summary: what if ffx happened when they were 10 years younger?
author's note: yay! version 2! thanks to hikari, quirky rikku and hyper monky for reviewing! ^_^ it inspired me again! so i'll play later to continue it! i'm already in the al bhed stuff... ^_^ if no one really likes the way i edited it, i'll just put the old one again! ^_^ ehhe... enjoy! happy reading! R&R please!
disclaimer: i do not own ffx. but i own one of the mercheandise. *sighs* i wish i could own square one day!
sa! kakate ko ya! - gippal
story:
-baal ruins-
"hey!" a voice called. this voice is NOOOO ordinary voice. I hate this voice this voice is the voice of my... "d-dad?" I said as I seed a letter J. the letter J is the symbol of my dad. sighs, I was swimming through water. then I saw... zanarkand... it's like.. little stones already... then I saw the stadium. someone was standing in it. at first it was my dad. then it became someone familiar... it was... me. I thinked about a lot of things... like, where I was. what I'd gotten myself in to. I started to feel light headed... and then, sleepy. I think I had a dream. a dream of being alone. i wanted someone--anyone beside me... so I didn't have to feel alone anymore.
then I woke up. I was in a strange place. it was scary. then I shouted, "anybody there?". no reply. it even echoed. then I shouted again,
"auron!"
"heeeeeeeeeeey!!!!!!!"
then the bird that was there when I woke up, flied away. it went to a scary looking place where his other bird friends were. when it left. I tried to follow it. but first I went to search for a dry place. there was one. there was a shining blue thingi in one of the poles. it said,
"Eh dra myht frana pumdc uv mekrd emmisehyda dra pmylgacd hekrd
Fedr macalania pareht dra vuindr bemmyn oui cekrd
muug hud uh dra mavd pid uh dra nekrd."
nope, cant read it. then I found a treasure chest. it had 200 gil! yay! money! then I went to the other side. there was a sphere thingi. I touched it and it said it was a al bhed compilation thingi... then i headed up and found another chest! it had potionsx2.
then I swam to the thingi that looked like the entance. whaa!!! scary!!! so I ran to the building thingi. then there was this place. it looked like a bridge. while I was walking, it suddenly collapsed!! and I fell into the water. good thing I can swim! then I felt like something was watching me. yup! there was! fiends! battle time! I took out my weapons in a cool way.
before I noticed it. the battle was over. but my heart began to beat faster. oh no! a larger fiend!!! whaa!!! ha! the battle was over with just one overdrive! but then.. uh oh... he's not dead yet! he looks hungry!!! whaa!!!! no! don't eat me! then the fiend bumped into a wall. "uh oh!" I said, and i found a place where I can hide. I barely made it! he almost ate half of my body!
I made it out of the frying pan... and into the freezer. I thought I was gonna die in this place. whaa!!! it's so cold here! then I stood up, and walked into a large room. "cold." I said as brushed my hands together. alas! there was a fireplace. but no fire. "need fire." only burnt wood. hmm... maybe I can make fire if I have flint and a withered bouquet, I learnt that in school! there's a chance I can make fire! and I did! good going!
I looked around and my stomach rumbled. I layed down saying, "I need food!" and when I noticed it, I was dreaming. I was in my house. I crossed my arms behind my neck, and said to the red suited person, "what do you want?"
and auron said, "it was a bad call. your team lost because of you."
"you came to say THAT!?!"
"it's been... five years."
"huh?"
"i thought you'd be crying."
"who, me?" you're so mean to me auron!! whaa!!! T_T
the kid that appeared out of no where appeared out of no where again and said, "you cried." and when I turned to face him, a white flash again. then I woke up. it was kinda like, a nightmare. so I cuddled to myself and noticed that the fire was going out. "hey, wait, wait! don't go out on me!" uh..... ah! "just hold on. I'll get more wood!" and when I stood up, a fiend appeared. it's eyes glowed red. I bet it wanted to eat me! "gimme a break!" I said to the fiend. as if it understanded me!?! how come everyone wants to eat a seven year old kid like me!?!
a roar. then one of the doors exploded. then there came people and.. a girl? she walked up to me, and influenced the fiend. then I said, "you're on my side? cool!" then, battle time again!
after the battle, I smiled to the girl that helped me. she took off her goggles and looked at me. and I was surprised and said, "whew! that was close." the girl looked around, like ordering her men to get me. uh oh, trouble. one of the old men grabbed my hair. ouch! and forced me to stand up. I said, "hey! lemme go!" with that, the scary people pointed their guns at me! whaa!!!
*note: I will not do anymore al bhed lang stuff... I'll just do it in english... I'll do al bhed just when I want to... or its part of the story. oki? t.y. ^_^*
one of the men said in a different language, "what is this?" another said, "a fiend! in human disguise!"
"yes it is so!"
"we kill it?" asked a scary man coz he had a mask like gas-o.
"wait! "what if it is a human?" the girl said.
"they are the same in death." the man with a mask like gas-o said, while pointing his dagger on the girl.
"i forbid it! we bring it with us!" the girl said then smiled at me and walked closer to my left ear and whispered, "cunno." and hit me HARD!!!! on my stomach. what could get any worse than this!!!!!
translations:
albhed Eh dra myht frana pumdc uv mekrd emmisehyda dra pmylgacd hekrd
Fedr macalania pareht dra vuindr bemmyn oui cekrd
muug hud uh dra mavd pid uh dra nekrd
eng in the land where bolts of light enumerate the blackest night
with Macalania behind the fourth pillar you sight
look not on the left but on the right
al bhed cunno
eng sorry
ya.. tidus.. changes grammar huh? hehe... ^_^ R&R please! ^_^
author's note: yay! version 2! thanks to hikari, quirky rikku and hyper monky for reviewing! ^_^ it inspired me again! so i'll play later to continue it! i'm already in the al bhed stuff... ^_^ if no one really likes the way i edited it, i'll just put the old one again! ^_^ ehhe... enjoy! happy reading! R&R please!
disclaimer: i do not own ffx. but i own one of the mercheandise. *sighs* i wish i could own square one day!
sa! kakate ko ya! - gippal
story:
-baal ruins-
"hey!" a voice called. this voice is NOOOO ordinary voice. I hate this voice this voice is the voice of my... "d-dad?" I said as I seed a letter J. the letter J is the symbol of my dad. sighs, I was swimming through water. then I saw... zanarkand... it's like.. little stones already... then I saw the stadium. someone was standing in it. at first it was my dad. then it became someone familiar... it was... me. I thinked about a lot of things... like, where I was. what I'd gotten myself in to. I started to feel light headed... and then, sleepy. I think I had a dream. a dream of being alone. i wanted someone--anyone beside me... so I didn't have to feel alone anymore.
then I woke up. I was in a strange place. it was scary. then I shouted, "anybody there?". no reply. it even echoed. then I shouted again,
"auron!"
"heeeeeeeeeeey!!!!!!!"
then the bird that was there when I woke up, flied away. it went to a scary looking place where his other bird friends were. when it left. I tried to follow it. but first I went to search for a dry place. there was one. there was a shining blue thingi in one of the poles. it said,
"Eh dra myht frana pumdc uv mekrd emmisehyda dra pmylgacd hekrd
Fedr macalania pareht dra vuindr bemmyn oui cekrd
muug hud uh dra mavd pid uh dra nekrd."
nope, cant read it. then I found a treasure chest. it had 200 gil! yay! money! then I went to the other side. there was a sphere thingi. I touched it and it said it was a al bhed compilation thingi... then i headed up and found another chest! it had potionsx2.
then I swam to the thingi that looked like the entance. whaa!!! scary!!! so I ran to the building thingi. then there was this place. it looked like a bridge. while I was walking, it suddenly collapsed!! and I fell into the water. good thing I can swim! then I felt like something was watching me. yup! there was! fiends! battle time! I took out my weapons in a cool way.
before I noticed it. the battle was over. but my heart began to beat faster. oh no! a larger fiend!!! whaa!!! ha! the battle was over with just one overdrive! but then.. uh oh... he's not dead yet! he looks hungry!!! whaa!!!! no! don't eat me! then the fiend bumped into a wall. "uh oh!" I said, and i found a place where I can hide. I barely made it! he almost ate half of my body!
I made it out of the frying pan... and into the freezer. I thought I was gonna die in this place. whaa!!! it's so cold here! then I stood up, and walked into a large room. "cold." I said as brushed my hands together. alas! there was a fireplace. but no fire. "need fire." only burnt wood. hmm... maybe I can make fire if I have flint and a withered bouquet, I learnt that in school! there's a chance I can make fire! and I did! good going!
I looked around and my stomach rumbled. I layed down saying, "I need food!" and when I noticed it, I was dreaming. I was in my house. I crossed my arms behind my neck, and said to the red suited person, "what do you want?"
and auron said, "it was a bad call. your team lost because of you."
"you came to say THAT!?!"
"it's been... five years."
"huh?"
"i thought you'd be crying."
"who, me?" you're so mean to me auron!! whaa!!! T_T
the kid that appeared out of no where appeared out of no where again and said, "you cried." and when I turned to face him, a white flash again. then I woke up. it was kinda like, a nightmare. so I cuddled to myself and noticed that the fire was going out. "hey, wait, wait! don't go out on me!" uh..... ah! "just hold on. I'll get more wood!" and when I stood up, a fiend appeared. it's eyes glowed red. I bet it wanted to eat me! "gimme a break!" I said to the fiend. as if it understanded me!?! how come everyone wants to eat a seven year old kid like me!?!
a roar. then one of the doors exploded. then there came people and.. a girl? she walked up to me, and influenced the fiend. then I said, "you're on my side? cool!" then, battle time again!
after the battle, I smiled to the girl that helped me. she took off her goggles and looked at me. and I was surprised and said, "whew! that was close." the girl looked around, like ordering her men to get me. uh oh, trouble. one of the old men grabbed my hair. ouch! and forced me to stand up. I said, "hey! lemme go!" with that, the scary people pointed their guns at me! whaa!!!
*note: I will not do anymore al bhed lang stuff... I'll just do it in english... I'll do al bhed just when I want to... or its part of the story. oki? t.y. ^_^*
one of the men said in a different language, "what is this?" another said, "a fiend! in human disguise!"
"yes it is so!"
"we kill it?" asked a scary man coz he had a mask like gas-o.
"wait! "what if it is a human?" the girl said.
"they are the same in death." the man with a mask like gas-o said, while pointing his dagger on the girl.
"i forbid it! we bring it with us!" the girl said then smiled at me and walked closer to my left ear and whispered, "cunno." and hit me HARD!!!! on my stomach. what could get any worse than this!!!!!
translations:
albhed Eh dra myht frana pumdc uv mekrd emmisehyda dra pmylgacd hekrd
Fedr macalania pareht dra vuindr bemmyn oui cekrd
muug hud uh dra mavd pid uh dra nekrd
eng in the land where bolts of light enumerate the blackest night
with Macalania behind the fourth pillar you sight
look not on the left but on the right
al bhed cunno
eng sorry
ya.. tidus.. changes grammar huh? hehe... ^_^ R&R please! ^_^