ok I had to rewrite this story so i apologize for that and here is the remake
For the longest time
*Setting is the street of the hidden leaf village Naruto was just told some surprising news*
"WHAT!?" Naruto exclaimed obviously surprised.
"Don't tell me your surprised" Sasuke said (well duh he's surprised I just said that).
"Hinata? Are you kidding me?" Naruto asked his teammate
"Have I ever kid you?" Sasuke asked his friend. (there's a question I would really like to know)
"good point. But she likes me like that?" Naruto said curious still at the statement his friend just told him.
"You're pretty dense not to notice yourself" Sasuke responded
"Well I've always seen her as a friend I thought she felt the exact same way" Naruto explained
"Sorry to disappoint you Dunce" Sasuke mocked. Naruto didn't mind the dunce comment cause he actually agreed with Sasuke this time. 'How could I have missed something so obvious for so long' Naruto thought to himself as he turned back to Sasuke.
"Do you know where she went?" Naruto asked Sasuke but it was Sakura who answered.
"I don't think she wants to talk to you after that last comment of yours" She said
*Flashback* (man I hate these but they are so necessary)
*Same setting only Hinata's there*
"C'mon Sakura why don't you get some ramen with me?" Naruto asked his friend.
"Forget it Naruto" Sakura flatly responded
"I'll join you Naruto (BIG HINT)" Hinata offered
"Thanks Hinata but Sakura's the only girl I'll ever want to be with alone" Naruto said not realizing the depth that those words hit Hinata. Naruto turned to see Tears form in Hinata's eyes and then she ran away.
"What's with her?" Naruto asked as he watched Hinata ran off into the streets.
"Isn't it obvious?" Sasuke asked
"No why?" Naruto flatly responded.
"She likes you dunce" Sasuke said and Naruto almost had a mental breakdown.
"WHAT!!?"
*End Flashback*(AN: this is about where we came in)
"Dang I need to talk to her" Naruto said
"Fine but you better hurry up and find her" Sasuke said to his teammate. Naruto ran after Hinata as fast as his legs would carry him
*Meanwhile*
*New setting other side of town also in the street*
"I'm sorry for whatever I did Ino" Shikamaru pleaded to her as she was walking away not even looking at him.
"humph!" Was Ino's only response
"What did I do?" Shikamaru asked. But Ino just looked away from him. "How can I help if you wont tell me what I did wrong?" Shikamaru continued.
"Shikamaru your hopeless. Your probably the smartest person I know but you can't figure out what you did wrong" Ino finally responded.
"Well when it comes to women I am pretty dense" Shikamaru admitted.
"Fine you want to know?" Ino asked the extremely difficult boy.
"YES!" He responded without a second thought.
"When you introduced me to your parents you referred to me as nothing more than a friend" Ino said and those words hit Shikamaru hard.
"Yeah well they are pretty touchy when it comes to the girlfriends" Was Shikamaru's only response.
"So what! You're about as sensitive as a block of wood" Ino insulted. Ino slapped Shikamaru across the face and left Shikamaru standing in the street bewildered.
End of chapter 1
Ok that was my first chapter to my second fanfic please review plus R and R
Kuwabara: quit neglecting your training and finish mastering the spirit sword
Yes master Kuwabara
For the longest time
*Setting is the street of the hidden leaf village Naruto was just told some surprising news*
"WHAT!?" Naruto exclaimed obviously surprised.
"Don't tell me your surprised" Sasuke said (well duh he's surprised I just said that).
"Hinata? Are you kidding me?" Naruto asked his teammate
"Have I ever kid you?" Sasuke asked his friend. (there's a question I would really like to know)
"good point. But she likes me like that?" Naruto said curious still at the statement his friend just told him.
"You're pretty dense not to notice yourself" Sasuke responded
"Well I've always seen her as a friend I thought she felt the exact same way" Naruto explained
"Sorry to disappoint you Dunce" Sasuke mocked. Naruto didn't mind the dunce comment cause he actually agreed with Sasuke this time. 'How could I have missed something so obvious for so long' Naruto thought to himself as he turned back to Sasuke.
"Do you know where she went?" Naruto asked Sasuke but it was Sakura who answered.
"I don't think she wants to talk to you after that last comment of yours" She said
*Flashback* (man I hate these but they are so necessary)
*Same setting only Hinata's there*
"C'mon Sakura why don't you get some ramen with me?" Naruto asked his friend.
"Forget it Naruto" Sakura flatly responded
"I'll join you Naruto (BIG HINT)" Hinata offered
"Thanks Hinata but Sakura's the only girl I'll ever want to be with alone" Naruto said not realizing the depth that those words hit Hinata. Naruto turned to see Tears form in Hinata's eyes and then she ran away.
"What's with her?" Naruto asked as he watched Hinata ran off into the streets.
"Isn't it obvious?" Sasuke asked
"No why?" Naruto flatly responded.
"She likes you dunce" Sasuke said and Naruto almost had a mental breakdown.
"WHAT!!?"
*End Flashback*(AN: this is about where we came in)
"Dang I need to talk to her" Naruto said
"Fine but you better hurry up and find her" Sasuke said to his teammate. Naruto ran after Hinata as fast as his legs would carry him
*Meanwhile*
*New setting other side of town also in the street*
"I'm sorry for whatever I did Ino" Shikamaru pleaded to her as she was walking away not even looking at him.
"humph!" Was Ino's only response
"What did I do?" Shikamaru asked. But Ino just looked away from him. "How can I help if you wont tell me what I did wrong?" Shikamaru continued.
"Shikamaru your hopeless. Your probably the smartest person I know but you can't figure out what you did wrong" Ino finally responded.
"Well when it comes to women I am pretty dense" Shikamaru admitted.
"Fine you want to know?" Ino asked the extremely difficult boy.
"YES!" He responded without a second thought.
"When you introduced me to your parents you referred to me as nothing more than a friend" Ino said and those words hit Shikamaru hard.
"Yeah well they are pretty touchy when it comes to the girlfriends" Was Shikamaru's only response.
"So what! You're about as sensitive as a block of wood" Ino insulted. Ino slapped Shikamaru across the face and left Shikamaru standing in the street bewildered.
End of chapter 1
Ok that was my first chapter to my second fanfic please review plus R and R
Kuwabara: quit neglecting your training and finish mastering the spirit sword
Yes master Kuwabara