ragnaboy supote: This is my first try so tell me the mistakes and also tell
me if it's good or if it sucks...
CHAPTER I: Where are we? "How did we get here?" screamed Liana. "I have a feeling that we are not safe here by our selves," said Hernal calmly. They were in Glast Heim but nether of them knew. There were monsters that nether of them had ever seen before whispers and zombie prisoners keep appearing and nether of them knew what to do. "The only way to survive is to fight," says Hernal not so calm any more. "There's no other way you fight the whispers and I will help by healing the zombies and also healing you of course," said Liana more calmly. "LET'S GO!" shouted both of them.
Not so long after that the monster doesn't seem to stop appearing and Liana was running out of SP and Hernal was running out of HP. "What are we going to do? I am running out of SP and I have no gems we need our Guild with us I can just teleport away but.... but........." Says Liana crying. "But what? Stop crying and heal me first," said Hernal impatiently. "OK.." says Liana not crying that much any more.
About 30 minuets later both or them were exhausted but they can't stop to rest or they might die the monsters are fading away but still so much then suddenly they found a butterfly wing. "Oh my god we are safe," shout both of them happily. "You use the butterfly wing and I will teleport back to the save point" says Liana. "Ok let's go" Said Hernal.
They were in Prontera safe in sound. "Remember what you said there but... yes? But what," asked Hernal. "Well... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------- ragnaboy supote: Yay finished chapter 1 at last PLEASE REVIEW!!! Sorry if it's too short
CHAPTER I: Where are we? "How did we get here?" screamed Liana. "I have a feeling that we are not safe here by our selves," said Hernal calmly. They were in Glast Heim but nether of them knew. There were monsters that nether of them had ever seen before whispers and zombie prisoners keep appearing and nether of them knew what to do. "The only way to survive is to fight," says Hernal not so calm any more. "There's no other way you fight the whispers and I will help by healing the zombies and also healing you of course," said Liana more calmly. "LET'S GO!" shouted both of them.
Not so long after that the monster doesn't seem to stop appearing and Liana was running out of SP and Hernal was running out of HP. "What are we going to do? I am running out of SP and I have no gems we need our Guild with us I can just teleport away but.... but........." Says Liana crying. "But what? Stop crying and heal me first," said Hernal impatiently. "OK.." says Liana not crying that much any more.
About 30 minuets later both or them were exhausted but they can't stop to rest or they might die the monsters are fading away but still so much then suddenly they found a butterfly wing. "Oh my god we are safe," shout both of them happily. "You use the butterfly wing and I will teleport back to the save point" says Liana. "Ok let's go" Said Hernal.
They were in Prontera safe in sound. "Remember what you said there but... yes? But what," asked Hernal. "Well... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------- ragnaboy supote: Yay finished chapter 1 at last PLEASE REVIEW!!! Sorry if it's too short