Looky here's an update lol it took me a while to decide how to divide this
chapter up so I hope this turned out alright don't hate me if it didn't im
not good at this stuff lol anyway
On with the story
Chapter 6-Thoughts
"Find Her!!!" The robed man screamed with immeasurable fury.
"But, But, Master Pataka it is not wise to.." The servant cowered
"I don't care!!" Pataka raged "You must go and retrieve her at any cost. We can not let her escape when I am so close to achieving my goal." "Now go find her!!"
The servant bowed, nodded and scurried off to do his master bidding.
*** Harper was hurriedly trying to fix the engines so they could get off the god forsaken planet. "She is so distant now--well not that she hasn't always been--she's just even more so now, that man must have really gotten to her more then I thought." Harper reasoned with himself.
He sighs while banging at a pipe "Sometimes I miss the old Trance, she was more open and jovial about things, and this one seems closed off and cold" he continued "I wonder what made her like that, must have been something really bad."
"I'm afraid of this new Trance; she showed some amazing skills in that temple." Harper continuing talking to himself trying to make sense of his situation while fiddling with the computer panels "I'm afraid that I lost the childlike Trance to a cold adult gold Trance." He sighs" I wish I could have the old Trance back the one that I..." He didn't finish, is last words were interrupted by the engines roaring to life.
Harper grins down with pride at his handy work "The magical fingers of the mighty Harper have done it again." He dashes out of the room to inform Trance.
**** A/N well um im having lots of trouble with the next chapter im basically splitting up chap 6 into 2 parts one with harpers thoughts an trances any suggestion on how trance should be ,feel free to comment.
Chapter 6-Thoughts
"Find Her!!!" The robed man screamed with immeasurable fury.
"But, But, Master Pataka it is not wise to.." The servant cowered
"I don't care!!" Pataka raged "You must go and retrieve her at any cost. We can not let her escape when I am so close to achieving my goal." "Now go find her!!"
The servant bowed, nodded and scurried off to do his master bidding.
*** Harper was hurriedly trying to fix the engines so they could get off the god forsaken planet. "She is so distant now--well not that she hasn't always been--she's just even more so now, that man must have really gotten to her more then I thought." Harper reasoned with himself.
He sighs while banging at a pipe "Sometimes I miss the old Trance, she was more open and jovial about things, and this one seems closed off and cold" he continued "I wonder what made her like that, must have been something really bad."
"I'm afraid of this new Trance; she showed some amazing skills in that temple." Harper continuing talking to himself trying to make sense of his situation while fiddling with the computer panels "I'm afraid that I lost the childlike Trance to a cold adult gold Trance." He sighs" I wish I could have the old Trance back the one that I..." He didn't finish, is last words were interrupted by the engines roaring to life.
Harper grins down with pride at his handy work "The magical fingers of the mighty Harper have done it again." He dashes out of the room to inform Trance.
**** A/N well um im having lots of trouble with the next chapter im basically splitting up chap 6 into 2 parts one with harpers thoughts an trances any suggestion on how trance should be ,feel free to comment.