Ok I would like to thank all the support I am given by all of the reviewers I am just going to put up a couple of my favorites.
Hikariko- I think the dudes are going to totally screw up and the girls blankly stare and walk off, the boys ask what they did wrong, and they are all enilated. Then forgiven. Then they all run off into the sunset...so lame me, ya?
Your close but no cigar
Lady Amaya- . . .. You are pure evil. UPDATE SOON!
I ain't that bad am I?
Overlord of DARKNESS-NICE. You put me in a good mood, and I am rarely happy so be glad you made a miracle happen. Please let it is a good romantic ending, because if it isn't, YOU WILL DIE. I WILL CUT YOU UP INTO PEICES AND SEND YOUR SOUL TO THE LOWEST PITS OF HELL. Got that. Hope you did, for your sake, but then again, I just love killing fanfic writers who piss me off. Finish this soon, it isn't wise to keep the son of LUCIFER waiting. It could be hazardous to your health, IF you know what I mean.
DARKNESS CONSUMES ALL
BOTH BIG AND SMALL
Dude you scare me tell your dad that I said hi anyways on with the show
Kuwabara: shouldn't you warn them of severe OOC in this chapter?
Ok there is severe OOC in this chapter enjoy. Oh one more thing his chapter is how I got the name of the story. I own nothing in this story ANYTHING!
For the Longest Time chapter 5
All four of the guys dropped out of the trees and...started to snap their fingers. (AN: hahahaha I am evil I shall make fools out of all of you Kuwabara: shut up!) Lee started to sing a low bass "bum-bum-bum". Then they all got the beat and stood in front of the girls snapping their fingers. Then they all sang:
All: Whoo-oa-oa-oa for the longest time
Whoo-oa-oa For the longest time (An: didn't they just say that?)
Naruto: If you said goodbye to me tonight
There would still be music left to write
What else could I do?
I'm so inspired by you (huh Shikamaru thought of this that's weird)
All: That hasn't happened for the longest time (Has it ever for these guys?)
Sasuke: once I thought my innocence was gone (it isn't?)
Now I know that happiness goes on
That's where you found me
When you put your arms around me (Yeah Sakura wishes)
All: I haven't been there for the longest time (Where?)
Whoo-oa-oa-oa For the longest time
Whoo-oa-oa For the longest time
Lee: I'm that voice you're hearing in the heart
And the greatest miracle of all
Is how I need you
And how you needed me too
All: That hasn't happened for the longest time
Shikamaru: Maybe this won't last very long
But you'll feel so right
when I could be wrong
Maybe I've been hoping to hard
I've come this far and it's more than I hoped for
Naruto: who knows how much further we'll go on
Maybe I'll be sorry when you're gone (Maybe how about defiantly)
Sasuke: I'll take my chances I forgot how nice romance is (when has Sasuke ever known romance?)
All: I haven't been there for the longest time
Shikamaru: I said good thoughts at the start
I said to myself to hold on to your heart
Lee: Now I know the woman that you are
You're wonderful so far and it's more than I hoped for
Naruto: I don't care what consequences bring
I have been a fool for lesser things (too true Kuwabara: SHUT UP!!)
Sasuke: I want you so bad
I think ought to know that
All: I intend to hold you for the longest time (How cute Kuwabara: WHAT DID I JUST TELL YOU?)
Whoa-oa-oa for the longest time
The guys stopped and looked at the girls. Hinata was smiling. Ino was snickering with Sakura. Tenten was just standing shocked. "Any old sign would be appreciated" Shikamaru said.
"Dude did we botch it up?" Naruto asked. Sasuke was sweating. Lee was looking from left to right nervously.
"No you didn't botch it up" Hinata said "Thank you that was very romantic" Naruto walked over and gently hugged Hinata.
"Please forgive me Hinata" Naruto said, "I don't have anything to offer other than my heart"
"I already have Naruto" Hinata said. Naruto lifted her face up and kissed her full on the lips. Hinata blushed furiously. 'So is this what its like when you love someone' Naruto thought. 'Is this what it feels like when you care about and they feel the same' Hinata thought. Naruto pulled away and just looked into Hinata's eyes.
"Hey you know you could learn a thing or too from Naruto" Sakura said to Sasuke (oh my god did Sakura just say that????). Sasuke walked over and kissed Sakura on the forehead. Sasuke was about to back away when Sakura grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and pulled him into a much deeper kiss on the lips. Sasuke wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her close.
"So..." Shikamaru said.
"So what?" Ino responded
"You want to go meet my parents or what?" Shikamaru asked. His answer was Ino kissing him on the cheek. "Well if you want to think about it that's fine too" Ino laughed and kissed him on the lips. Shikamaru swore that he would never forget that feeling in a million years. They both left to go see Shikamaru's parents (Bad idea don't introduce her to the folks until after your married they can't screw it up that way and don't introduce them to your sensei if they don't already know him Kuwabara: shut up! KP: you say that a lot).
Lee walked over and got on one knee (this should be entertaining). "Tenten I was a fool please have mercy on me I beg of sweet, loving, beautiful, courageous, sometimes jealous-"
"Ok Lee you can stop now I forgive you" Tenten said.
"But I- huh? You forgive me just like that you mean I worked on that big speech for nothing?"
"'Fraid so"
"So wanna see a movie?"
"I don't know" Tenten said evilly
"You don't know!" Lee practically shouted
"Who knows I might get a better offer?" Tenten laughed "Oh don't look so glum Lee I was only joking" Lee smiled and the two walked off. Leaving only Hinata, Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke left.
Hinata and Naruto hadn't said a word to each other they just continued to look into each other's eyes. Sakura was another story she just wouldn't shut up. Sasuke noticed that Hinata and Naruto were being quiet looking at one another. "Sakura c'mon lets go" Sasuke said
"Go where?" Sakura asked
"Anywhere as long as I am with you," he responded and the two left leaving Hinata and Naruto alone (ba ba bum! Kuwabara: will you be quiet!). Naruto broke the silence "I love you Hinata" Hinata blushed a deep red as Naruto pulled her close wrapping his arms around her waist. Hinata wrapped her arms around his neck and whispered in his ear. "I love you too". Naruto felt as if he was invincible. 'She loves me! I feel so alive! She loves me. I haven't felt like this for the longest time' (Yeah she loves you big guy DUH Kuwabara: your ruining the moment) Naruto thought to himself. Naruto just held Hinata. 'I could be like this with him for the longest time' Hinata thought.
FIN!
Okay that's it! I am done with this fic kaput
Kuwabara: that was so sweet and happy I think I'm gonna cry
Hey weren't you the one who said I should be writing action fics?
Kuwabara: how can you end it like this?
OK I might make an epilogue no guarantees though depends on how many good Reviews I get.
Hikariko- I think the dudes are going to totally screw up and the girls blankly stare and walk off, the boys ask what they did wrong, and they are all enilated. Then forgiven. Then they all run off into the sunset...so lame me, ya?
Your close but no cigar
Lady Amaya- . . .. You are pure evil. UPDATE SOON!
I ain't that bad am I?
Overlord of DARKNESS-NICE. You put me in a good mood, and I am rarely happy so be glad you made a miracle happen. Please let it is a good romantic ending, because if it isn't, YOU WILL DIE. I WILL CUT YOU UP INTO PEICES AND SEND YOUR SOUL TO THE LOWEST PITS OF HELL. Got that. Hope you did, for your sake, but then again, I just love killing fanfic writers who piss me off. Finish this soon, it isn't wise to keep the son of LUCIFER waiting. It could be hazardous to your health, IF you know what I mean.
DARKNESS CONSUMES ALL
BOTH BIG AND SMALL
Dude you scare me tell your dad that I said hi anyways on with the show
Kuwabara: shouldn't you warn them of severe OOC in this chapter?
Ok there is severe OOC in this chapter enjoy. Oh one more thing his chapter is how I got the name of the story. I own nothing in this story ANYTHING!
For the Longest Time chapter 5
All four of the guys dropped out of the trees and...started to snap their fingers. (AN: hahahaha I am evil I shall make fools out of all of you Kuwabara: shut up!) Lee started to sing a low bass "bum-bum-bum". Then they all got the beat and stood in front of the girls snapping their fingers. Then they all sang:
All: Whoo-oa-oa-oa for the longest time
Whoo-oa-oa For the longest time (An: didn't they just say that?)
Naruto: If you said goodbye to me tonight
There would still be music left to write
What else could I do?
I'm so inspired by you (huh Shikamaru thought of this that's weird)
All: That hasn't happened for the longest time (Has it ever for these guys?)
Sasuke: once I thought my innocence was gone (it isn't?)
Now I know that happiness goes on
That's where you found me
When you put your arms around me (Yeah Sakura wishes)
All: I haven't been there for the longest time (Where?)
Whoo-oa-oa-oa For the longest time
Whoo-oa-oa For the longest time
Lee: I'm that voice you're hearing in the heart
And the greatest miracle of all
Is how I need you
And how you needed me too
All: That hasn't happened for the longest time
Shikamaru: Maybe this won't last very long
But you'll feel so right
when I could be wrong
Maybe I've been hoping to hard
I've come this far and it's more than I hoped for
Naruto: who knows how much further we'll go on
Maybe I'll be sorry when you're gone (Maybe how about defiantly)
Sasuke: I'll take my chances I forgot how nice romance is (when has Sasuke ever known romance?)
All: I haven't been there for the longest time
Shikamaru: I said good thoughts at the start
I said to myself to hold on to your heart
Lee: Now I know the woman that you are
You're wonderful so far and it's more than I hoped for
Naruto: I don't care what consequences bring
I have been a fool for lesser things (too true Kuwabara: SHUT UP!!)
Sasuke: I want you so bad
I think ought to know that
All: I intend to hold you for the longest time (How cute Kuwabara: WHAT DID I JUST TELL YOU?)
Whoa-oa-oa for the longest time
The guys stopped and looked at the girls. Hinata was smiling. Ino was snickering with Sakura. Tenten was just standing shocked. "Any old sign would be appreciated" Shikamaru said.
"Dude did we botch it up?" Naruto asked. Sasuke was sweating. Lee was looking from left to right nervously.
"No you didn't botch it up" Hinata said "Thank you that was very romantic" Naruto walked over and gently hugged Hinata.
"Please forgive me Hinata" Naruto said, "I don't have anything to offer other than my heart"
"I already have Naruto" Hinata said. Naruto lifted her face up and kissed her full on the lips. Hinata blushed furiously. 'So is this what its like when you love someone' Naruto thought. 'Is this what it feels like when you care about and they feel the same' Hinata thought. Naruto pulled away and just looked into Hinata's eyes.
"Hey you know you could learn a thing or too from Naruto" Sakura said to Sasuke (oh my god did Sakura just say that????). Sasuke walked over and kissed Sakura on the forehead. Sasuke was about to back away when Sakura grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and pulled him into a much deeper kiss on the lips. Sasuke wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her close.
"So..." Shikamaru said.
"So what?" Ino responded
"You want to go meet my parents or what?" Shikamaru asked. His answer was Ino kissing him on the cheek. "Well if you want to think about it that's fine too" Ino laughed and kissed him on the lips. Shikamaru swore that he would never forget that feeling in a million years. They both left to go see Shikamaru's parents (Bad idea don't introduce her to the folks until after your married they can't screw it up that way and don't introduce them to your sensei if they don't already know him Kuwabara: shut up! KP: you say that a lot).
Lee walked over and got on one knee (this should be entertaining). "Tenten I was a fool please have mercy on me I beg of sweet, loving, beautiful, courageous, sometimes jealous-"
"Ok Lee you can stop now I forgive you" Tenten said.
"But I- huh? You forgive me just like that you mean I worked on that big speech for nothing?"
"'Fraid so"
"So wanna see a movie?"
"I don't know" Tenten said evilly
"You don't know!" Lee practically shouted
"Who knows I might get a better offer?" Tenten laughed "Oh don't look so glum Lee I was only joking" Lee smiled and the two walked off. Leaving only Hinata, Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke left.
Hinata and Naruto hadn't said a word to each other they just continued to look into each other's eyes. Sakura was another story she just wouldn't shut up. Sasuke noticed that Hinata and Naruto were being quiet looking at one another. "Sakura c'mon lets go" Sasuke said
"Go where?" Sakura asked
"Anywhere as long as I am with you," he responded and the two left leaving Hinata and Naruto alone (ba ba bum! Kuwabara: will you be quiet!). Naruto broke the silence "I love you Hinata" Hinata blushed a deep red as Naruto pulled her close wrapping his arms around her waist. Hinata wrapped her arms around his neck and whispered in his ear. "I love you too". Naruto felt as if he was invincible. 'She loves me! I feel so alive! She loves me. I haven't felt like this for the longest time' (Yeah she loves you big guy DUH Kuwabara: your ruining the moment) Naruto thought to himself. Naruto just held Hinata. 'I could be like this with him for the longest time' Hinata thought.
FIN!
Okay that's it! I am done with this fic kaput
Kuwabara: that was so sweet and happy I think I'm gonna cry
Hey weren't you the one who said I should be writing action fics?
Kuwabara: how can you end it like this?
OK I might make an epilogue no guarantees though depends on how many good Reviews I get.