Sock:Third Chappie! Plz plz plz plz review!
J.D.:They wont review cuz the story sucks!
Ishma:I wont like you anymore if you keep bieng mean to sock.
J.D.:Fine ill be nice
Sock:Well then jd do the discliamer.
J.D.:Fine,....Sock does not own any thing.
Sock:Inclueding the attack Dragon slave
~~~~Chapter 3~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Elios an Shikaku looked over at Zack.Raven took a chance of them not noticing her.She had a plan to srprise them.Using her fire powers she burned the ropes off.Using the side of her hand she hit Elios in the back of the neck.Knocking him out.She quickly grabbed her sword,she sheathed her sword and smirked.
"Shikaku.,...If you want to live I suggest you leave,....now,......Because now I know how to kill you...I have an attack stronge enough."
"What attack might that be my dear?"
"Well I tell you this much,..it is said that none has ever mastered it,...but I have,..."
Zack stared at the floor thinking the whispered lound enough so that they could hear.
"Dragon slave........"
Raven had continuously trained non stop for days.
"THATS IMMPOSSIBLE!" shikaku yelled "NO ONE HAS EVER MASTERED IT AND NO ONE EVER WILL EXCEPT ME!"
Raven smirked. "Boy you really think your something dont you?"
Shikaku growled.He then disappeared.Raven went and sat one her bed and Zack picked up the swords and layed them on the table and left the room.
"can we go in now?"Kuwabara asked
"well I dont see why not" Yusuke said oping the window and pushing kuwabara an himself in before kurama or hiei could say anything.
Kuabara ran up to the surprised girl and grabbed her hands.
"Hey there pretty lady Im Kazuma Kuwaba----"
Before he could finish she threw him across the room.
Hiei and Kurama had entered the room just in time to see kuwabara go flying.And Hiei smirked.
"Im very sorry about that miss,...My name is Kurama,..."
"Im yusuke and the nut you just threw over there is kuwabara."
Raven looked over at the short boy who hadnt been indroduced yet.Kurama elbowed him.
"Hn.Hiei."
"Well" Raven said standing up "Who gav you permission to enter my house?"
"Whoa your alot taller on tv...." Yusuke said
Raven hit him over the head with her fist temporailly knocking him out.
"well,...nobody but we're here for an important reason"
"and what would that be?" she said looking up at Hiei waiting for a responce.
Hiei was a few inches taller than her which made her fell really short.
"Well Koenma has sent us here to protect you and the other protectors of the other gems."
"Oh I see well I dont need you to protecct me."
"Just because you mastered an attack that noone else ever has doesnt mean that you can beat him baka onna."
"Well I wasnt thinking that.,I was thinking that i dont need your protection because I've beatin this goon before,..."
"Well,...we have orders to protect you and if you wont let us do that then you can atleast let us help you"
"Fine whatever but you guys better not get in the way.Ill call over my group.each of us have a gem."
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Sock:was that two short? to cheesy? anything wronge? plz review.
J.D.:They wont review cuz the story sucks!
Ishma:I wont like you anymore if you keep bieng mean to sock.
J.D.:Fine ill be nice
Sock:Well then jd do the discliamer.
J.D.:Fine,....Sock does not own any thing.
Sock:Inclueding the attack Dragon slave
~~~~Chapter 3~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Elios an Shikaku looked over at Zack.Raven took a chance of them not noticing her.She had a plan to srprise them.Using her fire powers she burned the ropes off.Using the side of her hand she hit Elios in the back of the neck.Knocking him out.She quickly grabbed her sword,she sheathed her sword and smirked.
"Shikaku.,...If you want to live I suggest you leave,....now,......Because now I know how to kill you...I have an attack stronge enough."
"What attack might that be my dear?"
"Well I tell you this much,..it is said that none has ever mastered it,...but I have,..."
Zack stared at the floor thinking the whispered lound enough so that they could hear.
"Dragon slave........"
Raven had continuously trained non stop for days.
"THATS IMMPOSSIBLE!" shikaku yelled "NO ONE HAS EVER MASTERED IT AND NO ONE EVER WILL EXCEPT ME!"
Raven smirked. "Boy you really think your something dont you?"
Shikaku growled.He then disappeared.Raven went and sat one her bed and Zack picked up the swords and layed them on the table and left the room.
"can we go in now?"Kuwabara asked
"well I dont see why not" Yusuke said oping the window and pushing kuwabara an himself in before kurama or hiei could say anything.
Kuabara ran up to the surprised girl and grabbed her hands.
"Hey there pretty lady Im Kazuma Kuwaba----"
Before he could finish she threw him across the room.
Hiei and Kurama had entered the room just in time to see kuwabara go flying.And Hiei smirked.
"Im very sorry about that miss,...My name is Kurama,..."
"Im yusuke and the nut you just threw over there is kuwabara."
Raven looked over at the short boy who hadnt been indroduced yet.Kurama elbowed him.
"Hn.Hiei."
"Well" Raven said standing up "Who gav you permission to enter my house?"
"Whoa your alot taller on tv...." Yusuke said
Raven hit him over the head with her fist temporailly knocking him out.
"well,...nobody but we're here for an important reason"
"and what would that be?" she said looking up at Hiei waiting for a responce.
Hiei was a few inches taller than her which made her fell really short.
"Well Koenma has sent us here to protect you and the other protectors of the other gems."
"Oh I see well I dont need you to protecct me."
"Just because you mastered an attack that noone else ever has doesnt mean that you can beat him baka onna."
"Well I wasnt thinking that.,I was thinking that i dont need your protection because I've beatin this goon before,..."
"Well,...we have orders to protect you and if you wont let us do that then you can atleast let us help you"
"Fine whatever but you guys better not get in the way.Ill call over my group.each of us have a gem."
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Sock:was that two short? to cheesy? anything wronge? plz review.