Chapter 1
Lily lay on her back by the large oak in the grounds and looked up at the stars and saw the moon peeking out behind the clouds. A half moon. She then just cried silently for a few minuets then said to her self: 'God Lily would you just get over your self. Its your own fault this has happened and the rest of its your fault.... Every one always hated you always will ... Your just a bookworm that no one likes.... Stop feeling sorry for yourself... you killed your parents' Lily looked for a way out and the only one she could find was suicide. She wrote a note and left it by her favourite place in the grounds the old oak tree. And left for the astronomy tower.
In the Gryffindor dormitories two people sat very upset. James Potter was upset because he really liked this girl and she had rejected him but he had changed for her done every thing he could possibly and still she ignored him. He didn't know what to do so he decided to go for a walk top his favourite place the old oak tree. He searched for his most prized possessions his invisibility cloak and his map of Hogwarts.
The other person was Katie Bross. She had just had an argument with her best friend Lily and had told Lily to change her outfit because she looked like a bookworm and that's why she hadn't got many friends. Lily had received a owl and ran out screaming "You bitch, I hate you, how could you do this to me?" So Katie said "I hate you so much never talk to me again. Every one always hated you always will ... Your just a bookworm that no one likes!" She didn't mean it of course. She loved Lily like a sister but was upset about her friend and her crush Sirius Black.
Lily's Dad was a master at the martial arts he had brought her a knife with a wavy blade and Lily carved into it with a small flower that resembled a lily. Lily decided to cut her wrists with this knife then jump all the way down to the Quidditch pitch. She looked for her knife and couldn't find it. The wind howled all around the trees and in the bushes. She looked on the roof where she was standing "Lomos" the light came on and she saw nothing her knife was not there.
Meanwhile James had found his map. No one was by the tree so he went there, sat on something uncomfortable, and reached for it. It was Lily's knife, he had seen it once when they were stuck on the train in a dark corridor with Lily and she thought there was a rat behind her. He then herd a faint cry of "Accio knife" 'Lily's voice' he thought 'and it sounds like it is coming from way above and why would she want a knife. He drew out the map and scanned the towers for Lily, he spotted the tiny-labelled figure bearing the label 'Lily Evans' on the astronomy tower he muttered "envalopo" and the figure grew and he saw she was slitting her wrists. He screamed "accio broom" and grabbed it and flew tower all the time his eyes darting from the map to the place ahead. He saw her jump and sped the broom towards her. He caught her just before she hit the ground and she was losing a lot of blood. He ran to the hospital wing "Lily don't be dead. Please don't be dead. I love you," He got to the hospital and Madame Pompfey Healed her cuts. He didn't really want to stay because Lily was obviously going to kill herself and he had prevented that. And he had told her that he loved her. Madame Pompfey told James to take Lily to her dorm and stay with her till she woke and make sure she was ok.
He carried her to bed lay her down and put the covers over her. She stirred and opened her beautiful green eyes. "James" she said softly "What happened? Why are you here?"
He explained and she was really pale and shocked at the end of his story. And she was not cold back to him. "Why Lily? Why did you try to kill your self?" "My best mate Katie and me had an argument over what I was wearing. And I said something because of a letter I got ... and screamed something then she sad she hated me and I ran out of the room and thought it was the only way out because no one likes me." "I like you Lily," he said and then mumbled "I love you" "What did you just say?" she questioned "Nothing" he said scared "I should go now" "No stay James you can sleep here its a double bed. Just don't try anything!" "Yes Ma'am" and Stripped to his boxers and got into her bed. "Night Lilykins" "Not Lilykins, Lily! Night James" and he leaned over and hugged her and she fell asleep in his arms. He sat and watched her for a while. Her perfect hair a deep auburn colour and her perfect skin and her two eyes now hidden but big almond shaped green eyes. And the way her chest moved closer to his with every breath. And he fell asleep with is hand on her back covering her protectively.
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How was DAT for a first chappie should I write more or should I leave it?
I own nothing apart from Katie. Who I'm basing on my best m8
Meg
Lily lay on her back by the large oak in the grounds and looked up at the stars and saw the moon peeking out behind the clouds. A half moon. She then just cried silently for a few minuets then said to her self: 'God Lily would you just get over your self. Its your own fault this has happened and the rest of its your fault.... Every one always hated you always will ... Your just a bookworm that no one likes.... Stop feeling sorry for yourself... you killed your parents' Lily looked for a way out and the only one she could find was suicide. She wrote a note and left it by her favourite place in the grounds the old oak tree. And left for the astronomy tower.
In the Gryffindor dormitories two people sat very upset. James Potter was upset because he really liked this girl and she had rejected him but he had changed for her done every thing he could possibly and still she ignored him. He didn't know what to do so he decided to go for a walk top his favourite place the old oak tree. He searched for his most prized possessions his invisibility cloak and his map of Hogwarts.
The other person was Katie Bross. She had just had an argument with her best friend Lily and had told Lily to change her outfit because she looked like a bookworm and that's why she hadn't got many friends. Lily had received a owl and ran out screaming "You bitch, I hate you, how could you do this to me?" So Katie said "I hate you so much never talk to me again. Every one always hated you always will ... Your just a bookworm that no one likes!" She didn't mean it of course. She loved Lily like a sister but was upset about her friend and her crush Sirius Black.
Lily's Dad was a master at the martial arts he had brought her a knife with a wavy blade and Lily carved into it with a small flower that resembled a lily. Lily decided to cut her wrists with this knife then jump all the way down to the Quidditch pitch. She looked for her knife and couldn't find it. The wind howled all around the trees and in the bushes. She looked on the roof where she was standing "Lomos" the light came on and she saw nothing her knife was not there.
Meanwhile James had found his map. No one was by the tree so he went there, sat on something uncomfortable, and reached for it. It was Lily's knife, he had seen it once when they were stuck on the train in a dark corridor with Lily and she thought there was a rat behind her. He then herd a faint cry of "Accio knife" 'Lily's voice' he thought 'and it sounds like it is coming from way above and why would she want a knife. He drew out the map and scanned the towers for Lily, he spotted the tiny-labelled figure bearing the label 'Lily Evans' on the astronomy tower he muttered "envalopo" and the figure grew and he saw she was slitting her wrists. He screamed "accio broom" and grabbed it and flew tower all the time his eyes darting from the map to the place ahead. He saw her jump and sped the broom towards her. He caught her just before she hit the ground and she was losing a lot of blood. He ran to the hospital wing "Lily don't be dead. Please don't be dead. I love you," He got to the hospital and Madame Pompfey Healed her cuts. He didn't really want to stay because Lily was obviously going to kill herself and he had prevented that. And he had told her that he loved her. Madame Pompfey told James to take Lily to her dorm and stay with her till she woke and make sure she was ok.
He carried her to bed lay her down and put the covers over her. She stirred and opened her beautiful green eyes. "James" she said softly "What happened? Why are you here?"
He explained and she was really pale and shocked at the end of his story. And she was not cold back to him. "Why Lily? Why did you try to kill your self?" "My best mate Katie and me had an argument over what I was wearing. And I said something because of a letter I got ... and screamed something then she sad she hated me and I ran out of the room and thought it was the only way out because no one likes me." "I like you Lily," he said and then mumbled "I love you" "What did you just say?" she questioned "Nothing" he said scared "I should go now" "No stay James you can sleep here its a double bed. Just don't try anything!" "Yes Ma'am" and Stripped to his boxers and got into her bed. "Night Lilykins" "Not Lilykins, Lily! Night James" and he leaned over and hugged her and she fell asleep in his arms. He sat and watched her for a while. Her perfect hair a deep auburn colour and her perfect skin and her two eyes now hidden but big almond shaped green eyes. And the way her chest moved closer to his with every breath. And he fell asleep with is hand on her back covering her protectively.
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How was DAT for a first chappie should I write more or should I leave it?
I own nothing apart from Katie. Who I'm basing on my best m8
Meg