[Well, my other story (if you read it) wasn't really going anywhere so I decided to make a whole new plot. Pretty much a whole new
everything, except for most of the characters. Firstly, let me apologize for any mistakes their may be in the setting, etc. It's supposed to
be set after Chaos; all of the main characters are seniors in high school. And also, I haven't really read many of the SpiderGirl comics,
so a lot of the SpiderGirl background I made up (yes I know the real SpiderGirl's name is May, but the name Rachel is just so much
better). I'm going to be using the dubbed-ish stuff from Sailor Moon. The Japanese stuff
confuses the crap out of me! The outers aren't really gonna be in this because I really don't know much about them, sorry all you Outer
fans! :( ]
[DISCLAIMER: I do not own Spiderman, SpiderGirl, or Sailor Moon.]
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Prologue
"Mom!!! Dad!! James!!! Get out!" A young teenage girl screamed at her loved ones as she watched the house burn. She'd tried
several times to go back in, but the firefighters wouldn't let her.
"There's nothin' you can do kid! Leave the life savin' to us!" Rachel Ann Parker watched helplessly as her once happy home burned to
the ground, taking her loved ones, her father, Peter, her mother, Mary-Jane, and her boyfriend, James Stanton. She'd tried to stop it
from happening, but she was too late. If only she'd seen Zilena coming. If only she'd been faster. If only she hadn't failed. Tears trickled
down her face and she grabbed the fire truck for support. *I could have stopped her, dammit why wasn't I more alert?!*
Rachel was the daughter of the true Spiderman, Peter Parker, and his genes passed on to her, making her SpiderGirl. Normal teen
girl by day, super crime fighter by night. She had history with Vilene. After she'd defeated the Green Goblin for the last time, Vilene had
shown up, causing more trouble and destruction than the Green Goblin ever dared to. Somehow, Vilene had found out Rachel's
identity a week or so ago, and things went downhill from there. First, an attack at school, then in the park with James, and now, now
Vilene had gone too far. She had pushed her luck. Rachel clenched her first as the tears flowed freely now.
They were all watching a TV movie, having a great time. Popcorn, soda, the whole nine yards. Rachel had gone out to the garage to
get some more sodas and then she felt the familiar tingling all over her body. Her spider sense. Still, even with her spider sense, she
had reacted too late. Her living room exploded in a fireball. She heard the cries of her loved ones, and tried so hard to get to them, but
the door was blocked. Despite the immense heat, she pried it open, but just as soon as she had, a fire fighter swooped her up and
took her out of the flames.
"Put me down! There are other people in there!!" She tried to break free of his iron grasp, but it was to no avail. He set her down and
another fire fighter wrapped her tightly in a blanket. She tried again to go into the burning house, but they again held her back.
"Mom!!! Dad!!! James!!! Get out!" Rachel screamed at the top of her lungs, hoping her words somehow got through to them and they
would come out at any second. They didn't. She tried again to break free and get into that house, and again she was held back.
"There's nothin' you can do, kid! Leave the life savin' to us!" She watched helplessly for a couple more minutes, and then the
Unspeakable happened. The flame devoured house collapsed, and there was no sign of her father, mother, or boyfriend anywhere.
Rachel wept bitterly. *Mom, dad, James, I swear on my life I will get that bitch, I will NOT let you die in vain. I swear it.*
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[Well that was the prologue, hope you liked it. The first chapter is a work in progress and I'd like to have it out pretty soon. I'm about ΒΌ
of the way through it, and seeing as I have a mound of homework that's threatening to overthrow the government, I might not be able to
get it out before Spring Break like I planned. But before I put the first chapter out, I'd like to get a couple of reviews to see how you all
like it (or don't like it) so far. Sorry about any uploading problems, I'm new at this! Thanks :)]
everything, except for most of the characters. Firstly, let me apologize for any mistakes their may be in the setting, etc. It's supposed to
be set after Chaos; all of the main characters are seniors in high school. And also, I haven't really read many of the SpiderGirl comics,
so a lot of the SpiderGirl background I made up (yes I know the real SpiderGirl's name is May, but the name Rachel is just so much
better). I'm going to be using the dubbed-ish stuff from Sailor Moon. The Japanese stuff
confuses the crap out of me! The outers aren't really gonna be in this because I really don't know much about them, sorry all you Outer
fans! :( ]
[DISCLAIMER: I do not own Spiderman, SpiderGirl, or Sailor Moon.]
******
Prologue
"Mom!!! Dad!! James!!! Get out!" A young teenage girl screamed at her loved ones as she watched the house burn. She'd tried
several times to go back in, but the firefighters wouldn't let her.
"There's nothin' you can do kid! Leave the life savin' to us!" Rachel Ann Parker watched helplessly as her once happy home burned to
the ground, taking her loved ones, her father, Peter, her mother, Mary-Jane, and her boyfriend, James Stanton. She'd tried to stop it
from happening, but she was too late. If only she'd seen Zilena coming. If only she'd been faster. If only she hadn't failed. Tears trickled
down her face and she grabbed the fire truck for support. *I could have stopped her, dammit why wasn't I more alert?!*
Rachel was the daughter of the true Spiderman, Peter Parker, and his genes passed on to her, making her SpiderGirl. Normal teen
girl by day, super crime fighter by night. She had history with Vilene. After she'd defeated the Green Goblin for the last time, Vilene had
shown up, causing more trouble and destruction than the Green Goblin ever dared to. Somehow, Vilene had found out Rachel's
identity a week or so ago, and things went downhill from there. First, an attack at school, then in the park with James, and now, now
Vilene had gone too far. She had pushed her luck. Rachel clenched her first as the tears flowed freely now.
They were all watching a TV movie, having a great time. Popcorn, soda, the whole nine yards. Rachel had gone out to the garage to
get some more sodas and then she felt the familiar tingling all over her body. Her spider sense. Still, even with her spider sense, she
had reacted too late. Her living room exploded in a fireball. She heard the cries of her loved ones, and tried so hard to get to them, but
the door was blocked. Despite the immense heat, she pried it open, but just as soon as she had, a fire fighter swooped her up and
took her out of the flames.
"Put me down! There are other people in there!!" She tried to break free of his iron grasp, but it was to no avail. He set her down and
another fire fighter wrapped her tightly in a blanket. She tried again to go into the burning house, but they again held her back.
"Mom!!! Dad!!! James!!! Get out!" Rachel screamed at the top of her lungs, hoping her words somehow got through to them and they
would come out at any second. They didn't. She tried again to break free and get into that house, and again she was held back.
"There's nothin' you can do, kid! Leave the life savin' to us!" She watched helplessly for a couple more minutes, and then the
Unspeakable happened. The flame devoured house collapsed, and there was no sign of her father, mother, or boyfriend anywhere.
Rachel wept bitterly. *Mom, dad, James, I swear on my life I will get that bitch, I will NOT let you die in vain. I swear it.*
******
[Well that was the prologue, hope you liked it. The first chapter is a work in progress and I'd like to have it out pretty soon. I'm about ΒΌ
of the way through it, and seeing as I have a mound of homework that's threatening to overthrow the government, I might not be able to
get it out before Spring Break like I planned. But before I put the first chapter out, I'd like to get a couple of reviews to see how you all
like it (or don't like it) so far. Sorry about any uploading problems, I'm new at this! Thanks :)]