Disclaimer: See ch. 1!!
Im not good at this so lets just start the story..... **************************************************************************** ********************
Umi and Hiei arrived at her house. It was a pale yellow with green shutters. Her mother even took the time to keep nice landscaping.
"You must have it nice."said Hiei
"Yeah... well I guess I never really thought about it." said Umi. "Do you think they're alright?"
"Yeah." said Hiei not telling her that he could sense dead corpses and an enormous amount of blood from inside the house.
They slowly walked up the stone walkway and walked inside. They started out in the living room and everything seemed fine but then they walked into the kitchen Umi saw her mother, father, and twin brother lying on the ground covered in blood. Not able to say a word, her eyes were widened just staring at her deceased family.
Umi feel to her knees and started the cry. "No..... NO! WHY!!??" yelled Umi
Hiei just stared at her not knowing what to say to her. He walked over her to her and knelt down beside her. "It'll be fine..." he said
"How could you be so sure? WHAT DO YOU KNOW ANYWAY!?" she cried.
Only still a child he, only felt compassion for her. She being the only one ever nice to him. **************************************************************************** ******************** Me: *sigh* I'm suffering from writers block! GRRRR...... I is sooo stuck.... Ne wayz.. I HATE writing such short chapters! So instead I'll con't. on this chapter but its 5 years later and just incase you weren't paying attention or you suck at math Hiei and Umi are both 12.)
Hiei: I don't like you......
Me: *whines* Why not??
Hiei: You're making me go soft.......
Me: ^_^ You're better this way! If only you could stay a child forever.... *sigh* I think next chapter you'll run into someone who-
Hiei: OOO! Who!?
Me:-_- I woulda told ya but ya cut me off...
Hiei: Hn.
Me: ^_^ you'll just have to wait...
Hiei: Who is it!? Tell me!
Me: NO!
Hiei: YES!
ME:NO!
Kurama: No wat?
Me: umm..... nothin.....
Hiei: OO! OO! Is it Kurama??!
Me: *looks around* no.... of course not....
Kurama: *sigh* just review..... (no flames)
Im not good at this so lets just start the story..... **************************************************************************** ********************
Umi and Hiei arrived at her house. It was a pale yellow with green shutters. Her mother even took the time to keep nice landscaping.
"You must have it nice."said Hiei
"Yeah... well I guess I never really thought about it." said Umi. "Do you think they're alright?"
"Yeah." said Hiei not telling her that he could sense dead corpses and an enormous amount of blood from inside the house.
They slowly walked up the stone walkway and walked inside. They started out in the living room and everything seemed fine but then they walked into the kitchen Umi saw her mother, father, and twin brother lying on the ground covered in blood. Not able to say a word, her eyes were widened just staring at her deceased family.
Umi feel to her knees and started the cry. "No..... NO! WHY!!??" yelled Umi
Hiei just stared at her not knowing what to say to her. He walked over her to her and knelt down beside her. "It'll be fine..." he said
"How could you be so sure? WHAT DO YOU KNOW ANYWAY!?" she cried.
Only still a child he, only felt compassion for her. She being the only one ever nice to him. **************************************************************************** ******************** Me: *sigh* I'm suffering from writers block! GRRRR...... I is sooo stuck.... Ne wayz.. I HATE writing such short chapters! So instead I'll con't. on this chapter but its 5 years later and just incase you weren't paying attention or you suck at math Hiei and Umi are both 12.)
Hiei: I don't like you......
Me: *whines* Why not??
Hiei: You're making me go soft.......
Me: ^_^ You're better this way! If only you could stay a child forever.... *sigh* I think next chapter you'll run into someone who-
Hiei: OOO! Who!?
Me:-_- I woulda told ya but ya cut me off...
Hiei: Hn.
Me: ^_^ you'll just have to wait...
Hiei: Who is it!? Tell me!
Me: NO!
Hiei: YES!
ME:NO!
Kurama: No wat?
Me: umm..... nothin.....
Hiei: OO! OO! Is it Kurama??!
Me: *looks around* no.... of course not....
Kurama: *sigh* just review..... (no flames)