I decided to change the format cuz i didn't like the way i typed the first
chapter.
~~ means change scene // means thoughts ** means what the character's doing
Excuses
Chapter Two
- Normal POV-
As the four spirit detectives walk in, Koenma opens up a big screen with a picuture sinister looking guy on it.
Koenma: This is the demon you are to capture. His name is Katzuo and he's the leader of a group of demons who are trying to take over Ningenkai.
Yusuke: *yawn* What's new?
Koenma: Let me finish! *ahem* He's extremely powerful, but we don't know how powerful. He's AT LEAST an A class. He's captured, tortured, and killed numerous spirit detectives so you guys have to be careful. His main goal is to kill all humans and demons with any kind of mixed blood. He considers them impure and not worthy of the new world he's about to create for all youkai.
Yusuke: Talk about psycho.
Koenma: Yes. He IS a little bit off.
Kurama: So where is he located right now?
Koenma: We don't know. All we know is that he's in the Ningenkai.
Yusuke: *bangs fists on desk* YOU DON'T KNOW!
Koenma: Yusuke calm down! We DO have a way of finding him though. *looks at Hiei*
Hiei starts to leave
Koenma: But you can't do it alone.
Hiei: Hn. And why not?
Koenma: Because he knows about your jagan eye and has a force field that makes him invisible to it. Kuwabara is to come with you since he has more spirit awareness than all of you.
Kuwabara: THAT'S CUZ I'M THE MAN!
Hiei: What's the point of me going then? I don't plan to be seen anywhere near this idiot.
Koenma: You won't be seen, since your speed is invisible to the human eye or any eyes for that matter. You two have to work together. * Kuwabara makes a disgusted, yet scared face* With Kuwabara's sense of awareness and your speed, we'll find Katzuo faster and we can stop him from carrying out his plans.
Hiei: Hn.
Kuwabara: I don't know what his ki feels like. How do I find him?
Koenma: Luckily one of our spirit detectives escaped with a sample of Katzuo's ki. *presses intercom button* Ogre, bring me the Energy Orb.
intercom: Yes Koenma sir. *ogre comes in with a glowing orange orb*
Ogre: Here it is Koenma sir.
Koenma: Thank you Ogre. Kuwabara, put your hands on the orb, but be careful. If you keep it there too long, even if it's just a second too long, the orb will absorb your energy. Both your spirit energy and your life energy.
Kuwabara: O-ok *slowly reaches for the orb*
Yusuke: HURRY UP KUWABARA. WE DON'T HAVE ALL DAY!
Kuwabara: SHUT UP URAMESHI! *touches orb and pulls hand off right away* I got it. I know exactly what his energy feels like. Let's go shrimp.
Hiei: Don't make me let my dragon out so it can eat you. *starts walking out to hallway*
Kuwabara: Hehe Kurama he was joking right?
Kurama: Let's hope so.
Kuwabara: Eep! *walks out to hallway too*
~ out in hallway~
Hiei: Which way?
Kuwabara: Uh.... after we leave Koenma's palace ....
Hiei: Hurry up. My patience is wearing thin with you. Who knows what I'll do.
Kuwabara: B-but you can't kill humans.
Hiei: Maybe I could just accidently leave you in Makai right in the middle of a youkai eating frenzy. I'm sure they'll love a snack. *smirks*
Kuwabara: GO TO THE RIGHT!
Hiei: About time. *grabs Kuwabara's leg and drags him while running almost as fast as he can*
Kuwabara: Ow ow ow ow TURN ow LEFT ow
~ back in Koenma's office~
Yusuke: So what do WE do?
Koenma: Now that those two are gone, I can tell you why I asked you guys here so urgently.
Kurama: What's so important that you can't let Hiei or Kuwabara know?
Koenma: Yukina was kidnapped by Katzuo. He's using Yukina as bait to lure the forbidden child there.
Yusuke: WHAT!
Kurama: So you wanted those two to leave so that they don't rush in there blindlessly trying to save Yukina. Clever...
Koenma: Thank you *smiles a big cheesy smile*
Kurama: Or was it that you were afraid Hiei would hurt you for letting Yukina get kidnapped? *smirks*
Koenma: ...Both.
Yusuke: Hahahah. Is the widdle baby afwaid of Hiei's widdle dwagon?
Koenma: I'M NOT A BABY!
Kurama: Alright you two, this isn't the time. Koenma, you still didn't tell us what we have to do.
Koenma: I want you two to make sure Yukina is safe when this is over, but Hiei can't know that the only reason she got kidnapped was because of him. We all know Hiei would never forgive himself.
Kurama: That's true.
Yusuke: Wow good thinking Koenma.
Koenma: Of course. Behind this cute and handsome face is a very intellgent god.
Yusuke: *Whispers to Kurama* Wow you give the guy one compliment and he thinks he's the greatest god in all of the three worlds.
Kurama: *Chuckles* We should really go. I have a feeling we don't have much time.
Yusuke: *Nods*
~ Hiei and Kuwabara's position~
Kuwabara: Ow RIGHT ow ow STRAIGHT ow FOR ABOUT ow 2 ow MORE MILES ow THEN ow STOP
Hiei: *Stops*
Kuwabara: *Gets up and there's a hole in his pants and his boxers are showing* * boxers say "I love Yukina" and "Urameshi sucks" but since there's a hole in his boxers too, it says "I love Urameshi"* Finally!
Hiei: We're at Genkai's temple you idiot.
Kuwabara: Of course. I wanted to tell my sweet beloved Yukina that I was going on a very dangerous mission! *heart in his eyes* But now I have to go change my pants since THERE'S A HOLE IN IT! *runs home*
Hiei: //Hn pathetic. Hm? What's this?// * Picks up a piece of paper and reads it*
Forbidden Child,
I have taken your sister. If you have the guts to face me, then come. If not, say good-bye to your beloved sister. You've got 3 hours.
Katzuo
Hiei: *Crumples up piece of paper and burns it* // That bastard will pay. I'll make sure of it//
Kuwabara: *Comes back* YUKINA! MY BELOVED! HERE I COME!
Hiei: Find Katzuo. NOW!
Kuwabara: But-
Hiei: SHUT UP AND DO IT!
Kuwabara: Alright. Aheesh. But you can't drag me again. I'm still in pain from last time.
Hiei: TELL ME!
Kuwabara: Go left.
Hiei: *grabs Kuwabara's collar and runs as fast as he can*
~ Kurama and Yusuke's position ~
Kurama: Did you feel that?
Yusuke: Feel what?
Kurama: Hiei's ki just flared up.
Yusuke: .. Now that you said it ... I DO feel it. What do you think happened?
Kurama: I don't know, but I hope he doesn't do anything stupid.
Yusuke: Same here.
Hoped you guys liked this chapter. even tho it aint much.
~~ means change scene // means thoughts ** means what the character's doing
Excuses
Chapter Two
- Normal POV-
As the four spirit detectives walk in, Koenma opens up a big screen with a picuture sinister looking guy on it.
Koenma: This is the demon you are to capture. His name is Katzuo and he's the leader of a group of demons who are trying to take over Ningenkai.
Yusuke: *yawn* What's new?
Koenma: Let me finish! *ahem* He's extremely powerful, but we don't know how powerful. He's AT LEAST an A class. He's captured, tortured, and killed numerous spirit detectives so you guys have to be careful. His main goal is to kill all humans and demons with any kind of mixed blood. He considers them impure and not worthy of the new world he's about to create for all youkai.
Yusuke: Talk about psycho.
Koenma: Yes. He IS a little bit off.
Kurama: So where is he located right now?
Koenma: We don't know. All we know is that he's in the Ningenkai.
Yusuke: *bangs fists on desk* YOU DON'T KNOW!
Koenma: Yusuke calm down! We DO have a way of finding him though. *looks at Hiei*
Hiei starts to leave
Koenma: But you can't do it alone.
Hiei: Hn. And why not?
Koenma: Because he knows about your jagan eye and has a force field that makes him invisible to it. Kuwabara is to come with you since he has more spirit awareness than all of you.
Kuwabara: THAT'S CUZ I'M THE MAN!
Hiei: What's the point of me going then? I don't plan to be seen anywhere near this idiot.
Koenma: You won't be seen, since your speed is invisible to the human eye or any eyes for that matter. You two have to work together. * Kuwabara makes a disgusted, yet scared face* With Kuwabara's sense of awareness and your speed, we'll find Katzuo faster and we can stop him from carrying out his plans.
Hiei: Hn.
Kuwabara: I don't know what his ki feels like. How do I find him?
Koenma: Luckily one of our spirit detectives escaped with a sample of Katzuo's ki. *presses intercom button* Ogre, bring me the Energy Orb.
intercom: Yes Koenma sir. *ogre comes in with a glowing orange orb*
Ogre: Here it is Koenma sir.
Koenma: Thank you Ogre. Kuwabara, put your hands on the orb, but be careful. If you keep it there too long, even if it's just a second too long, the orb will absorb your energy. Both your spirit energy and your life energy.
Kuwabara: O-ok *slowly reaches for the orb*
Yusuke: HURRY UP KUWABARA. WE DON'T HAVE ALL DAY!
Kuwabara: SHUT UP URAMESHI! *touches orb and pulls hand off right away* I got it. I know exactly what his energy feels like. Let's go shrimp.
Hiei: Don't make me let my dragon out so it can eat you. *starts walking out to hallway*
Kuwabara: Hehe Kurama he was joking right?
Kurama: Let's hope so.
Kuwabara: Eep! *walks out to hallway too*
~ out in hallway~
Hiei: Which way?
Kuwabara: Uh.... after we leave Koenma's palace ....
Hiei: Hurry up. My patience is wearing thin with you. Who knows what I'll do.
Kuwabara: B-but you can't kill humans.
Hiei: Maybe I could just accidently leave you in Makai right in the middle of a youkai eating frenzy. I'm sure they'll love a snack. *smirks*
Kuwabara: GO TO THE RIGHT!
Hiei: About time. *grabs Kuwabara's leg and drags him while running almost as fast as he can*
Kuwabara: Ow ow ow ow TURN ow LEFT ow
~ back in Koenma's office~
Yusuke: So what do WE do?
Koenma: Now that those two are gone, I can tell you why I asked you guys here so urgently.
Kurama: What's so important that you can't let Hiei or Kuwabara know?
Koenma: Yukina was kidnapped by Katzuo. He's using Yukina as bait to lure the forbidden child there.
Yusuke: WHAT!
Kurama: So you wanted those two to leave so that they don't rush in there blindlessly trying to save Yukina. Clever...
Koenma: Thank you *smiles a big cheesy smile*
Kurama: Or was it that you were afraid Hiei would hurt you for letting Yukina get kidnapped? *smirks*
Koenma: ...Both.
Yusuke: Hahahah. Is the widdle baby afwaid of Hiei's widdle dwagon?
Koenma: I'M NOT A BABY!
Kurama: Alright you two, this isn't the time. Koenma, you still didn't tell us what we have to do.
Koenma: I want you two to make sure Yukina is safe when this is over, but Hiei can't know that the only reason she got kidnapped was because of him. We all know Hiei would never forgive himself.
Kurama: That's true.
Yusuke: Wow good thinking Koenma.
Koenma: Of course. Behind this cute and handsome face is a very intellgent god.
Yusuke: *Whispers to Kurama* Wow you give the guy one compliment and he thinks he's the greatest god in all of the three worlds.
Kurama: *Chuckles* We should really go. I have a feeling we don't have much time.
Yusuke: *Nods*
~ Hiei and Kuwabara's position~
Kuwabara: Ow RIGHT ow ow STRAIGHT ow FOR ABOUT ow 2 ow MORE MILES ow THEN ow STOP
Hiei: *Stops*
Kuwabara: *Gets up and there's a hole in his pants and his boxers are showing* * boxers say "I love Yukina" and "Urameshi sucks" but since there's a hole in his boxers too, it says "I love Urameshi"* Finally!
Hiei: We're at Genkai's temple you idiot.
Kuwabara: Of course. I wanted to tell my sweet beloved Yukina that I was going on a very dangerous mission! *heart in his eyes* But now I have to go change my pants since THERE'S A HOLE IN IT! *runs home*
Hiei: //Hn pathetic. Hm? What's this?// * Picks up a piece of paper and reads it*
Forbidden Child,
I have taken your sister. If you have the guts to face me, then come. If not, say good-bye to your beloved sister. You've got 3 hours.
Katzuo
Hiei: *Crumples up piece of paper and burns it* // That bastard will pay. I'll make sure of it//
Kuwabara: *Comes back* YUKINA! MY BELOVED! HERE I COME!
Hiei: Find Katzuo. NOW!
Kuwabara: But-
Hiei: SHUT UP AND DO IT!
Kuwabara: Alright. Aheesh. But you can't drag me again. I'm still in pain from last time.
Hiei: TELL ME!
Kuwabara: Go left.
Hiei: *grabs Kuwabara's collar and runs as fast as he can*
~ Kurama and Yusuke's position ~
Kurama: Did you feel that?
Yusuke: Feel what?
Kurama: Hiei's ki just flared up.
Yusuke: .. Now that you said it ... I DO feel it. What do you think happened?
Kurama: I don't know, but I hope he doesn't do anything stupid.
Yusuke: Same here.
Hoped you guys liked this chapter. even tho it aint much.