GF17: Second chapter longer than the introduction
"Well, Horo-horo, I think Pirika and I better go before it gets dark" said Ren " Okay, take good care of my sister" said Horo-horo "Don't worry, I will" said Ren ""Goodbye brother" said Pirika " Bye" Horo-horo replied to his sister while he's sweeping the floor. "Horo-horo, I'll go inside the room to do Anna's homework," said Manta " Sure" said Horo-horo while tears are falling down to his cheeks as he sweeps the floor.
At the market place "Um.Let's see, we already have the beef, and the vegetables, wait! I forgotten the tomatoes" said Pirika "You mean we have to go back?" asked Ren in surprise " I'm really sorry, but yes, we have to go back" said Pirika " After walking the long way up to here, we're gonna go back" complained Ren "Yes, we must go back to the vegetable stand Ren" said Pirika.
On they're way back to the vegetable stand, someone has been stalking on them, listing to every word Ren and Pirika would say, finding a right time to attack. Unfortunately Ren didn't sense that the danger is coming.
After all these walking around the market place "At last, they are all complete" said Pirika while checking the list "Are you sure, then let go back home, these baggage are heavy" said Ren while holding 7 plastic bag full of the things they bought at the market "Um.Okay, let's go home" said Pirika. On there way home, they were blocked by a boy.
"Who are you?" asked Ren hiding Pirika at his back ( as if he's trying to protect her) "I'm Clief, I'm the brother of Luchist, the one that you killed before" said the boy " Yeah, I remember him, so, what do you want?" asked Ren "Do you really need to ask it, it obvious, I wanted revenge" said Clief, lauhing. "Step back Pirika, you have nothing to do with this" said Ren as Clief walked near Pirika " So, Pirika's your name, beautiful girl" said Clief now holding Pirika's face "Hey! Don't hold her! Get your hands off her!!!!" yelled Ren trying to attack Clief, but Clief madean invisible barrier.
Pirika tried to remove the hand off Clief from her face. But suddenly Clief had kissed Pirika (like the one that the blonde devil did to Elie). "Hey! Stop that! I said stop that!!!!" yelled Ren while knocking on the invisible barrier. Pirika pushed Clief away "What the hell have you done to me, you have no rights to do that, I'll tell this to my brother" said Pirika slapping the face of Clief "No need to fuzz little one, all you have to do is to sleep" said Clief.
Then suddenly Pirika dropped down to the floor. "Well Ren, I think I need to go now, with your girlfriend, of course." Said Clief starting to blur out of site "She's not my girlfriend! She has nothing to do with this" said Ren " Too late Ren, too late" Clief said then he just disappeared. "Pirika! Come back!!!!" yelled Ren.
GF17: and that's the second part, you noticed that I added a character Notice: Shaman king is not mine. GF17: And that's all, watch out for the next chapter, I'm almost finish with it, but you will have to wait. PLs R&R.
"Well, Horo-horo, I think Pirika and I better go before it gets dark" said Ren " Okay, take good care of my sister" said Horo-horo "Don't worry, I will" said Ren ""Goodbye brother" said Pirika " Bye" Horo-horo replied to his sister while he's sweeping the floor. "Horo-horo, I'll go inside the room to do Anna's homework," said Manta " Sure" said Horo-horo while tears are falling down to his cheeks as he sweeps the floor.
At the market place "Um.Let's see, we already have the beef, and the vegetables, wait! I forgotten the tomatoes" said Pirika "You mean we have to go back?" asked Ren in surprise " I'm really sorry, but yes, we have to go back" said Pirika " After walking the long way up to here, we're gonna go back" complained Ren "Yes, we must go back to the vegetable stand Ren" said Pirika.
On they're way back to the vegetable stand, someone has been stalking on them, listing to every word Ren and Pirika would say, finding a right time to attack. Unfortunately Ren didn't sense that the danger is coming.
After all these walking around the market place "At last, they are all complete" said Pirika while checking the list "Are you sure, then let go back home, these baggage are heavy" said Ren while holding 7 plastic bag full of the things they bought at the market "Um.Okay, let's go home" said Pirika. On there way home, they were blocked by a boy.
"Who are you?" asked Ren hiding Pirika at his back ( as if he's trying to protect her) "I'm Clief, I'm the brother of Luchist, the one that you killed before" said the boy " Yeah, I remember him, so, what do you want?" asked Ren "Do you really need to ask it, it obvious, I wanted revenge" said Clief, lauhing. "Step back Pirika, you have nothing to do with this" said Ren as Clief walked near Pirika " So, Pirika's your name, beautiful girl" said Clief now holding Pirika's face "Hey! Don't hold her! Get your hands off her!!!!" yelled Ren trying to attack Clief, but Clief madean invisible barrier.
Pirika tried to remove the hand off Clief from her face. But suddenly Clief had kissed Pirika (like the one that the blonde devil did to Elie). "Hey! Stop that! I said stop that!!!!" yelled Ren while knocking on the invisible barrier. Pirika pushed Clief away "What the hell have you done to me, you have no rights to do that, I'll tell this to my brother" said Pirika slapping the face of Clief "No need to fuzz little one, all you have to do is to sleep" said Clief.
Then suddenly Pirika dropped down to the floor. "Well Ren, I think I need to go now, with your girlfriend, of course." Said Clief starting to blur out of site "She's not my girlfriend! She has nothing to do with this" said Ren " Too late Ren, too late" Clief said then he just disappeared. "Pirika! Come back!!!!" yelled Ren.
GF17: and that's the second part, you noticed that I added a character Notice: Shaman king is not mine. GF17: And that's all, watch out for the next chapter, I'm almost finish with it, but you will have to wait. PLs R&R.