Thank you for reviewing spookymulder1!! It's nice to know somebody's
reading my stuff and I really appreciate the advice!
(Thanks for not criticizing!) I'll try following your advice
As an answer to you're question about the characters they have sort of
changed, I'm not
Quite sure how but they did,
Ps: did I spell Ashitika's name correctly in this chapter? Let me know!
On with the next chapter.
~*~
San entered Tatabara alone on the back of a wolf, despite her silent awe
she maintained a bored uninterested expression on her face " not going to
let them think their flimsy city impresses me" she thought, she looked
around, there were many tall buildings and friendly looking people walking
around and the sound of laughter, jest and conversing amongst the people
could be heard.
Eventually she came to a big castle in which a women came rushing out
followed by 5 servants and a young boy who looked about her age, San looked
back at the woman who she recognized at once as the woman who had killed
many of the wolves in battle, including her adopted father, this woman had
caused San much grief, and in all her beauty, in San's eyes, Master Eboshi-
sama was nothing short of a blood stained murderer.
" You must be princess San!" she said happily smiling warmly " I'm queen
Eboshi and this is my son Ashitika" she said yanking the boy forward, there
was a tense moment in which the two regarded each other,
" This is my future husband?" San thought, " I could take him down easily,
humph"
She could tell that this "prince" was probably thinking along the same
lines she was, and his mother was ranting on happily about peace and
wedding plans, neither of the children were listening " come in! I'll get
the servants to make you both something nice to eat"
With that "master Eboshi-sama" went running back indoor, the 5 servants
following her suit, San and Ashitika slowly followed.
Ashitika glanced at the girl walking beside him, she looked at him and
glared violently, he glared back just as badly.
~*~
Queen Eboshi, stopped, sensing trouble she ran into the garden where San
and Ashitika had been, Queen Eboshi had sent them out hoping they would get
to know each other better, and there they were, having a sword fight,
princess San of course not having a sword was using her knife which was
proving itself quite useful, queen Eboshi watched in silenced horror as the
two tried to slice the other in half,
" THIS CITY IS NOTHING BUT A PILE OF OLD RUINS RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF OUR
FOREST AND MUST BE DESTROYED!!!" San yelled as she thrashed her knife at
Ashitika who managed to just evade it,
" IF IT HAD BEEN UP TO ME I WOULD HAVE BURNED YOUR FOREST TO THE GROUND!"
Ashitika replied as he tried to slice San's head off, she managed to dodge
it,
" YOU"R ALL NOTHING BUT A BUNCH OF MURDERERS!"
Some servants came running out to restrain the two of them and had they
been any weaker they would not have succeeded,
Queen Eboshi came running over as quickly as possible, " how did this
happen?" she asked, extremely shocked, but neither of the children took any
heed to her,
"MONSTER!!"
"BARBARIAN!!"
"MINDLESS KILLER!!"
" HEARTLESS BEAST!!"
Queen Eboshi sighed in frustration and went inside leaving the problem for
the servants to handle,
This was going to be a lot harder then she had thought it would be.
~*~
I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Sorry it took a while to do but I got sisters who constantly want the
computer and we only got one with Internet!!
Please review!!
Cheers!
reading my stuff and I really appreciate the advice!
(Thanks for not criticizing!) I'll try following your advice
As an answer to you're question about the characters they have sort of
changed, I'm not
Quite sure how but they did,
Ps: did I spell Ashitika's name correctly in this chapter? Let me know!
On with the next chapter.
~*~
San entered Tatabara alone on the back of a wolf, despite her silent awe
she maintained a bored uninterested expression on her face " not going to
let them think their flimsy city impresses me" she thought, she looked
around, there were many tall buildings and friendly looking people walking
around and the sound of laughter, jest and conversing amongst the people
could be heard.
Eventually she came to a big castle in which a women came rushing out
followed by 5 servants and a young boy who looked about her age, San looked
back at the woman who she recognized at once as the woman who had killed
many of the wolves in battle, including her adopted father, this woman had
caused San much grief, and in all her beauty, in San's eyes, Master Eboshi-
sama was nothing short of a blood stained murderer.
" You must be princess San!" she said happily smiling warmly " I'm queen
Eboshi and this is my son Ashitika" she said yanking the boy forward, there
was a tense moment in which the two regarded each other,
" This is my future husband?" San thought, " I could take him down easily,
humph"
She could tell that this "prince" was probably thinking along the same
lines she was, and his mother was ranting on happily about peace and
wedding plans, neither of the children were listening " come in! I'll get
the servants to make you both something nice to eat"
With that "master Eboshi-sama" went running back indoor, the 5 servants
following her suit, San and Ashitika slowly followed.
Ashitika glanced at the girl walking beside him, she looked at him and
glared violently, he glared back just as badly.
~*~
Queen Eboshi, stopped, sensing trouble she ran into the garden where San
and Ashitika had been, Queen Eboshi had sent them out hoping they would get
to know each other better, and there they were, having a sword fight,
princess San of course not having a sword was using her knife which was
proving itself quite useful, queen Eboshi watched in silenced horror as the
two tried to slice the other in half,
" THIS CITY IS NOTHING BUT A PILE OF OLD RUINS RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF OUR
FOREST AND MUST BE DESTROYED!!!" San yelled as she thrashed her knife at
Ashitika who managed to just evade it,
" IF IT HAD BEEN UP TO ME I WOULD HAVE BURNED YOUR FOREST TO THE GROUND!"
Ashitika replied as he tried to slice San's head off, she managed to dodge
it,
" YOU"R ALL NOTHING BUT A BUNCH OF MURDERERS!"
Some servants came running out to restrain the two of them and had they
been any weaker they would not have succeeded,
Queen Eboshi came running over as quickly as possible, " how did this
happen?" she asked, extremely shocked, but neither of the children took any
heed to her,
"MONSTER!!"
"BARBARIAN!!"
"MINDLESS KILLER!!"
" HEARTLESS BEAST!!"
Queen Eboshi sighed in frustration and went inside leaving the problem for
the servants to handle,
This was going to be a lot harder then she had thought it would be.
~*~
I hope you enjoyed this chapter!
Sorry it took a while to do but I got sisters who constantly want the
computer and we only got one with Internet!!
Please review!!
Cheers!