Hey! I've decided to do something a little different this time and write the story from Alassë's point of veiw. tell me if you like it!...by REVIEWING PLEASE!
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My parents are gone. My three siblings and I snuck out in the middle of the night. Then we're in Osgiliath, the old run down city along the Anduin. I've always been told not to go there because there were still evil things lurking there, although they never came out in the sun because they're all afraid of my father. My life had just changed so much in the past 48 hours! Eldarion and I had decided we were going to take the route following the Anduin until we get to the Emyn Muil where we'll turn West and go to Isengard. I think the whole part of this trip that freaked me out the most is the dream I had a couple of nights before. I dreamt that my parents were hurt and alone in a straw covered dungeon with no food or help. I could only hope that they're not actually hurt and alone. And whats more, I was sure I'd felt eyes following me for the last day and a half even though I was in the back.When I turned around, there's nobody there.
"Alassë hurry up!" Eldarion was calling to me from up at the front. I had just stopped to look behind me for a second because the feeling had come back. But once again, there was nobody in sight.
"I'm coming" I replied, turning around and catching up to them. I just wish I could get rid of that awful feeling of being watched. It bugs the hell out of me. I guess I'll just have to put up with it. I'm sure it will go away soon.
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That night we stopped and set up camp a little ways away from the river. I quickly curled up on the ground and tried to fall asleep. I fell asleep quickly. The last thing I heard was my brother feeding the fire with sticks.
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The next thing I heard was a whisper in my ear telling me to be quiet as a hand was placed over my mouth to keep me from screaming. I was so scared that I didn't recognize anything as I was gagged and dragged away from my family. About a kilometer down the Anduin we stopped. I don't remember much from the trip there but once we stopped my mind was overloaded with information.
By the time we stopped it was getting light out and I could see a little better. Then my captors sat me down and sat in front of me. I saw the face of my captor and almost shreiked out in surprise.
"Pippin!! What-? Why-? How-? ... ah!" I was speechless. Pippin had come after me and taken me from my siblings and our quest to save our parents.
"Listen, Alassë, I know you're scared but you must listen to me. You must." He said quickly. "I know you and your siblings think you guys can save your parents, but there's no way." I started to protest but he cut me off. "I know you think that there has to be a way, somehow, but I can assure you that there isn't. I've seen Isengard be assailed. You can't break in or out of Isengard. It's physicaly impossible."
"What about mentally?" I asked. I was getting frustrated. I was confused and was backtalking now. "I know there's a way. There has to be a way. You think you know everything, Pip, but you don't. I know we can save them."
"Alassë, there isn't a way. You have to trust me! You have to!" He pleaded with me.
"Pippin, I can't. I have to believe there's a way to save them." I said. I got up to try and make my way back to my brother and sisters but I was restrained by 3 of the guards that had come with Pippin.
"Pippin, you can't do this to me!! You can't! Please no! Let me go!" I yelled. I would not be submitted to this easily. I would go down kicking and screaming. And I did. I kicked and screamed so long that I almost lost my voice and actually fell asleep in the arms of the guards.
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That's the 5th chapter guys! please tell me what you think of the P.O.V. changes!
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My parents are gone. My three siblings and I snuck out in the middle of the night. Then we're in Osgiliath, the old run down city along the Anduin. I've always been told not to go there because there were still evil things lurking there, although they never came out in the sun because they're all afraid of my father. My life had just changed so much in the past 48 hours! Eldarion and I had decided we were going to take the route following the Anduin until we get to the Emyn Muil where we'll turn West and go to Isengard. I think the whole part of this trip that freaked me out the most is the dream I had a couple of nights before. I dreamt that my parents were hurt and alone in a straw covered dungeon with no food or help. I could only hope that they're not actually hurt and alone. And whats more, I was sure I'd felt eyes following me for the last day and a half even though I was in the back.When I turned around, there's nobody there.
"Alassë hurry up!" Eldarion was calling to me from up at the front. I had just stopped to look behind me for a second because the feeling had come back. But once again, there was nobody in sight.
"I'm coming" I replied, turning around and catching up to them. I just wish I could get rid of that awful feeling of being watched. It bugs the hell out of me. I guess I'll just have to put up with it. I'm sure it will go away soon.
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That night we stopped and set up camp a little ways away from the river. I quickly curled up on the ground and tried to fall asleep. I fell asleep quickly. The last thing I heard was my brother feeding the fire with sticks.
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The next thing I heard was a whisper in my ear telling me to be quiet as a hand was placed over my mouth to keep me from screaming. I was so scared that I didn't recognize anything as I was gagged and dragged away from my family. About a kilometer down the Anduin we stopped. I don't remember much from the trip there but once we stopped my mind was overloaded with information.
By the time we stopped it was getting light out and I could see a little better. Then my captors sat me down and sat in front of me. I saw the face of my captor and almost shreiked out in surprise.
"Pippin!! What-? Why-? How-? ... ah!" I was speechless. Pippin had come after me and taken me from my siblings and our quest to save our parents.
"Listen, Alassë, I know you're scared but you must listen to me. You must." He said quickly. "I know you and your siblings think you guys can save your parents, but there's no way." I started to protest but he cut me off. "I know you think that there has to be a way, somehow, but I can assure you that there isn't. I've seen Isengard be assailed. You can't break in or out of Isengard. It's physicaly impossible."
"What about mentally?" I asked. I was getting frustrated. I was confused and was backtalking now. "I know there's a way. There has to be a way. You think you know everything, Pip, but you don't. I know we can save them."
"Alassë, there isn't a way. You have to trust me! You have to!" He pleaded with me.
"Pippin, I can't. I have to believe there's a way to save them." I said. I got up to try and make my way back to my brother and sisters but I was restrained by 3 of the guards that had come with Pippin.
"Pippin, you can't do this to me!! You can't! Please no! Let me go!" I yelled. I would not be submitted to this easily. I would go down kicking and screaming. And I did. I kicked and screamed so long that I almost lost my voice and actually fell asleep in the arms of the guards.
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That's the 5th chapter guys! please tell me what you think of the P.O.V. changes!