Title: The Proposal
A/N: Hi anybody who's still reading this story I'm finally back to writing it. I'm not sure if I started this story and wanted it to go in this direction but well it is now.This will be the last chapter of the story and it's really sad at the end in some ways but also kinda good. I dreamed how to end this last night it was wierd . i almost forgot about this story and now I'm having freaky dreams about in. Anyway on with the last chapter of this fic.
Disclaimer: I still own nothing and never will.
In the last chapter:
As he was yelling all of these glowing girls around my age showed up looking extremely pissed.
Chapter 9:
I screamed when I saw the girls appear like that. I really hate when ghosts just appear like that. Jake and David both started freaking out and asking what's wrong.
Rachel is the one who answered them. "Paul's victims have shown up." she said quietly.
" Save yourself Susannah it was to late for us but he hasn't gotten to you yet. you can beat him." The ghosts said together before disappearing in a bright white light.
"Ummm o.k that was a little to creepy even for me." I said slowly. Jesse nodded in agreement and Rachel told sleepy and doc what just happened.
Sleepy and Doc had to go to the hospital to see dopey. Rachel went with them to make sure that Paul was admitted and wouldn't be able to do anything for a couple of day's.
This left Jesse and I alone in the house.
"I swear to you Susannah I won't let anything happen to you or your family. As soon as I see Paul again I will make him pay for all that he he has done." Jesse promised me.
I looked up at him for a few seconds then burst into tears as I finally realized how dangerous Paul really was and that maybe all this could have been prevented back when I first met him if I had gone out with him more than once.
A second later Jesse had his arms wrapped around me and was telling me that everything will end up fine like it always does. Little did either of us no just how wrong he was.
About an hour later the phone rang I got up to go answer it. As I walked over to the kitchen where the phone was I didn't notice that the front door was open or that Jesse was gone. When I finally got to the kitchen, I was slammed against the fridge. The phone suddenly stopped ringing when the cord was yanked out of the wall.
I was about to start screaming for Jesse when a familiar hand clamped over my mouth. It was Paul. He had gotten his clothes back and was grinning down at me like a madman.
His hand slid off my mouth and down to my throat where his other hand soon joied it. He was holding me up agaainst the fridge with his body.
I felt his hands tighten around my throat. A second later I realized he was trying to strangle me. I struggled against him as much as I could but it was no use. My air supply soon ran out and everything around me slowly faded to black.
When I came to Jesse was by my side crying. I ran over to him and hugged him and begged him to tell me what was wrong. Jesse wrapped his arm's around me and whispered 'I love you Querida' to me.
*Nobody's point of view*
A brilliant white light shown through the Simon/Ackerman residence. As the two true loves disappeared in it finally together. In heaven.
Susannah Simon's funeral was a week later. At Father Dominick's request she was buried next to Hector "Jesse" De Silva. It rained for two straight weeks. Paul slater still remains at large to this day.
Little does the little town of Carmel, California know. That the journey of Susannah Simon and Hector De silva hasn't even begun.
fin.
A/N: I decided to leave this story open for a sequal if anybody want's one tell me. review now please.
A/N: Hi anybody who's still reading this story I'm finally back to writing it. I'm not sure if I started this story and wanted it to go in this direction but well it is now.This will be the last chapter of the story and it's really sad at the end in some ways but also kinda good. I dreamed how to end this last night it was wierd . i almost forgot about this story and now I'm having freaky dreams about in. Anyway on with the last chapter of this fic.
Disclaimer: I still own nothing and never will.
In the last chapter:
As he was yelling all of these glowing girls around my age showed up looking extremely pissed.
Chapter 9:
I screamed when I saw the girls appear like that. I really hate when ghosts just appear like that. Jake and David both started freaking out and asking what's wrong.
Rachel is the one who answered them. "Paul's victims have shown up." she said quietly.
" Save yourself Susannah it was to late for us but he hasn't gotten to you yet. you can beat him." The ghosts said together before disappearing in a bright white light.
"Ummm o.k that was a little to creepy even for me." I said slowly. Jesse nodded in agreement and Rachel told sleepy and doc what just happened.
Sleepy and Doc had to go to the hospital to see dopey. Rachel went with them to make sure that Paul was admitted and wouldn't be able to do anything for a couple of day's.
This left Jesse and I alone in the house.
"I swear to you Susannah I won't let anything happen to you or your family. As soon as I see Paul again I will make him pay for all that he he has done." Jesse promised me.
I looked up at him for a few seconds then burst into tears as I finally realized how dangerous Paul really was and that maybe all this could have been prevented back when I first met him if I had gone out with him more than once.
A second later Jesse had his arms wrapped around me and was telling me that everything will end up fine like it always does. Little did either of us no just how wrong he was.
About an hour later the phone rang I got up to go answer it. As I walked over to the kitchen where the phone was I didn't notice that the front door was open or that Jesse was gone. When I finally got to the kitchen, I was slammed against the fridge. The phone suddenly stopped ringing when the cord was yanked out of the wall.
I was about to start screaming for Jesse when a familiar hand clamped over my mouth. It was Paul. He had gotten his clothes back and was grinning down at me like a madman.
His hand slid off my mouth and down to my throat where his other hand soon joied it. He was holding me up agaainst the fridge with his body.
I felt his hands tighten around my throat. A second later I realized he was trying to strangle me. I struggled against him as much as I could but it was no use. My air supply soon ran out and everything around me slowly faded to black.
When I came to Jesse was by my side crying. I ran over to him and hugged him and begged him to tell me what was wrong. Jesse wrapped his arm's around me and whispered 'I love you Querida' to me.
*Nobody's point of view*
A brilliant white light shown through the Simon/Ackerman residence. As the two true loves disappeared in it finally together. In heaven.
Susannah Simon's funeral was a week later. At Father Dominick's request she was buried next to Hector "Jesse" De Silva. It rained for two straight weeks. Paul slater still remains at large to this day.
Little does the little town of Carmel, California know. That the journey of Susannah Simon and Hector De silva hasn't even begun.
fin.
A/N: I decided to leave this story open for a sequal if anybody want's one tell me. review now please.