Shout-outs!
lulu belle- Thanks for giving me your description and everything. I hope I portray your character correctly. If you don't like it then I'm terribly sorry. Its my first time using real people as the characters in my story.
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uninvisible- if youd' like to be in it then just review with ur description. I lost all my emails so if you emailed me one then I'm sorry.
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Atlantic- thanks for the description. I'm trying to work in everyone so just keep reading the story and hopefully ill get you in there soon.
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Moonlights Sundance- Since I've read your stories I know your definitely going to be in the story. I think I have your description printed out so don't worry about anything ^__^
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Matchin' Laces- Your in it! LOL Sorry I didn't add much to your character but I hope its still good enough
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Dakki- I hope you like the character that I made you become…….if you don't like anything that I do with your character then just tell me *__*
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wsox2004- Hopefully I'll get you in the story. Its just the beginning so don't hate me yet….lol
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Blue Boxer- I will hopefully get you in the story, so don't hate me yet.
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Repeat- I think your character is going to add a lot to the story, and hopefully I'll get you in it soon enough. Sorry your not in this one yet.
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CiCi- I'm goin to try really hard to get everyone in the story, so stay with me and tell me what you really think of everything
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Taps 1899- You will be in the story, so don't hate me yet. I keep saying that and hopefully no one will hate me….^___^
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Vinnie Monfredo- I'm going to try and get your character in the next chapter, so keep updated with the story just in case you don't like how I portrayed your character.
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Wisecracker88- Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it a lot. Now I know why a lot of people love casting calls. I will hopefully get your character in the story, its just so hard trying to build backgrounds with each of them
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Dimonah Tralon- Thanks for handing in your description thingy. It was really useful. Thanks! ^___^
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For the people who emailed me the descriptions thanks. I would say thanks to everyone personally but my hands are really tired. And besides the fact I'm really lazy ^___^ This chapter isn't my best work yet but hopefully its good enough for you people out there to review.
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The day you grow up is the day you laugh at yourself
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Violet walked around Manhattan aimlessly. There was nothing she had to do after she was done selling. So why not take a walk around Manhattan to see the gorgeous scenery that she has seen for the thousandth time?
"Hey Vi! Wait up would ya?" Violet turned around to see Shorty running up to her. Shorty had tan skin with dark hair that went to her shoulders and somewhat past that. Her eyes were a dark color that only went with her beautiful features. "Where yas going? Spots been asking fer ya." She said as she ran up to Violet.
"I'm walking around and enjoying the beautiful weather." Violet smiled and looked up to the sky and noticed that it was starting to get cloudy. "Its gonna rain!" She squealed excited and then looked back at Shorty who didn't like the idea of being out in a rain storm.
"Den can wese get back to da lodging house before it starts?"
"Oh come on. Its just water."
"Do youse remember da last time wese were out in a rain storm?" Shorty asked Violet as she put her hands on her hips.
"Yea, man dat was great. Wese got real sick afterwards."
"And yer willing to risk yer health again."
"Hey, me motto is, youse only got one life to live so live your life to da fullest. And dats what Ise planning on doing. Youse gonna hang wit me or go back?" Shorty looked at Violet. They have been best friends for three years, ever since they came to the lodging house. Shorty remembered all the times that they had and then smirked.
"Yea of coise I'm in."
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"Where da hell is Vi and Shorty?" Jack asked angrily as his newsies were rushing inside the lodging house from the rain.
"Jackey boy calm down would youse. Dey know what de're doing out dere." Race calmly said, it was easy for him because he had a little grudge against Shorty for tripping him into a mud puddle earlier that week, ruining all his papers.
"Yea yer probably right. How about wese go start a game of poker?"
"Hey guys look out dere!" Snipeshooter looked out the window and saw Violet and Shorty dancing in the rain. Jack came up behind him and sighed.
"De're gonna get sick again." He mumbled underneath his breath. He walked over to the open door and walked out into the rain. "What are youse two doing?" Violet and Shorty stopped dancing around and faced Jack.
"Umm…it looks like wese dancing in da rain. What are youse doing?" Shorty asked Jack.
"Making sure me newsies don't get sick. Now get inside." Violet walked over to Jack and patted his cheek and ran away with Jack chasing after her.
"Hey Ise tought youse wanted us inside?" Violet said as she kept running away from Jack.
"Ise do. So stop right dere." Violet stopped ten feet away from Jack and then smiled. "Do youse like surprises?" Violet looked at him weird and then screamed as soon as someone tackled her to the ground.
"Dats not fair. Ise say REDO!" Violet screamed as she laid in the muddy street, she then looked up to her tackler and came face to face with Spot. "Now dis is totally unfair. Its me and Shorty against two leaders." Violet looked over to see Shorty grab some mud of the ground and then throw it at Jacks head. Jack then started to chase her around. Spot helped up Violet and they soon were in a mud throwing battle.
"JACK KELLY!" All chaos stopped in the street and looked back at the door of the lodging house. There stood a girl with strawberry blonde hair that complimented her pale skin. She was almost as tall as Jack and also as skinny as Spot. She had hazel eyes and when she glared they pierced through your heart as if a knife stabbed you.
"Uhh umm hey dere Dakki. What's going on?" Jack said nervously, never before did he see anger in his girlfriends eyes.
"Youse playing out in da streets witout me?" Dakki's facial expressions calmed down and gave Jack a slight smile. Dakki then ran outside and tackled Jack into the mud, then she ran to Shorty and Violet. "Three goils against the leaders of New York. Bring it on boys." They played out in the street until the rain calmed down to a light sprinkle. Then they decided to go inside and get cleaned up.
"Youse all know dat wasn't fair. Three goils and two boys." Spot came in noticing all the little kids at the window.
"Save the whining Spot, wese know youse guys lost fair and square." A girl with short dark hair and tall said. She had dark brown eyes and was also in the arms of Racetracks.
"Tanks Hyena but wese don't need youse cracking jokes at da moment." Spot said as he was still getting over the humiliating loss to the girls.
"Ise tink Ise do need to crack jokes. It was the funniest ting Ise ever saw. Never tought Ise would see da day where Conlon was beaten at his own game." Race squeezed her to tell her to quit talking.
"Youse better tell dat goil of yers to shut 'er pie hole Race or Ise will." Spot stood there staring down Hyena until someone came up behind him and kissed his neck.
"Don't be so mean." Spot turned around to see Violet all soaked in mud and water and he couldn't help but laugh at the face she was making. "Youse making fun of me?" He chuckled once more and nodded. "Well I'm going upstairs to change." She went to Spots ear and whispered, "Wanna join me?" He didn't answer but only took her hand and led her upstairs.
"So what are wese gonna do fer da rest of da day?" Boots asked Jack.
"Ise don't know. Maybe wese could-" He couldn't finish because Dakki took some mud out of her hair and threw it at Jacks face. "Oh dats it Dakki, yer gonna get it now!" Dakki made a mad dash out of the room and into the next room with Jack on her tail.
"Someone should tell dem to get dere own place." Hyena said as she stood up from Races lap.
"Yer just as bad." Mush stated as the whole room exploded with laughter except Race and Hyena glaring at him.
"Yer bad too. Especially when youse and Alaska go into yer own woild." Hyena said trying to prove her point that everyone was all lovey dovey and crap like that. "Where is dat goil anyways?"
"She's over in da Bronx. Ise have to pick 'er up tomorrow."
"Whyse she over dere?"
"Helping out wit some leader stuff." After that everyone moved around and some went outside to go walk around. It became really quiet. Maybe too quiet.
"SPOT CONLON!!!" Did I say it was getting too quiet? "WHERE DA HELL ARE YOUSE?" Violet stomped down the stairs of the Manhattan Lodge like the earth was going to be blown up into a thousand pieces.
"Whats going on?" Race looked over to Violet. Her face was bright red and you could just imagine smoke coming out of her ears.
"Dat lil' bastard took me sling shot!" Violet went over to the signing book and made sure he didn't sign out yet, for he was suppose to be staying for a whole week.
"Calm down goily. Youse tink dat he would take yer sling shot when he's got his own." She looked towards him and nodded furiously.
"Hes mad cause Ise took his marbles."
"Whyse did ya do dat?"
"It was my toin to play." She smiled slighty remembering all the marbles she won from Snipeshooter and Boots.
"Don't you guys eva get sick of being lil kids?" He asked her. She looked at him and then thought about and shook her head.
"Never do." The door opened and in came, "SPOT CONLON!"
"Dats me name don't wear it out."
"Where is me slingshot?" She took a couple of steps towards him and extended her hand out to him. Spot looked at her mischievously and then went to his back pocket and handed back the sling shot.
"Happy?"
"Very." She then kissed him on the cheek and ran upstairs.
"Nice goil youse have dere Spot. Almost blew me ear drums out." Race told Spot and all Spot did was laugh.
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That's all I got right now. Tell me if I should keep this story up and what I should do. Its my first story that I actually care about lol ^__^ Now press that submit button, go ahead. It does a magic trick……
SaMi
lulu belle- Thanks for giving me your description and everything. I hope I portray your character correctly. If you don't like it then I'm terribly sorry. Its my first time using real people as the characters in my story.
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uninvisible- if youd' like to be in it then just review with ur description. I lost all my emails so if you emailed me one then I'm sorry.
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Atlantic- thanks for the description. I'm trying to work in everyone so just keep reading the story and hopefully ill get you in there soon.
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Moonlights Sundance- Since I've read your stories I know your definitely going to be in the story. I think I have your description printed out so don't worry about anything ^__^
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Matchin' Laces- Your in it! LOL Sorry I didn't add much to your character but I hope its still good enough
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Dakki- I hope you like the character that I made you become…….if you don't like anything that I do with your character then just tell me *__*
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wsox2004- Hopefully I'll get you in the story. Its just the beginning so don't hate me yet….lol
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Blue Boxer- I will hopefully get you in the story, so don't hate me yet.
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Repeat- I think your character is going to add a lot to the story, and hopefully I'll get you in it soon enough. Sorry your not in this one yet.
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CiCi- I'm goin to try really hard to get everyone in the story, so stay with me and tell me what you really think of everything
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Taps 1899- You will be in the story, so don't hate me yet. I keep saying that and hopefully no one will hate me….^___^
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Vinnie Monfredo- I'm going to try and get your character in the next chapter, so keep updated with the story just in case you don't like how I portrayed your character.
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Wisecracker88- Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it a lot. Now I know why a lot of people love casting calls. I will hopefully get your character in the story, its just so hard trying to build backgrounds with each of them
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Dimonah Tralon- Thanks for handing in your description thingy. It was really useful. Thanks! ^___^
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For the people who emailed me the descriptions thanks. I would say thanks to everyone personally but my hands are really tired. And besides the fact I'm really lazy ^___^ This chapter isn't my best work yet but hopefully its good enough for you people out there to review.
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The day you grow up is the day you laugh at yourself
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Violet walked around Manhattan aimlessly. There was nothing she had to do after she was done selling. So why not take a walk around Manhattan to see the gorgeous scenery that she has seen for the thousandth time?
"Hey Vi! Wait up would ya?" Violet turned around to see Shorty running up to her. Shorty had tan skin with dark hair that went to her shoulders and somewhat past that. Her eyes were a dark color that only went with her beautiful features. "Where yas going? Spots been asking fer ya." She said as she ran up to Violet.
"I'm walking around and enjoying the beautiful weather." Violet smiled and looked up to the sky and noticed that it was starting to get cloudy. "Its gonna rain!" She squealed excited and then looked back at Shorty who didn't like the idea of being out in a rain storm.
"Den can wese get back to da lodging house before it starts?"
"Oh come on. Its just water."
"Do youse remember da last time wese were out in a rain storm?" Shorty asked Violet as she put her hands on her hips.
"Yea, man dat was great. Wese got real sick afterwards."
"And yer willing to risk yer health again."
"Hey, me motto is, youse only got one life to live so live your life to da fullest. And dats what Ise planning on doing. Youse gonna hang wit me or go back?" Shorty looked at Violet. They have been best friends for three years, ever since they came to the lodging house. Shorty remembered all the times that they had and then smirked.
"Yea of coise I'm in."
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"Where da hell is Vi and Shorty?" Jack asked angrily as his newsies were rushing inside the lodging house from the rain.
"Jackey boy calm down would youse. Dey know what de're doing out dere." Race calmly said, it was easy for him because he had a little grudge against Shorty for tripping him into a mud puddle earlier that week, ruining all his papers.
"Yea yer probably right. How about wese go start a game of poker?"
"Hey guys look out dere!" Snipeshooter looked out the window and saw Violet and Shorty dancing in the rain. Jack came up behind him and sighed.
"De're gonna get sick again." He mumbled underneath his breath. He walked over to the open door and walked out into the rain. "What are youse two doing?" Violet and Shorty stopped dancing around and faced Jack.
"Umm…it looks like wese dancing in da rain. What are youse doing?" Shorty asked Jack.
"Making sure me newsies don't get sick. Now get inside." Violet walked over to Jack and patted his cheek and ran away with Jack chasing after her.
"Hey Ise tought youse wanted us inside?" Violet said as she kept running away from Jack.
"Ise do. So stop right dere." Violet stopped ten feet away from Jack and then smiled. "Do youse like surprises?" Violet looked at him weird and then screamed as soon as someone tackled her to the ground.
"Dats not fair. Ise say REDO!" Violet screamed as she laid in the muddy street, she then looked up to her tackler and came face to face with Spot. "Now dis is totally unfair. Its me and Shorty against two leaders." Violet looked over to see Shorty grab some mud of the ground and then throw it at Jacks head. Jack then started to chase her around. Spot helped up Violet and they soon were in a mud throwing battle.
"JACK KELLY!" All chaos stopped in the street and looked back at the door of the lodging house. There stood a girl with strawberry blonde hair that complimented her pale skin. She was almost as tall as Jack and also as skinny as Spot. She had hazel eyes and when she glared they pierced through your heart as if a knife stabbed you.
"Uhh umm hey dere Dakki. What's going on?" Jack said nervously, never before did he see anger in his girlfriends eyes.
"Youse playing out in da streets witout me?" Dakki's facial expressions calmed down and gave Jack a slight smile. Dakki then ran outside and tackled Jack into the mud, then she ran to Shorty and Violet. "Three goils against the leaders of New York. Bring it on boys." They played out in the street until the rain calmed down to a light sprinkle. Then they decided to go inside and get cleaned up.
"Youse all know dat wasn't fair. Three goils and two boys." Spot came in noticing all the little kids at the window.
"Save the whining Spot, wese know youse guys lost fair and square." A girl with short dark hair and tall said. She had dark brown eyes and was also in the arms of Racetracks.
"Tanks Hyena but wese don't need youse cracking jokes at da moment." Spot said as he was still getting over the humiliating loss to the girls.
"Ise tink Ise do need to crack jokes. It was the funniest ting Ise ever saw. Never tought Ise would see da day where Conlon was beaten at his own game." Race squeezed her to tell her to quit talking.
"Youse better tell dat goil of yers to shut 'er pie hole Race or Ise will." Spot stood there staring down Hyena until someone came up behind him and kissed his neck.
"Don't be so mean." Spot turned around to see Violet all soaked in mud and water and he couldn't help but laugh at the face she was making. "Youse making fun of me?" He chuckled once more and nodded. "Well I'm going upstairs to change." She went to Spots ear and whispered, "Wanna join me?" He didn't answer but only took her hand and led her upstairs.
"So what are wese gonna do fer da rest of da day?" Boots asked Jack.
"Ise don't know. Maybe wese could-" He couldn't finish because Dakki took some mud out of her hair and threw it at Jacks face. "Oh dats it Dakki, yer gonna get it now!" Dakki made a mad dash out of the room and into the next room with Jack on her tail.
"Someone should tell dem to get dere own place." Hyena said as she stood up from Races lap.
"Yer just as bad." Mush stated as the whole room exploded with laughter except Race and Hyena glaring at him.
"Yer bad too. Especially when youse and Alaska go into yer own woild." Hyena said trying to prove her point that everyone was all lovey dovey and crap like that. "Where is dat goil anyways?"
"She's over in da Bronx. Ise have to pick 'er up tomorrow."
"Whyse she over dere?"
"Helping out wit some leader stuff." After that everyone moved around and some went outside to go walk around. It became really quiet. Maybe too quiet.
"SPOT CONLON!!!" Did I say it was getting too quiet? "WHERE DA HELL ARE YOUSE?" Violet stomped down the stairs of the Manhattan Lodge like the earth was going to be blown up into a thousand pieces.
"Whats going on?" Race looked over to Violet. Her face was bright red and you could just imagine smoke coming out of her ears.
"Dat lil' bastard took me sling shot!" Violet went over to the signing book and made sure he didn't sign out yet, for he was suppose to be staying for a whole week.
"Calm down goily. Youse tink dat he would take yer sling shot when he's got his own." She looked towards him and nodded furiously.
"Hes mad cause Ise took his marbles."
"Whyse did ya do dat?"
"It was my toin to play." She smiled slighty remembering all the marbles she won from Snipeshooter and Boots.
"Don't you guys eva get sick of being lil kids?" He asked her. She looked at him and then thought about and shook her head.
"Never do." The door opened and in came, "SPOT CONLON!"
"Dats me name don't wear it out."
"Where is me slingshot?" She took a couple of steps towards him and extended her hand out to him. Spot looked at her mischievously and then went to his back pocket and handed back the sling shot.
"Happy?"
"Very." She then kissed him on the cheek and ran upstairs.
"Nice goil youse have dere Spot. Almost blew me ear drums out." Race told Spot and all Spot did was laugh.
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That's all I got right now. Tell me if I should keep this story up and what I should do. Its my first story that I actually care about lol ^__^ Now press that submit button, go ahead. It does a magic trick……
SaMi