I changed chapter 5 a little bit. It's just the little details though.
Excuses
Chapter 6
Hiei: You can't die! How do you expect me to live without you? If you die, I'll go with you.
Kurama: NO! *cough* if you die I'll ... never forgive you.
Hiei: but-
Kurama passes out.
Hiei: Kurama? KURAMA!
Botan: Hiei.... I've done all I can ...
Hiei: WHAT!?!?! Kurama!
Botan: Hiei, let me finish.
Hiei: ...
Botan: I've done all I can and now it's up to him if he survives or not. *tears start rolling down her face* He's on the brink of death .... but he's not there yet.
Hiei: Is there anything I can do?
Botan: .... prepare yourself for the worse.... I'm sorry Hiei. I wish my powers were stronger.
Hiei: No need for apologies. It's not your fault. It's mine.
Botan: H-
Hiei: I-I've got to go. I can't stand to see him like this. Especially knowing that it was my fault.
Hiei leaves before Botan can try to talk to him.
Botan: // Poor Hiei...//
~ In Hiei's tree~
Hiei was laying on the highest branch staring at the stars. Thousands of thoughts running through his head.
Hiei: // So many things happened in just two days. First, Yukina was kidnapped just because of me. Kurama fought and got injured, because of me. Kurama confessed his love for me and I left. He was sad because of me. Now he's going to die ALL BECAUSE OF ME! Everything is my fault. If I wasn't here, none of this would've happened. And I wouldn't have to be in this tree trying to prepare myself for Kurama's death. Damn it! Why would someone as insignificant as me, the forbidden child, affect so many people so much. //
mysterious voice: The fact that you affect their lives that much means that you are not insignificant.
Hiei sits up looking around.
Hiei: Who's there?!
..... dun dun dun. Who does that voice belong to? Is Kurama going to live? Even I don't know for sure. The only thing I know is that this chapter is the shortest one in this whole story. It's only one page ( not counting my AN's). OH! I also know that I'm stalling because I'm weird like that. hehe.
Excuses
Chapter 6
Hiei: You can't die! How do you expect me to live without you? If you die, I'll go with you.
Kurama: NO! *cough* if you die I'll ... never forgive you.
Hiei: but-
Kurama passes out.
Hiei: Kurama? KURAMA!
Botan: Hiei.... I've done all I can ...
Hiei: WHAT!?!?! Kurama!
Botan: Hiei, let me finish.
Hiei: ...
Botan: I've done all I can and now it's up to him if he survives or not. *tears start rolling down her face* He's on the brink of death .... but he's not there yet.
Hiei: Is there anything I can do?
Botan: .... prepare yourself for the worse.... I'm sorry Hiei. I wish my powers were stronger.
Hiei: No need for apologies. It's not your fault. It's mine.
Botan: H-
Hiei: I-I've got to go. I can't stand to see him like this. Especially knowing that it was my fault.
Hiei leaves before Botan can try to talk to him.
Botan: // Poor Hiei...//
~ In Hiei's tree~
Hiei was laying on the highest branch staring at the stars. Thousands of thoughts running through his head.
Hiei: // So many things happened in just two days. First, Yukina was kidnapped just because of me. Kurama fought and got injured, because of me. Kurama confessed his love for me and I left. He was sad because of me. Now he's going to die ALL BECAUSE OF ME! Everything is my fault. If I wasn't here, none of this would've happened. And I wouldn't have to be in this tree trying to prepare myself for Kurama's death. Damn it! Why would someone as insignificant as me, the forbidden child, affect so many people so much. //
mysterious voice: The fact that you affect their lives that much means that you are not insignificant.
Hiei sits up looking around.
Hiei: Who's there?!
..... dun dun dun. Who does that voice belong to? Is Kurama going to live? Even I don't know for sure. The only thing I know is that this chapter is the shortest one in this whole story. It's only one page ( not counting my AN's). OH! I also know that I'm stalling because I'm weird like that. hehe.