worst." Since she was born, she and her sister Petunia had been totally different, from looks to personality. Lily had auburn hair, which she often wore in braids, and emerald eyes. Petunia was extra tall, with a long face, black beady eyes and short raven colored hair. Petunia was spoiled, complained a lot, and was known to gossip. Lily on the other hand was kind, simple, and quiet. Unfortunately for Lily this summer Petunia's "wonderful" boyfriend Vernon had been staying with them for the summer, and heard the word freak around her twice as often. Though she spent as little time with them as possible, she was really happy to be back in the wizard world. She then smiled at her two best Friends, Hannah Patil, and Fiona Brown. Fiona was larger than the other two, had copper skin, chocolate eyes, and curly black hair. She spent half of her time being a witch, and the other time a muggle, for her wizard father was divorced to her muggle mother. Hannah was raised by a witch and wizard, and had many younger siblings. She had clear blue eyes and silver blonde hair. Since Lily had no wizard parent, she often went to professor Flitwick for advice and questions. ****On the train**** "So with amount of practice I put in the Gryffindor team has to take me!" Fiona chatted excitedly. "Ya, for sure." Hannah said with a groan. "With the amount of times you made us practice with you, you could make it ten times over." Lily laughed and agreed. "Unfortunately," she added, her face turning grim. "Some people might not let you on the team." Before she could tell her friends exactly who she meant, (but of course they and we all know), someone answered it for her. "POTTER!!!" A horrified voice rang throughout the whole train. Before any of the girls could say a word, 2 boys ran into the compartment, closed the door, and fell on the floor laughing. Lily looked at the boy with messy black hair and glasses with pure loathing. James Potter. From the day shed laid eyes on him in their in their first year, Lily had hated James Potter. She looked at him now as she had that first day. "Bully, bighead, showoff, prankster." The list went on and on in her head. James was captain of the quidditch team, and spent every moment playing with a snitch he'd nicked to show off. He pulled outrageous pranks, and got in loads of trouble. You would also find him in one fight with a slithering, most commonly Severus Snape. Snape was a lonely boy, who from the sounds of it had yet another prank pulled on him. She walked over and glowered at the two boys. "What did you do to him?" She asked in a disgusted voice. "No more than he deserved." Said James's partner in crime and best friend Sirius Black. "Ladies," He added, turning to Hannah and Fiona who were giggling like crazy. "Care to give us a hand. Say you didn't see us?" The girls nodded and began to giggle. The two boys slipped under two seats, and Lily just glared. She hated Sirius almost as much as she did James. He had nearly as large an ego, was a beater on the quidditch team, an even larger prankster than James, and hated Snape and the Slytherins as much. She knew that her friends knew that, she just hated how they could be so lovesick sometimes. She knew that she shouldn't be surprised. James and Sirius were considered two of the most popular guys in school. Sirius had at least one girlfriend a week, and James wasn't much better. Lily would never forget the day that James had asked her out, in their fifth year. But that didn't really matter, so Lily pushed the thought to the back of her mind and continued to glare. To Lily's further annoyance, once again the compartment door slid open. "Oh great," She thought. "Who's it going to be this time?" She turned around, and for the first time smiled. For a Slytherin, Severus Snape was an excellent student at Hogwarts, who Lily liked. He was a prefect like herself, Loved Defense against the dark arts, and studied hard. She tried to ignore the fact that he was rude to her, figuring that he was just feeling scarred, because nobody but her liked him. He turned and faced her friends who were still giggling. "Fiona, Hannah, You haven't seen any idiots around here lately have you?" His voice was curt, and his face angry. Lily wasn't surprised when Fiona shook her head, and Hannah added, "No idiots". Lily tried to be nice and asked Snape politely, "Why? What did the idiots do?" Snape answered, however his backed was turned to her, as he still was facing her friends. "GRRR. Those idiots charmed my books to dance around my head singing "Snivelous Snape from Sucky Slytherin should wash his slimy hair." It was then that Lily noticed that his hair was wet and filled with suds. "The books then gurgled out water and suds. Grrrrr, I'll kill them!" Then he stalked off, totally missing James and Sirius, smirking under the chairs. Within a second the two boys emerged, and started laughing and poking fun of Snape. For one fleeting moment, Lily had the erg to join them. After all Snape had been anything but nice to her, and what happened was pretty funny. However one look at James's cocky faced, changed her mind. "I can't believe you did that to him!" She shrieked at the two boys, turning the other two girls faces back to their grim look. They didn't like their friend in a bad mood. "Relax Evans it wears off soon." James said, trying to make the situation better. However this seemed to make Lily even worse, and a second later she staled out of the compartment, silently followed by Fiona and Hannah. However right as Hannah was leaving, Sirius put on his best cheesy face and went up to Hannah with a smile. ****In the next compartment**** "I can't believe that ass." Lily said still fuming. "Oh calm down, let's play some exploding snap, Fiona said, trying to calm her down. But all thoughts were forgotten when Hannah came in, a dazed look on her face. Lily was first curious at what the guys had said, but she once again became angry when she heard what happened. "You agreed to go steady WITH SIRIUS BLCK!" She roared, ignoring that Hannah was close to tears. "What was I supposed to do?" Hannah quietly whimpered. "SAY NO!" Lily shrieked. (Or punch his face in she thought.) After all that she finally threw up her hands in a disgusted look, and turned her attention over to the window. She didn't speak with either girl for the rest of the train ride.
A/N This girl really can't calm down can she? LOL! Well hoped you liked it and please Review! Oh and please give me your opinion on the descriptions. Too many, too few? Please tell me! I'll try to post again soon!
Summary: Ever since they laid eyes on each other, Lily Evans has always hated James Potter, and his group of pranksters. But now one prank is one prank too many. Now in their sixth year, Lily has taken a vow and is determined to catch James, and expel him from Hogwarts. But as she and her friends look for the truth they also discover a very big secret, and an even bigger plan. Now it's up to Lily Evans, to stop the worst from happening.
Disclaimer: Yes I own all of J.K. Rowling's characters and places. What do you think stupid! Of course not! Basically any name or place unknown is mine. Oh and even though Fiona and Hannah are mine, half the names are J.K. Rowling's.
"Finally!" Lily Evans exclaimed as she sat down in a seat of The Hogwarts Express. For 11 years Lily had thought she was a normal girl. But on her 11th birthday she found out she was a witch, and was now starting her sixth year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. "Sister trouble?" Her best friend Fiona Brown asked with a grin. Lily grinned back and answered. "The worst." Since she was born, she and her sister Petunia had been totally different, from looks to personality. Lily had auburn hair, which she often wore in braids, and emerald eyes. Petunia was extra tall, with a long face, black beady eyes and short raven colored hair. Petunia was spoiled, complained a lot, and was known to gossip. Lily on the other hand was kind, simple, and quiet. Unfortunately for Lily this summer Petunia's "wonderful" boyfriend Vernon had been staying with them for the summer, and heard the word freak around her twice as often. Though she spent as little time with them as possible, she was really happy to be back in the wizard world. She then smiled at her two best Friends, Hannah Patil, and Fiona Brown. Fiona was larger than the other two, had copper skin, chocolate eyes, and curly black hair. She spent half of her time being a witch, and the other time a muggle, for her wizard father was divorced to her muggle mother. Hannah was raised by a witch and wizard, and had many younger siblings. She had clear blue eyes and silver blonde hair. Since Lily had no wizard parent, she often went to professor Flitwick for advice and questions. ****On the train**** "So with amount of practice I put in the Gryffindor team has to take me!" Fiona chatted excitedly. "Ya, for sure." Hannah said with a groan. "With the amount of times you made us practice with you, you could make it ten times over." Lily laughed and agreed. "Unfortunately," she added, her face turning grim. "Some people might not let you on the team." Before she could tell her friends exactly who she meant, (but of course they and we all know), someone answered it for her. "POTTER!!!" A horrified voice rang throughout the whole train. Before any of the girls could say a word, 2 boys ran into the compartment, closed the door, and fell on the floor laughing. Lily looked at the boy with messy black hair and glasses with pure loathing. James Potter. From the day shed laid eyes on him in their in their first year, Lily had hated James Potter. She looked at him now as she had that first day. "Bully, bighead, showoff, prankster." The list went on and on in her head. James was captain of the quidditch team, and spent every moment playing with a snitch he'd nicked to show off. He pulled outrageous pranks, and got in loads of trouble. You would also find him in one fight with a slithering, most commonly Severus Snape. Snape was a lonely boy, who from the sounds of it had yet another prank pulled on him. She walked over and glowered at the two boys. "What did you do to him?" She asked in a disgusted voice. "No more than he deserved." Said James's partner in crime and best friend Sirius Black. "Ladies," He added, turning to Hannah and Fiona who were giggling like crazy. "Care to give us a hand. Say you didn't see us?" The girls nodded and began to giggle. The two boys slipped under two seats, and Lily just glared. She hated Sirius almost as much as she did James. He had nearly as large an ego, was a beater on the quidditch team, an even larger prankster than James, and hated Snape and the Slytherins as much. She knew that her friends knew that, she just hated how they could be so lovesick sometimes. She knew that she shouldn't be surprised. James and Sirius were considered two of the most popular guys in school. Sirius had at least one girlfriend a week, and James wasn't much better. Lily would never forget the day that James had asked her out, in their fifth year. But that didn't really matter, so Lily pushed the thought to the back of her mind and continued to glare. To Lily's further annoyance, once again the compartment door slid open. "Oh great," She thought. "Who's it going to be this time?" She turned around, and for the first time smiled. For a Slytherin, Severus Snape was an excellent student at Hogwarts, who Lily liked. He was a prefect like herself, Loved Defense against the dark arts, and studied hard. She tried to ignore the fact that he was rude to her, figuring that he was just feeling scarred, because nobody but her liked him. He turned and faced her friends who were still giggling. "Fiona, Hannah, You haven't seen any idiots around here lately have you?" His voice was curt, and his face angry. Lily wasn't surprised when Fiona shook her head, and Hannah added, "No idiots". Lily tried to be nice and asked Snape politely, "Why? What did the idiots do?" Snape answered, however his backed was turned to her, as he still was facing her friends. "GRRR. Those idiots charmed my books to dance around my head singing "Snivelous Snape from Sucky Slytherin should wash his slimy hair." It was then that Lily noticed that his hair was wet and filled with suds. "The books then gurgled out water and suds. Grrrrr, I'll kill them!" Then he stalked off, totally missing James and Sirius, smirking under the chairs. Within a second the two boys emerged, and started laughing and poking fun of Snape. For one fleeting moment, Lily had the erg to join them. After all Snape had been anything but nice to her, and what happened was pretty funny. However one look at James's cocky faced, changed her mind. "I can't believe you did that to him!" She shrieked at the two boys, turning the other two girls faces back to their grim look. They didn't like their friend in a bad mood. "Relax Evans it wears off soon." James said, trying to make the situation better. However this seemed to make Lily even worse, and a second later she staled out of the compartment, silently followed by Fiona and Hannah. However right as Hannah was leaving, Sirius put on his best cheesy face and went up to Hannah with a smile. ****In the next compartment**** "I can't believe that ass." Lily said still fuming. "Oh calm down, let's play some exploding snap, Fiona said, trying to calm her down. But all thoughts were forgotten when Hannah came in, a dazed look on her face. Lily was first curious at what the guys had said, but she once again became angry when she heard what happened. "You agreed to go steady WITH SIRIUS BLCK!" She roared, ignoring that Hannah was close to tears. "What was I supposed to do?" Hannah quietly whimpered. "SAY NO!" Lily shrieked. (Or punch his face in she thought.) After all that she finally threw up her hands in a disgusted look, and turned her attention over to the window. She didn't speak with either girl for the rest of the train ride.
A/N This girl really can't calm down can she? LOL! Well hoped you liked it and please Review! Oh and please give me your opinion on the descriptions. Too many, too few? Please tell me! I'll try to post again soon!