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Chapter 8
Lily sat at the great hall eating breakfast. It was Valentines Day and every one had some one. Even James was sitting with Charlotte. Lily felt a pang of jealousy, he was hers yea emphasis on the was. She looked at her best friends Hayley and Katie they both were also looking longingly at the Marauders.
Then an owl swept down onto her plate leaving a box of chocolates and a card. She opened the card and read:
"Roses are red violets are blue You don't know it but I still love you."
As soon as she opened it, it began singing her favourite muggle song. You are So Beautiful by Joe Cocker
"You are so beautiful to me
You are so beautiful to me
Can't you see
You're everythin' I hope for
You're everythin' I need
You are so beautiful to me
You are so beautiful to me
You are so beautiful to me
Can't you see
You're everythin' I hope for
Everythin' I need
You are so beautiful to me"
Katie sat watching Lily and when Lily opened her card she looked at Sirius, she wished she could tell him how she felt but she was with Michel. She found a note in her breakfast, "Was it from Sirius? Not likely."
"Katie, follow the roses and you will find your hearts true desire."
She looked at the floor and saw a trail of roses leading out of the hall. She got up followed them and as she did someone left the table to follow her. Little did she know she had left the note on the table and maybe her friendship would suffer for this
Hayley, who had picked up the note when Katie had dropped it, and had watched her walk out of the hall, felt jealous both her friends had got something for Valentines Day. Then she found a small flower hair clip with a note attached, by her plate. She read it and ran out of the room.
Hi how r u? Is this ok? Review, review, review!!!!!!!!!!
And to my favourite person Allie for being my reviewer through out and to YouDontKnowWhoIAm thank you for your review any one else thinks I should stop writing this story o and if I am dumb please tell me.
I don't own ANY of the original Harry potter things or the song.
Chapter 8
Lily sat at the great hall eating breakfast. It was Valentines Day and every one had some one. Even James was sitting with Charlotte. Lily felt a pang of jealousy, he was hers yea emphasis on the was. She looked at her best friends Hayley and Katie they both were also looking longingly at the Marauders.
Then an owl swept down onto her plate leaving a box of chocolates and a card. She opened the card and read:
"Roses are red violets are blue You don't know it but I still love you."
As soon as she opened it, it began singing her favourite muggle song. You are So Beautiful by Joe Cocker
"You are so beautiful to me
You are so beautiful to me
Can't you see
You're everythin' I hope for
You're everythin' I need
You are so beautiful to me
You are so beautiful to me
You are so beautiful to me
Can't you see
You're everythin' I hope for
Everythin' I need
You are so beautiful to me"
Katie sat watching Lily and when Lily opened her card she looked at Sirius, she wished she could tell him how she felt but she was with Michel. She found a note in her breakfast, "Was it from Sirius? Not likely."
"Katie, follow the roses and you will find your hearts true desire."
She looked at the floor and saw a trail of roses leading out of the hall. She got up followed them and as she did someone left the table to follow her. Little did she know she had left the note on the table and maybe her friendship would suffer for this
Hayley, who had picked up the note when Katie had dropped it, and had watched her walk out of the hall, felt jealous both her friends had got something for Valentines Day. Then she found a small flower hair clip with a note attached, by her plate. She read it and ran out of the room.
Hi how r u? Is this ok? Review, review, review!!!!!!!!!!
And to my favourite person Allie for being my reviewer through out and to YouDontKnowWhoIAm thank you for your review any one else thinks I should stop writing this story o and if I am dumb please tell me.
I don't own ANY of the original Harry potter things or the song.