Mutant Hunter C.1.2
Just One Bad Move
By Ihvnnm
**Yea! I got reviews, few questions: what is Gary Stu? How is my story inaccurate? And what are OC's and Canon Chars? I like all reviews, no matter how little sense they make or how negative they are. Thank you that my work is a little better than some others and I will try my best to make it flow easier and make it feel more natural, I really appreciate criticism, it gives me the idea of how I should make this.
A missile goes flying towards Ihvnnm. Ihvnnm turns the wheel as hard as he can. He missile strikes the side of the car, sending it into the air, Ihvnnm jumps out of the car as it crashes to the ground in a pile of metal hunk of trash.
"Who ever owned that car is gonna have a fit." Ihvnnm looks at the heap, it suddenly explodes, Ihvnnm flies on the ground, his suit getting torn up from the road. "Well, that really sucks." Ihvnnm can hear the sound of numerous missiles flying towards him.
Ihvnnm jumps out of the way the instant the missiles strike, Ihvnnm goes flying in the air, he looks at four of the five exo-suit soldiers running towards him with their machine turret guns blaring. Ihvnnm speed increases greatly, he easily has the ability to dodge the bullets, however since they are numerous he having great amount of trouble.
He hits the ground, he becomes much more powerful, his body soon becomes invulnerable, however he can feel the pain of each strike. He runs to the first exo-suit, he grabs its arm and swings it around it smashes into another, the two suits become a twisted mass of metal, similar to the car. He releases the arm; it goes flying into the forest.
A burst of electricity goes though Ihvnnm's body. Something similar to a cattle prong sends a massive surge of electricity though him. Ihvnnm spins around, he punches the center of the suit. He feels the metal easily bending as wires even begin snap. Ihvnnm grabs the center; he pulls out numerous mechanical pieces.
The last suit wraps its arms around Ihvnnm, squeezing him tightly. Ihvnnm can feel his body getting crushed, the cold metal crushing him. He flips himself, sending the suit into the woods, he drops to the ground, and he is on one knee and one hand down, his other hand in a tight fist. The tank, soldiers, the single suit and helicopters are just staying still, waiting of Ihvnnm's move.
"This stinks, the odds are so unfair, how about I tie a hand behind my back." Ihvnnm smirks at the situation, even though most of his uniform is gone, a burn mark on his back and numerous bruises all over his body from where the bullets struck.
The tank fires as massive blast of energy, faster than Ihvnnm can move; he is hit full force by the blast. Ihvnnm is knocked to the ground, he only has rags for clothing now, his body is slightly bleeding, and he stands up, however swaying back and forth. "Nice shot, but you should've killed me!"
Ihvnnm speeds towards the barricade, he punches one of the soldiers in the face, he crashes into the side of the tank, denting it. Ihvnnm next jumps into the air, he spin kicks a soldier off the road, before he lands, using his other foot, he kicks another soldier into the air. Ihvnnm's feet touch the ground, he instantly grabs the last soldier and twists his arm, spinning him around and then finally uses him as a club to take out the soldier returning to earth, he leaves them in a pile at his feet.
"This is soo easy!" Ihvnnm wipes his brow with his dirty arm. His forehead becomes filthy with dirt. "Oh no!" Ihvnnm jumps out of the way when two more missiles come flying at him. Ihvnnm rolls along the ground, he jumps high into the air. Six missiles are fired at him.
Ihvnnm starts to bend to miss them when they explode, revealing large massive nets. The nets strike Ihvnnm, sending a massive surge of energy though his body; he hits the ground with four of the six nets around him. Electricity is still flowing throughout his body. Ihvnnm is struggling to stay awake and alert.
"I need to get back to the institute." Ihvnnm says softly, still straining his muscles to break out of the nets.
Ihvnnm hears a click sound. "It is impossible to escape, these nets are woven with adamantium and electrified." Another click. Ihvnnm looks up; it's the last suit, a machine gun pointing right at Ihvnnm's head.
"Let me go!" Ihvnnm struggles even harder, he can feel his body going back to normal, the electricity seems like it is constricting his ability to enhance.
Click. "You are needed to go back to the research lab. We need to know how you can have unlimited strength, speed, endurance and intelligence." Click. The suit starts walking to the tank, from behind two more suits exit it, they start walking towards Ihvnnm.
Ihvnnm is starting to black out. "How come I always black out when I'm around youz guys?" Ihvnnm manages to say before passing out.
Click. "You grab his head, I'll take his feet." Click. The guy in the other suit nods.
Click. "Someone should go into the forests to find the damaged advanced suits." Click.
Click. "I'm on it." Click. The suit from the beginning says. He makes his way into the forest to retrieve the suits, even if the members inside are no longer useable or not.
The other two suits pick up Ihvnnm, they carry walk under the helicopter that is now lowering a hard metal stretcher. The just drop Ihvnnm on it with no consideration or care. Ihvnnm is just lying still, wrapped up in four layers of netting.
The helicopter brings the stretcher up to the side of the helicopter. Two soldiers strap him up before the helicopter flies to the southwest. The helicopter moves silently across the sky, leaving no trace or any proof that it has been there. The other suits, helicopters and tanks will finish cleaning up any mess of the area.
There will be a more efficient cleanup crew arriving in less than an hour. This is the way of the Mutant Hunters; they hunt and eliminate their target. An hour after the elimination a cleanup crew arrives, making everything the same, having so signs that anything happened only an hour ago.
The Mutant Hunters are still new, they have only hunted a sparse amount of mutants, and they are not yet at the level to start hunting the X- Men, the Brotherhood and the Acolytes. The Mutant Hunters possess soldiers, tanks, assault and infiltrate helicopters, basic suits and advance suits, they also own a massive satellite that actually detects mutant DNA from any spot on the planet.
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"Xavier. help, I can't stay awake much longer, I need help. I have a bad feeling I'm either going to die or be taken back. I don't want to go!" Xavier has his eyes closed during Wolverine's challenge. He can hear Ihvnnm asking for help, the X-Men are going to have to do it alone, or at least break Ihvnnm out so he can assist them.
"Ihvnnm, please calm down, I have a feeling you are too valuable to be eliminated." Xavier tries to give Ihvnnm some sense. Ihvnnm does not respond, but he can tell that Ihvnnm is still listening. "Once you regain consciousness, please inform me what installation you are in, that will be the one we go to first to retrieve you." Xavier concentrates his powers as much as he can. Ihvnnm becomes harder to pin point; Xavier finally loses him.
"Brain, we will come for you, we do not leave a fellow mutant alone when they are in need. You and Jean will both be free soon enough, I promise that!" Xavier still has his eyes closed, he can hear the struggle of the students down below, and he hopes the greatest will succeed, if not, all mutant kind may come to an abrupt end.
Xavier opens his eyes, his eye go wide, he presses the comm. button. "Wolverine, please take it easy on them!!!" Wolverine just waves his claws at Xavier before going back at the test. "Let's hope they survive this."
**I wish Lilo was a signed on member, I would of really of liked of read some of her (I hope it's a her, if it's a guy, I'm sorry.) work, from her reviews, I bet she makes some pretty good work. Well, I got another chapter done, I love making fics, I love reviews more, I wish more people like reading this, if you really like this, please tell others, I do plan on making this a very long story of three parts.
Just One Bad Move
By Ihvnnm
**Yea! I got reviews, few questions: what is Gary Stu? How is my story inaccurate? And what are OC's and Canon Chars? I like all reviews, no matter how little sense they make or how negative they are. Thank you that my work is a little better than some others and I will try my best to make it flow easier and make it feel more natural, I really appreciate criticism, it gives me the idea of how I should make this.
A missile goes flying towards Ihvnnm. Ihvnnm turns the wheel as hard as he can. He missile strikes the side of the car, sending it into the air, Ihvnnm jumps out of the car as it crashes to the ground in a pile of metal hunk of trash.
"Who ever owned that car is gonna have a fit." Ihvnnm looks at the heap, it suddenly explodes, Ihvnnm flies on the ground, his suit getting torn up from the road. "Well, that really sucks." Ihvnnm can hear the sound of numerous missiles flying towards him.
Ihvnnm jumps out of the way the instant the missiles strike, Ihvnnm goes flying in the air, he looks at four of the five exo-suit soldiers running towards him with their machine turret guns blaring. Ihvnnm speed increases greatly, he easily has the ability to dodge the bullets, however since they are numerous he having great amount of trouble.
He hits the ground, he becomes much more powerful, his body soon becomes invulnerable, however he can feel the pain of each strike. He runs to the first exo-suit, he grabs its arm and swings it around it smashes into another, the two suits become a twisted mass of metal, similar to the car. He releases the arm; it goes flying into the forest.
A burst of electricity goes though Ihvnnm's body. Something similar to a cattle prong sends a massive surge of electricity though him. Ihvnnm spins around, he punches the center of the suit. He feels the metal easily bending as wires even begin snap. Ihvnnm grabs the center; he pulls out numerous mechanical pieces.
The last suit wraps its arms around Ihvnnm, squeezing him tightly. Ihvnnm can feel his body getting crushed, the cold metal crushing him. He flips himself, sending the suit into the woods, he drops to the ground, and he is on one knee and one hand down, his other hand in a tight fist. The tank, soldiers, the single suit and helicopters are just staying still, waiting of Ihvnnm's move.
"This stinks, the odds are so unfair, how about I tie a hand behind my back." Ihvnnm smirks at the situation, even though most of his uniform is gone, a burn mark on his back and numerous bruises all over his body from where the bullets struck.
The tank fires as massive blast of energy, faster than Ihvnnm can move; he is hit full force by the blast. Ihvnnm is knocked to the ground, he only has rags for clothing now, his body is slightly bleeding, and he stands up, however swaying back and forth. "Nice shot, but you should've killed me!"
Ihvnnm speeds towards the barricade, he punches one of the soldiers in the face, he crashes into the side of the tank, denting it. Ihvnnm next jumps into the air, he spin kicks a soldier off the road, before he lands, using his other foot, he kicks another soldier into the air. Ihvnnm's feet touch the ground, he instantly grabs the last soldier and twists his arm, spinning him around and then finally uses him as a club to take out the soldier returning to earth, he leaves them in a pile at his feet.
"This is soo easy!" Ihvnnm wipes his brow with his dirty arm. His forehead becomes filthy with dirt. "Oh no!" Ihvnnm jumps out of the way when two more missiles come flying at him. Ihvnnm rolls along the ground, he jumps high into the air. Six missiles are fired at him.
Ihvnnm starts to bend to miss them when they explode, revealing large massive nets. The nets strike Ihvnnm, sending a massive surge of energy though his body; he hits the ground with four of the six nets around him. Electricity is still flowing throughout his body. Ihvnnm is struggling to stay awake and alert.
"I need to get back to the institute." Ihvnnm says softly, still straining his muscles to break out of the nets.
Ihvnnm hears a click sound. "It is impossible to escape, these nets are woven with adamantium and electrified." Another click. Ihvnnm looks up; it's the last suit, a machine gun pointing right at Ihvnnm's head.
"Let me go!" Ihvnnm struggles even harder, he can feel his body going back to normal, the electricity seems like it is constricting his ability to enhance.
Click. "You are needed to go back to the research lab. We need to know how you can have unlimited strength, speed, endurance and intelligence." Click. The suit starts walking to the tank, from behind two more suits exit it, they start walking towards Ihvnnm.
Ihvnnm is starting to black out. "How come I always black out when I'm around youz guys?" Ihvnnm manages to say before passing out.
Click. "You grab his head, I'll take his feet." Click. The guy in the other suit nods.
Click. "Someone should go into the forests to find the damaged advanced suits." Click.
Click. "I'm on it." Click. The suit from the beginning says. He makes his way into the forest to retrieve the suits, even if the members inside are no longer useable or not.
The other two suits pick up Ihvnnm, they carry walk under the helicopter that is now lowering a hard metal stretcher. The just drop Ihvnnm on it with no consideration or care. Ihvnnm is just lying still, wrapped up in four layers of netting.
The helicopter brings the stretcher up to the side of the helicopter. Two soldiers strap him up before the helicopter flies to the southwest. The helicopter moves silently across the sky, leaving no trace or any proof that it has been there. The other suits, helicopters and tanks will finish cleaning up any mess of the area.
There will be a more efficient cleanup crew arriving in less than an hour. This is the way of the Mutant Hunters; they hunt and eliminate their target. An hour after the elimination a cleanup crew arrives, making everything the same, having so signs that anything happened only an hour ago.
The Mutant Hunters are still new, they have only hunted a sparse amount of mutants, and they are not yet at the level to start hunting the X- Men, the Brotherhood and the Acolytes. The Mutant Hunters possess soldiers, tanks, assault and infiltrate helicopters, basic suits and advance suits, they also own a massive satellite that actually detects mutant DNA from any spot on the planet.
*
"Xavier. help, I can't stay awake much longer, I need help. I have a bad feeling I'm either going to die or be taken back. I don't want to go!" Xavier has his eyes closed during Wolverine's challenge. He can hear Ihvnnm asking for help, the X-Men are going to have to do it alone, or at least break Ihvnnm out so he can assist them.
"Ihvnnm, please calm down, I have a feeling you are too valuable to be eliminated." Xavier tries to give Ihvnnm some sense. Ihvnnm does not respond, but he can tell that Ihvnnm is still listening. "Once you regain consciousness, please inform me what installation you are in, that will be the one we go to first to retrieve you." Xavier concentrates his powers as much as he can. Ihvnnm becomes harder to pin point; Xavier finally loses him.
"Brain, we will come for you, we do not leave a fellow mutant alone when they are in need. You and Jean will both be free soon enough, I promise that!" Xavier still has his eyes closed, he can hear the struggle of the students down below, and he hopes the greatest will succeed, if not, all mutant kind may come to an abrupt end.
Xavier opens his eyes, his eye go wide, he presses the comm. button. "Wolverine, please take it easy on them!!!" Wolverine just waves his claws at Xavier before going back at the test. "Let's hope they survive this."
**I wish Lilo was a signed on member, I would of really of liked of read some of her (I hope it's a her, if it's a guy, I'm sorry.) work, from her reviews, I bet she makes some pretty good work. Well, I got another chapter done, I love making fics, I love reviews more, I wish more people like reading this, if you really like this, please tell others, I do plan on making this a very long story of three parts.