Ok chappie 2.
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knshn4eva: U were my first reviewee. and the story will get better as times goes.
DigiDudette: Reviewer number 2. I can't tell you. It's a secret. I had a hard time writing the summary without giving to much away.
DemonSurfer: Ur right I do have to update now. ::eats cady she was given:: thanx for the sweets.
Disclaimer as read by Bakura: Kate does not own Yugioh. She does own Rayko though.
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::Bakura opened his chocolate brown eyes and looked around. Everything was all blurry and fuzzy. He couldn't focus on anything. All he could tell is that the room was dark and people walked around. Bakura tried to rub his eyes, but found that he coundn't move his hands. He found out that his hands were tied behind him. He tried to let out a cry, but to realize that his mouth was taped shut. Thats when he realized that he was tied down to a chair::
::A hand clasp down on his right shoulder. Bakura couldn't sense the spirit of the ring anymore. He looked up into the face of the person who had layed there hand on his shoulder. His vision was still blurred, so he couldn't tell who it was. The person soon spoke:: You know why your here, so hand it over!
::Bakura recognized the voice. It belonged to his father. Tears started to flow as he tilted his head down and shook his head. He didn't know what his father wanted. He realized that he didn't have the Millennium Ring around his neck anymore. He was seriously scared now::
Where is it boy? ::His father yelled increasing his grip on Bakura's shoulder. He could still see other people walking around. He wanted to cry out for help, but couldn't. So he did the next best thing he could think of, he called for help through the link he shared with the tomb robber. He hoped he could reach him and get a responce. A slight smile appeared on his face as he heard a low moan in the back of his head:: Help I have been tied up and my mouth has been taped shut! ::He yelled with his English voice to the tomb robber::
::His father kept asking and increasing the pressure to Bakura's shoulder. Bakura could feel the spirit now. The spirit moaned a bit more before saying anything:: What hit me? Where are we boy? ::The spirit asked Bakura remembering what he was doing before he awoken to the freighten teen's calls for help::
::Bakura let his head droop again. He mentally shrugged and answered the spirit:: I don't know. I had awoken and found myself here. I can't see a bloody thing. ::Bakura had stained his face and clothes with tears. His pure white hair falling onto his face. He didn't know what to do now::
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So did you guys like chapter 2? Why is Bakura's father doing this? If you have guesses submit them. If you get it right I will update sooner.
3 reviews or the right guess and I update. So plz review and guess.
Replies to reviews
knshn4eva: U were my first reviewee. and the story will get better as times goes.
DigiDudette: Reviewer number 2. I can't tell you. It's a secret. I had a hard time writing the summary without giving to much away.
DemonSurfer: Ur right I do have to update now. ::eats cady she was given:: thanx for the sweets.
Disclaimer as read by Bakura: Kate does not own Yugioh. She does own Rayko though.
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::Bakura opened his chocolate brown eyes and looked around. Everything was all blurry and fuzzy. He couldn't focus on anything. All he could tell is that the room was dark and people walked around. Bakura tried to rub his eyes, but found that he coundn't move his hands. He found out that his hands were tied behind him. He tried to let out a cry, but to realize that his mouth was taped shut. Thats when he realized that he was tied down to a chair::
::A hand clasp down on his right shoulder. Bakura couldn't sense the spirit of the ring anymore. He looked up into the face of the person who had layed there hand on his shoulder. His vision was still blurred, so he couldn't tell who it was. The person soon spoke:: You know why your here, so hand it over!
::Bakura recognized the voice. It belonged to his father. Tears started to flow as he tilted his head down and shook his head. He didn't know what his father wanted. He realized that he didn't have the Millennium Ring around his neck anymore. He was seriously scared now::
Where is it boy? ::His father yelled increasing his grip on Bakura's shoulder. He could still see other people walking around. He wanted to cry out for help, but couldn't. So he did the next best thing he could think of, he called for help through the link he shared with the tomb robber. He hoped he could reach him and get a responce. A slight smile appeared on his face as he heard a low moan in the back of his head:: Help I have been tied up and my mouth has been taped shut! ::He yelled with his English voice to the tomb robber::
::His father kept asking and increasing the pressure to Bakura's shoulder. Bakura could feel the spirit now. The spirit moaned a bit more before saying anything:: What hit me? Where are we boy? ::The spirit asked Bakura remembering what he was doing before he awoken to the freighten teen's calls for help::
::Bakura let his head droop again. He mentally shrugged and answered the spirit:: I don't know. I had awoken and found myself here. I can't see a bloody thing. ::Bakura had stained his face and clothes with tears. His pure white hair falling onto his face. He didn't know what to do now::
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So did you guys like chapter 2? Why is Bakura's father doing this? If you have guesses submit them. If you get it right I will update sooner.
3 reviews or the right guess and I update. So plz review and guess.