I do not own Pitch Black or any of the characters.
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This takes place after Pitch Black. I'm open to criticism and reviews please.
Silver and Cold
Prologue:
It had been a year after that crash on the cursed planet. Riddick, Jack, and Imam had made it to safety with only a few incidents. Imam had gone to New Mecca where he had originally planned to go and this left Jack and Riddick on their own. They had told their story that Riddick had died on the planet, but they only believed it for so long. Soon enough the Merc's were on their tails.
Present time:
The sound of people running echoed through the streets of the warehouse district. It was a group of five maybe even six people. You could easily pick out their leader, a Merc, all decked out in the lasted equipment. He had hired a group of thugs to help him on his assignment. Considering who he was going up against he could use them. They had received and anonymous tip of where they could find Richard B. Riddick and another of their wanted criminals. The only question was who could the other be?
The constant hum of a computer could be heard throughout the room along with the tapping of keys. The dull blue light emanated from the screen lighting the poorly lit area. A figure paced back and fourth behind whoever was working.
"How much longer is this going to take?" Said a strong voice.
There was no reply from the body. The monotonous sound of the tapping had stopped as an image flashed across the screen. Video footage from a security camera outside had caught the image of intruders.
"Riddick they're here!" Said a young voice, it was female by the tone.
"You know the plan Kid." He said as he took off out of the room.
((Authors Note: I'm hoping you all could tell that it's Jack and Riddick.))
Jack quickly got up disconnecting the computer as she exited into what they called their living room. Her eyes darted back and fourth looking for the silver eyes that pierced the darkness. She found none and now the sound of the footsteps was getting closer. All she could do was hiding until she found a way to escape.
Outside the group had arrived at their destination. The one in charge had stepped forward. He was a tough looking man you could tell he had been through a lot in his lifetime. His hair was black with bits of gray peaking through. A pair of goggles rested on his head. Armed with a gun he waited for the rest to catch up before he gave the final orders. Unaware that their targets inside knew they were there.
"Okay men, we go about this quietly and carefully. They are worth more alive than dead, but if it comes to where you are in danger, kill them." He said calmly before putting on his goggles.
The Merc and two of the thugs disappeared to the back of the building. Taking it slowly he made his way to the back entrance. His hand reached for the knob turning it slowly. He motioned for his crew to go in first. If Riddick was waiting he wouldn't be the one to be killed. They made their way through the dark in silence. Weapons drawn and eyes open they watched for signs of life. Thin beams of light made there way onto objects searching for a target.
"Come out now and we won't be so hard on you." He said falsely
Jack flattened herself up against the back of their ratty old couch. The voice was getting closer and so were the lights. The only thing that went through her mind was,
*Where are you Riddick* She thought to herself.
This takes place after Pitch Black. I'm open to criticism and reviews please.
Silver and Cold
Prologue:
It had been a year after that crash on the cursed planet. Riddick, Jack, and Imam had made it to safety with only a few incidents. Imam had gone to New Mecca where he had originally planned to go and this left Jack and Riddick on their own. They had told their story that Riddick had died on the planet, but they only believed it for so long. Soon enough the Merc's were on their tails.
Present time:
The sound of people running echoed through the streets of the warehouse district. It was a group of five maybe even six people. You could easily pick out their leader, a Merc, all decked out in the lasted equipment. He had hired a group of thugs to help him on his assignment. Considering who he was going up against he could use them. They had received and anonymous tip of where they could find Richard B. Riddick and another of their wanted criminals. The only question was who could the other be?
The constant hum of a computer could be heard throughout the room along with the tapping of keys. The dull blue light emanated from the screen lighting the poorly lit area. A figure paced back and fourth behind whoever was working.
"How much longer is this going to take?" Said a strong voice.
There was no reply from the body. The monotonous sound of the tapping had stopped as an image flashed across the screen. Video footage from a security camera outside had caught the image of intruders.
"Riddick they're here!" Said a young voice, it was female by the tone.
"You know the plan Kid." He said as he took off out of the room.
((Authors Note: I'm hoping you all could tell that it's Jack and Riddick.))
Jack quickly got up disconnecting the computer as she exited into what they called their living room. Her eyes darted back and fourth looking for the silver eyes that pierced the darkness. She found none and now the sound of the footsteps was getting closer. All she could do was hiding until she found a way to escape.
Outside the group had arrived at their destination. The one in charge had stepped forward. He was a tough looking man you could tell he had been through a lot in his lifetime. His hair was black with bits of gray peaking through. A pair of goggles rested on his head. Armed with a gun he waited for the rest to catch up before he gave the final orders. Unaware that their targets inside knew they were there.
"Okay men, we go about this quietly and carefully. They are worth more alive than dead, but if it comes to where you are in danger, kill them." He said calmly before putting on his goggles.
The Merc and two of the thugs disappeared to the back of the building. Taking it slowly he made his way to the back entrance. His hand reached for the knob turning it slowly. He motioned for his crew to go in first. If Riddick was waiting he wouldn't be the one to be killed. They made their way through the dark in silence. Weapons drawn and eyes open they watched for signs of life. Thin beams of light made there way onto objects searching for a target.
"Come out now and we won't be so hard on you." He said falsely
Jack flattened herself up against the back of their ratty old couch. The voice was getting closer and so were the lights. The only thing that went through her mind was,
*Where are you Riddick* She thought to herself.