author's note: i'm trying my best to follow what quirky rikku and hikari116 told me. thanks to wuirky rikku, hikari116 and hyper monkey for likeing this fic and reviewing for it! ^_^ now for the mission to create the best fic. i'll think of it! i swear. well... maybe not... hmm... okay! the story! sa! kakate koi ya!
disclaimer: i do not own ffx. but i own merchendise. ^_^
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after talking about the sphere grid thingi, I talked to the man with a mask like gas-o. he said in a diff lang,
"you want to hear again?"
"what?"
then he didnt speak! wha!! meanie!
then I talked to the man who likes hitting me and pull my hair.
"go on, earn your pay"
he's nice to me! that man with the mask like gas-o doesnt! whaa!! so mean to me! then I speak to the man who asks weird with a lot of tatoos. he still said the same thing, "move it! get to work immeadiatetly!" cant he be nice to a little 7 year old kid like me? whaa!!!!
then I talked to the girl again. she speaks in the normal language now.
"we found some old old ruins right beneath us. it's not working now, but there should stilll be some power left. we're gonna go down there and make it work and then we should be able to salvage the big prize!" what's salvage?
"uhuh..."
"okay! let's get to work!"
then she made a little dance that REALLY scared me. (a/n: what tidus is referring to is rikku's little victory dance. you know, the dance she makes whenever the gullwings finds a sphere.)
"roger!" then I jumped off the ship. before jumping I made a little thumb sign to make sure it's okay already. then the girl made her umm... groupmates... oh... umm... there's something called to this... umm... crew! ya! she let her crew jump off, too.
when I jumped off I saw the old old ruins. it had red lights but it was soooooo dark. it was VERY scary. whaa!! I want my mommy!!!! then we swam down to the old ruins. by the way, what's a ruin? anyways, back to the story, we fought a lot of fiends.
then we got closer. it was brighter than what it was, but I still couldnt see through the water.
so we entered the ruin thingi. it was SO scary, but the girl didnt look scared so I just stayed calmed. okay, back to the story! we arrived at this, computer thingi room. it was sooo bright! then I punched the keyboard thingi coz the girl pointed me to. ouch! this really hurts! then we got inside! thanks to me! yay!
when we entered a room, there was this big thingi. we didnt really looked at it though. then the girl kept on swimming, so I just followed her. when we entered the other room, fiends attacked us! whaa!!! dont tell me they want to eat me, too!!! then I figured out when we defeated them, they didnt. ehhe...
when we killed the fiends.. oh no! I killed something! oh wait, fiends are bad. so it's good. yay! then the girl pointed to the big machine thingi. I punched it and punched it. whaa!!! my hands hurt. then it glowed. oooh.... pretty lights... ookaay... back to the story!
so we started going out of the old ruin thingi. what we didnt know is, there was a fiend waiting for us! then se started attacking it of course! after the battle, we went to the crew of the girl. the place where we battled the fiend glowed, whooo... pretty lights.
then when we got out, there was light! yay! it wasnt scary anymore! then I saw the girl going to something. so I followed her. I thinked it was important to follow people. except if they're bad.
when we got close enough to see the thing the girl was going to. it looked like... an airship. we were taught that at school! wait, do I take school? oh no!!! I dont remember!! whaa!!! what was I talking about? the story! right!
when we saw the something that we saw, we went to the ship where we were ealier. where they abused me! whaa!!! so when we entered the ship, the crew of the girl had a conservation. I mean conversation in another language. one said,
"we found the airship!"
"the records were right."
then I got in and I wiggled like a dog to get rid of the 'wetnessness'. then i walked up to the crew. they continued the conservation.
"no, how to drag it up?"
then they went inside. I tried to get inside but a guy in blue pushed me and said,
"you, outside!"
"hey! hey, i helped out, didnt I? hmph!"
then they closed the door. whaa!! so so so so mean!
after that, I went to the thingi that looked like a tent and lied there. I was lying on my side, with my head lying on my right hand. "uhh... hungry." then someone kicked my right elbow. wait, is this left or right? okay, right it is then. then I sitted up. then the girl was there. she was holding a tray. food? then she put the tray in front of me. I stared at it. it really is food! yum yum! "whoa! right on!" then I eated.
whoa! I'm choking! I started to hit my chest. whaa!!! not working! water! water!
the girl handed me a round shaped thingi. it's a cantene, with water inside it. I drank. then the girl sitted and said,
"that's cause you eat too fast!"
"uhuh..."
then I stood up and laughed for no reason. like I'm a crazy person. then I yawned and stretched my arms out.
"hey!" the girl said.
"hello there. what is your name?"
"rikku."
"whoa! you really do understand!" and I started to shake her hands. and jumped for joy. she pulled her hands back and started to shake it. then I laughed like I'm crazy again. uh oh... better get help, rikku.
"uh, why didnt you say so earlier?" I asked.
"i didn't get a chance to! everyone thought oui were a fiend!" she said. and acted like slicing her head off.
"uh... 'we'?"
"oh, 'oui' means 'you'."
then she started walking to the ledge thingi.
"who are you guys, anyway?"
"we're al bhed. can't you tell? wait," she said and turned to me.
"you're not an al bhed-hater, are you?" she asked as she put her hands on the rail thingi.
"I dont even know what an al bhed is."
"where are you from?"
"zanarkand." and I started walking to her.
"I'm a blitzball player." then I pretended I was hitting a ball to the air and said,
"star player of the zanarkand abes!"
"did you hit you head or something?" she asked.
"um... you guys hit me."
"oh, right..." she said, and turned to the rail thingi again.
"do you remember anything before that?" she asked.
then I started walking towards her.
so I told her everything there was to tell about zanarkand... about life there, blitzball and sin's attack. AND about how auron and I were, umm... engulfed in this light. i just said things as they came to mind. but then I started to wonder. I turned to rikku.
"did I say something funny?" I asked.
"you were near sin."
"uhum..."
"don't worry, you'll be better in no time. they sayyour head gets funny when sin is near. maybe you just had some kind of dream?"
"you mean I'm sick?"
"because of sin's toxin, yeah." what's a toxin?
"you sure?"
"yeah. there is no zanarkand anymore. sin destroyed it a thousand years ago. so... no one plays blitzball there." and she walked away.
"huh?" what? no zanarkand?! I turned to rikku, and she turned to me.
"wh-what do you mean a THOUSAND YEARS ago?" I said.
"but I saw sin attack zanarkand!" and I began to walk towards her.
"you're saying that happened a thousand years ago? no way!"
then we stopped our cons-conversation.
"you said..." rikku said and i turned to her.
"you play blitzball?" she continued.
"uhuh.." I said back.
"you know, you should go to luca. someone mught know who you are, or you might find someone you recognize."
"luca?"
"ahh..." she said and shaked her head. then she began to walk around in circles. she's a pretty good thinker for a five years old. yes! FIVE years old! cool! then she patted me on my left shoulder and said,
"okay, leave it to me! I'll take you to luca, promise!"
I couldnt say a thing.
"ugh! you'd rather stay here?" she asked.
"uh-uh!!!" I said and shaked my head.
"okay, i'll go tell the others. wait here."
then she started to walk away then stopped.
"oh, and one thing. don't tell anyone you're from zanarkand, kay? yevon says it's a holy place. you might make someone mad or something."
"oh... uhuh." then she went inside.
zanarkand... some holy place? "yeah right" i thought. since when? yevon? sin? luca? I thought sin just took me to another place that I could go back in a day or two. but a thousand years into the future?
"no way!" and I kicked the tent looking thingi. then the ship started to shake. wow! I'm that powerful? nope! it was...
"sin!" one of the crew shouted that was kinda checking what was going on. then another said in a diff lang,
"sin is come! under us! under us!"
I was trying to get a hold of something but...
"whoa! wha!"
I fell... into the sea... whaaa!!! help!!!
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liked it? did ya? did ya? hope ya did! ^_^ i'm trying my best to follow what hikari116 and quirky rikku told me about the capitalization and the paragraphs. ^_^' yup! i dont like pressing the shift key. ^_^' so... and uhh... i'm not gonna update till may 7 coz i'm too busy thinking of lonely stuff. i really feel lonely. i dont know why. R&R please!
disclaimer: i do not own ffx. but i own merchendise. ^_^
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after talking about the sphere grid thingi, I talked to the man with a mask like gas-o. he said in a diff lang,
"you want to hear again?"
"what?"
then he didnt speak! wha!! meanie!
then I talked to the man who likes hitting me and pull my hair.
"go on, earn your pay"
he's nice to me! that man with the mask like gas-o doesnt! whaa!! so mean to me! then I speak to the man who asks weird with a lot of tatoos. he still said the same thing, "move it! get to work immeadiatetly!" cant he be nice to a little 7 year old kid like me? whaa!!!!
then I talked to the girl again. she speaks in the normal language now.
"we found some old old ruins right beneath us. it's not working now, but there should stilll be some power left. we're gonna go down there and make it work and then we should be able to salvage the big prize!" what's salvage?
"uhuh..."
"okay! let's get to work!"
then she made a little dance that REALLY scared me. (a/n: what tidus is referring to is rikku's little victory dance. you know, the dance she makes whenever the gullwings finds a sphere.)
"roger!" then I jumped off the ship. before jumping I made a little thumb sign to make sure it's okay already. then the girl made her umm... groupmates... oh... umm... there's something called to this... umm... crew! ya! she let her crew jump off, too.
when I jumped off I saw the old old ruins. it had red lights but it was soooooo dark. it was VERY scary. whaa!! I want my mommy!!!! then we swam down to the old ruins. by the way, what's a ruin? anyways, back to the story, we fought a lot of fiends.
then we got closer. it was brighter than what it was, but I still couldnt see through the water.
so we entered the ruin thingi. it was SO scary, but the girl didnt look scared so I just stayed calmed. okay, back to the story! we arrived at this, computer thingi room. it was sooo bright! then I punched the keyboard thingi coz the girl pointed me to. ouch! this really hurts! then we got inside! thanks to me! yay!
when we entered a room, there was this big thingi. we didnt really looked at it though. then the girl kept on swimming, so I just followed her. when we entered the other room, fiends attacked us! whaa!!! dont tell me they want to eat me, too!!! then I figured out when we defeated them, they didnt. ehhe...
when we killed the fiends.. oh no! I killed something! oh wait, fiends are bad. so it's good. yay! then the girl pointed to the big machine thingi. I punched it and punched it. whaa!!! my hands hurt. then it glowed. oooh.... pretty lights... ookaay... back to the story!
so we started going out of the old ruin thingi. what we didnt know is, there was a fiend waiting for us! then se started attacking it of course! after the battle, we went to the crew of the girl. the place where we battled the fiend glowed, whooo... pretty lights.
then when we got out, there was light! yay! it wasnt scary anymore! then I saw the girl going to something. so I followed her. I thinked it was important to follow people. except if they're bad.
when we got close enough to see the thing the girl was going to. it looked like... an airship. we were taught that at school! wait, do I take school? oh no!!! I dont remember!! whaa!!! what was I talking about? the story! right!
when we saw the something that we saw, we went to the ship where we were ealier. where they abused me! whaa!!! so when we entered the ship, the crew of the girl had a conservation. I mean conversation in another language. one said,
"we found the airship!"
"the records were right."
then I got in and I wiggled like a dog to get rid of the 'wetnessness'. then i walked up to the crew. they continued the conservation.
"no, how to drag it up?"
then they went inside. I tried to get inside but a guy in blue pushed me and said,
"you, outside!"
"hey! hey, i helped out, didnt I? hmph!"
then they closed the door. whaa!! so so so so mean!
after that, I went to the thingi that looked like a tent and lied there. I was lying on my side, with my head lying on my right hand. "uhh... hungry." then someone kicked my right elbow. wait, is this left or right? okay, right it is then. then I sitted up. then the girl was there. she was holding a tray. food? then she put the tray in front of me. I stared at it. it really is food! yum yum! "whoa! right on!" then I eated.
whoa! I'm choking! I started to hit my chest. whaa!!! not working! water! water!
the girl handed me a round shaped thingi. it's a cantene, with water inside it. I drank. then the girl sitted and said,
"that's cause you eat too fast!"
"uhuh..."
then I stood up and laughed for no reason. like I'm a crazy person. then I yawned and stretched my arms out.
"hey!" the girl said.
"hello there. what is your name?"
"rikku."
"whoa! you really do understand!" and I started to shake her hands. and jumped for joy. she pulled her hands back and started to shake it. then I laughed like I'm crazy again. uh oh... better get help, rikku.
"uh, why didnt you say so earlier?" I asked.
"i didn't get a chance to! everyone thought oui were a fiend!" she said. and acted like slicing her head off.
"uh... 'we'?"
"oh, 'oui' means 'you'."
then she started walking to the ledge thingi.
"who are you guys, anyway?"
"we're al bhed. can't you tell? wait," she said and turned to me.
"you're not an al bhed-hater, are you?" she asked as she put her hands on the rail thingi.
"I dont even know what an al bhed is."
"where are you from?"
"zanarkand." and I started walking to her.
"I'm a blitzball player." then I pretended I was hitting a ball to the air and said,
"star player of the zanarkand abes!"
"did you hit you head or something?" she asked.
"um... you guys hit me."
"oh, right..." she said, and turned to the rail thingi again.
"do you remember anything before that?" she asked.
then I started walking towards her.
so I told her everything there was to tell about zanarkand... about life there, blitzball and sin's attack. AND about how auron and I were, umm... engulfed in this light. i just said things as they came to mind. but then I started to wonder. I turned to rikku.
"did I say something funny?" I asked.
"you were near sin."
"uhum..."
"don't worry, you'll be better in no time. they sayyour head gets funny when sin is near. maybe you just had some kind of dream?"
"you mean I'm sick?"
"because of sin's toxin, yeah." what's a toxin?
"you sure?"
"yeah. there is no zanarkand anymore. sin destroyed it a thousand years ago. so... no one plays blitzball there." and she walked away.
"huh?" what? no zanarkand?! I turned to rikku, and she turned to me.
"wh-what do you mean a THOUSAND YEARS ago?" I said.
"but I saw sin attack zanarkand!" and I began to walk towards her.
"you're saying that happened a thousand years ago? no way!"
then we stopped our cons-conversation.
"you said..." rikku said and i turned to her.
"you play blitzball?" she continued.
"uhuh.." I said back.
"you know, you should go to luca. someone mught know who you are, or you might find someone you recognize."
"luca?"
"ahh..." she said and shaked her head. then she began to walk around in circles. she's a pretty good thinker for a five years old. yes! FIVE years old! cool! then she patted me on my left shoulder and said,
"okay, leave it to me! I'll take you to luca, promise!"
I couldnt say a thing.
"ugh! you'd rather stay here?" she asked.
"uh-uh!!!" I said and shaked my head.
"okay, i'll go tell the others. wait here."
then she started to walk away then stopped.
"oh, and one thing. don't tell anyone you're from zanarkand, kay? yevon says it's a holy place. you might make someone mad or something."
"oh... uhuh." then she went inside.
zanarkand... some holy place? "yeah right" i thought. since when? yevon? sin? luca? I thought sin just took me to another place that I could go back in a day or two. but a thousand years into the future?
"no way!" and I kicked the tent looking thingi. then the ship started to shake. wow! I'm that powerful? nope! it was...
"sin!" one of the crew shouted that was kinda checking what was going on. then another said in a diff lang,
"sin is come! under us! under us!"
I was trying to get a hold of something but...
"whoa! wha!"
I fell... into the sea... whaaa!!! help!!!
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liked it? did ya? did ya? hope ya did! ^_^ i'm trying my best to follow what hikari116 and quirky rikku told me about the capitalization and the paragraphs. ^_^' yup! i dont like pressing the shift key. ^_^' so... and uhh... i'm not gonna update till may 7 coz i'm too busy thinking of lonely stuff. i really feel lonely. i dont know why. R&R please!