Hi it's me again and I'm here wit chapter 3 of One Yami, A Hikari, And A Big City.
I'm doing good with this story. Go me.
I only got one review for the last chapter. You people are starting to slack again. Shame on you. I should have Yami Bakura send you guys that read and don't review to the shadow realm.
Yami Bakura: You should. I would enjoy that. ::He said with a smirk::
No I'm sorry but you can't, but in the next couple chapter I might reconsider.
Ok to my one reviewer Neko Moon Goddess: You got it right. If you wanna know the answer look at her review. ::Hands her a Marik plushie:: Do what you want with it. And thanks for the only review for the last chapter. ::Glares at everyone who didn't review::
Disclaimer as read by Joey (Who isn't gonna be in the story): Kate Dun own Yugioh or anything else listed in da story. So peace.
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::He looked up, and spirit had gotten possesion of the boy. The tomb robber looked around. His vision, like Bakura's, was blurred. He couldn't make anything out. He left the link between him and Bakura open:: How long have you been here? And what does your father want? ::He said rotating his right shoulder. It was getting sore from the pressure of the boy's father::
I believe he wants the ring for some reason. ::The young teen replied as he sat in his soul room. His room was decrorated with random posters, a small table with cards spread out on it, a bed neatly made with white and baby blue sheets, and a few other things. It was a room in your soul that reflected how you felt and a place to retreat from the outside world for awhile. Bakura sat at the table and messed with the cards::
::A glare appeared on the spirit's face as he sat there. He remembered that he left that in the boy's bedroom. He was hoping that the guy was going to take off the tape soon. Just as the thought came in his mind the guy removed the tape, quickly I might add. The spirit sat there and let the pain shoot through him. When the pain subsided he looked up at the man:: What do you want with the ring Mortal? ::The spirit asked in his sinister voice that could haunt most people that were forced to hear it. With the glare still planted on his face the man answered him:: Master Marik needs it. That is all he has premitted me to say. ::Bakura's father let go of the spirit's shoulder. The father's words emotionless, they sounded like they came from a robot more or less::
::If the spirit could see his face he would know something was up. The father's deep brown eye's were just that. They did't have a pupil, the iris was the only thing there. Although the spirit could tell there was something behind this:: Marik? ::He said the word like it was something foul and should be gotten rid of quickly. He was confused, but the only person who could tell was Bakura::
Yes Master Marik. Holder of the Millennium Rod. ::With that Bakura's father's voiced sounded like there were two people talking at once. The spirit listened to him with full attention. He wanted to know who this person was and how the spirit could get his Millennium Item. The person spoke through the boy's father:: Yes I am Marik and the reason I want your Millennium Ring is so it can help me to become the new Pharaoh!
You will never get it Marik. No matter what you do to me or the young one. ::The spirit spoke in a low and deep tone. Bakura was surprized to hear the spirit say that he even existed. The spirit on the other hand meant business:: Plus I don't even have it with me. So let me go before I am forced to take action.
::The evil spirit glared at the new person heading toward him. He knew something bad was about to happen. The guy brought something up to his face. A clothe is what he thought it was. It had a foul scent to it. The man pressed it against his face. The tomb robber drifted off into unconciousness::
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End of chappie three.So please post ideas, questions, comments, and reviews by pressing the button below.
I will post when I get 3 or more reviews. If I get a chance. I've been spending the last few days working on a new story that aint on my comp. It's called the new millennium ring. I'm still thinking about whetheror not to put it on here.
Ok c ur reviews and talk to ya lata!
I'm doing good with this story. Go me.
I only got one review for the last chapter. You people are starting to slack again. Shame on you. I should have Yami Bakura send you guys that read and don't review to the shadow realm.
Yami Bakura: You should. I would enjoy that. ::He said with a smirk::
No I'm sorry but you can't, but in the next couple chapter I might reconsider.
Ok to my one reviewer Neko Moon Goddess: You got it right. If you wanna know the answer look at her review. ::Hands her a Marik plushie:: Do what you want with it. And thanks for the only review for the last chapter. ::Glares at everyone who didn't review::
Disclaimer as read by Joey (Who isn't gonna be in the story): Kate Dun own Yugioh or anything else listed in da story. So peace.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
::He looked up, and spirit had gotten possesion of the boy. The tomb robber looked around. His vision, like Bakura's, was blurred. He couldn't make anything out. He left the link between him and Bakura open:: How long have you been here? And what does your father want? ::He said rotating his right shoulder. It was getting sore from the pressure of the boy's father::
I believe he wants the ring for some reason. ::The young teen replied as he sat in his soul room. His room was decrorated with random posters, a small table with cards spread out on it, a bed neatly made with white and baby blue sheets, and a few other things. It was a room in your soul that reflected how you felt and a place to retreat from the outside world for awhile. Bakura sat at the table and messed with the cards::
::A glare appeared on the spirit's face as he sat there. He remembered that he left that in the boy's bedroom. He was hoping that the guy was going to take off the tape soon. Just as the thought came in his mind the guy removed the tape, quickly I might add. The spirit sat there and let the pain shoot through him. When the pain subsided he looked up at the man:: What do you want with the ring Mortal? ::The spirit asked in his sinister voice that could haunt most people that were forced to hear it. With the glare still planted on his face the man answered him:: Master Marik needs it. That is all he has premitted me to say. ::Bakura's father let go of the spirit's shoulder. The father's words emotionless, they sounded like they came from a robot more or less::
::If the spirit could see his face he would know something was up. The father's deep brown eye's were just that. They did't have a pupil, the iris was the only thing there. Although the spirit could tell there was something behind this:: Marik? ::He said the word like it was something foul and should be gotten rid of quickly. He was confused, but the only person who could tell was Bakura::
Yes Master Marik. Holder of the Millennium Rod. ::With that Bakura's father's voiced sounded like there were two people talking at once. The spirit listened to him with full attention. He wanted to know who this person was and how the spirit could get his Millennium Item. The person spoke through the boy's father:: Yes I am Marik and the reason I want your Millennium Ring is so it can help me to become the new Pharaoh!
You will never get it Marik. No matter what you do to me or the young one. ::The spirit spoke in a low and deep tone. Bakura was surprized to hear the spirit say that he even existed. The spirit on the other hand meant business:: Plus I don't even have it with me. So let me go before I am forced to take action.
::The evil spirit glared at the new person heading toward him. He knew something bad was about to happen. The guy brought something up to his face. A clothe is what he thought it was. It had a foul scent to it. The man pressed it against his face. The tomb robber drifted off into unconciousness::
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End of chappie three.So please post ideas, questions, comments, and reviews by pressing the button below.
I will post when I get 3 or more reviews. If I get a chance. I've been spending the last few days working on a new story that aint on my comp. It's called the new millennium ring. I'm still thinking about whetheror not to put it on here.
Ok c ur reviews and talk to ya lata!