A/N: Wow! I got so many great reviews on my last two poems. Thank you
everyone. I treasure each and every review I get.
One of my treasured reviewers, The Fuzy Llama has suggested I work on
rhythm, which is what I'm working on now. I realize that I haven't mastered it yet
but I hope you guys notice that this poem is rhythmically better than my previous
two, though not as deep.
I haven't figured out how to make something that has both depth and rhythm,
but I'm trying!
I thought that after the last one that I wrote, "My Greatest Fear," I should write
something lighthearted.
Scene: After years of being a total git, Ron has finally decided to express his
feelings to Hermione after she "subtly" asks who he fancies.
-Who I Fancy-
During the game
My eyes were glued
To one person
Can you think of who?
She has lovely brown hair
Brilliant brown eyes
A shimmering smile
That makes me feel alive
Her kindness never ceases
Her knowledge is greater than the ocean
Her beauty amazes me
Could this be a dream?
Or is it reality?
My mind refuses to return
Every time you're near
My heart advises me
To ignore my fears
But today I am ready
To tell you who I love
This girl is an angel
That was sent from above
You ask who can this girl be
That's the first question you've asked
That I can easily answer
The only girl I could fancy
Is definitely you
My dearest Hermione
everyone. I treasure each and every review I get.
One of my treasured reviewers, The Fuzy Llama has suggested I work on
rhythm, which is what I'm working on now. I realize that I haven't mastered it yet
but I hope you guys notice that this poem is rhythmically better than my previous
two, though not as deep.
I haven't figured out how to make something that has both depth and rhythm,
but I'm trying!
I thought that after the last one that I wrote, "My Greatest Fear," I should write
something lighthearted.
Scene: After years of being a total git, Ron has finally decided to express his
feelings to Hermione after she "subtly" asks who he fancies.
-Who I Fancy-
During the game
My eyes were glued
To one person
Can you think of who?
She has lovely brown hair
Brilliant brown eyes
A shimmering smile
That makes me feel alive
Her kindness never ceases
Her knowledge is greater than the ocean
Her beauty amazes me
Could this be a dream?
Or is it reality?
My mind refuses to return
Every time you're near
My heart advises me
To ignore my fears
But today I am ready
To tell you who I love
This girl is an angel
That was sent from above
You ask who can this girl be
That's the first question you've asked
That I can easily answer
The only girl I could fancy
Is definitely you
My dearest Hermione