Wild-Roze : Okay ppl , this idea has been crawling around my brain for a
while now , I asked a pal of mine and she said it was a great idea , so I'm
putting it to paper , or rather , computer screen . Well , okay , here u go
, enjoy , oh and R&R !!
Disclaimer : I don't own Beyblade , but I do own Taka and Adritha , and the plot of this fic .
Summary : The young angel of darkness , Taka is sent to Earth to find the perfect husband for her sister , the one she chooses is Ray . She pretends to be a blader and joins the team , but Kai has a hunch that this girl is not what she claims to be ... K/oc
The Dark Angel - Max's Accident
Taka had waited her whole life for this moment , as had her twin sister Adritha , finally they had been made the angles they had always wanted , and been destined to be . Adritha , was a creature of such unbelieveable beauty , that if a mortal man were to see her they would kill themselvs on the spot to preserve that moment forever . She was a delicate creature , her soulder length firey red hair was held back by a white bandana , and she wore a short lavender dress , which matched the colour of her eyes perfectly .
her wings were a pale violet , the soft downy feathers as delicate and perfect of every other aspect of her being . She was the young Angel of Beauty .
Taka , on the other hand , was almost the complete oposit of her sister . Her beauty was far more hard , but she was ravishingly beautiful none the less , and the look on her face made it look as if she was always drifting off in her own private world . She had long, hip length silverish grey hair , and slate grey eyes , she wore a black corset , with a long coat which was done up to her navel , and thigh high , black boots . her long wings were lined with sliky , but sharp loking silver feathers , and she wore long black gloves . She , was the angel of darkness .
Her mother was the Empress of the kingdom , her name was Anaxzu , her father having died many years ago , her mother was the Angel of the Sun and her bronze , curly hair hung around her hips , her brilliant green eyes shining out of her face .
" My dears , you have finaly risen to meet your destiny , but unfortunately , it is not yet complete . Taka , Mistress of the dark , you must travel to Earth ."
"May I ask why mother ?" She said .
"Taka , surely you have not forgotten all you have learned so quickly ?! You must go to Earth to find the one destined to be the husband of your sister ." Her mother replied .
"Oh mother , I don't want Taka to go to any trouble for me ! I'm sure I will be fine without a husband ." Adritha said .
"It is the way things have always been done my beloved child ." Anaxzu said . Taka nodded .
"Taka , while you are there , surely you can find yourself a man too !" Said Adritha happily .
"No !" She snapped , " You forget , the Angel Of Darkness can take to husband , everything about her must be cold and desolate , not like the Angel of Beauty , besides , I don't want a man , thay are pointless and take up too much time ." She said .
Adritha nodded . "Well hurry back sister , its not the same here when you are gone ." She said .
Taka nodded .
"Remeber ," Warned her mother , "The first mortal to see you in your angelic form will be bound to you forever , don't let it happen , whatever you do , you must not let it happen ."
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Taka looked down at herself , a human body , she had gotten rid of her beautiful wings , and had changed her Angelic clothes to a black skirt and top , she snarled , she had always disliked the Earth clothes . She wasn't sure how to hide her beauty though , because even though compared to her sister she was ugly , next to the humans she was an absolute vision . She had managed to get her silvery hair up into a messy bun and had hidden her face behind a pair of large glasses which seemed to magnify her slate grey eyes tenfold .
It was time to find her sister a man , she closed her eyes . All at once she had left her body , her mind soaring out over the cities , forests , mountains and oceans of the world . She saw everything clearly from hundreds of miles away , as she looked out , she could see the whole planet . In the blink of an eye she plummeted down , and shot through the minds of every human on Earth , reading the minds and searching for her sister's soul mate .
Her eyes snapped open and she smiled , it seemed that on this planet , they enjoyed a sport called Beyblading , and , the perfect man she had discovered for her sister was on the world championships team .
If she wanted to get close enough to him , to trick him into coming back with her , she would have to become a blader . She held out her hand , concentrating her power , there was an alarming flash of blue light , and a beyblade had appeared in her fist , and at the centre shone a bit beast .
The blade was grey , with a black centre , and the bit chip at its centre held a black serpent bitbeast . She smirked , time to act like the Angel of Darkness that she was , one member of the bladebreakers would have to meet with an unfortunate accident .
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Max was late for his date with his new girlfriend Raechelle , he drove his moped along , urging it to go faster , of course the small motor bike was green and orange , his favourite colours .
Taka smiled , she sat in a tree by the edge of the road , watching Max approach , once again , she closed her eyes .
Max stopped at a red light , he sighed and tapped his fingers on the handles impatiently , Raechelle hated it when he was late , she would accuse him of standing her up again .
Suddenly he felt a buzzing inside his head , it felt like a swarm of angry hornets had been released and were attacking his brain , he clutched his head and cried out in agony . Everything infront of his baby blue eyes started to cloud over , and he felt like a blanket had been placed over his face , making it hard to breathe and hear .
He was oblivious to the cars hooting behind him , yelling at him that the light had gone green . He cried out once more , before everything for him went black , and he keeled over .
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"Doctor can you tell us about our pal ? Is he gonna be okay ?" Tyson asked , the rest of the team , and Raechelle , who was in hysterics , bawling her head off , were with him .
"I can't say for sure , he is in a coma , and is so far not showing any hopeful signs of coming out of it any time soon ."
"Oh no! Whats more , we have a big tournament coming up soon !" Said Kenny .
"Chief , I think Max is a little more important than a stupid tournament !" Said Ray , frowning .
"Are you kidding Ray ?" Yelled Tyson , "Is THAT the kind of attitude Max would want us to have ?! We have to find a new blader and win that tournament for him !"
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~Mr.Dickenson's office ~
Mr.Dickenson's telephone rang , when he picked it up, it was his secretary's voice .
"Mr.Dickenson , there is someone here who wants to see you about the Bladebreakers ." she said .
"Well , send him in then !" he demanded .
A few moments later , a girl walked in , Mr.Dickenson looked up and his mouth fell open , even though she wore glasses , he could tell she was beautiful , she held out a grey and black blade .
"I want to join the Bladebreakers , I heard one of their team was hurt , I am here to fill his spot ." she told him .
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Tyson jumped up when he heard the knock on the door .
"Alright ! Roomservice is here !"he said , he ran to the door and opened it , his face fell .
"Oh , Hi Mr.D ." he said .
"hello Tyson ," said Mr.Dickenson as he walked in . "Boys ," he said addressing every body in the room , "Meet your new team member ."
Taka stepped over the threshold of the doorway , she smirked and looked around , there he was .
"Meet Taka ."
She girl was stunning , when she walked she moved with such dignity and grace. Kai looked at her , of course he had to admit she was gorgeous , but there was something about her ..... He instantly found himself not trusting her .
Taka walked in , confidently , and went and sat down right next to the boy she had in mind for her twin .
Ray couldn't take his eyes off her , she was like a goddess , and what was more , she had sat down right next to HIM !!!
"Well I'll leave you all to get acquainted then ." said Mr.Dickenson .
The door closed behind him , and a heavy silence dominated the room , Ray was still pretty taken with her , so all he could do was stare , Tyson was obviously trying to think of his best chat up line . Kenny had merely hidden behind Dizzy , so he wouldn't have to look at her . Kai rolled his eyes .
"So , are you any good at beyblading ? He asked her .
She turned her slate grey eyes on him .
"what difference does it make , I'm here aren't I ?" she said , her voice was low and husky , with a beautiful richness to it .
Kai growled . " well , your only staying on the team if you are good , so lets go ! You and me , and our beyblades ."
She stood up , must to Ray's disappointment .
" I don't need to prove myself to you Kai Hiwitari , leave me alone !" she said .
She went to stand on the balcony , which overlooked the beach and ocean . Ray glared at Kai .
"Now look what you have done Kai , you didn't have to be so harsh !" he said . he stood and followed her .
"Are you alright ?" he asked .
"why wouldn't I be ?" She asked back .
"Well , Kai can be a real dark character sometimes ."
"what's wrong with the dark ?" She asked .
"Huh ? Well , nothing I guess ."
"I love the darkness ." She sighed .
"Well , its alright , except when I was little , I was actually afraid of the dark he admitted ."
"Hn , so was my sister ." She said , " she loves everything to be perfect , light and sunny and beautiful ."
"Well , don't you ?" he asked .
"Not really , I'd rather be alone in the darkness , then in a crowd on a hot sunny day ." She said .
Ray nodded and fell silent .
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By the time the evening came there was a problem with the sleeping arrangements . Taka had spent hours standing motionless on the balcony , the warm wind wafting through her hair , and the sky slowly dimming around her .
"Well , she is NOT staying in MY room !" She heard Kenny say .
"Yea , I'm the only one who can sleep through Kenny typing away on that computer of his all night !" Said Tyson .
"Max used to sleep in with me ," She heard Ray say . "So I have a spare spot , she can kip with me ."
Taka growled . she turned around and came back into the room . she couldn't have Ray growing too attached to her , he was meant for Adritha .
"I'll sleep in Kai's room ." She said .
"WHAT ?!?" Yelled kai .
She stared at him .
"Get over it Hiwitari , besides , I don't very often sleep , so you won't be bothered with my presence for very long ." she said .
Ray's face fell .
Taka turned around and went back to her spot on the balcony , she could feel Kai's eyes following her .
~Kai's POV ~
I don't trust her , there is something strange about her , ahh , perhaps its just me , but I just have this feeling , she is just standing there , staring out into space , in the dark . I think there is something more to her , more than meets the eye . I don't even know if she can Beyblade , whatever she is hiding , I am going to find out what it is .
Wild-Roze : yah, I know it's a crappy 1st chapter , I know no 1 is gonna review it cos it is shit , I don't even know why I am starting this fic because I have enough to keep me busy for the moment anyway , but hey . if you did read this then please do review , because I need to know if this fic is alright , I found the pics of the angels and based my descriptions of Taka and Adritha on them , at some point I'll put them up on my web site for you to see . R&R !!!
Disclaimer : I don't own Beyblade , but I do own Taka and Adritha , and the plot of this fic .
Summary : The young angel of darkness , Taka is sent to Earth to find the perfect husband for her sister , the one she chooses is Ray . She pretends to be a blader and joins the team , but Kai has a hunch that this girl is not what she claims to be ... K/oc
The Dark Angel - Max's Accident
Taka had waited her whole life for this moment , as had her twin sister Adritha , finally they had been made the angles they had always wanted , and been destined to be . Adritha , was a creature of such unbelieveable beauty , that if a mortal man were to see her they would kill themselvs on the spot to preserve that moment forever . She was a delicate creature , her soulder length firey red hair was held back by a white bandana , and she wore a short lavender dress , which matched the colour of her eyes perfectly .
her wings were a pale violet , the soft downy feathers as delicate and perfect of every other aspect of her being . She was the young Angel of Beauty .
Taka , on the other hand , was almost the complete oposit of her sister . Her beauty was far more hard , but she was ravishingly beautiful none the less , and the look on her face made it look as if she was always drifting off in her own private world . She had long, hip length silverish grey hair , and slate grey eyes , she wore a black corset , with a long coat which was done up to her navel , and thigh high , black boots . her long wings were lined with sliky , but sharp loking silver feathers , and she wore long black gloves . She , was the angel of darkness .
Her mother was the Empress of the kingdom , her name was Anaxzu , her father having died many years ago , her mother was the Angel of the Sun and her bronze , curly hair hung around her hips , her brilliant green eyes shining out of her face .
" My dears , you have finaly risen to meet your destiny , but unfortunately , it is not yet complete . Taka , Mistress of the dark , you must travel to Earth ."
"May I ask why mother ?" She said .
"Taka , surely you have not forgotten all you have learned so quickly ?! You must go to Earth to find the one destined to be the husband of your sister ." Her mother replied .
"Oh mother , I don't want Taka to go to any trouble for me ! I'm sure I will be fine without a husband ." Adritha said .
"It is the way things have always been done my beloved child ." Anaxzu said . Taka nodded .
"Taka , while you are there , surely you can find yourself a man too !" Said Adritha happily .
"No !" She snapped , " You forget , the Angel Of Darkness can take to husband , everything about her must be cold and desolate , not like the Angel of Beauty , besides , I don't want a man , thay are pointless and take up too much time ." She said .
Adritha nodded . "Well hurry back sister , its not the same here when you are gone ." She said .
Taka nodded .
"Remeber ," Warned her mother , "The first mortal to see you in your angelic form will be bound to you forever , don't let it happen , whatever you do , you must not let it happen ."
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Taka looked down at herself , a human body , she had gotten rid of her beautiful wings , and had changed her Angelic clothes to a black skirt and top , she snarled , she had always disliked the Earth clothes . She wasn't sure how to hide her beauty though , because even though compared to her sister she was ugly , next to the humans she was an absolute vision . She had managed to get her silvery hair up into a messy bun and had hidden her face behind a pair of large glasses which seemed to magnify her slate grey eyes tenfold .
It was time to find her sister a man , she closed her eyes . All at once she had left her body , her mind soaring out over the cities , forests , mountains and oceans of the world . She saw everything clearly from hundreds of miles away , as she looked out , she could see the whole planet . In the blink of an eye she plummeted down , and shot through the minds of every human on Earth , reading the minds and searching for her sister's soul mate .
Her eyes snapped open and she smiled , it seemed that on this planet , they enjoyed a sport called Beyblading , and , the perfect man she had discovered for her sister was on the world championships team .
If she wanted to get close enough to him , to trick him into coming back with her , she would have to become a blader . She held out her hand , concentrating her power , there was an alarming flash of blue light , and a beyblade had appeared in her fist , and at the centre shone a bit beast .
The blade was grey , with a black centre , and the bit chip at its centre held a black serpent bitbeast . She smirked , time to act like the Angel of Darkness that she was , one member of the bladebreakers would have to meet with an unfortunate accident .
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Max was late for his date with his new girlfriend Raechelle , he drove his moped along , urging it to go faster , of course the small motor bike was green and orange , his favourite colours .
Taka smiled , she sat in a tree by the edge of the road , watching Max approach , once again , she closed her eyes .
Max stopped at a red light , he sighed and tapped his fingers on the handles impatiently , Raechelle hated it when he was late , she would accuse him of standing her up again .
Suddenly he felt a buzzing inside his head , it felt like a swarm of angry hornets had been released and were attacking his brain , he clutched his head and cried out in agony . Everything infront of his baby blue eyes started to cloud over , and he felt like a blanket had been placed over his face , making it hard to breathe and hear .
He was oblivious to the cars hooting behind him , yelling at him that the light had gone green . He cried out once more , before everything for him went black , and he keeled over .
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"Doctor can you tell us about our pal ? Is he gonna be okay ?" Tyson asked , the rest of the team , and Raechelle , who was in hysterics , bawling her head off , were with him .
"I can't say for sure , he is in a coma , and is so far not showing any hopeful signs of coming out of it any time soon ."
"Oh no! Whats more , we have a big tournament coming up soon !" Said Kenny .
"Chief , I think Max is a little more important than a stupid tournament !" Said Ray , frowning .
"Are you kidding Ray ?" Yelled Tyson , "Is THAT the kind of attitude Max would want us to have ?! We have to find a new blader and win that tournament for him !"
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~Mr.Dickenson's office ~
Mr.Dickenson's telephone rang , when he picked it up, it was his secretary's voice .
"Mr.Dickenson , there is someone here who wants to see you about the Bladebreakers ." she said .
"Well , send him in then !" he demanded .
A few moments later , a girl walked in , Mr.Dickenson looked up and his mouth fell open , even though she wore glasses , he could tell she was beautiful , she held out a grey and black blade .
"I want to join the Bladebreakers , I heard one of their team was hurt , I am here to fill his spot ." she told him .
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Tyson jumped up when he heard the knock on the door .
"Alright ! Roomservice is here !"he said , he ran to the door and opened it , his face fell .
"Oh , Hi Mr.D ." he said .
"hello Tyson ," said Mr.Dickenson as he walked in . "Boys ," he said addressing every body in the room , "Meet your new team member ."
Taka stepped over the threshold of the doorway , she smirked and looked around , there he was .
"Meet Taka ."
She girl was stunning , when she walked she moved with such dignity and grace. Kai looked at her , of course he had to admit she was gorgeous , but there was something about her ..... He instantly found himself not trusting her .
Taka walked in , confidently , and went and sat down right next to the boy she had in mind for her twin .
Ray couldn't take his eyes off her , she was like a goddess , and what was more , she had sat down right next to HIM !!!
"Well I'll leave you all to get acquainted then ." said Mr.Dickenson .
The door closed behind him , and a heavy silence dominated the room , Ray was still pretty taken with her , so all he could do was stare , Tyson was obviously trying to think of his best chat up line . Kenny had merely hidden behind Dizzy , so he wouldn't have to look at her . Kai rolled his eyes .
"So , are you any good at beyblading ? He asked her .
She turned her slate grey eyes on him .
"what difference does it make , I'm here aren't I ?" she said , her voice was low and husky , with a beautiful richness to it .
Kai growled . " well , your only staying on the team if you are good , so lets go ! You and me , and our beyblades ."
She stood up , must to Ray's disappointment .
" I don't need to prove myself to you Kai Hiwitari , leave me alone !" she said .
She went to stand on the balcony , which overlooked the beach and ocean . Ray glared at Kai .
"Now look what you have done Kai , you didn't have to be so harsh !" he said . he stood and followed her .
"Are you alright ?" he asked .
"why wouldn't I be ?" She asked back .
"Well , Kai can be a real dark character sometimes ."
"what's wrong with the dark ?" She asked .
"Huh ? Well , nothing I guess ."
"I love the darkness ." She sighed .
"Well , its alright , except when I was little , I was actually afraid of the dark he admitted ."
"Hn , so was my sister ." She said , " she loves everything to be perfect , light and sunny and beautiful ."
"Well , don't you ?" he asked .
"Not really , I'd rather be alone in the darkness , then in a crowd on a hot sunny day ." She said .
Ray nodded and fell silent .
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By the time the evening came there was a problem with the sleeping arrangements . Taka had spent hours standing motionless on the balcony , the warm wind wafting through her hair , and the sky slowly dimming around her .
"Well , she is NOT staying in MY room !" She heard Kenny say .
"Yea , I'm the only one who can sleep through Kenny typing away on that computer of his all night !" Said Tyson .
"Max used to sleep in with me ," She heard Ray say . "So I have a spare spot , she can kip with me ."
Taka growled . she turned around and came back into the room . she couldn't have Ray growing too attached to her , he was meant for Adritha .
"I'll sleep in Kai's room ." She said .
"WHAT ?!?" Yelled kai .
She stared at him .
"Get over it Hiwitari , besides , I don't very often sleep , so you won't be bothered with my presence for very long ." she said .
Ray's face fell .
Taka turned around and went back to her spot on the balcony , she could feel Kai's eyes following her .
~Kai's POV ~
I don't trust her , there is something strange about her , ahh , perhaps its just me , but I just have this feeling , she is just standing there , staring out into space , in the dark . I think there is something more to her , more than meets the eye . I don't even know if she can Beyblade , whatever she is hiding , I am going to find out what it is .
Wild-Roze : yah, I know it's a crappy 1st chapter , I know no 1 is gonna review it cos it is shit , I don't even know why I am starting this fic because I have enough to keep me busy for the moment anyway , but hey . if you did read this then please do review , because I need to know if this fic is alright , I found the pics of the angels and based my descriptions of Taka and Adritha on them , at some point I'll put them up on my web site for you to see . R&R !!!