Alright, to the reviewers,
MissFuzz-(first review) I'll try my best to make sure I fix the grammar errors before I post. (2nd review) I'll try to add more music things in the story (i.e., discussions on drummers as you stated). And about the Mr. Jones thing, it was meant to be sarcastic humor. She wasn't saying it in a serious way. (3rd review) Thank you, And yes, I'll try to have more just hanging out parts and such. I agree with you, they would have more to talk about, but please remember this is my first fanfic, so yeah it's not going to be the best. But thank you for giving me some constructive criticism. Thank you for reviewing.
Jewelkitten-I'm glad you like it, thank you. And I'll try my best.
Yoshi09-lol thank you for the review.
SOR*BBG- I'll try my best.
Thank you all for reviewing!
I'm sorry about how my paragraphs and stuff were all over the place. And how there weren't any dividing lines between different parts of the story. My computer messed up for some reason.
I do not own anything, and I don't really know what's going to happen in this chapter, but I hope you like.
And I'm sorry for not updating sooner, a lot has be going on around here, on to the story... -----------
Walking up to my house, I notice all the lights off.
I shake off some uneasy feelings, and open the door.
I feel a hand grab my shirt and pull me inside.
"Where were you?! I told you I wanted you home right after school!" My dad yells into my ear.
"Let....Me...Go" I say, trying not to lash out and get hurt more.
"I asked you something Fredrick, answer me!" My dad yells, pushing me into the living room.
I have a feeling I'm not going to feel too great in the morning...
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Sitting at home, doing my homework. I remember I forgot to get an assignment from Freddy. And I really need that assignment, it's due tomorrow.
Looking at the clock to see if it's too late or not to go get it.7:30pm, it's not too late I think. So I walk downstairs to get my coat.
I start writing a note, but then I remembered that there's no one home to read it. So I walk out the door, into the cool evening air. And start walking in the direction of Freddy's house, humming some song that we practiced earlier today. -----------------
I feel the first blow on my left cheek; I can already tell its going to leave a mark. It hurts so bad.
The second blow is to my stomach, I stagger backwards, trying to keep my balance. I do not want my father see me fall.
Before my father can hit me again, the doorbell rings.
"Stay right there Fredrick, I'm not done talking to you yet" My father says in an evil tone.
I hear my dad open the door, and ask the person what they want. But when I hear the person's response, I jump. It's Katie.
What is she doing here? Of all times, why did she have to come when my father was in a bad mood?
I hear Katie ask if I'm home, because she needs a homework assignment.
Then I hear my father say something, that makes me just want to punch him till he can't move.
"So I'm guessing you're the girl who made Freddy the little devil he is then? Sneaking out in the middle of the night, all this rock music, playing the drums. I knew it was a girl. I didn't know she would be so pretty though. Come in, I'll show you to Freddy" My dad says with something in his voice that I really don't like.
Oh no, please no. Why does my dad have to be such a jerk? I try to regain my composer and wipe up the blood on my cheek before Katie walks in.
I see Katie's eyes go wide when she sees me. I can tell my dad sees it too, because he laughs at the sight.
"Um, I'm sorry. This must be a bad time, I'll get it later." Katie says, seeing she just walked into something she never wanted to see.
"Oh no, it's okay! It's always fun having an observer when I teach Freddy a thing or two about respect." My dad says with a smirk.
I see my dad walk towards me; I get ready for another blow. But before he can do anything, I hear Katie scream stop.
I can tell she's on the verge of tears, and before I can do anything. I see my dad pull his hand back, and slap Katie across the face.
"You also need to learn a thing or two about respecting elders, young lady!" My dad yells at Katie.
Now I'm really mad. No one and I mean no one will ever touch Katie. And before I can think, I run as fast as I can, and run into my dad. Pushing him down, I kick him in his side. Grabbing Katie's hand, I run out of my house as fast as I can without making Katie fall.
After about a mile of running, I finally stop. And before either of us can say anything, I grab Katie and hug her so hard; I think I broke a few bones.... ---------------
When I saw Freddy's dad come at me, with his hand raised I froze. And after, I just went into shock; I don't remember much, other then Freddy running into his dad and kicking him; Freddy grabbing my hand and running; then Freddy grabbing me in the tightest hug and that is where we are now..
I hold onto Freddy like he's a lifesaver in the middle of the sea. And I can feel my shoulder soaked with some liquid, and then I realize Freddy is crying, no more like sobbing into my neck.
This surprises me; never in a million years would I have guessed Freddy was the sobbing type. And I'm not just going on the male pride thing, it's just seemed like Freddy was too tough. That he didn't know how to cry, he always has that tough face on. Not letting any emotions out.
Then I hear him say I'm sorry over and over again.
"Shh" I say, "It's okay"
After a few minutes, Freddy pulls away and looks at my face. I can see him getting angry.
"I can't believe it, he hit you! He actually hit you. How dare him, if I ever see him again, I'm going to kill him." Freddy says, with hate filled eyes.
"Freddy, stop. Its okay, no need to get all rallied. And stop worrying about me. It's not that bad, worry about you, look at you. You look terrible, let's go to my house. We need to clean that up before it gets infected." I say.
"Did he hit you anywhere else?" I ask
I see him nod and say, "Yeah, but its not bleeding or anything, it just hurts."
As we walk up to my doorstep, I get out my keys.
Opening the door, I turn on the lights and lead Freddy into the kitchen, to clean up the blood.
I have Freddy sit on a stool, and go get the first aid kit. While I'm looking for it, I take notice to how quiet Freddy is being.
"Freddy, are you okay?" I ask, with concern in my voice.
"He hit you" Is all I hear Freddy say.
Then I feel arms around my waist.
"I'm sorry" Freddy says into my ear.
"Freddy, its okay. Now go sit down so I can clean up that cut" I say, in a somewhat demanding tone so Freddy will listen.
I feel those arms go into retreat. I hear Freddy walk back to the stool and sit down.
After a few more minutes of looking, I finally found it.
Walking back into the kitchen, I see Freddy staring at nothing, with a blank expression on his face.
"Here" I say, sitting next to him, cleaning up as much blood as I can.
After I'm done, I decide that Freddy needs to talk to someone, and that someone isn't going to be me. Not yet, he's not ready for that. So while Freddy is in the bathroom. I pick up the phone and call Zach's cell.
"Hello?" I hear Zach say.
"Hey Zach, I have a favor to ask of you." I say
"Katie? Okay shoot." He says.
"Can you come over and talk to Freddy? Um he had a run-in with his dad, and he's really out of whack about it." I say, in a pleading voice.
"What did he do this time?" Zach asks
I tell Zach the gist of it, and wait for his reaction.
"He hit you?! I'll be over in a few minutes." Zach says before hanging up.
After hanging up the phone, I hear the TV being turned on.
I walk to the living room entrance, to see what Freddy is doing.
I see him staring blankly at the screen. I shake my head, if Freddy doesn't kill his father first, I'd be happy to obligate.
Hearing a small knock at the door, I walk to it and open it. I see Zach on the other side.
I give him a small smile.
"Thank you for coming, I'm really worried" I say with worried filled voice.
"Wow, you don't look to great. I'll go talk to him, and you go clean up and go to bed. I'll take care of it. Okay?" Zach says, taking charge.
"Thank you Zach." I say, while heading upstairs to take a nap,wanting to see Freddy before the morning. -------------------------
*Freddy POV* I can't believe it, he hit her. I'm going to kill him. I really am. He had no right to touch her. I just can't believe it... *End POV*
"Hey man" I hear Zach say.
"Hey" I say, wondering how he got here then remembering how Katie stayed in the kitchen for a little bit. Man, how do I love her.
"So what happened?" Zach asks, while sitting down next to him.
"He hit her, dude. My father hit Katie. I don't care what he did to me, but when he crossed that line, and hit her. I could just kill him." I said, anger filling my voice.
"Understandable" Zach says." So can I have the whole story?"
I tell him all that happened, and when I stop talking. I wait for his response.
"You can't go back there, dude. No telling what he's going to do next time" Zach says.
"You're going to have to turn him in, or he's going to hunt you down and take you back home."
"But what if they let him go? No telling what he's going to do." I say.
"Freddy, worry about that later, but you gotta get out now. And you need to stop with this staring blankly at the screen, Katie's worried sick. I have never seen her so worried about one person before" Zach says, concern filling his voice.
"I know, I know. I'll go talk to her when you leave." I say.
"Okay good, but dude I have to go. My dad is going to kill me when he finds out I left." He says with a little smile on his face.
I laugh a little bit and walk Zach to the door.
"Hey, call me if you need anything okay?" Zach says.
I nod, saying "Alright, well I'll see you tomorrow, maybe. Later"
He nods, and starts walking home.
After closing the door, I head upstairs to go talk to Katie.
Walking into her room, I see she has fallen asleep on her bed. She looks so peaceful besides the big red mark on her face. I decided to just leave her be for the time being.
Walking to the door, Katie says "Freddy, stay, please?"
"You sure?" I ask.
She nods, so I walk towards her bed, taking off my shoes and shirt before I lay down next to her.
I hear her gasp when she sees the big bruise on my stomach.
I see tears fall down her face, and my heart lurches.
Lying down next to her, I pull her into a tight hug.
I feel her tears on my chest, and I promise myself that I will never let my father hurt her again. "It's okay, Katie. It's all going to be okay" I say, trying to reassure her as well as myself.
"How do you know Freddy?! How do you know that your dad isn't coming this way right now to beat you to death?! How do you know that this will never happen again?!" Katie says in a loud, almost yelling voice.
"I don't know Baby, I don't know. But all I do know is I'm never going to let him hurt you ever again." I say into her hair.
I feel more tears on my chest, I wish I could just sweep her off to some place where this can all be just a mere memory.
After awhile, I hear Katie's breathing go into that steady rhythm of sleep.
I lay there thinking about everything that happened tonight, what's going to happen tomorrow, and thinking about the look on Katie's face after my father slapped her. At that thought, I pull Katie closer to me.
At about 2am, too tired to think about anything else, I let a dreamless sleep over take me.
------Ugh, I could just kill this computer, it doesn't seem to know what dividing lines are...I'm sorry for those who read this chapter before I fixed it. My computer is crap.
K! I hope you liked it, I know it was kind of unreal. But oh well! It is fiction :-p Well, please review! I'll try to update soon. Later ForTheNations----
MissFuzz-(first review) I'll try my best to make sure I fix the grammar errors before I post. (2nd review) I'll try to add more music things in the story (i.e., discussions on drummers as you stated). And about the Mr. Jones thing, it was meant to be sarcastic humor. She wasn't saying it in a serious way. (3rd review) Thank you, And yes, I'll try to have more just hanging out parts and such. I agree with you, they would have more to talk about, but please remember this is my first fanfic, so yeah it's not going to be the best. But thank you for giving me some constructive criticism. Thank you for reviewing.
Jewelkitten-I'm glad you like it, thank you. And I'll try my best.
Yoshi09-lol thank you for the review.
SOR*BBG- I'll try my best.
Thank you all for reviewing!
I'm sorry about how my paragraphs and stuff were all over the place. And how there weren't any dividing lines between different parts of the story. My computer messed up for some reason.
I do not own anything, and I don't really know what's going to happen in this chapter, but I hope you like.
And I'm sorry for not updating sooner, a lot has be going on around here, on to the story... -----------
Walking up to my house, I notice all the lights off.
I shake off some uneasy feelings, and open the door.
I feel a hand grab my shirt and pull me inside.
"Where were you?! I told you I wanted you home right after school!" My dad yells into my ear.
"Let....Me...Go" I say, trying not to lash out and get hurt more.
"I asked you something Fredrick, answer me!" My dad yells, pushing me into the living room.
I have a feeling I'm not going to feel too great in the morning...
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Sitting at home, doing my homework. I remember I forgot to get an assignment from Freddy. And I really need that assignment, it's due tomorrow.
Looking at the clock to see if it's too late or not to go get it.7:30pm, it's not too late I think. So I walk downstairs to get my coat.
I start writing a note, but then I remembered that there's no one home to read it. So I walk out the door, into the cool evening air. And start walking in the direction of Freddy's house, humming some song that we practiced earlier today. -----------------
I feel the first blow on my left cheek; I can already tell its going to leave a mark. It hurts so bad.
The second blow is to my stomach, I stagger backwards, trying to keep my balance. I do not want my father see me fall.
Before my father can hit me again, the doorbell rings.
"Stay right there Fredrick, I'm not done talking to you yet" My father says in an evil tone.
I hear my dad open the door, and ask the person what they want. But when I hear the person's response, I jump. It's Katie.
What is she doing here? Of all times, why did she have to come when my father was in a bad mood?
I hear Katie ask if I'm home, because she needs a homework assignment.
Then I hear my father say something, that makes me just want to punch him till he can't move.
"So I'm guessing you're the girl who made Freddy the little devil he is then? Sneaking out in the middle of the night, all this rock music, playing the drums. I knew it was a girl. I didn't know she would be so pretty though. Come in, I'll show you to Freddy" My dad says with something in his voice that I really don't like.
Oh no, please no. Why does my dad have to be such a jerk? I try to regain my composer and wipe up the blood on my cheek before Katie walks in.
I see Katie's eyes go wide when she sees me. I can tell my dad sees it too, because he laughs at the sight.
"Um, I'm sorry. This must be a bad time, I'll get it later." Katie says, seeing she just walked into something she never wanted to see.
"Oh no, it's okay! It's always fun having an observer when I teach Freddy a thing or two about respect." My dad says with a smirk.
I see my dad walk towards me; I get ready for another blow. But before he can do anything, I hear Katie scream stop.
I can tell she's on the verge of tears, and before I can do anything. I see my dad pull his hand back, and slap Katie across the face.
"You also need to learn a thing or two about respecting elders, young lady!" My dad yells at Katie.
Now I'm really mad. No one and I mean no one will ever touch Katie. And before I can think, I run as fast as I can, and run into my dad. Pushing him down, I kick him in his side. Grabbing Katie's hand, I run out of my house as fast as I can without making Katie fall.
After about a mile of running, I finally stop. And before either of us can say anything, I grab Katie and hug her so hard; I think I broke a few bones.... ---------------
When I saw Freddy's dad come at me, with his hand raised I froze. And after, I just went into shock; I don't remember much, other then Freddy running into his dad and kicking him; Freddy grabbing my hand and running; then Freddy grabbing me in the tightest hug and that is where we are now..
I hold onto Freddy like he's a lifesaver in the middle of the sea. And I can feel my shoulder soaked with some liquid, and then I realize Freddy is crying, no more like sobbing into my neck.
This surprises me; never in a million years would I have guessed Freddy was the sobbing type. And I'm not just going on the male pride thing, it's just seemed like Freddy was too tough. That he didn't know how to cry, he always has that tough face on. Not letting any emotions out.
Then I hear him say I'm sorry over and over again.
"Shh" I say, "It's okay"
After a few minutes, Freddy pulls away and looks at my face. I can see him getting angry.
"I can't believe it, he hit you! He actually hit you. How dare him, if I ever see him again, I'm going to kill him." Freddy says, with hate filled eyes.
"Freddy, stop. Its okay, no need to get all rallied. And stop worrying about me. It's not that bad, worry about you, look at you. You look terrible, let's go to my house. We need to clean that up before it gets infected." I say.
"Did he hit you anywhere else?" I ask
I see him nod and say, "Yeah, but its not bleeding or anything, it just hurts."
As we walk up to my doorstep, I get out my keys.
Opening the door, I turn on the lights and lead Freddy into the kitchen, to clean up the blood.
I have Freddy sit on a stool, and go get the first aid kit. While I'm looking for it, I take notice to how quiet Freddy is being.
"Freddy, are you okay?" I ask, with concern in my voice.
"He hit you" Is all I hear Freddy say.
Then I feel arms around my waist.
"I'm sorry" Freddy says into my ear.
"Freddy, its okay. Now go sit down so I can clean up that cut" I say, in a somewhat demanding tone so Freddy will listen.
I feel those arms go into retreat. I hear Freddy walk back to the stool and sit down.
After a few more minutes of looking, I finally found it.
Walking back into the kitchen, I see Freddy staring at nothing, with a blank expression on his face.
"Here" I say, sitting next to him, cleaning up as much blood as I can.
After I'm done, I decide that Freddy needs to talk to someone, and that someone isn't going to be me. Not yet, he's not ready for that. So while Freddy is in the bathroom. I pick up the phone and call Zach's cell.
"Hello?" I hear Zach say.
"Hey Zach, I have a favor to ask of you." I say
"Katie? Okay shoot." He says.
"Can you come over and talk to Freddy? Um he had a run-in with his dad, and he's really out of whack about it." I say, in a pleading voice.
"What did he do this time?" Zach asks
I tell Zach the gist of it, and wait for his reaction.
"He hit you?! I'll be over in a few minutes." Zach says before hanging up.
After hanging up the phone, I hear the TV being turned on.
I walk to the living room entrance, to see what Freddy is doing.
I see him staring blankly at the screen. I shake my head, if Freddy doesn't kill his father first, I'd be happy to obligate.
Hearing a small knock at the door, I walk to it and open it. I see Zach on the other side.
I give him a small smile.
"Thank you for coming, I'm really worried" I say with worried filled voice.
"Wow, you don't look to great. I'll go talk to him, and you go clean up and go to bed. I'll take care of it. Okay?" Zach says, taking charge.
"Thank you Zach." I say, while heading upstairs to take a nap,wanting to see Freddy before the morning. -------------------------
*Freddy POV* I can't believe it, he hit her. I'm going to kill him. I really am. He had no right to touch her. I just can't believe it... *End POV*
"Hey man" I hear Zach say.
"Hey" I say, wondering how he got here then remembering how Katie stayed in the kitchen for a little bit. Man, how do I love her.
"So what happened?" Zach asks, while sitting down next to him.
"He hit her, dude. My father hit Katie. I don't care what he did to me, but when he crossed that line, and hit her. I could just kill him." I said, anger filling my voice.
"Understandable" Zach says." So can I have the whole story?"
I tell him all that happened, and when I stop talking. I wait for his response.
"You can't go back there, dude. No telling what he's going to do next time" Zach says.
"You're going to have to turn him in, or he's going to hunt you down and take you back home."
"But what if they let him go? No telling what he's going to do." I say.
"Freddy, worry about that later, but you gotta get out now. And you need to stop with this staring blankly at the screen, Katie's worried sick. I have never seen her so worried about one person before" Zach says, concern filling his voice.
"I know, I know. I'll go talk to her when you leave." I say.
"Okay good, but dude I have to go. My dad is going to kill me when he finds out I left." He says with a little smile on his face.
I laugh a little bit and walk Zach to the door.
"Hey, call me if you need anything okay?" Zach says.
I nod, saying "Alright, well I'll see you tomorrow, maybe. Later"
He nods, and starts walking home.
After closing the door, I head upstairs to go talk to Katie.
Walking into her room, I see she has fallen asleep on her bed. She looks so peaceful besides the big red mark on her face. I decided to just leave her be for the time being.
Walking to the door, Katie says "Freddy, stay, please?"
"You sure?" I ask.
She nods, so I walk towards her bed, taking off my shoes and shirt before I lay down next to her.
I hear her gasp when she sees the big bruise on my stomach.
I see tears fall down her face, and my heart lurches.
Lying down next to her, I pull her into a tight hug.
I feel her tears on my chest, and I promise myself that I will never let my father hurt her again. "It's okay, Katie. It's all going to be okay" I say, trying to reassure her as well as myself.
"How do you know Freddy?! How do you know that your dad isn't coming this way right now to beat you to death?! How do you know that this will never happen again?!" Katie says in a loud, almost yelling voice.
"I don't know Baby, I don't know. But all I do know is I'm never going to let him hurt you ever again." I say into her hair.
I feel more tears on my chest, I wish I could just sweep her off to some place where this can all be just a mere memory.
After awhile, I hear Katie's breathing go into that steady rhythm of sleep.
I lay there thinking about everything that happened tonight, what's going to happen tomorrow, and thinking about the look on Katie's face after my father slapped her. At that thought, I pull Katie closer to me.
At about 2am, too tired to think about anything else, I let a dreamless sleep over take me.
------Ugh, I could just kill this computer, it doesn't seem to know what dividing lines are...I'm sorry for those who read this chapter before I fixed it. My computer is crap.
K! I hope you liked it, I know it was kind of unreal. But oh well! It is fiction :-p Well, please review! I'll try to update soon. Later ForTheNations----