Dimonah Tralon~
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad that you chose my story to waste some of your time reading…..lol
Spot: She could have a life
Me: I know. That's why i said that I'm grateful for her wasting some time to read more story
Keep reading!
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Blue Boxer~
I'm glad you like romances. And the whole Spot and Violet is suppose to be a heart touching story. I'm not sure I got there yet, but I will soon. Thanks for reviewing, can't wait to hear from you again.
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Matchin' Laces~
I'm so glad that your happy! You were the first person that I actually liked the physical appearance and I loved the name. So that's why you got him, not to mention you were one of the first reviewers I got. ^_____^
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Iaintgotaname~
Thanks for reviewing my story. I really appreciate it. For some reason I was really bored and made this chapter longer for all y'all to enjoy.
Spot: Y'all?
Hey I'm a little country and a bit of rock n' roll!
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Bookey Elliot~
If I have enough time and effort then I'll be able to put you in. but I already have soo many characters, but I don't know what will happen in the end. Keep reading and reviewing!
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Dakki~
I'm glad you enjoyed the first two chapters. I'm here to please the customers! I can't wait to read and hear from you more. Hope you keep reviewing ^___^
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Wisecracker88~
There will be more laughs to come, and probably more serious ones too. This one wasn't too funny but its building up the stories plotline. I promise you there will be more humor. I just didn't feel like being a comedian today……sorry.
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I Your imperfections are what make you beautiful/I
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The Lodging House was as quiet as a mouse except a faint cough that could only be heard from within the walls.
"SPOT!" A voice came from the girls bunkroom which was newly added onto the Lodging House. A few girls stood next to the bed watching another coughing up a storm.
"What da hell do yas want Shorty?" Spot came walking into the bunkroom and looked over at the bunk where Shorty was standing by.
"Violets sick." Spot walked over to the bunk to see his girl lying on the bed. She looked pale as a ghost, sweat was running down her face and she was coughing up a storm.
"Go get me a wet washcloth and make sure da waters cold." Spot said as he sat next to Violet on her bed grabbing a hold of her hand and motioning the other girls to leave the room. Spot looked down at his girlfriend who was breathing in deeply and trying to control her coughing. "Jackey boy told yas you would get sick."
"Yea well Ise wanted to have some fun." She smiled weakly. "And plus, its was fun to throw mud at youse." She started to cough again and then in walked in Shorty with a washcloth and a bowl of water. Shorty then placed the bowl on the chair next to the bed and handed over the washcloth to Spot.
"Thanks." Spot whispered as he took the washcloth and started to wipe Violets forehead to try and cool her down.
"Spot." Violet whispered. "What are youse doing here?"
"Ise came here to see Blink because his goil is down at me docks tormenting me boys when Ise hoird Shorty yell for me."
"Oh." She started to cough again and Spot just started to rub her hands with his.
"Youse need to get some rest." Spot put the washcloth in the bowl and then rang out the excess water out and then placed it on Violets forehead. "I'll be back later to check up on youse." Violet nodded and closed her eyes. Spot sat there for a couple of minutes just staring at her, i God, she is so beautiful /i He then stood up and walked out of the room and down the stairs where most of the girls were waiting.
"Is she gonna be okay?" Shorty asking being the first person to notice Spot coming down the stairs.
"Yea, she'll be fine." Spot walked out of the Lodging House and on his way back to Brooklyn.
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"Ise don't wanna leave yet." A girl with light brown hair and blue eyes said as she held on the doorknob of the Bronx's Lodging House.
"Stop being a baby and lets go back home." Mush said as he pulled on the girls arms.
"Say da magic word." Alaska said as she stepped on the boys feet and ran down the stairs and over to the closest tree.
"Alaska! Jacks waiting few us."
"Youse gotta say it."
"Alaska. Yer seventeen, would youse act like it?"
"Say da magic word." She repeated as she started to climb the tree.
"Alaska get back down here or you'll break yer neck." Alaska sat on a branch and looked back down.
"What's so hard bout saying please?"
"Please Alaska." Mush said in utter defeat.
"Okay." Alaska climbed back down and kissed Mush on the cheek.
"Geez, youse just like Violet." Mush said as he grabbed a hold of her hand and started to walk towards Manhattan.
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"What do youse mean Ise lost?!?!?!" Hyena screamed at the top of her lungs. "Ise got a full house Mr. Racetrack sir. Ise tink dat beats yer two pair."
"Race, don't cheat. She won fair and square." Blink added.
"Ise can't believe it." Race sat back in his chair. "A goil beat me." Hyena looked over to see her boyfriend lean back in his chair flabbergasted. "Ise never tought Ise would see da day."
"Oh get over it." Hyena said as she grabbed her winnings and stuck it in her money pouch.
"Goils aint suppose to beat me tough." Race said trying to sound calm.
"If its dat big of a deal den Ise guess Ise won't play wit youse anymore." Hyena stood up and went over to the washroom while Blink and Race stared at the cards on the table.
"Wanna play again?" Blink asked taking Hyena's cards and then shuffling them with the rest.
"Nah, Ise gotta go make sure dat Hyena aint mad at me. By da way, where's yer goil?"
"If Ise only knew. I'm guessing down at da docks taking a midnight swim."
"Yer goils weird." Race said as he stood up and sauntered over to the washroom.
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A girl with long blonde hair that went down to her waist was sitting on the docks looking at the ripples with her jade eyes. She pulled her legs up to her chest and stared at the reflection the mood was making.
"Where's Blink when ya need him?"
"Well I'm sure if youse told him youse were here den he probably would've come." A voice behind her explained. "What are youse doing here Shooster?"
"No se, ¿y tú?"
"Came here to think. Violets sick again." Shooster looked over to Spot who was know sitting next to her with his feet dangling off the edge. "She's getting sick a lot dis year."
"Lo siento." Spot looked at her and she quickly translated, "I'm sorry."
"Ise just don't know what would happen if sometin were to happen."
"She'll be fine. She's Violet."
"Yea Ise hope yer right. Its just dat, me and Vi, we've been together for three years. Ever since Jackey boy told us dat wese were two peas in a pod. I really do love 'er and its weird because Ise don't know if she knows dat."
"Awww Spot, yer sensitive side is coming out."
"Its been sneaking up on me lately."
"Ise can tell. Especially a couple of months ago when Violet got sick."
"What's happening wit youse and Blink?"
"Nothing. Absolutely nothing. It seems like we're not together anymore because he doesn't want to spend as much time with me as Ise would like 'im too."
"Youse want me to talk to 'im?"
"Nah. Youse got other things to take care of." Spot nodded and stood up offering a hand for Shooster to get up.
"Ya wanna go back to da lodging house?" Shooster looked up at him and smiled. She then took his hand and they walked back to the lodging house joking around.
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"Jack, Ise don't want you to go."
"Dakki youse gotta stop yer whining. Ise gotta do dis or it won't be done." Dakki sat on his bed while Jack went underneath and collected a bag full of his belongings.
"But its all da way to New Jersey."
"Dakki its only fer a couple of days."
"A couple days witout me." Dakki made a pouty face as Jack lifted his head up to hers. "How could youse leave dis pretty face?"
"It takes time to get used to." Jack smiled as he kissed her lightly on the lips. "And plus dis is fer Violet. If Ise don't get 'er brudder den she'll be sick fer awhile. He's da only doctor Ise know dat will come and see 'er."
"Its dat bad?" Jack looked into Dakki's eyes which have changed from anger to sudden worry.
"Dis has been happening a lot. Dere's gotta be a reason fer her getting sick all da time." Dakki looked down and nodded. Jack kneeled in front of her and used his thumb to lift her face up to his. "Ise still love youse." Dakki smiled slightly.
"Well Ise would hope so, not many people stop loving deir goils after a couple a' minutes." Jack chuckled and then kissed Dakki once more but this was more passionate.
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"Mush its getting really dark, carry me." Mush laughed a little bit at his girlfriend who was walking slower by the minute.
"We're at least five minutes away and youse want me to carry you?" Alaska looked at him and nodded furiously. "Hop on." He stopped and let her jump on his back. "Did youse lose weight?" He asked as he started walking again, he soon felt a hand slap his head.
"Is dat suppose to imply dat Ise was fat before?"
"No it means dat youse haven't been eating and going on dat starvation diet again."
"Dat starvation diet was me eating fruits and vegetables."
"Exactly. Youse deprieved yerself of meat. Youse need some on yer bones."
"And youse need to watch out where youse going." She mumbled as Mush looked up to see her and ran right into a pole. Mush dropped Alaska on her bum and started to rub his forehead. "Dang Mush, youse could've put me down a little nicer."
"And yer off so bad? Ise just ran into a pole."
"Pssshhhhtttt!" Alaska said as she ran off towards the lodging house.
"What da hell was dat?" Mush smiled slightly at how cute his girlfriend could get.
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Race and Hyena were sitting downstairs on the bench that was placed by the door, Hyena sitting on his lap and laughing at Boots who accidentally threw a marble at Races head.
"MEN!" The door opened and in came walking Alaska with Mush behind her. Alaska ran upstairs while Mush closed the door.
"WOMEN!" He shouted up the stairs and then soon sat down on the floor in front of the bench that Hyena and Race were stationed at.
"Problemos Mush?" Hyena asked Mush and laughed a little. "Whats wit da red mark on yer forehead?"
"Ise accidentally ran into a pole." He mumbled. Hyena and Race started to crack up and didn't even notice the door opening again.
"Whats so funny?" Race and Hyena looked towards the door and saw Shooster and Spot returning from their separated walks.
"Mushy boy here ran into a pole." Spot chuckled and Shooster smiled and shook her head.
"Is Vi still upstairs?" Spot asked.
"Yea she's been sleeping ever since youse left." Spot quickly made a quick retreat to the upstairs to go see how his girlfriend was doing.
"Youse want me to go get Blink?" Race asked Shooster as he noticed that she was getting rather quiet.
"No por favor. Ise tink Ise can handle it." She said as she walked slowly up the stairs. "Estupido."
"Ise heard dat!" Race yelled after her and it only made Shooster run faster up the stairs. Shooster went over to the boys bunkroom and peeked through the cracks of the door to see if Blink was around. She couldn't see him which only disappointed her more. She felt two arms wrap around her waist as she jumped in their arms and give a good right hook to the persons jaw. She then looked at who it was and it was Blink. She couldn't help but laugh because he was holding his jaw.
"Yep, Spot definitely taught ya how to fight." Shooster laughed at him and quickly kissed him and then whispered a sorry.
"I'm so sorry." He just laughed at the cute little face she was making. Then she did the unthinkable and then hit him in the shoulder.
"What was dat fer?"
"Scaring da shit out of me!"
"Youse gotta learn dat da Manhattan boys aint as bad as Brooklyns." Blink then wrapped his arms around Shoosters hips and pulled her in close. "Youse wanna go watch da stars?" She couldn't help but blush and nod.
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That's all I got. I'm not in a good mood so writing really brought out my creative side. This chapter isn't as funny probably because I'm trying to work up the plot here. I think some of you can guess whats going to happen. Now review
Yes that button right down there
Thanks
SaMi
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad that you chose my story to waste some of your time reading…..lol
Spot: She could have a life
Me: I know. That's why i said that I'm grateful for her wasting some time to read more story
Keep reading!
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Blue Boxer~
I'm glad you like romances. And the whole Spot and Violet is suppose to be a heart touching story. I'm not sure I got there yet, but I will soon. Thanks for reviewing, can't wait to hear from you again.
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Matchin' Laces~
I'm so glad that your happy! You were the first person that I actually liked the physical appearance and I loved the name. So that's why you got him, not to mention you were one of the first reviewers I got. ^_____^
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Iaintgotaname~
Thanks for reviewing my story. I really appreciate it. For some reason I was really bored and made this chapter longer for all y'all to enjoy.
Spot: Y'all?
Hey I'm a little country and a bit of rock n' roll!
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Bookey Elliot~
If I have enough time and effort then I'll be able to put you in. but I already have soo many characters, but I don't know what will happen in the end. Keep reading and reviewing!
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Dakki~
I'm glad you enjoyed the first two chapters. I'm here to please the customers! I can't wait to read and hear from you more. Hope you keep reviewing ^___^
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Wisecracker88~
There will be more laughs to come, and probably more serious ones too. This one wasn't too funny but its building up the stories plotline. I promise you there will be more humor. I just didn't feel like being a comedian today……sorry.
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I Your imperfections are what make you beautiful/I
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The Lodging House was as quiet as a mouse except a faint cough that could only be heard from within the walls.
"SPOT!" A voice came from the girls bunkroom which was newly added onto the Lodging House. A few girls stood next to the bed watching another coughing up a storm.
"What da hell do yas want Shorty?" Spot came walking into the bunkroom and looked over at the bunk where Shorty was standing by.
"Violets sick." Spot walked over to the bunk to see his girl lying on the bed. She looked pale as a ghost, sweat was running down her face and she was coughing up a storm.
"Go get me a wet washcloth and make sure da waters cold." Spot said as he sat next to Violet on her bed grabbing a hold of her hand and motioning the other girls to leave the room. Spot looked down at his girlfriend who was breathing in deeply and trying to control her coughing. "Jackey boy told yas you would get sick."
"Yea well Ise wanted to have some fun." She smiled weakly. "And plus, its was fun to throw mud at youse." She started to cough again and then in walked in Shorty with a washcloth and a bowl of water. Shorty then placed the bowl on the chair next to the bed and handed over the washcloth to Spot.
"Thanks." Spot whispered as he took the washcloth and started to wipe Violets forehead to try and cool her down.
"Spot." Violet whispered. "What are youse doing here?"
"Ise came here to see Blink because his goil is down at me docks tormenting me boys when Ise hoird Shorty yell for me."
"Oh." She started to cough again and Spot just started to rub her hands with his.
"Youse need to get some rest." Spot put the washcloth in the bowl and then rang out the excess water out and then placed it on Violets forehead. "I'll be back later to check up on youse." Violet nodded and closed her eyes. Spot sat there for a couple of minutes just staring at her, i God, she is so beautiful /i He then stood up and walked out of the room and down the stairs where most of the girls were waiting.
"Is she gonna be okay?" Shorty asking being the first person to notice Spot coming down the stairs.
"Yea, she'll be fine." Spot walked out of the Lodging House and on his way back to Brooklyn.
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"Ise don't wanna leave yet." A girl with light brown hair and blue eyes said as she held on the doorknob of the Bronx's Lodging House.
"Stop being a baby and lets go back home." Mush said as he pulled on the girls arms.
"Say da magic word." Alaska said as she stepped on the boys feet and ran down the stairs and over to the closest tree.
"Alaska! Jacks waiting few us."
"Youse gotta say it."
"Alaska. Yer seventeen, would youse act like it?"
"Say da magic word." She repeated as she started to climb the tree.
"Alaska get back down here or you'll break yer neck." Alaska sat on a branch and looked back down.
"What's so hard bout saying please?"
"Please Alaska." Mush said in utter defeat.
"Okay." Alaska climbed back down and kissed Mush on the cheek.
"Geez, youse just like Violet." Mush said as he grabbed a hold of her hand and started to walk towards Manhattan.
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"What do youse mean Ise lost?!?!?!" Hyena screamed at the top of her lungs. "Ise got a full house Mr. Racetrack sir. Ise tink dat beats yer two pair."
"Race, don't cheat. She won fair and square." Blink added.
"Ise can't believe it." Race sat back in his chair. "A goil beat me." Hyena looked over to see her boyfriend lean back in his chair flabbergasted. "Ise never tought Ise would see da day."
"Oh get over it." Hyena said as she grabbed her winnings and stuck it in her money pouch.
"Goils aint suppose to beat me tough." Race said trying to sound calm.
"If its dat big of a deal den Ise guess Ise won't play wit youse anymore." Hyena stood up and went over to the washroom while Blink and Race stared at the cards on the table.
"Wanna play again?" Blink asked taking Hyena's cards and then shuffling them with the rest.
"Nah, Ise gotta go make sure dat Hyena aint mad at me. By da way, where's yer goil?"
"If Ise only knew. I'm guessing down at da docks taking a midnight swim."
"Yer goils weird." Race said as he stood up and sauntered over to the washroom.
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A girl with long blonde hair that went down to her waist was sitting on the docks looking at the ripples with her jade eyes. She pulled her legs up to her chest and stared at the reflection the mood was making.
"Where's Blink when ya need him?"
"Well I'm sure if youse told him youse were here den he probably would've come." A voice behind her explained. "What are youse doing here Shooster?"
"No se, ¿y tú?"
"Came here to think. Violets sick again." Shooster looked over to Spot who was know sitting next to her with his feet dangling off the edge. "She's getting sick a lot dis year."
"Lo siento." Spot looked at her and she quickly translated, "I'm sorry."
"Ise just don't know what would happen if sometin were to happen."
"She'll be fine. She's Violet."
"Yea Ise hope yer right. Its just dat, me and Vi, we've been together for three years. Ever since Jackey boy told us dat wese were two peas in a pod. I really do love 'er and its weird because Ise don't know if she knows dat."
"Awww Spot, yer sensitive side is coming out."
"Its been sneaking up on me lately."
"Ise can tell. Especially a couple of months ago when Violet got sick."
"What's happening wit youse and Blink?"
"Nothing. Absolutely nothing. It seems like we're not together anymore because he doesn't want to spend as much time with me as Ise would like 'im too."
"Youse want me to talk to 'im?"
"Nah. Youse got other things to take care of." Spot nodded and stood up offering a hand for Shooster to get up.
"Ya wanna go back to da lodging house?" Shooster looked up at him and smiled. She then took his hand and they walked back to the lodging house joking around.
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"Jack, Ise don't want you to go."
"Dakki youse gotta stop yer whining. Ise gotta do dis or it won't be done." Dakki sat on his bed while Jack went underneath and collected a bag full of his belongings.
"But its all da way to New Jersey."
"Dakki its only fer a couple of days."
"A couple days witout me." Dakki made a pouty face as Jack lifted his head up to hers. "How could youse leave dis pretty face?"
"It takes time to get used to." Jack smiled as he kissed her lightly on the lips. "And plus dis is fer Violet. If Ise don't get 'er brudder den she'll be sick fer awhile. He's da only doctor Ise know dat will come and see 'er."
"Its dat bad?" Jack looked into Dakki's eyes which have changed from anger to sudden worry.
"Dis has been happening a lot. Dere's gotta be a reason fer her getting sick all da time." Dakki looked down and nodded. Jack kneeled in front of her and used his thumb to lift her face up to his. "Ise still love youse." Dakki smiled slightly.
"Well Ise would hope so, not many people stop loving deir goils after a couple a' minutes." Jack chuckled and then kissed Dakki once more but this was more passionate.
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"Mush its getting really dark, carry me." Mush laughed a little bit at his girlfriend who was walking slower by the minute.
"We're at least five minutes away and youse want me to carry you?" Alaska looked at him and nodded furiously. "Hop on." He stopped and let her jump on his back. "Did youse lose weight?" He asked as he started walking again, he soon felt a hand slap his head.
"Is dat suppose to imply dat Ise was fat before?"
"No it means dat youse haven't been eating and going on dat starvation diet again."
"Dat starvation diet was me eating fruits and vegetables."
"Exactly. Youse deprieved yerself of meat. Youse need some on yer bones."
"And youse need to watch out where youse going." She mumbled as Mush looked up to see her and ran right into a pole. Mush dropped Alaska on her bum and started to rub his forehead. "Dang Mush, youse could've put me down a little nicer."
"And yer off so bad? Ise just ran into a pole."
"Pssshhhhtttt!" Alaska said as she ran off towards the lodging house.
"What da hell was dat?" Mush smiled slightly at how cute his girlfriend could get.
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Race and Hyena were sitting downstairs on the bench that was placed by the door, Hyena sitting on his lap and laughing at Boots who accidentally threw a marble at Races head.
"MEN!" The door opened and in came walking Alaska with Mush behind her. Alaska ran upstairs while Mush closed the door.
"WOMEN!" He shouted up the stairs and then soon sat down on the floor in front of the bench that Hyena and Race were stationed at.
"Problemos Mush?" Hyena asked Mush and laughed a little. "Whats wit da red mark on yer forehead?"
"Ise accidentally ran into a pole." He mumbled. Hyena and Race started to crack up and didn't even notice the door opening again.
"Whats so funny?" Race and Hyena looked towards the door and saw Shooster and Spot returning from their separated walks.
"Mushy boy here ran into a pole." Spot chuckled and Shooster smiled and shook her head.
"Is Vi still upstairs?" Spot asked.
"Yea she's been sleeping ever since youse left." Spot quickly made a quick retreat to the upstairs to go see how his girlfriend was doing.
"Youse want me to go get Blink?" Race asked Shooster as he noticed that she was getting rather quiet.
"No por favor. Ise tink Ise can handle it." She said as she walked slowly up the stairs. "Estupido."
"Ise heard dat!" Race yelled after her and it only made Shooster run faster up the stairs. Shooster went over to the boys bunkroom and peeked through the cracks of the door to see if Blink was around. She couldn't see him which only disappointed her more. She felt two arms wrap around her waist as she jumped in their arms and give a good right hook to the persons jaw. She then looked at who it was and it was Blink. She couldn't help but laugh because he was holding his jaw.
"Yep, Spot definitely taught ya how to fight." Shooster laughed at him and quickly kissed him and then whispered a sorry.
"I'm so sorry." He just laughed at the cute little face she was making. Then she did the unthinkable and then hit him in the shoulder.
"What was dat fer?"
"Scaring da shit out of me!"
"Youse gotta learn dat da Manhattan boys aint as bad as Brooklyns." Blink then wrapped his arms around Shoosters hips and pulled her in close. "Youse wanna go watch da stars?" She couldn't help but blush and nod.
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That's all I got. I'm not in a good mood so writing really brought out my creative side. This chapter isn't as funny probably because I'm trying to work up the plot here. I think some of you can guess whats going to happen. Now review
Yes that button right down there
Thanks
SaMi