Title: To Call You David
Author: Winter Blaze
Chapter 4: To Call You David
Today is the day. The day I see what happens. I don't know if I should be doing this because he just got dumped by Miranda. He may not even like me.
I went over to my bedroom window and looked out. I saw Gordo's jeep pull up in the front yard, and I ran downstairs because of nervousness, but also in anticipation. I didn't care if I woke up my family. I opened the front door, closed it, and there stood Gordo, "Thanks for coming. How have you been?" I asked. I tried to make ideal conversation, before I just tell him. "I'm doing good." he replied.
We just stood on my front porch and stared at each other, then out of nowhere we both said, "I have something to tell you." "You go first." demanded Gordo. He's polite and I like that. I have finally made my decision. "David I – I..." He looked at me with his goofy smile, and then he cupped my chin with one hand and brought my face to his. I felt like this was a slow motion picture and it could not go fast enough, so I leaned in and kissed him. We finally broke apart when I heard someone clear his or her throat.
I didn't turn around on purpose, because I had something to tell David, so I whispered in his ear, "That is what it means to me to call you David. In other words I love you, David Gordon and I'm sorry it took me till our senior year to realize it." He whispered back to me, "Turn around." I was furious I express how I feel and all he says is, 'Turn around' I did but I was still mad, well until I saw who was behind me.
"Dad, hi." He was not happy. "Lizzie, get in the house, and get ready for school. You are grounded just for today, now get in the house." I did not want to leave David out to face my dad, but I did have to get ready, so I went into the house, ran up to my room, and changed as fast I could. It took me fifteen minutes to get ready and two seconds to get down the stairs. I opened the front door and was shocked to see my dad and David shaking hands. "I hate to interrupt this moment, but if David and I don't leave we are going to be late for school." I Walked over to David and grabbed his free hand. "Don't forget what I told you." and then my dad went into the house..
David started his jeep, and he drove me to school. On the way to school I asked, "What did my dad say to you?" "You're still grounded for today, and he told me to hurt you or he is going to break my limbs." He parked in the student parking lot and we both got out. I walked over to him and slipped my hand into his. We walked that way into school. For once, I did not care what people thought of me.
The End
Author's response:
MwaHaHa- Thank you for giving me the information to correct my mistake(S) and for telling me to try to make the chapters longer. On chapter1, I will be correcting it but other than that, nothing will really change.
Nelly 88- I am glad you like my story.
Sirithiliel- Jenn you where my first reviewer and I know I will try to make my future stories that I work on longer.
MellyW- I am glad you think my story is good.
HilaryDuffMetamorphosis- Well I'm glad you like my story and this is it for, "To Call You David"
To all my recent or future reviewer's for this story I want you all to know that I do appreciate your reviews I really do, so Thanks to all of you for helping me correct my information and of course reviewing.
Author: Winter Blaze
Chapter 4: To Call You David
Today is the day. The day I see what happens. I don't know if I should be doing this because he just got dumped by Miranda. He may not even like me.
I went over to my bedroom window and looked out. I saw Gordo's jeep pull up in the front yard, and I ran downstairs because of nervousness, but also in anticipation. I didn't care if I woke up my family. I opened the front door, closed it, and there stood Gordo, "Thanks for coming. How have you been?" I asked. I tried to make ideal conversation, before I just tell him. "I'm doing good." he replied.
We just stood on my front porch and stared at each other, then out of nowhere we both said, "I have something to tell you." "You go first." demanded Gordo. He's polite and I like that. I have finally made my decision. "David I – I..." He looked at me with his goofy smile, and then he cupped my chin with one hand and brought my face to his. I felt like this was a slow motion picture and it could not go fast enough, so I leaned in and kissed him. We finally broke apart when I heard someone clear his or her throat.
I didn't turn around on purpose, because I had something to tell David, so I whispered in his ear, "That is what it means to me to call you David. In other words I love you, David Gordon and I'm sorry it took me till our senior year to realize it." He whispered back to me, "Turn around." I was furious I express how I feel and all he says is, 'Turn around' I did but I was still mad, well until I saw who was behind me.
"Dad, hi." He was not happy. "Lizzie, get in the house, and get ready for school. You are grounded just for today, now get in the house." I did not want to leave David out to face my dad, but I did have to get ready, so I went into the house, ran up to my room, and changed as fast I could. It took me fifteen minutes to get ready and two seconds to get down the stairs. I opened the front door and was shocked to see my dad and David shaking hands. "I hate to interrupt this moment, but if David and I don't leave we are going to be late for school." I Walked over to David and grabbed his free hand. "Don't forget what I told you." and then my dad went into the house..
David started his jeep, and he drove me to school. On the way to school I asked, "What did my dad say to you?" "You're still grounded for today, and he told me to hurt you or he is going to break my limbs." He parked in the student parking lot and we both got out. I walked over to him and slipped my hand into his. We walked that way into school. For once, I did not care what people thought of me.
The End
Author's response:
MwaHaHa- Thank you for giving me the information to correct my mistake(S) and for telling me to try to make the chapters longer. On chapter1, I will be correcting it but other than that, nothing will really change.
Nelly 88- I am glad you like my story.
Sirithiliel- Jenn you where my first reviewer and I know I will try to make my future stories that I work on longer.
MellyW- I am glad you think my story is good.
HilaryDuffMetamorphosis- Well I'm glad you like my story and this is it for, "To Call You David"
To all my recent or future reviewer's for this story I want you all to know that I do appreciate your reviews I really do, so Thanks to all of you for helping me correct my information and of course reviewing.