A/N :: Thanks for more reviews. XD I promised you a long, and suspenseful
chapter. This is really half! But don't worry! The rest is coming soon!
Enjoy!
Disclaimer :: I do not own any of the characters by Lynne Ewing, yet the story is mine since I wrote it but not the series. Please don't copy =)
Planet Bang! – Chapter 3
That night the girls raided Catty's mom's closet. She had the coolest clothes next to Vanessa's mom's wardrobe. Catty's mom's clothes fit all of the girls since she was very slim when she was young. Some of the clothes were too long since Kendra was tall. That night when they went to Planet Bang, Catty was decked out in retro green bell – bottoms, and a white lined with green, sheer halter top, with a slit up the middle to show off her pierced belly. The silver stud glinted. She covered herself with green body glitter and shimmered when she moved. Vanessa wore a blue, strapless dress with blue platforms. Her tanned, bronze skin seemed flawless and she had blue eye shadow on her eyelids all the way up to her eyebrows. Jimena had chosen a shiny low - cut halter showing her midriff, with a short purple blazer. She wore a black, hip – hugging, leather mini showing off her gang tattoos, when she had been in El Nueve. She also wore black boots that reached her knees, which had 3 - inch heels. Her make up include many layers of black mascara and purple eye shadow only on her eyelid. Serena joined them wearing a pink tank - top with a matching cover – up shirt tied above her belly button. She wore tight black pants and slip – on shoes. She bared pale make up with a faint touch of eye shadow and blush. She layered on a pink lip - gloss while she had changed her nose ring to a heart shaped stud. Tianna had an orange dress with spagetti straps, that had a bare back. Her black open-toed shoes made her four inches taller. She painted orange flames up her legs, and wore many necklaces including her moon amulet. Her black hair was combed straight and hung in layers around her face. The goddesses were stunningly beautiful. Even though Jimena was no longer a goddess, she hadn't lost her magic look. The girls stepped out of the house, and they were ready to rock.
~~~~~*~~~~~
Planet Bang was crowded just as it usually was when Michael Saratoga's band played. The line was long, rounding the block. The girls were in line, and Serena didn't want to perform her magic now.
"Stanton! Where are you?" Serena hissed.
"Looking for me?" A deep voice asked as Stanton wrapped his arms around Serena and kissed her on the cheek.
"Stanton, can you get us in?" Catty asked. "Sure."
He lead them to the front and entered the security guards mind.
All of a sudden the guard spoke.
"Welcome back Stanton! Come right in." The guard shook Stanton's hands as if Stanton was an old friend and ushered them in as the people in the line looked on enviously.
"Thanks." Chorused the girls.
The rock music shook the room, as the band played. Michael Saratoga was singing on stage. The girls split up. Serena went with Stanton into the shadows, obviously disguised by Stanton's shape-changing power. Vanessa pushed herself to the front where Michael saw her and flashed her a huge grin with a sparkle in his eye. She went backstage to wait for the band to finish playing. Jimena went to look for Collin, her boyfriend and Serena's brother. Tianna left with Derek on her arm. Catty felt disappointed as she scanned the crowd for her boyfriend, Chris. Chris disappeared a couple of months ago, around when Catty was given the secret scroll. She found out that Chris was the Keeper of the Scroll. His job was to see that the scroll was given to the heir. Well, when Catty and the daughters were fighting against Toby, who was Vanessa's ex-boyfriend. Toby was a regulator. Toby tricked Vanessa into liking him, by going into her dreams and manipulating her memories. He was fighting the goddesses, Serena, Catty, and Jimena, since Tianna was not a daughter yet. Vanessa had been under possession of Toby, therefore did not know what was happening and only listened to him. As they were battling for the scroll, it was dropped in the tunnel and transferred somewhere unknown. Chris was on a mission to find it and would come back as soon as he did. Catty was hoping that Chris would come back to her soon.
'Well I'm going to enjoy the night!' Catty thought.
She started dancing as guys started checking her out. Two cute guys asked her to dance. She smirked and shook her head teasing them. It would be fun to let the guys want her but can't have her. She tantalized all the guys around. She shook her hips until she was all tired out.
~~~~~*~~~~~ The girls met at the entrance and piled up in Vanessa's car. Usually Jimena drove, but tonight Vanessa did so they could go to Catty's house without it being suspicious. Vanessa had just gotten her license and was nervous about driving. She drove cautiously and slowly. The girls chattered away about the night since they all had so much fun.
"Oh my gosh! Can you believe it? Michael dedicated the WHOLE performance to me! TO ME!" Vanessa gushed.
"No, duh! Of course he dedicated it to you. You're his GIRLFRIEND." Serena said.
"Yeah, but usually he dedicates a song, not the whole show! Did you see all those girls crying when he said that?" Vanessa argued.
"Well, Stanton and I had a fun time. We went shadow hopping." Serena said.
"Hmmm...and something else too. Right?" Tianna teased.
Serena blushed and playfully slapped Tianna's shoulder.
"Did you find Collin, Jimena?" Catty asked. "I didn't see him all night."
"Yeah, he just came back from surfing. We drove back to Serena's to drop the stuff off, and came back but it was a little late." Jimena explained.
Vanessa pulled up in front of Jimena's apartment building.
"Thanks for the ride! Call you tomorrow, mi chica's." Jimena waved goodbye.
"Good Night! Call my house!" Catty shouted out the window.
"Si."
The car pulled away and headed to Catty's house.
A/N :: AHHHH! This chapter wasn't that good either, because technically this is only half of what was suppose to be chapter 3. I'm going to put the rest of the chapter as chapter 4 because it makes more sense. It's called "Whispers in the Wind." Hmmm...
Disclaimer :: I do not own any of the characters by Lynne Ewing, yet the story is mine since I wrote it but not the series. Please don't copy =)
Planet Bang! – Chapter 3
That night the girls raided Catty's mom's closet. She had the coolest clothes next to Vanessa's mom's wardrobe. Catty's mom's clothes fit all of the girls since she was very slim when she was young. Some of the clothes were too long since Kendra was tall. That night when they went to Planet Bang, Catty was decked out in retro green bell – bottoms, and a white lined with green, sheer halter top, with a slit up the middle to show off her pierced belly. The silver stud glinted. She covered herself with green body glitter and shimmered when she moved. Vanessa wore a blue, strapless dress with blue platforms. Her tanned, bronze skin seemed flawless and she had blue eye shadow on her eyelids all the way up to her eyebrows. Jimena had chosen a shiny low - cut halter showing her midriff, with a short purple blazer. She wore a black, hip – hugging, leather mini showing off her gang tattoos, when she had been in El Nueve. She also wore black boots that reached her knees, which had 3 - inch heels. Her make up include many layers of black mascara and purple eye shadow only on her eyelid. Serena joined them wearing a pink tank - top with a matching cover – up shirt tied above her belly button. She wore tight black pants and slip – on shoes. She bared pale make up with a faint touch of eye shadow and blush. She layered on a pink lip - gloss while she had changed her nose ring to a heart shaped stud. Tianna had an orange dress with spagetti straps, that had a bare back. Her black open-toed shoes made her four inches taller. She painted orange flames up her legs, and wore many necklaces including her moon amulet. Her black hair was combed straight and hung in layers around her face. The goddesses were stunningly beautiful. Even though Jimena was no longer a goddess, she hadn't lost her magic look. The girls stepped out of the house, and they were ready to rock.
~~~~~*~~~~~
Planet Bang was crowded just as it usually was when Michael Saratoga's band played. The line was long, rounding the block. The girls were in line, and Serena didn't want to perform her magic now.
"Stanton! Where are you?" Serena hissed.
"Looking for me?" A deep voice asked as Stanton wrapped his arms around Serena and kissed her on the cheek.
"Stanton, can you get us in?" Catty asked. "Sure."
He lead them to the front and entered the security guards mind.
All of a sudden the guard spoke.
"Welcome back Stanton! Come right in." The guard shook Stanton's hands as if Stanton was an old friend and ushered them in as the people in the line looked on enviously.
"Thanks." Chorused the girls.
The rock music shook the room, as the band played. Michael Saratoga was singing on stage. The girls split up. Serena went with Stanton into the shadows, obviously disguised by Stanton's shape-changing power. Vanessa pushed herself to the front where Michael saw her and flashed her a huge grin with a sparkle in his eye. She went backstage to wait for the band to finish playing. Jimena went to look for Collin, her boyfriend and Serena's brother. Tianna left with Derek on her arm. Catty felt disappointed as she scanned the crowd for her boyfriend, Chris. Chris disappeared a couple of months ago, around when Catty was given the secret scroll. She found out that Chris was the Keeper of the Scroll. His job was to see that the scroll was given to the heir. Well, when Catty and the daughters were fighting against Toby, who was Vanessa's ex-boyfriend. Toby was a regulator. Toby tricked Vanessa into liking him, by going into her dreams and manipulating her memories. He was fighting the goddesses, Serena, Catty, and Jimena, since Tianna was not a daughter yet. Vanessa had been under possession of Toby, therefore did not know what was happening and only listened to him. As they were battling for the scroll, it was dropped in the tunnel and transferred somewhere unknown. Chris was on a mission to find it and would come back as soon as he did. Catty was hoping that Chris would come back to her soon.
'Well I'm going to enjoy the night!' Catty thought.
She started dancing as guys started checking her out. Two cute guys asked her to dance. She smirked and shook her head teasing them. It would be fun to let the guys want her but can't have her. She tantalized all the guys around. She shook her hips until she was all tired out.
~~~~~*~~~~~ The girls met at the entrance and piled up in Vanessa's car. Usually Jimena drove, but tonight Vanessa did so they could go to Catty's house without it being suspicious. Vanessa had just gotten her license and was nervous about driving. She drove cautiously and slowly. The girls chattered away about the night since they all had so much fun.
"Oh my gosh! Can you believe it? Michael dedicated the WHOLE performance to me! TO ME!" Vanessa gushed.
"No, duh! Of course he dedicated it to you. You're his GIRLFRIEND." Serena said.
"Yeah, but usually he dedicates a song, not the whole show! Did you see all those girls crying when he said that?" Vanessa argued.
"Well, Stanton and I had a fun time. We went shadow hopping." Serena said.
"Hmmm...and something else too. Right?" Tianna teased.
Serena blushed and playfully slapped Tianna's shoulder.
"Did you find Collin, Jimena?" Catty asked. "I didn't see him all night."
"Yeah, he just came back from surfing. We drove back to Serena's to drop the stuff off, and came back but it was a little late." Jimena explained.
Vanessa pulled up in front of Jimena's apartment building.
"Thanks for the ride! Call you tomorrow, mi chica's." Jimena waved goodbye.
"Good Night! Call my house!" Catty shouted out the window.
"Si."
The car pulled away and headed to Catty's house.
A/N :: AHHHH! This chapter wasn't that good either, because technically this is only half of what was suppose to be chapter 3. I'm going to put the rest of the chapter as chapter 4 because it makes more sense. It's called "Whispers in the Wind." Hmmm...