Title:The Proposal
See chapter one if you want a disclaimer.
A/N: Thanks for all the reviews I've gotten keep doing it.
Chapter 3:
I ran into the house to see what was going on. What I saw was something that took my breath away. Brad was being lifted up onto a gurney and he looked like he was dead. Which I was really hoping that he wasn't no matter how much I don't get along with Brad. He doesn't deserve to die! I walked through the living room into the kitchen to find the rest of my family standing there watchimg the horrific scene fold out. As i walked toward them Doc saw me coming and came over to my side and hugged me that's when I knew that paul had fulfilled his promise. He murdered Brad. "What happened?" I asked stupidly because I knew I already knew.
My mom pulled me into a hug and then said "We're not sure how it happened but he got stabbed when he was up in his room. Oh Susie there not sure if he will make it through the night." She had become hysterical by this point. Andy was trying to comfort her while fighting back his own tears.
"The paramedics just left we better get going to the hospital." Andy said through the tears that he still refused to let through.Then sleepy went and grabbed the car keys. We all went out to the car got in and drove to the hospital. When we arrived Brad was already in surgery because the blade of the knife had stayed inside of him.
About three hours later the doctor came out and said "We have done for Brad all we can do is wait and hope that he will last through the night but it is getting less and less likely that he will make it.I'm sorry." He then walked away.
We stayed at the hospital all night. We took turns sitting with Brad hoping that he would wake up. When it was my turn a steady unbreaking line appeared on the heart machine and a beeeeeeeeeeep.
The doctor's came rushing in and started trying to revive Brad with the electric paddles. But I knew it was already to late because I saw Brad standing in front of me with a familiar glow surounding him.
A/N: please R/R if you like or not and constructive critisism and suggestions welcome.
See chapter one if you want a disclaimer.
A/N: Thanks for all the reviews I've gotten keep doing it.
Chapter 3:
I ran into the house to see what was going on. What I saw was something that took my breath away. Brad was being lifted up onto a gurney and he looked like he was dead. Which I was really hoping that he wasn't no matter how much I don't get along with Brad. He doesn't deserve to die! I walked through the living room into the kitchen to find the rest of my family standing there watchimg the horrific scene fold out. As i walked toward them Doc saw me coming and came over to my side and hugged me that's when I knew that paul had fulfilled his promise. He murdered Brad. "What happened?" I asked stupidly because I knew I already knew.
My mom pulled me into a hug and then said "We're not sure how it happened but he got stabbed when he was up in his room. Oh Susie there not sure if he will make it through the night." She had become hysterical by this point. Andy was trying to comfort her while fighting back his own tears.
"The paramedics just left we better get going to the hospital." Andy said through the tears that he still refused to let through.Then sleepy went and grabbed the car keys. We all went out to the car got in and drove to the hospital. When we arrived Brad was already in surgery because the blade of the knife had stayed inside of him.
About three hours later the doctor came out and said "We have done for Brad all we can do is wait and hope that he will last through the night but it is getting less and less likely that he will make it.I'm sorry." He then walked away.
We stayed at the hospital all night. We took turns sitting with Brad hoping that he would wake up. When it was my turn a steady unbreaking line appeared on the heart machine and a beeeeeeeeeeep.
The doctor's came rushing in and started trying to revive Brad with the electric paddles. But I knew it was already to late because I saw Brad standing in front of me with a familiar glow surounding him.
A/N: please R/R if you like or not and constructive critisism and suggestions welcome.