Guys and if I EVER make a mistake or do something you guys don't like tell me and I will fix it ASAP! Also don't mind the bad spacing it's not my fault it's the computer they are letters.
By the way I don't have anything worth while hint, hint Ella Enchanted And I'm not making any money or do you think I would still be here hmph!
Char back in the palace was miserable. All he could think about was Ella. Her smile, how she always made him laugh… No I won't think about Ella no. I love her I know that but if she loved me so much she would stay and try to fight the curse. Right? Why can't life be easy…….
I know I'll go for a walk, back to the place I first met Ella maybe I will get some ideas. Little did Char know someone was waiting for him…
A/n I'm now going to introduce a very important new character her name is Victoria. Now Victoria is a very beautiful girl in a dark way (very very different from Ella) she has brown eyes with long dark brown hair. She wasn't too wealthy but enough to be invited for a stay at the palace. Her father was a duke and an important family friend until he passed away recently, so the Queen and King invited her to spend time with Char while getting over her grief. Char only have met her a few times decides to show her around.
Char's POV*
-Day of Victoria's Arrival-
I saw her and my jaw almost…. Almost dropped. I think I might just be getting over Ella after all. I'm now glad I went for a walk. Just looking at her makes me want to get to know her, hold her, and even kiss her. Wait I barely even know her, last time I saw her she was about six. It's just been so long…..
"Prince, Prince?"
"OH! I'm so sorry. Welcome to…..umm the… the palace. Please….. call me….. Char…… it's what all my friends call me." I just barely managed to stammer. God am I staring? Char get a hold of your self.
Victoria's POV*
Oh he is soo cute when he does that. He's staring ah I think I'm in love. Oh he's at a lost of words. "It's a pleasure to meet you Char." I can't wait, my jobs going to be easier than I thought……
I know you guys are all thinking oh she's evil… well I'm not sure yet if I want her to be evil you know… By the way you should thank my friend Trish because she's the one who made me update… lol. Hey if you have any ideas what so ever tell me PLEASE…..
Well I was looking at my story online today and I thought hey I'll be a good author and update a nice long chapter… and I look back only to notice the other part of chapter 3 was missing ….. well it took me a while to find it so to say I'm sorry I'm going to make it extra long just for you guys…
Ella was not having a "pleasant" stay. Every night she went to bed tired and sore. If that wasn't bad enough Summer Balls were about to begin which meant endless serving and cleaning. An interesting prospect though, was the last ball of the season Mistress Kahlan (* sorry SoT fans) allowed her servants to attend. Since most of the balls were held at her house, Mistress Kahlan felt it was only fair to allow her servants at least on day off a year for a chance to experience what they could never have. Although it was two months away and a good many balls away Ella could only wait and hope for that day. So to prepare she started to save her money.
A/N I'm going to press the fast forward button here cause well let's put it this way nothing happens till about two weeks until the ball… For all of those who care Victoria and Char get closer and Ella well saves her money, goes about her chores… and still daydreams about Char even though her magic book no longer shows her pictures ( which is a good thing as of Victoria is on the scene). Ok well I'll pick up with Ella shopping… and there will be a lot of POV changing
Ella earned a good amount of money and was shopping for material (her mistress had given her the rest if the afternoon assuring Ella she was perfectly capable of fetching stuff for herself). Her new friend Julia, the seamstress could make a gown for her. Over the last two months she had made friends with all of the staff, except the grumpy butler who only mumbled to himself, but Julia had been her greatest friend. They talked of everything from her husband to the past Ella was running from (minus the curse).
Ella in her own thoughts ceased to notice the person until after they collided. "I'm so sorry..." I murmured under my breath still on the ground blushing and never looking up. When the shadow didn't move on I couldn't help but think oh god they're mad now. When a hand reached down to help her up she didn't expect it, but gladly took it. Up and brushing herself off, she looked at the person or well man. "Are you ok? I should have been looking as to where I was going.. I didn't realize that I would bump in to such a stunning women." This I didn't expect. "No no no it's all my fault … I was just caught up in my own mind…" "And what may I ask was such a beautiful lady as yourself thinking about?" This just made me blush more. Seeing her embarrassment he quickly changed the subject. "My name is Andrew, but you may call me Andy." He slowly bent to kiss her hand. "My name is Ella, and it's a pleasure to meet you Andy." Ella said once she gathered her courage. Finally looking at the whole of Andy she noticed he looked well dressed enough to be a prince or at least a lord. Not to mention he was cute, but not as cute at Char. At her thought she frowned. Seeing his new friend frown he quickly proposed they spend the afternoon together. "Please allow me to escort you to where ever you are going Ella" With a look of shock on her face.. "Yes I would very much like that. I am shopping for material and would be honored if you would accompany me." "Then off we go!" ( a/n I know I know corny right but oh well)
Ella spent the rest of the afternoon with Andy and had to say she had a wonderful time… She had even told him she was a servant and he didn't care, much to her surprise. He even mentioned that he was going to her mistress's ball and hoped to see her there. Oh how quickly she'd gotten over Char… but deep down she knew she still loved him. And the best part was she didn't endanger Andy at all by just being with him…. There was nothing to endanger….
A/N ok guys I want to make the ball a whole chapter so I'm going to leave it right her and start my new chapter except it to be up this weekend if I have a chance YAY my friends coming down from Virginia so if anything blame her if it's not up and hey if you have any suggestions just tell me and I'll think on them..