Shamira- Yay! You reviewed again!!! So happy! And you reviewed many
chapters! More happy! Anyway, as to why I reviewed your story, it was
because you wrote a story that I COULD review. I never saw 'Save the Last
Dance' nor was I watching during the whole Elizabeth loses her baby thing,
so that really meant that I couldn't give your story the attention that it
deserved. But, I've watched the fire, so I know what's going on there.
Hence, the review. Jax still needs to die, he does. You know, you are one
very lucky girl. Actually, you do know. You take home schooling. I'm so
very jealous. I had to suffer through four years of horrid high school
while you didn't. Curses. I'm glad you enjoyed my portrayal of the Jones
girls and Mac with their rather unique dynamic. I liked putting that Frisco
comment in there, too. Always fun doing ancient throwbacks, it is. Even
ones that I don't know much about. You know, I never really thought about
what Mac would think when Georgie compared Damian to Dillon. Maybe I should
have had him say something like what you wanted Mac to say, it would make
sense. But, at the very least, I wanted Mac to appear that he was accepting
of Dillon being around. Since, at least for my story, they've been together
for like two years it would make sense for Mac to just get over it. I'm not
entirely sure that means he thinks that Dillon's a good guy, though.
I didn't think the love thing was sudden. I mean, I think the fact that they both admitted it to one another and themselves was kind of, but it was something that was growing since the start. I am sorry that your relationship with this deli man did not work out to your liking. Worry not, if it is meant to be it will happen. If nothing else, you know he can make food. I feel for Bobbie so much. This entire time during the fire she's nowhere to be found and then she comes on the last day of the week. Ah well, at least she'll be around next week, presumably. Ned was only there for two days, but Ned's stupid so I couldn't care less. I wanted him dead, too. They never kill the people I want them to kill. Don't worry, I don't really know how to spell Daximillian either, I think that's right. But it might not be. Stupid complex spelling. They made kissy face, and people were happy. Also, I'm plenty cynical myself. One of the reasons that I watch GH is because I can tell myself that at least my problems aren't as bad as the ones on the show. It makes me feel better about myself it does.
Umm... oops. I didn't mean to worry you about the teeth thing. But, really, I've heard it's not all that much fun. Better to be honest than lie, right? I like to think it is. Much like yourself, I want Sonny and Carly to stay together and be happy. Ultimately, though, I'm well aware that the two will always find something that will put them at odds from time to time. It's part of their relationship, its part of the reason why they're so popular with the fans. That doesn't mean that they can't make up, as evident here. Sometimes it's very hard to remember that they both care about that boy so much and they only want him to be happy. Eventually they realize what it does to him and they try and fix everything. That's what they did during that chapter.
Ah, the Alky rambling, how I have missed thee. Although I'm sure you're using part of the fire store in your synopsis of character, I can assure you that nothing like that will happen. Michael and Morgan will remain with Sonny and Carly... I think. I really do think that he cares about those kids though, at least continuity Alky. I think he cares about them only because they are Carly's, but it is care nonetheless. Courtney could so take Alky. He's a pansy ass and she's a kung-fu master. She remained contained, though, even though we all know she really wanted to hurt him. Who says she has no self control? No one? Oh, well, fine. That whole Dillon/Mac deal thing so came off the top of my head, but I thought it would be damned cool to write. I do enjoy Dillon/Mac scenes because most of the time Dillon just takes the abuse, like he's afraid of Mac or something. Plus, it showed Mac that Dillon cared about both his daughters, not just Georgie. Perhaps, eventually, Mac will become less bitter about everything. Yes, I doubt this thing would happen as well, but it is entirely possible.
Luke and Skye make me smile, too. So do Justus and Faith. Actually, it's mostly just Faith, because we all know that woman is Godly. Still, the joking, the holding, it was supposed to show S and C united once more after many chapters of being apart. This is but the first step in Carly's character change. Like always, there will be a time when she just stops being so selfish. What will happen that will make her change? Well, you'll just have to wait and see. I liked the chapter title, sorry it didn't make sense till towards the end. But at least it made sense, right? That's the main thing that I was going for. Everyone can celebrate because Michael is all better, hurrah!
I have to have everyone happy chapters from time to time because, honestly, the rest of the time it's so very drab in Port Charles. You're right, it won't last, but at least they get a break from the angst every now and then. You're also dead on about Maxie, she's grown so much since the story started. She's found herself, and she had help from someone, which would be you know who. Michael's cuter than just about anyone on the face of the planet. Damn, I hate it how I can never stop gushing over Michael when he's on screen. If, when Morgan gets old enough to actually talk, they get someone like Dylan Cash, I'm going to be in heaven. Michael views all kissing as gross at his age, not just his parents. I don't think it's all that bad. At least KISSING... I try not to think about the other things. Ack, my mind!
Zander got shot 'off camera,' it was really just a ploy on my part to get Faith into the hospital at that point in the story. Besides, it gave me a reason to write the Zander/Faith scenes that we both find so amusing. Even in the face of death, that woman is just bloody hilarious. Should Damian's leaving for the weekend worry you? Should it? Keep on reading to find out.
Everyone loves how I do Elizabeth, like portraying her that way is some lost art form. I'm glad that they like it when I have her, though. I don't put her in as often as I do the other characters, but when she does come into the story she's supposed to at least have some sort of impact. I like how she's right about everything as well, and how she wants to protect this guy that she barely knows because she cares about him so much. I think Damian would make it longer than she did, but I can't say for sure. I've always liked Sage, from the minute she came on screen I thought she was funny. I mean, I hate how she dares to screw with the holiness of GQ, but I still can't bring myself to loathe her as much of the GH community does. Bubbly Georgie is a break from character, because she's always trying to act like the most mature thing on the planet. But it's very easy to remember that she's just a teenage girl, and no matter how smart she is, she's going to act like one from time to time. Poor Damian, though. All he wanted was some sleep...
I loved my ramble, too. Thank you for your praise, it makes me feel better about myself. I always feared that Damian would be little more than a 'Mary Sue' character. I've had to explain what that is to a friend who doesn't quite understand the fanfiction terminology like we do. I couldn't make him a perfect character because all my characters have to have these massive flaws that shape them as characters. Damian's got more than a couple, some that haven't even been shown yet. You got to insult Alky again, aren't you happy? I do love it when you make me smile with your hatred for the man. So amusing it be. The little things are what make Journey so very great. Although, I will admit, when Monica was telling Capelli, 'You left MY son to die in that fire!' I was so happy. Monica thinks Jason's her son. So cute. Michael's a bright boy, he understands things that children his age should not understand, it makes him so great. Everyone is happy... for now.
With THAT taken care of (Sorry for those that were waiting for the story, but I do like to give feedback to my feedback, it is only right) let's get on with it!
Story-
Corinthos Household-
While some people may have thought that Michael had an endless amount of energy that he could use at any time of the day, the reality of the situation was that eventually he would tire out. It took him a few hours after he and Damian had returned to the penthouse, but he finally just could no longer sustain himself and fell asleep. Damian stood around the room as Michael slumbered, taking examination of his life. That one boy had done so much for him in the short time that they had known one another. He had given Damian the feeling that he needed to protect someone from the harsh reality of the world and was the first member of the Corinthos family that he even considered to be a part of his family. It was hard to deny Michael anything. He had a look about him that would make just about anyone try their hardest to give him the world if that's what they thought he wanted. But was that the only reason he was here? Because Michael asked him? Damian was afraid, as much as he hated to admit it. He could have died earlier that day. More importantly, the people that he loved could have died because of him. Sonny, his father, was able to save them all from rather certain doom, but it would never end. No matter what happened there would always be someone that tried to get to Sonny by using his family. Faith had only been the first, and Damian knew she wouldn't be the last. Would he be the biggest target? Since he wasn't housed in the fortress that Sonny had set up to protect his family from harm at all times, it was highly probable. Was it even safe to walk down the streets of Port Charles in broad daylight anymore? Would he have to throw away his pacifistic ideals in order to safeguard himself and the people that he cared about? He wasn't too sure of the answer, but he wouldn't lie, he was leaning more towards the idea that he would have to change something about himself in order to function in Port Charles. What he would have to change and how were mysteries to him. Ones that he would rather not deal with so soon after a near death situation. With one final look at his little brother, who was sleeping peacefully, Damian walked out of the room, closing the door as gently as possible.
"I'd like to talk with you."
Damian almost jumped out of his skin as he heard the voice call out to him. When he looked up he saw Carly there. "This isn't going to be something that involves us screaming at each other again, is it? I'd really like to get some rest before I went another round with you, Carly."
"Come downstairs, I don't want to wake either of my children."
"So this is going to escalate into something that can wake them up. Just my luck."
Carly glared at him for a moment, "You know, this would go a lot easier if you would just listen to me when I asked you to do something."
"You asked me to get away from all these people in Port Charles, Carly. Forgive me if I'm not ready to comply with every order that you give me."
"I'm going downstairs, which is where the room that you're sleeping in for the night is. Unless you intend on sleeping in the hallway, you're going to have to come down sometime. I can wait as long as it takes, Damian."
The boy sighed as he followed Carly down the stairs. If this wasn't something that he could avoid he'd much rather get it over with as soon as possible. Carly stood in the center of the room and looked at him. Her eyes still had that piercing look that made him want to hide, but he stayed. He stayed for Michael. He stayed for Sonny. Most important, he stayed for himself. He wouldn't let anyone bully him around, least of all the step- mother from hell. "What are you going to do, Carly? Try to pay me off? Provide me with more money than I could ever dream, even to the point that I'd never even have to finish school in order to make a living. Are you going to threaten me again?"
"I want to thank you," Carly muttered.
Damian stopped dead in his tracks, "Excuse me?"
"I know how much you try and avoid staying around here, and I'm sure that I'm a big part of the reason. But you still stayed here because you knew that it would make Michael feel better. As much as I hate to admit it, he cares about you a lot, and I can see that you care about him just as much."
"I always wondered what it would be like to have a little brother," Damian admitted.
"I'm not finished yet."
"Knew there was a catch," Damian admitted.
"He worries about you now, Damian. He was in this room when Ric stormed in and told Sonny that you were in trouble. He knew that something was wrong, and I didn't want to tell him anything. You put him through hell."
"I didn't mean to," Damian remarked sadly. "I had no control over what happened, Carly. If I did, you can be sure that I would have done plenty of things differently."
"He's going to continue to worry about you as long as he doesn't know that you're safe, you do realize that, don't you?"
Damian nodded his head, "I can't do anything about that, Carly."
"No, but maybe I can."
"I don't want to put anyone else in danger," Damian said. "And, amazingly enough, that list includes you."
"I'll pretend to be overjoyed about being in your favor later. Sonny wants you to live with us again. He thinks that it's the only way to keep you and everyone else in this family safe from the people that would try and use us to hurt him."
"His answer for everything is either to shut it out or shoot it up, isn't it?" Damian asked.
"He gets results, Damian. Sonny knows how to get what he wants, and he doesn't care how it happens just as long as it gets done. Sometimes it can hurt the people that he cares about without him thinking about it." She thought back to the time that he put that bullet in her brain. He saw it as protecting Carly from Lorenzo, but he didn't take into account the fact that Lorenzo was only helping her bring his son into the world. She understood why he acted the way that he did, even if she didn't support it. That happened a lot in their marriage. It was happening at that moment, even though she was the one making the offer. "As much as I hate to admit it, the only way that any of us can be at ease is if you're under this roof, under your father's protection."
"Why are you doing this, Carly?" Damian wondered. "Of all the people here, you'd be the last one that I would figure to extend the hand that you're extending to me."
"Like I said, Michael worries about you now more than ever. And when I saw my son looking the way he looked when he thought that you might be hurt or worse I knew that I couldn't put him through something like that again. Whatever people may think about me, I will always do what I can to protect my children from being harmed. I might not always do it, or go about it the right way, but I like to think that my intentions are pure."
"You love your children, Carly. Anyone with eyes can see that. My opinion of you as a person may never be as high as I'd like it to be, and the same could be said for your opinion of me, but I would never question your devotion to your children."
"Are you telling me that you'll come live with us again?" Carly asked, hopeful.
Damian headed towards the guest room, "I don't know, Carly. I don't want to hurt Michael, either, but I don't know if I can live here again. I've accepted what my dad does with his life, but I don't know if I'm ready to be fully embroiled in it. It does help that I know you're actually supporting the possibility this time, though."
"This doesn't change how I feel about you, regardless of my offer or what you decide. I hope you know that."
"Even if I tried to forget that you think I'm just here to ruin your life, Carly, I don't think you'd ever actually let me forget."
"I'm glad we had this time to chat."
"So am I, actually. Good night." Damian closed the door. Their altercation had been almost civil. It certainly wasn't as bad as it could have been. That really only left one question. What was he going to decide on?
I didn't think the love thing was sudden. I mean, I think the fact that they both admitted it to one another and themselves was kind of, but it was something that was growing since the start. I am sorry that your relationship with this deli man did not work out to your liking. Worry not, if it is meant to be it will happen. If nothing else, you know he can make food. I feel for Bobbie so much. This entire time during the fire she's nowhere to be found and then she comes on the last day of the week. Ah well, at least she'll be around next week, presumably. Ned was only there for two days, but Ned's stupid so I couldn't care less. I wanted him dead, too. They never kill the people I want them to kill. Don't worry, I don't really know how to spell Daximillian either, I think that's right. But it might not be. Stupid complex spelling. They made kissy face, and people were happy. Also, I'm plenty cynical myself. One of the reasons that I watch GH is because I can tell myself that at least my problems aren't as bad as the ones on the show. It makes me feel better about myself it does.
Umm... oops. I didn't mean to worry you about the teeth thing. But, really, I've heard it's not all that much fun. Better to be honest than lie, right? I like to think it is. Much like yourself, I want Sonny and Carly to stay together and be happy. Ultimately, though, I'm well aware that the two will always find something that will put them at odds from time to time. It's part of their relationship, its part of the reason why they're so popular with the fans. That doesn't mean that they can't make up, as evident here. Sometimes it's very hard to remember that they both care about that boy so much and they only want him to be happy. Eventually they realize what it does to him and they try and fix everything. That's what they did during that chapter.
Ah, the Alky rambling, how I have missed thee. Although I'm sure you're using part of the fire store in your synopsis of character, I can assure you that nothing like that will happen. Michael and Morgan will remain with Sonny and Carly... I think. I really do think that he cares about those kids though, at least continuity Alky. I think he cares about them only because they are Carly's, but it is care nonetheless. Courtney could so take Alky. He's a pansy ass and she's a kung-fu master. She remained contained, though, even though we all know she really wanted to hurt him. Who says she has no self control? No one? Oh, well, fine. That whole Dillon/Mac deal thing so came off the top of my head, but I thought it would be damned cool to write. I do enjoy Dillon/Mac scenes because most of the time Dillon just takes the abuse, like he's afraid of Mac or something. Plus, it showed Mac that Dillon cared about both his daughters, not just Georgie. Perhaps, eventually, Mac will become less bitter about everything. Yes, I doubt this thing would happen as well, but it is entirely possible.
Luke and Skye make me smile, too. So do Justus and Faith. Actually, it's mostly just Faith, because we all know that woman is Godly. Still, the joking, the holding, it was supposed to show S and C united once more after many chapters of being apart. This is but the first step in Carly's character change. Like always, there will be a time when she just stops being so selfish. What will happen that will make her change? Well, you'll just have to wait and see. I liked the chapter title, sorry it didn't make sense till towards the end. But at least it made sense, right? That's the main thing that I was going for. Everyone can celebrate because Michael is all better, hurrah!
I have to have everyone happy chapters from time to time because, honestly, the rest of the time it's so very drab in Port Charles. You're right, it won't last, but at least they get a break from the angst every now and then. You're also dead on about Maxie, she's grown so much since the story started. She's found herself, and she had help from someone, which would be you know who. Michael's cuter than just about anyone on the face of the planet. Damn, I hate it how I can never stop gushing over Michael when he's on screen. If, when Morgan gets old enough to actually talk, they get someone like Dylan Cash, I'm going to be in heaven. Michael views all kissing as gross at his age, not just his parents. I don't think it's all that bad. At least KISSING... I try not to think about the other things. Ack, my mind!
Zander got shot 'off camera,' it was really just a ploy on my part to get Faith into the hospital at that point in the story. Besides, it gave me a reason to write the Zander/Faith scenes that we both find so amusing. Even in the face of death, that woman is just bloody hilarious. Should Damian's leaving for the weekend worry you? Should it? Keep on reading to find out.
Everyone loves how I do Elizabeth, like portraying her that way is some lost art form. I'm glad that they like it when I have her, though. I don't put her in as often as I do the other characters, but when she does come into the story she's supposed to at least have some sort of impact. I like how she's right about everything as well, and how she wants to protect this guy that she barely knows because she cares about him so much. I think Damian would make it longer than she did, but I can't say for sure. I've always liked Sage, from the minute she came on screen I thought she was funny. I mean, I hate how she dares to screw with the holiness of GQ, but I still can't bring myself to loathe her as much of the GH community does. Bubbly Georgie is a break from character, because she's always trying to act like the most mature thing on the planet. But it's very easy to remember that she's just a teenage girl, and no matter how smart she is, she's going to act like one from time to time. Poor Damian, though. All he wanted was some sleep...
I loved my ramble, too. Thank you for your praise, it makes me feel better about myself. I always feared that Damian would be little more than a 'Mary Sue' character. I've had to explain what that is to a friend who doesn't quite understand the fanfiction terminology like we do. I couldn't make him a perfect character because all my characters have to have these massive flaws that shape them as characters. Damian's got more than a couple, some that haven't even been shown yet. You got to insult Alky again, aren't you happy? I do love it when you make me smile with your hatred for the man. So amusing it be. The little things are what make Journey so very great. Although, I will admit, when Monica was telling Capelli, 'You left MY son to die in that fire!' I was so happy. Monica thinks Jason's her son. So cute. Michael's a bright boy, he understands things that children his age should not understand, it makes him so great. Everyone is happy... for now.
With THAT taken care of (Sorry for those that were waiting for the story, but I do like to give feedback to my feedback, it is only right) let's get on with it!
Story-
Corinthos Household-
While some people may have thought that Michael had an endless amount of energy that he could use at any time of the day, the reality of the situation was that eventually he would tire out. It took him a few hours after he and Damian had returned to the penthouse, but he finally just could no longer sustain himself and fell asleep. Damian stood around the room as Michael slumbered, taking examination of his life. That one boy had done so much for him in the short time that they had known one another. He had given Damian the feeling that he needed to protect someone from the harsh reality of the world and was the first member of the Corinthos family that he even considered to be a part of his family. It was hard to deny Michael anything. He had a look about him that would make just about anyone try their hardest to give him the world if that's what they thought he wanted. But was that the only reason he was here? Because Michael asked him? Damian was afraid, as much as he hated to admit it. He could have died earlier that day. More importantly, the people that he loved could have died because of him. Sonny, his father, was able to save them all from rather certain doom, but it would never end. No matter what happened there would always be someone that tried to get to Sonny by using his family. Faith had only been the first, and Damian knew she wouldn't be the last. Would he be the biggest target? Since he wasn't housed in the fortress that Sonny had set up to protect his family from harm at all times, it was highly probable. Was it even safe to walk down the streets of Port Charles in broad daylight anymore? Would he have to throw away his pacifistic ideals in order to safeguard himself and the people that he cared about? He wasn't too sure of the answer, but he wouldn't lie, he was leaning more towards the idea that he would have to change something about himself in order to function in Port Charles. What he would have to change and how were mysteries to him. Ones that he would rather not deal with so soon after a near death situation. With one final look at his little brother, who was sleeping peacefully, Damian walked out of the room, closing the door as gently as possible.
"I'd like to talk with you."
Damian almost jumped out of his skin as he heard the voice call out to him. When he looked up he saw Carly there. "This isn't going to be something that involves us screaming at each other again, is it? I'd really like to get some rest before I went another round with you, Carly."
"Come downstairs, I don't want to wake either of my children."
"So this is going to escalate into something that can wake them up. Just my luck."
Carly glared at him for a moment, "You know, this would go a lot easier if you would just listen to me when I asked you to do something."
"You asked me to get away from all these people in Port Charles, Carly. Forgive me if I'm not ready to comply with every order that you give me."
"I'm going downstairs, which is where the room that you're sleeping in for the night is. Unless you intend on sleeping in the hallway, you're going to have to come down sometime. I can wait as long as it takes, Damian."
The boy sighed as he followed Carly down the stairs. If this wasn't something that he could avoid he'd much rather get it over with as soon as possible. Carly stood in the center of the room and looked at him. Her eyes still had that piercing look that made him want to hide, but he stayed. He stayed for Michael. He stayed for Sonny. Most important, he stayed for himself. He wouldn't let anyone bully him around, least of all the step- mother from hell. "What are you going to do, Carly? Try to pay me off? Provide me with more money than I could ever dream, even to the point that I'd never even have to finish school in order to make a living. Are you going to threaten me again?"
"I want to thank you," Carly muttered.
Damian stopped dead in his tracks, "Excuse me?"
"I know how much you try and avoid staying around here, and I'm sure that I'm a big part of the reason. But you still stayed here because you knew that it would make Michael feel better. As much as I hate to admit it, he cares about you a lot, and I can see that you care about him just as much."
"I always wondered what it would be like to have a little brother," Damian admitted.
"I'm not finished yet."
"Knew there was a catch," Damian admitted.
"He worries about you now, Damian. He was in this room when Ric stormed in and told Sonny that you were in trouble. He knew that something was wrong, and I didn't want to tell him anything. You put him through hell."
"I didn't mean to," Damian remarked sadly. "I had no control over what happened, Carly. If I did, you can be sure that I would have done plenty of things differently."
"He's going to continue to worry about you as long as he doesn't know that you're safe, you do realize that, don't you?"
Damian nodded his head, "I can't do anything about that, Carly."
"No, but maybe I can."
"I don't want to put anyone else in danger," Damian said. "And, amazingly enough, that list includes you."
"I'll pretend to be overjoyed about being in your favor later. Sonny wants you to live with us again. He thinks that it's the only way to keep you and everyone else in this family safe from the people that would try and use us to hurt him."
"His answer for everything is either to shut it out or shoot it up, isn't it?" Damian asked.
"He gets results, Damian. Sonny knows how to get what he wants, and he doesn't care how it happens just as long as it gets done. Sometimes it can hurt the people that he cares about without him thinking about it." She thought back to the time that he put that bullet in her brain. He saw it as protecting Carly from Lorenzo, but he didn't take into account the fact that Lorenzo was only helping her bring his son into the world. She understood why he acted the way that he did, even if she didn't support it. That happened a lot in their marriage. It was happening at that moment, even though she was the one making the offer. "As much as I hate to admit it, the only way that any of us can be at ease is if you're under this roof, under your father's protection."
"Why are you doing this, Carly?" Damian wondered. "Of all the people here, you'd be the last one that I would figure to extend the hand that you're extending to me."
"Like I said, Michael worries about you now more than ever. And when I saw my son looking the way he looked when he thought that you might be hurt or worse I knew that I couldn't put him through something like that again. Whatever people may think about me, I will always do what I can to protect my children from being harmed. I might not always do it, or go about it the right way, but I like to think that my intentions are pure."
"You love your children, Carly. Anyone with eyes can see that. My opinion of you as a person may never be as high as I'd like it to be, and the same could be said for your opinion of me, but I would never question your devotion to your children."
"Are you telling me that you'll come live with us again?" Carly asked, hopeful.
Damian headed towards the guest room, "I don't know, Carly. I don't want to hurt Michael, either, but I don't know if I can live here again. I've accepted what my dad does with his life, but I don't know if I'm ready to be fully embroiled in it. It does help that I know you're actually supporting the possibility this time, though."
"This doesn't change how I feel about you, regardless of my offer or what you decide. I hope you know that."
"Even if I tried to forget that you think I'm just here to ruin your life, Carly, I don't think you'd ever actually let me forget."
"I'm glad we had this time to chat."
"So am I, actually. Good night." Damian closed the door. Their altercation had been almost civil. It certainly wasn't as bad as it could have been. That really only left one question. What was he going to decide on?