YAY ok here's chapter 2 I hope you like
Kuwabara: hey remember to finish mastering the spirit sword
I will sheesh ok for the longest time chapter 2
Chapter 2:
*back to our hero* (that's a laugh)
"Hinata! I've been looking all over for you" Naruto said running up to her. Hinata was sitting at a ramen stand by herself obviously
"Naruto! What do you want?" Hinata asked angrily. Naruto was shocked at the tone of her voice and he couldn't believe it had come from Hinata.
"I have to talk to you" Naruto pleaded.
"What for? Are you sick of chasing after Sakura?" Hinata said with even more venom than the last comment. Naruto winced at this comment
"Okay I guess I deserved that one" Naruto said.
"No you deserve far worse. I can't believe I was as naïve as to think that you might like me as more than a friend. You don'teven care about me so why should I care about you? Why should I try to be subtle about it anymore I like you okay maybe even love you but you know what I don't care anymore!" Hinata practically screamed.
"Okay your wrong about that cause I do care about you" Naruto said.
"Name one time where you've shown that you care" Hinata demanded. Naruto thought about this for a while before comming up with "I beat Neji for you". But Hinata only smiled at this cause she knew it was true but she refused to believe it at the time.
"No Naruto you beat Neji for yourself and your own pride" Hinata said. Those words hit Naruto like a phisical blow. "Come on Hinata don't hold this stupid mistake against me forever. Don't hate me for this" Naruto begged.
"I don't hate you I don't think I could ever hate you." Hinata said and Naruto's eyes brightened at this comment But then Hinata continued "But I don't think we will ever be as close as I hoped we would be" Hinata stood up and walked away but Naruto stood up and shouted after her "HINATA! WAIT!" But Hinata was already out of sight
*Meanwhile*
"Sasuke your impossible!" Sakura said
"I'm glad you noticed" Sasuke said sarcastically.
"You don't care about anyone but yourself" Sakura said.
"Pretty much" Sasuke responded. But he thought about something completely different [i]Almost everyone but myself. Only you Sakura but I don't think you need to know that just yet[/i]
"I give up" Sakura said and threw her hands up in exaustion.
"What are you talking about?" Sasuke asked confused
"You obviously don't care about anyone else including me so whatever I don't care anymore" Sakura said.
"Well tha-" Began to say before Sakura cut him off. "Forget you!" Sakura shouted before she turned and ran leaving Sasuke to think about what just happened
End Chapter2
Ok not too bad so far if I do say so myself but I would like some reviews tell me what you all think later
Kuwabara: its complete garbage why are you writing romances your a guy you should write action and adventure
I wanted to try something new is that such a crime
Kuwabara: you are straight right?
HELL YEAH A**H*LE I OUGHTA BEAT THE SNOT OUT OF YOU FOR THAT COMMENT ALONE
Kuwabara: chill out I was just asking
OK I'm calm now tell, me what you guys think about it even if you didn't like it if you do I'll teach you how to use the spirit sword\
Kuwabara: hey remember to finish mastering the spirit sword
I will sheesh ok for the longest time chapter 2
Chapter 2:
*back to our hero* (that's a laugh)
"Hinata! I've been looking all over for you" Naruto said running up to her. Hinata was sitting at a ramen stand by herself obviously
"Naruto! What do you want?" Hinata asked angrily. Naruto was shocked at the tone of her voice and he couldn't believe it had come from Hinata.
"I have to talk to you" Naruto pleaded.
"What for? Are you sick of chasing after Sakura?" Hinata said with even more venom than the last comment. Naruto winced at this comment
"Okay I guess I deserved that one" Naruto said.
"No you deserve far worse. I can't believe I was as naïve as to think that you might like me as more than a friend. You don'teven care about me so why should I care about you? Why should I try to be subtle about it anymore I like you okay maybe even love you but you know what I don't care anymore!" Hinata practically screamed.
"Okay your wrong about that cause I do care about you" Naruto said.
"Name one time where you've shown that you care" Hinata demanded. Naruto thought about this for a while before comming up with "I beat Neji for you". But Hinata only smiled at this cause she knew it was true but she refused to believe it at the time.
"No Naruto you beat Neji for yourself and your own pride" Hinata said. Those words hit Naruto like a phisical blow. "Come on Hinata don't hold this stupid mistake against me forever. Don't hate me for this" Naruto begged.
"I don't hate you I don't think I could ever hate you." Hinata said and Naruto's eyes brightened at this comment But then Hinata continued "But I don't think we will ever be as close as I hoped we would be" Hinata stood up and walked away but Naruto stood up and shouted after her "HINATA! WAIT!" But Hinata was already out of sight
*Meanwhile*
"Sasuke your impossible!" Sakura said
"I'm glad you noticed" Sasuke said sarcastically.
"You don't care about anyone but yourself" Sakura said.
"Pretty much" Sasuke responded. But he thought about something completely different [i]Almost everyone but myself. Only you Sakura but I don't think you need to know that just yet[/i]
"I give up" Sakura said and threw her hands up in exaustion.
"What are you talking about?" Sasuke asked confused
"You obviously don't care about anyone else including me so whatever I don't care anymore" Sakura said.
"Well tha-" Began to say before Sakura cut him off. "Forget you!" Sakura shouted before she turned and ran leaving Sasuke to think about what just happened
End Chapter2
Ok not too bad so far if I do say so myself but I would like some reviews tell me what you all think later
Kuwabara: its complete garbage why are you writing romances your a guy you should write action and adventure
I wanted to try something new is that such a crime
Kuwabara: you are straight right?
HELL YEAH A**H*LE I OUGHTA BEAT THE SNOT OUT OF YOU FOR THAT COMMENT ALONE
Kuwabara: chill out I was just asking
OK I'm calm now tell, me what you guys think about it even if you didn't like it if you do I'll teach you how to use the spirit sword\