YES!!! I'M FINALLY BACK ONLINE!!! WHOOPEEE!!!! AH THE BLISS, AH THE
WONDERFULL F***KING BLISS!!!
Being offline was a total bomb! my stupid computer wouldn't let me go online and it was in danger of crashing which sucks.
Sorry it took me a while to get this up but at least the time gave me ideas for the chapter ^_^
For Every Now And Then, that question you asked about why the last chapter was called Pierre, well it's a bit of a clue on who Daniel really is......................crap I just revealed -_-; oh well. If you don't know WHO Pierre is then check in chapter seven in the book it says somewhere in I think page 57 or something about Jonas being skipped to number twenty, Pierre.
^_^ thank you evolutionary spider!! You're a great reviewer!!! ;_; and I'm reading your fic right now!
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Losing The Grip of The Rules
They broke the kiss almost too quickly. Benjamin blushed brightly but Daniel smiled softly.
"Uh, let's get back to the others," said the flustered Benjamin.
They walked out of the store but already met up with the others who were on there way to the store.
"What is this place?" asked Fiona.
"A music store," answered Jonas.
"You mean they sell that awful noise?"
"Yes and it's not awful."
"Well then let's see it."
They walked back inside the store, the group looked around in amazement, the beat, the rhythm, everything was so new to them.
There was the sound of a whistle then a crash, there was silence.
"They're firing," frowned Daniel as he looked out the window.
"That's kind of mean," said Asher as he fell from the next crash.
"Who are they?" asked Aurora.
"Who else can they be? They're the community."
"I'm going out there," said Stewart, his hands were electrifying as he made his way to the door.
"Hold on there," Daniel blocked his path, "the defense army will drive them away, you can help after they're gone, you know, restore power and stuff."
Stewart frowned but stayed.
"How long will this take?" asked Lily looking out the window.
"I don't know. The defense army usually-oh! There they go."
Everyone looked out the window and saw about twenty people fly up to the jets in the sky, they used their own powers and blasted them away from Elsewhere, the defense army left as fast as they came.
"Wow, this place is definitely the safest place ever," said Phillipa.
"Well this IS Elsewhere," said Daniel pretending to sound rich.
The doctor from the Power Determination building ran in. "There you are, you left so fast I didn't tell you how you were going to meet your birthmothers."
Jonas's heart leaped. "Well?"
"I already called them, you're meeting them tomorrow."
"Are they good people?" asked Tom.
"Of course, they're part of the defense army."
Even though he wasn't looking at him, Jonas could tell that Asher's jaw had dropped. He smiled to himself.
"Hello Dr. Bann, what are you doing?"
Jonas turned and faced a young woman in her twenties, wavy brown hair and bright blue eyes.
"Oh, Rosemary, great, you have a big house, do you think you can let these guys sleep over until tomorrow?" asked the doctor.
"Of course, they're the new runaways right?"
"Yep," piped Gabriel.
"I was wondering when they'd come," there was a pause as Rosemary looked at everyone, it was then that she seemed to have realized something.
"I know you," said Jonas suddenly, "you're the giver's daughter."
"Yep, after I was released they didn't turn me back to a baby, that usually happens to the released elders, so I'm living the rest of my life with my memory of the community."
"Oh," Jonas was a little lost.
"Something wrong? Do we smell or something?" asked Asher when he saw Rosemary's puzzled look.
"Sort of, where's Katharine?"
"She didn't want to come," answered Lily.
"That's not very good."
"Why?"
"Something tells me it's not good. She should have come."
* * *
Katharine knew she was to be the Receiver of Memories, but now she didn't know what to become.
After the RTR ran away from the community everything crashed, the memories that Jonas had were released into the community. Now they were at war with Elsewhere because they were different and didn't have orderly laws.
At first Katharine thought the war was a good idea but after seeing the memories of war she was fearful of both sides. Her parents were a part of the army, they barely talked to her and when they did it would be about how she should just keep aside if Elsewhere attacks. But they never did and she had a new opinion on that world.
If a group of children ran away from the community to Elsewhere, then there must be a reason why Elsewhere seemed so great.
Her schooling wasn't going well. She could never stop thinking about the childrens escape.
It wasn't long until she found out something strange about herself, two things actually.
She could hear things from far away, even her parents whispers two rooms away. She also found herself floating for a second over her bed when she woke up.
Now she could hear her parent's footsteps coming closer to her room. They sounded angry, she could hear angry grumbling.
"Katharine?" said her fathers voice, firm and angry, "we need to talk to you."
"About what?" but she knew the answer anyway. She knew she'd been caught after she tried to fly again; she picked the wrong spot too, the park.
"You already know. Get ready you're going to be released."
Katharine froze.
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Ok that wasn't as good as I wanted it to be but I tried, it's kind of hard for me to get back to typing this in, whatever, I'm just saying that as an excuse............... PLEASE REVIEW! ^_^
Being offline was a total bomb! my stupid computer wouldn't let me go online and it was in danger of crashing which sucks.
Sorry it took me a while to get this up but at least the time gave me ideas for the chapter ^_^
For Every Now And Then, that question you asked about why the last chapter was called Pierre, well it's a bit of a clue on who Daniel really is......................crap I just revealed -_-; oh well. If you don't know WHO Pierre is then check in chapter seven in the book it says somewhere in I think page 57 or something about Jonas being skipped to number twenty, Pierre.
^_^ thank you evolutionary spider!! You're a great reviewer!!! ;_; and I'm reading your fic right now!
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Losing The Grip of The Rules
They broke the kiss almost too quickly. Benjamin blushed brightly but Daniel smiled softly.
"Uh, let's get back to the others," said the flustered Benjamin.
They walked out of the store but already met up with the others who were on there way to the store.
"What is this place?" asked Fiona.
"A music store," answered Jonas.
"You mean they sell that awful noise?"
"Yes and it's not awful."
"Well then let's see it."
They walked back inside the store, the group looked around in amazement, the beat, the rhythm, everything was so new to them.
There was the sound of a whistle then a crash, there was silence.
"They're firing," frowned Daniel as he looked out the window.
"That's kind of mean," said Asher as he fell from the next crash.
"Who are they?" asked Aurora.
"Who else can they be? They're the community."
"I'm going out there," said Stewart, his hands were electrifying as he made his way to the door.
"Hold on there," Daniel blocked his path, "the defense army will drive them away, you can help after they're gone, you know, restore power and stuff."
Stewart frowned but stayed.
"How long will this take?" asked Lily looking out the window.
"I don't know. The defense army usually-oh! There they go."
Everyone looked out the window and saw about twenty people fly up to the jets in the sky, they used their own powers and blasted them away from Elsewhere, the defense army left as fast as they came.
"Wow, this place is definitely the safest place ever," said Phillipa.
"Well this IS Elsewhere," said Daniel pretending to sound rich.
The doctor from the Power Determination building ran in. "There you are, you left so fast I didn't tell you how you were going to meet your birthmothers."
Jonas's heart leaped. "Well?"
"I already called them, you're meeting them tomorrow."
"Are they good people?" asked Tom.
"Of course, they're part of the defense army."
Even though he wasn't looking at him, Jonas could tell that Asher's jaw had dropped. He smiled to himself.
"Hello Dr. Bann, what are you doing?"
Jonas turned and faced a young woman in her twenties, wavy brown hair and bright blue eyes.
"Oh, Rosemary, great, you have a big house, do you think you can let these guys sleep over until tomorrow?" asked the doctor.
"Of course, they're the new runaways right?"
"Yep," piped Gabriel.
"I was wondering when they'd come," there was a pause as Rosemary looked at everyone, it was then that she seemed to have realized something.
"I know you," said Jonas suddenly, "you're the giver's daughter."
"Yep, after I was released they didn't turn me back to a baby, that usually happens to the released elders, so I'm living the rest of my life with my memory of the community."
"Oh," Jonas was a little lost.
"Something wrong? Do we smell or something?" asked Asher when he saw Rosemary's puzzled look.
"Sort of, where's Katharine?"
"She didn't want to come," answered Lily.
"That's not very good."
"Why?"
"Something tells me it's not good. She should have come."
* * *
Katharine knew she was to be the Receiver of Memories, but now she didn't know what to become.
After the RTR ran away from the community everything crashed, the memories that Jonas had were released into the community. Now they were at war with Elsewhere because they were different and didn't have orderly laws.
At first Katharine thought the war was a good idea but after seeing the memories of war she was fearful of both sides. Her parents were a part of the army, they barely talked to her and when they did it would be about how she should just keep aside if Elsewhere attacks. But they never did and she had a new opinion on that world.
If a group of children ran away from the community to Elsewhere, then there must be a reason why Elsewhere seemed so great.
Her schooling wasn't going well. She could never stop thinking about the childrens escape.
It wasn't long until she found out something strange about herself, two things actually.
She could hear things from far away, even her parents whispers two rooms away. She also found herself floating for a second over her bed when she woke up.
Now she could hear her parent's footsteps coming closer to her room. They sounded angry, she could hear angry grumbling.
"Katharine?" said her fathers voice, firm and angry, "we need to talk to you."
"About what?" but she knew the answer anyway. She knew she'd been caught after she tried to fly again; she picked the wrong spot too, the park.
"You already know. Get ready you're going to be released."
Katharine froze.
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Ok that wasn't as good as I wanted it to be but I tried, it's kind of hard for me to get back to typing this in, whatever, I'm just saying that as an excuse............... PLEASE REVIEW! ^_^