Age: 14
Hair: Very short, spiky, dark brown
Eyes: Small, dark brown, wears glasses with a black rectangle frame.
Appearance: Wears a plain white shirt, a cream jacket with black stripes down the sleeves, blue jeans, black trainers, and a plastic white fang necklace.
Attitude: Witty and extremely sarcastic, very impatient and loves her food, loves telling jokes and playing pranks on people, really funny and can always make people laugh and enjoys doing it, sometimes goes hyper and when she does she sings really loudly, can be quite moody sometimes, has a VERY hot temper, hot-headed and stubborn and really determined, sometimes shy when she's not hyper.
Likes: she's very musical and a little groover when it comes to dancing
Beyblade color: White with four curved silver-streaked spikes and a light blue bit chip.
Bitbeast: Crysticle, a pure white stag with silver antlers, silver hooves, and shadow grey eyes.
Element: Ice
Attacks: Glimmering Ice - Shoots a beam of ice at the opponent, freezing it. Arctic Frost – Creates a snowstorm. Crystal Light – Fills the room/area with a blinding white light that only Toni and Crysticle can see through
Character files for my new OC's:
Name: Josephine Potter
Age: 18 (almost 19)
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Sea blue
Attitude: Caring, positive. She likes to take care of things and wants everyone to be happy. She can be kinda annoying when she's so happy all the time but it's almost impossible to be mad at her for a longer amount of time…
Name: David Hikari? LaVelle
Age: 20
Hair: Hazel brown
Eyes: Blue
Attitude: Very caring, probably even more than Josephine. He's also a great artist and sports a lot. He's a soccer player and is away a lot because of that.
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I realized that I kinda tangled myself up in a sentence in the latest chappie… It was supposed to be "easy to LOVE Josephine" and not "easy NOT to love…"… Sorry for that one…I just wanna straighten some things out okay? I've decided that Kevin and Bruce (from the White Tigers) have gone home and are no longer with the team. I can't keep so many characters in my mind so I dropped them. And Kenny is not getting so much space cuz I have serious problems with keeping him and Dizzi in character.
And I KNOW that is was like ages ago since I updated… But I have been pretty busy and I wanted this chapter to be more interesting than my last one.
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Beyblade or any of it's characters. I DO NOT own Toni Hikari LaVelle, who truly belongs to her owner. I also don't own "My Immortal" by Evanescence. But I DO own my OC Laynie, her bitbeast and Josephine. Chapter Thirteen: "My Immortal"
[So tired...]
That was the only thing Laynie could think of right now. She was resting her head onto Kai's chest and was half asleep.
Kai and Laynie were alone in the hotel room and rested in Kai's bed. Both of them were pretty tired after spending a day shopping with Mariah.
- "Who knew that Mariah had such energy…" Laynie establish and Kai smirked. Mariah had forced them to visit every shop in the city with the explanation:
- "We might miss something if we don't.
So, after hours of shopping, everyone (plus Mariah) had a whole new outfit for the BBA event.
(A/N: I'll try to describe the clothes, but I really had a hard time making them up…)
Laynie had bought a pair of white/red, baggy trousers and a red top that slightly showed her tattoo on the belly. Kai had bought black, baggy trousers and a white shirt in the same type as his usual one. Tyson and Max had accidently bought black jeans both of them. Tyson had matched the jeans with a blue shirt and Max an orange shirt. Kenny had bought blue jeans and a white shirt. Mariah had decided for a white and pink dress that reached just above her knees. A
Laynie sighed and enjoyed Kai's presence and his comforting warmth. She was still sorry for her grandma, but she knew that she had to move on. If she didn't, her grandma would probably return to haunt her or something. And now, Josephine had showed up. Laynie was actually a little curious to find out more about her. It was a surprise to herself, cause she normally didn't give a damn about new people. She preferred to stick around to the ones she already knew.
- "Hey Kai?" Laynie whispered and raised her head from his chest. She had realized that they didn't know WHERE the event was supposed to be.
- "Yeah?"
- "Where will the event be hold?"
Kai frowned. Mr. Dickenson had only told them WHEN the event would be hold. Not WHERE.
Laynie took Kai's silence as a no. "But wouldn't Mariah know where the event is hold? I mean, they have to know where to go, right?"
Kai smirked. "I guess so. But let's wait and see if not a little letter from Mr. Dickenson shows up…"
- "And what are we supposed to do before the letter arrives?"
- "This maybe." Kai leaned over and kissed Laynie carefully on her lips. Laynie smiled.
- "Sounds fine with me."
Half an hour later arrived the 'little letter' from Mr. Dickenson. Laynie signed the form and opened the letter.
- "What does it say?" said Kai and read over Laynie's shoulder. She gave him a quick glance before turning to the letter again. She shook her head slowly and smiled in amusement.
- "Looks like we have two hours for packing then. We better call the others. Do you know where they are?" She said.
Kai frowned. "I believe Tyson, Max and Kenny is eating somewhere and Ray is probably…"
- "…with Mariah." Laynie finished the sentence for him and smiled.
~*~ Ray and Mariah… ~*~
- "Did you have a good time shopping?"
Mariah nodded happily and smiled. "Yeah, it was great. And it was even greater to be with you."
Ray smiled back and kissed Mariah on her cheek. He didn't like shopping that much, but he LOVED being with Mariah. The pink-haired girl had been his best friend ever and knew him better than no one else.
- "Well, I couldn't leave you with Kai could I?" He said teasingly.
Mariah poked him lightly and laughed. "I know that you never would do that. But if you did, I think Laynie would be disappointed. I think there's something going on between them…"
Ray nodded. "I know! But I doubt that they'll show it for us…"
- "I guess you're right… Too bad that both of them is so damn concerned about their pride." Mariah shook her head.
[Yeah, they are. But both of them has changed a lot lately and I think they'll drop their pride soon and stop caring so much about what other people say…] Ray thought and took a deep breath. The cool air filled his lungs and he let the peace fill him. The evening was just perfect. So relaxing, so peaceful… so…
The cell phone interrupted Ray's thoughts. He shot his eyes open again and tried started to search his pockets for the phone. He found it and answered the call.
- "Yeah, it's Ray?"
- "Hi Ray, it's Laynie. You and Mariah gotta come back to the hotel immediately cause we're supposed to be picked up in two hours for a flight." Laynie's soft voice said and Ray frowned.
- "Flight? Where are we going?"
[Flight? That's odd… Why does it seem so familiar…] Mariah frowned, thinking of what the word could remind her about. Suddenly it hit her! [Oh my God, I've to pack everything for the flight to Scotland! What's the time? God, I must be SO late!]
- "Okay, see you soon. Bye!" Ray hung up and turned to Mariah with panic written all over his face.
- "Looks like we have two hours to get ready for a flight somewhere." He said and got up on his feet. He helped Mariah up too.
- "Scotland." Mariah replied.
- "Huh?" Ray frowned. [What is she talking about?]
Mariah hurried her steps. "We're going to Scotland." She elucidated.
- "So you're saying that we're going to Scotland. Why?"
Mariah shook her head, still walking fast. "I don't know. The only thing written in the letter was that we must be ready at 7:00 pm for the flight to Scotland."
- "Scotland? Why Scotland?" mumbled Ray.
~*~ In the Bladebreaker's hotel room… ~*~
- "I'm so BORED!" complained Tyson and dropped his head on the table.
- "It's only half an hour more, Tyson. At least try to stand it…" replied Max, but seemed to be as bored as Tyson.
They had packed in no time at all, which surprised both Laynie and Kai who had expected true chaos to break out. But the room was now all cleared from stuff and you could actually walk on the floor without jumping from free areas.
- "Let's go down to the lobby. The White Tigers should come there soon." Suggested Ray and immediately received meaning gazes from everyone in the room.
Hi cheeks turned into a bright pink tone. "What?" He said.
- "Nothing, nothing…" replied Laynie and smiled. "Well, let's go down then? Lock the door whoever is last out okay?"
The Bladebreakers wandered down to the lobby and, fortunately, the White Tigers were already there.
- "Hi, ready for the flight?" Mariah smiled broadly at them.
- "Yeah, sure." Laynie shrugged. She had no clue why they were going to Scotland but she suspected that it had something to do with the event BBA held.
- "I'm so excited! Maybe we'll meet Johnny there? Doesn't he live in Scotland?" Max seemed to be in his hyper mood and everyone sweatdropped. It was probably going to be a long, long trip…"
~*~ At the airport… ~*~
- "Can someone keep an eye on Max!" shouted Laynie, pretty annoyed now. Max had talked nonstop since they left the hotel now and she fought back the impulse of hitting him. Hard.
- "And don't give him anymore sugar, okay?" Kai glared at Tyson, as he was the guilty one.
Tyson's jaw dropped. "Aww, I always get busted for things. And I'm innocent this time!"
Lee laughed. "This time yeah."
- "Okay, the gate should open soon so just go and do whatever you want to." Laynie sighed and rubbed her eyes.
[This is why I don't like being in big groups. No privacy at all. And where is Josephine?] Laynie just realized that the older girl was missing. She had been with them when they had checked in at the airport but now she was gone.
- "Where is Josephine?" said Laynie to Kai, frowning slightly.
Kai shrugged. He was happy that everyone had left for different errands, leaving him and Laynie alone.
- "I think she said something about meeting someone."
- "She better be back before the plane takes off… God, I can't believe I've to baby-sit an eighteen year old…" muttered Laynie and Kai put an arm around her, holding her closer.
- "Is something wrong, Laynie? You have been in a very… strange mood lately."
Laynie snorted. "Well, except for the fact that my grandma recently died, I'm feeling just great." She snarled and closed her eyes to keep the tears away.
Kai was silent for a while, but still holding Laynie close. "I'm sorry." He said quietly and Laynie blinked in surprise.
- "You're what?" She said and her eyes widened slightly, making her green eyes look like emeralds.
- "I said; I'm sorry." Repeated Kai and Laynie shook her head. Her tears were gone now and she tried to smile.
- "Never thought I would hear that from you…" She replied. "Anyway, I'm sorry too. I've been in a strange mood lately, and I think it's because Josephine and everything going on…"
Kai nodded slowly. He wanted to comfort and make things a little easier for her, but he knew that this was something she had to get through alone.
Just when Kai and Laynie had started to get really comfortable together, a voice called them back to "reality". They broke apart and searched the area for the source of the voice.
- "Over here!"
It was Josephine shouting at them. But she wasn't alone. A tall guy with brown hair stood next to her with a younger girl who seemed to be at the same age as Tyson, Max and Kenny.
- "Hi?" said Laynie and couldn't help but sound little inquiring.
- "Laynie and Kai, I would like you to meet my boyfriend David Hikari LaVelle and his little sister Toni!" Josephine smiled.
David held out his hand and Laynie took it with some hesitation. "I'm David. Nice to meet you." He said.
- "Laynie…" mumbled Laynie before turning her gaze to the girl. She had short, dark brown hair and seemed to appear as a gigantic smile. [Great, another Max to keep an eye on…]
- "I'm Toni! I watched you guys on TV when you won the Championships. You were awesome!" She said and nodded happily. "I'm actually a blade too!"
- "Are you going to Scotland with us?" frowned Kai and crossed his arms.
Toni nodded again. "Yup, but you haven't heard the best thing yet! I'm gonna…"
Toni was cut short by Josephine and David, both covering her mouth and muffled her sentence.
- "Toni! That's supposed to be a secret until the announcement!" Warned Josephine and laughed.
- "You are so bad at keeping secrets! I remember when you had promised not to say that I borrowed dad's car." David gave Toni a meaning gaze and nudged her.
Toni just smiled and gave them her most innocent face. "I can't help it! I just love to talk and sometimes, I don't even know what I'm talking about…"
Laynie and Kai stood silent and watched the three standing there, not a problem in the world. They felt so…so far away from that. They seemed to have grown up in a caring family and had such a positive look on life. Either Laynie or Kai had been and it must've placed some prints on them…
[I wonder how I would have been if I had grown up with Josephine? Would I still be this… closed or would I be more like her?] Laynie didn't want the thought to come cause it was worthless to think about how things could have been. But it slipped into her mind without asking for permission.
- "Look, they've opened the gate now! Can we board now or are we waiting for someone?" said Toni and placed her glasses better on the nose.
Laynie shook her head. "Five of us are still missing, plus the whole White Tigers."
- "So Tyson's gonna come?" asked Toni and blushed slightly.
- "Probably, if he can find the way back to us… Why do you ask?" Laynie shrugged but went a little curious when she saw that Toni now was blushing deep red.
Toni pretended not to hear and David laughed at her.
- "Toni has got a little crush on Tyson I think." He said and Toni opened her mouth to reply but didn't when the White Tigers arrived, followed by the rest of the Bladebreakers.
They all laughed and talked at the same time, being very loud, before Toni and David caught their eyes. Suddenly, everyone was quite and gave Josephine, David and Toni curious glances.
- "Hi guys, who are you?" Of course Tyson didn't waste any time.
- "Nice to see you too Tyson!" Laughed Josephine. "This is my boyfriend David LaVelle and his little sister Toni."
Tyson smiled and held out his hand to Toni. She blushed slightly and lowered her gaze to the floor when she took his hand.
- "Nice to meet you." She mumbled shyly and smiled weakly. This was the World champion and the one she had wanted to meet more than everyone in the whole world.
(A/N: If I can be a little dramatic ^^)
- "Same here." Replied Tyson. [This girl is cute!] He thought and took a closer look on her. She wore glasses but they suited her perfectly. She was maybe some centimeters shorter than him.
- "Haven't you presented yourself enough now Tyson? I mean, how interesting can you be?" said Kai and cocked his eyebrow.
Tyson immediately let go of Toni's hand and glared at Kai. But he wasn't the only one glaring.
- "I'm sure about that he's more interesting than you at least, Kai!" She said and crossed her arms.
- "You're damn right!" nodded Tyson triumphantly, happy that someone was with him for once.
Laynie clenched her hands into fists and fought back the feeling of wanting to wipe that smile of Tyson's face…
Ray realized that he once again had to play a little peacemaker and hurried to break the argue which was coming up.
- "I'm Ray, and this is my girlfriend Mariah." He said and gave Toni a sincere gaze. Mariah smiled and raised her hand making a little wave.
- "Hi!" Toni forgot all the thoughts of defending Tyson's honor and gazed at the couple instead. "You're such a cute couple!" She said and smiled.
And Tyson immediately saw an opportunity… "Do you have any boyfriend, Toni?" He asked and Toni shook her head.
- "Nope." She blushed a little and avoided Tyson's gaze
[He he… So have I!] He thought.
- "Ahem. If you don't mind people, we have a plane to board remember?" said Josephine and nodded against their gate.
- "Oh, sure! We better hurry!" Kenny reached for his bag where Dizzi had been placed for the flight. No electronic equipment allowed.
They collected all bags and hurried to the gate, and onto the waiting plane.
- "Tyson! Keep your voice down!" Shouted Ray when he saw that several people threw angry gazes at Tyson and Toni's seats.
Tyson and Toni had found each other at no time at all, and were talking like they had known each other forever. And they were talking very loud.
- "Hey Ray! Did you know that Toni is a beyblade?" Tyson turned his head and shouted to Ray over the seats between them. And now Laynie's patience was long gone… She got up from her seat and walked forward in the plane.
- "Tyson, if you don't lower your voice or even better, shut up, I promise that I'll…"
She leaned closer to him and whispered something in his ear. Tyson stiffened and Laynie returned to her seat next to Kai with a satisfied look on her face.
- "Maybe he won't shut up, but he will keep his voice down." She said and smiled. Kai smirked.
- "What did you say to him?" He asked but Laynie only shook her head, smiling secretly.
- "Let's make that stay between Tyson and I."
Kai snorted. He disliked the fact that Laynie was going to have a "secret" with Tyson.
Laynie smiled teasingly. "Jealous?" She said. "But you must admit that we have a much bigger secret to share?"
Kai's auburn eyes softened up a little. "I guess." He replied and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek.
- "I knew it! I knew it!" A female voice exclaimed, making Kai and Laynie break away from each other in a second.
- "I knew it!" Said the voice again and stood now right in front of them. It was Mariah. "I knew it." She said again and her eyes shone with excitement.
- "I think we got the message." Replied Laynie, not moving a muscle in her face.
But Mariah still smiled, now making everyone look first at her and after that, on Laynie and Kai.
- "So, how long have you been a couple?" said Josephine. She had turned around in her seat, now smiling gently at Laynie who seemed to be pretty uncomfortable now and twisted in her seat.
Laynie ignored the question and stared out through the window instead.
[What happens now then?] She thought. [I've never planned it this far…] Laynie had been so happy just being with Kai and never give a thought on what would happen when they'd "showed the world" their love.
But she knew one thing. Whatever that would happen, she knew that Kai always would be there for her.
- "What? Laynie and Kai is A COUPLE?!" Now Tyson had got the message and stood straight up in the plane, shouting out his question.
~*~ In Edinburgh… ~*~
The plane had landed and everyone was waiting for the bags to come on the band.
(A/N: Okay, I really don't have any idea of what that thing is called but I'm sure about that everyone knows what I'm talking about?)
- "For how long is we supposed to wait?" Moaned Tyson. He had given up teasing Laynie and Kai now cause none of them bothered to reply… And that was taken the fun of it away…
- "I don't now, but I'm starting to get bored…" agreed Max and sat down on the band. So did Tyson and Toni.
Laynie watched them settle down on the band and smirked. She pushed Kai in his side and nodded in the fourteen years old direction.
[This can be fun…] She thought.
And it WENT fun. Tyson, Max and Toni were half asleep on the band now when it suddenly started. Max was quick to jump off and everyone waited for Tyson and Toni to do the same.
- "What are you waiting for? Just jump of the band!" shouted David and walked after them.
- "I can't! I'm stuck!" replied Toni and struggled with her jacket, which seemed to be stuck into the band.
- "You're what?" Josephine came running behind David.
Toni kept struggling with her jacket. "I'm stuck! But I don't know why Tyson's still here!" She shouted and gave Tyson a quick glance.
But they never came to know why Tyson still sat there, cause Toni and him disappeared through the hole, leaving Josephine and David on the outside.
Laynie covered her mouth, trying to muffle her laugh. Seeing Tyson and Toni disappear through the hole was just too much…
- "Oh my God! Have you ever seen anything funnier?" Laughed Mariah and buried her head into Ray's shoulder, shaking with laugh.
- "I doubt that!" answered Ray and shook his head.
Suddenly, a door swung open and a man dressed in an orange jacket pushed out Toni and Tyson.
(A/N: I don't know how it is in your country but in Sweden, they wear that kinda stuff…)
- "And kids at your age would know better than to play with the band!" finished the man his lecture and closed the door.
- "Kids!?" snorted Tyson and gave the door a kick. "I'm fourteen for God's sake!"
- "Yeah, me too!" shouted Toni, before examine her jacket's sleeve. It seemed to be a little dirty but it wasn't a hole or something.
They returned to the people waiting for them and everyone shook their heads.
- "Well, it looks like you don't have to be alone on your small adventures, Tyson…"
~*~ (Finally) at the hotel in Edinburgh… ~*~
- "Wow, Mr. Dickenson!" Tyson's jaw dropped when Mr. Dickenson opened the door to their room.
- "Yeah… Wow."
Everyone simply stared when they stepped into the room. The first thing they saw was the view. The heaven was filled with twinkling stars on a black background.
- "How many bedrooms are it?" asked Ray and gazed around in the room.
- "Three. Two for three and one for two." Answered Mr. Dickenson and smiled. "I thought that you guys wanted to choose by yourself."
Everyone nodded and Mr. Dickenson disappeared after apologizing.
- "So… Where are we gonna sleep?" Max looked around on everyone. "I can sleep with Tyson. I mean, no one else usually wants to…"
- "Thanks for that one, buddy!" muttered Tyson.
- "You should be lucky that SOMEONE wants to…" replied Laynie with bored voice. "I'm taking this room and whoever who wanna join… Be my guest."
She grabbed her bag and opened the first bedroom door. All of the stuff in the room was in blue velvet, the bed, the chairs, and some parts of the wall.
- "Wow, looks like we're in velvet heaven…" she mumbled and dropped her bag onto the floor.
- "Yeah. Lovely isn't it?" An ironic voice said and Laynie knew perfectly who it was…
She smiled and closed her eyes. "Aren't you a sunray?" She said.
- "Someone has to be." He replied and wrapped his arms around her waist. Laynie sighed quietly and leaned back. Kai rested his chin on Laynie's head.
- "You know what, Kai? I'm not sorry for being 'busted' or whatever to call it…" She whispered and could feel how Kai softly laughed.
~*~ Next day… ~*~
Everyone was dressed in their new clothes and ready to leave for the BBA event. They waited in the big lobby for the limousine to arrive.
- "I hope they have a lot of food cause I'm starving!" said Tyson loud.
Toni nodded. "Me too."
David and Josephine laughed. "Toni and Tyson, didn't you eat any lunch at all?"
- "But that was hours ago." Replied Toni and pouted.
- "Actually Toni, we all ate two hours ago." Said Laynie and smirked. "And I hope your beyblading skills are better than your memory."
Toni placed a finger onto her lips and pretended to think about it. "Nah. They aren't." She said. "It's much better!"
- "Come on and prove yourself then!" Tyson grabbed his Dragoon and showed it to Toni.
She put her hand into the pocket and pulled out a white beyblade with a light blue chip. It was a picture of a white stag on it and everyone (except Josephine and David of course) bent over to see it better.
- "Wow! You have a BITBEAST?" Max gazed at Toni who smiled broadly. She nodded.
- "Yup, its name is Crysticle, my best friend!" She said and caressed the picture gently.
She was about to say something more but was cut off by Mr. Dickenson's voice:
- "Hello, my dear friends!" He said and smiled. "Are you ready to leave?"
Two limousines waited for them with the drivers holding the doors for them. Kai, Laynie, Ray, Mariah, David, Josephine and Mr. Dickenson chose the first one and the rest took the second.
- "Where are we going?" asked Laynie and settled down into the limousine's leather seats.
Mr. Dickenson shook his head and smiled mysterious. "I think I'll keep that a secret. But I promise that you won't be disappointed."
- "Who will be there?" Kai crossed his arms over his chest and leaned back.
- "Yeah, other teams? BBA's crew?" continued Ray, frowning. He sat close to Mariah and held her hand.
Laynie watched them and wondered if that could have been her and Kai… Probably not. She was still too shy to expose her feelings and emotions in front of other people. She knew she loved Kai and she also knew that he felt the same. Wasn't that enough?
Of course it was, but sometimes she just wanted to relax and do whatever she wanted. In public or not. But who knew? She had already changed a lot and maybe there was more to come…
~*~ Later… ~*~
- "I can't believe that we're INSIDE a CASTLE!" said Tyson and gazed around in the room. "And I can't believe how tasty this ice-cream is!"
Laynie sighed. "It's sorbet Tyson. Not ice-cream." She said and took another spoon of the green sorbet. It tasted melon and summer, even better than regular ice cream.
- "Who cares about the name? It's the taste that counts!" protested Toni and smiled when she swallowed the sweet sorbet. "Mmmm… It's lovely."
Laynie gazed at Kai and realized that he hadn't eaten anything yet. "Why aren't you eating?" She asked and gazed into his deep auburn eyes.
Kai cocked his eyebrow. "To sweet for me…" He replied and Laynie rolled her eyes.
- "That's why you don't eat ice cream? Because it's to sweet?"
- "Yes. Do you have a problem with it?"
Laynie laughed. "Nope."
- "Ahem!" Mr. Dickenson stood on the stage and cleared his throat to get everyone's attention. "I welcome all of you to the celebration party for the Bladebreakers, new European Champions!"
Applauses came and Laynie wanted to sink through the floor. She still hated the attention and just wanted to hide sometimes. But Tyson didn't seem to have anything against it at all…
- "Yes, yes. We're very proud of you and soon, another announcement will be made. But first, let us adults rest on the food and maybe you younglings can dance a little in the next room?" Continued Mr. Dickenson and made a gesture to a door, leading to the next room.
The other room was dark and two doors were opened, leading to a gigantic balcony.
Suddenly, music beamed out from hidden loudspeakers. It played Evanescence's song "My Immortal" and very soon, couples danced slowly to the music.
Laynie smirked and took Kai's hand. "Come here." She said and led him out on the balcony. Stars were twinkling from the sky and the air was still warm from the sun.
She laid her arms around Kai's neck and he wrapped his arms around Laynie's thin waist. They moved slowly to the music and enjoyed the warmth and comfort the other gave. Laynie relaxed and rested her head onto Kai's shoulder.
- "Will you ever leave me?" She whispered.
Kai held her closer. "Never."
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Pam pam pam! Chapter thirteen done! And it turned out pretty long didn't it? Hm, it must be about 12 pages at least. I know that everything kinda rushed away in the end of the chapter but I wanted to update tonight…
Okay, now I'm moving on to the most important part (well, after the fic maybe). All the reviewers!!!! Cookies and candy to all of you! ^^
Suicide-greeting: Glad to hear that you like it
ANgirl: Um, now he has told her right? And yes, they ARE the cutest couple!
Death-morals: I know… But I dun know if I want him to be a sweetheart.
Silverninja: Glad to hear that your date turned out fine, but it was a while since I last heard from you now?
Mystique Rain: Wow, are you sure about beta-reading (I think it's the name 4 it) my stuff? It's probably a lot of mistakes and it's often more than seven pages… Anyway, I'm updating this one without any corrections and maybe you can reply in a review? Or send me an email? I don't know. Maybe we'll meet on MSN, cuz I think I've added you.
Kelly (Buttery): He he, there's some more surprises to come yes. Some of them has already been told in this chappie. I didn't mean to force you into tears or something but it's a good sign of that I touched someone. ^^
Nise-anjel: I hope you had a good time at your grandparent's house, I love going to mine. :D
Surfergurl16: I know it was a little boring but my week was kinda lousy when I wrote it… So it wasn't you.
Hikage Kitsune: Thanks *bows*
Lil' Tanuki: I like your fic, I think it has a very good storyline. Keep updating those chapters! :)
She Devil 2004: Lol, you can talk as much as you want. And yes, I killed Laynie's grandmother. Or, maybe not killed but…
Tifa May Tari: I'm trying to update quickly but hell-on-earth forces me to obey… It means, do the homeworks…
Bread 'N' Butter (Bready): Ok, did I keep Toni in character? It was way more difficult than I ever could've imagined… She's a nice OC and I'm looking forward to have her in my sequel! She'll get more space in that cuz I wanna concentrate on Laynie/Kai here.
bs3ssi0n: Well, now have I updated right? And it was about time… ^^