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Onna: Where in the hell is Suki probably late as always!!
Suki:walks in Yeah yeah yeah ragg on the co-author
Kurama: Runs from in the kitchen out to living room after hearing Suki's voice Hey Suk!! Hugs Suki tight
Suki: Hugs back for a sec Can't breathe!!
Onna:points and laughts
Hiei: runs into room from kitchen holding quart of sweet snow Onna!! drops sweet snow and starts to run to Onna turns around picks up sweet snow and runs to Onna
Onna: looks at kurama You gave him sweet sno....
Hiei: hugs onna tightly
Onna: looks astonished then happy and hugs Hiei back
Suki: Onna and Hiei sitting in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G barely able to breath
Kurama:still holding Suki
Onna: How can you do that? looks at Hiei who shooves another scoop of ice cream in to his mouth
Hiei: grins and sits on the couch pulling onna on to him Sweet snow? offers spoonful to onna.
Onna: nods head yes
Hiei: carefully puts spoon in onna's mouth and pulls out Sweet Snow Kurama?
Kurama: looks at hiei and back to suki still holding her in his crushing grip No
Onna: You might wanna let her breathe just a lil looks at Suki's blue face
Kurama: looks sad, but loosens his grip
Suki:Takes large breath and pecks Kurama on the cheek Thanks. On to chapter three and for all of you who remember I'm still going to get my revenge on Onna,
Onna: Isn't paying attention to Suki opens mouth and Hiei deposites more sweet snow in her mouth
Suki: Shudders In the end!!
Kurama:still holding Suki She no own yu yu so you can't sue sue but she own Rain/You.
Onna: ur&ur mouth full of sweet snow
Hiei: she means R&R
Onna: Oh and if you think that having allies is a good thing just say who you would like to be allied with and we will start keeping track!!
Suki: .
When it Rains it Pours
Chapter3: Through the portal
You are currently running down the street screaming bloody murder at the top of your lungs.Your thinking 'OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!' Out of nowhere some one puts their hand on your mouth and you stop scared out of your mind, It's the short boy from the swirling green portal.
"Your Rain," he said. Then as if answering his own question he said, "I thought so." Your eyes are wide while your trying to get over fact that you just saw him standing back on the other street just a minute ago. Stumbling backwards you back into someone else. Looking up you see green eye before your legs give way and you're falling. As things are going black arms grab you.
You wake up, but keep your eyes closed. There is an arm around your waist keeping you in place. Your over someone shoulder. Sneaking a quick glance you see red hair and relize where you are.(AN/ For those of you who are too blond to figure out where you are. You are over Kurama's shoulder being carried back to the portal) Not really wanting to be carried off through a portal by four complete strangers you knee the guy carring you. He lets out a groan and drops. Needless to say you've taken back off down the alley again. When the short boy appears in front of you. Thinking fast you much to your surprise flip over him and contnue running. Gasps come from behind you and then running feet.
"Come on you guys she just a girl we shouldn't have to work this hard to catch her," a voice yells. You continue running as a pair of hands grab hold of your waist and lift you off the ground. It's the ugly guy and lets just say that was scary enough as it was.
"Ahh get off get off," you scream. He doesn't let go so you bite his hand and then he lets go.(AN/ Suki:shudders at the thought of Kuawbara touching you never mind you tasted him.) Once again you take off down the alley, but by this time they figured out your strategy and split up. Kurama and Kuawbara are running around to catch you from the other side. Yusuke behind chasing you and Hiei is coming from the front. 'Oh shit were to go,' you think, 'All sides cut off, the ground is solid, and the sky.. the sky' You look up and thankful something finally went your way. There was a fire escape ladder and a trash can you could reach it from. Before anyone could react to your odd slant to the wall. You were on top of the trash and jumping for the ladder. In seconds Hiei was at top of the ladder leaving your escape route open again. So you drop and run still scared out of your mind. Emerging out of the alley thinking, 'Yay I may actually get away' only to be grabbed by Kurama. Your struggling to get free, but he is a lot stronger than you. The other 3 boys walk up and your still fighting with the last of your strenght.
"Yeah she doesn't look dangerous in real life either for a demon anyway," states the ugly guy.
This caught your attention, "What the hell are you talking about?" Kurama let out a sigh as you have stopped struggling and even he found Kuawbara stupidity amazing at times.
"You moron Koenma said she didn't know about her demon blood and it's not her it's her psychopathic mother that the danger," yelled Yusuke. A shoe came out of nowhere and hit the wall next to where you were being held.
"Shut up you damn kids I've put up with enough for one night," a voice yelled from a window and everyone shut up as it slammed closed.
"Come on lets just take her to Koenma's then let him explain it," whispered Yusuke as they started down the alley again. Your fighting Kurama's grip(again) as they go. Some how you get him to let go, but never the less someone grabs your waist and fly threw the portal.
You sit up and stare your four captures who managed to land on their feet after the unexpected 15ft drop. "What?! Where the HELL are we?!," yells Yusuke looking around.
"Hn a forest," said Hiei annoyed looking at the trees not Yusuke.
"Alright you jackasses where the hell am I, what were talking about before, and who are you?" They all look at you surprise as if they didn't expect you to be there.
"Might as well tell you I'm Yusuke that Kuawbara,that Kurama and the short one is Hiei," said the spirit detective pointing to them as he spoke. You listen the slowly got up.
"Okay so where are we?" you ask not hiding the annoyance in your voice.
"We don't know," answered Kuawbara.
"You know for kidnappers you're not very good at it," you say glaring at them. Only Hiei glares back. "So how do we get to where you're taking me?"
"We need to get back to where we were," said Kurama with a thoughtful look, "Doesn't it seems odd that half an hour ago this portal took us to Koenma's and now it sends us to some remote region in Makai." you leaned against a nearby tree thinking as hard as the others.
"Why don't we just go back through the portal!" you say suddenly everyone looks at you,
"Eh Kurama your the smart one why didn't you think of that!" Kuwabara (Onna: I still say we should call him Kuwabaka it fits him) said stupidly.
"Baka" Hiei mumbled
"So who goes first?" Yusuke asked all eyes turned to him
"You spirit detective!" Hiei said smirking.
"What uh no way!" Yusuke said shaking his head,
"Whats wrong Uremeshi you scared or something?" Kuwabara said laughing.
"Fine!" he muttered glaring at no one in paticular and yet glaring at every one. Kurama threw Yusuke through the portal he soared through,
"Hm..WHo shoould go next?" Kurama asked. Suki: Cackles evilly
Onna: What are you doing?
Suki: I just finshed recruiting my new army!
Onna: Oh and what is it made up of
Suki: RRFG's
Onna: had been smirking now jaw drops open Random Rabied Fan girl's?
Suki:Oh yeah!!!
Onna: Well thanx to my many guy friends I was able to recruit the only thing to nuetralize your RRFG's. Grins
Suki: Yeah right!
Onna: Meet the RRFB's!!!
Suki: What?
Onna: Random Rabied Fan Boys!!! Laughs Evilly
Suki: Noooo!! I will get you!! Storms out of room
Onna: She will eventually get me!! Any way now that Suki's out of the room I can make this a HieixYou or KuramaxYou Chapter 4 is Kurama and Chapter 5 is Hiei although chapter 4 will be much more houmourous I still will drool over chappy 5! Gomen but it's late and I must get my growling in!
Kurama: Growling?
Onna: Duh you know sitting on my bed with the lights off growling at my closet! Any way the closet calls Buh-Bye!!
Suki:walks in Yeah yeah yeah ragg on the co-author
Kurama: Runs from in the kitchen out to living room after hearing Suki's voice Hey Suk!! Hugs Suki tight
Suki: Hugs back for a sec Can't breathe!!
Onna:points and laughts
Hiei: runs into room from kitchen holding quart of sweet snow Onna!! drops sweet snow and starts to run to Onna turns around picks up sweet snow and runs to Onna
Onna: looks at kurama You gave him sweet sno....
Hiei: hugs onna tightly
Onna: looks astonished then happy and hugs Hiei back
Suki: Onna and Hiei sitting in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G barely able to breath
Kurama:still holding Suki
Onna: How can you do that? looks at Hiei who shooves another scoop of ice cream in to his mouth
Hiei: grins and sits on the couch pulling onna on to him Sweet snow? offers spoonful to onna.
Onna: nods head yes
Hiei: carefully puts spoon in onna's mouth and pulls out Sweet Snow Kurama?
Kurama: looks at hiei and back to suki still holding her in his crushing grip No
Onna: You might wanna let her breathe just a lil looks at Suki's blue face
Kurama: looks sad, but loosens his grip
Suki:Takes large breath and pecks Kurama on the cheek Thanks. On to chapter three and for all of you who remember I'm still going to get my revenge on Onna,
Onna: Isn't paying attention to Suki opens mouth and Hiei deposites more sweet snow in her mouth
Suki: Shudders In the end!!
Kurama:still holding Suki She no own yu yu so you can't sue sue but she own Rain/You.
Onna: ur&ur mouth full of sweet snow
Hiei: she means R&R
Onna: Oh and if you think that having allies is a good thing just say who you would like to be allied with and we will start keeping track!!
Suki: .
When it Rains it Pours
Chapter3: Through the portal
You are currently running down the street screaming bloody murder at the top of your lungs.Your thinking 'OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!' Out of nowhere some one puts their hand on your mouth and you stop scared out of your mind, It's the short boy from the swirling green portal.
"Your Rain," he said. Then as if answering his own question he said, "I thought so." Your eyes are wide while your trying to get over fact that you just saw him standing back on the other street just a minute ago. Stumbling backwards you back into someone else. Looking up you see green eye before your legs give way and you're falling. As things are going black arms grab you.
You wake up, but keep your eyes closed. There is an arm around your waist keeping you in place. Your over someone shoulder. Sneaking a quick glance you see red hair and relize where you are.(AN/ For those of you who are too blond to figure out where you are. You are over Kurama's shoulder being carried back to the portal) Not really wanting to be carried off through a portal by four complete strangers you knee the guy carring you. He lets out a groan and drops. Needless to say you've taken back off down the alley again. When the short boy appears in front of you. Thinking fast you much to your surprise flip over him and contnue running. Gasps come from behind you and then running feet.
"Come on you guys she just a girl we shouldn't have to work this hard to catch her," a voice yells. You continue running as a pair of hands grab hold of your waist and lift you off the ground. It's the ugly guy and lets just say that was scary enough as it was.
"Ahh get off get off," you scream. He doesn't let go so you bite his hand and then he lets go.(AN/ Suki:shudders at the thought of Kuawbara touching you never mind you tasted him.) Once again you take off down the alley, but by this time they figured out your strategy and split up. Kurama and Kuawbara are running around to catch you from the other side. Yusuke behind chasing you and Hiei is coming from the front. 'Oh shit were to go,' you think, 'All sides cut off, the ground is solid, and the sky.. the sky' You look up and thankful something finally went your way. There was a fire escape ladder and a trash can you could reach it from. Before anyone could react to your odd slant to the wall. You were on top of the trash and jumping for the ladder. In seconds Hiei was at top of the ladder leaving your escape route open again. So you drop and run still scared out of your mind. Emerging out of the alley thinking, 'Yay I may actually get away' only to be grabbed by Kurama. Your struggling to get free, but he is a lot stronger than you. The other 3 boys walk up and your still fighting with the last of your strenght.
"Yeah she doesn't look dangerous in real life either for a demon anyway," states the ugly guy.
This caught your attention, "What the hell are you talking about?" Kurama let out a sigh as you have stopped struggling and even he found Kuawbara stupidity amazing at times.
"You moron Koenma said she didn't know about her demon blood and it's not her it's her psychopathic mother that the danger," yelled Yusuke. A shoe came out of nowhere and hit the wall next to where you were being held.
"Shut up you damn kids I've put up with enough for one night," a voice yelled from a window and everyone shut up as it slammed closed.
"Come on lets just take her to Koenma's then let him explain it," whispered Yusuke as they started down the alley again. Your fighting Kurama's grip(again) as they go. Some how you get him to let go, but never the less someone grabs your waist and fly threw the portal.
You sit up and stare your four captures who managed to land on their feet after the unexpected 15ft drop. "What?! Where the HELL are we?!," yells Yusuke looking around.
"Hn a forest," said Hiei annoyed looking at the trees not Yusuke.
"Alright you jackasses where the hell am I, what were talking about before, and who are you?" They all look at you surprise as if they didn't expect you to be there.
"Might as well tell you I'm Yusuke that Kuawbara,that Kurama and the short one is Hiei," said the spirit detective pointing to them as he spoke. You listen the slowly got up.
"Okay so where are we?" you ask not hiding the annoyance in your voice.
"We don't know," answered Kuawbara.
"You know for kidnappers you're not very good at it," you say glaring at them. Only Hiei glares back. "So how do we get to where you're taking me?"
"We need to get back to where we were," said Kurama with a thoughtful look, "Doesn't it seems odd that half an hour ago this portal took us to Koenma's and now it sends us to some remote region in Makai." you leaned against a nearby tree thinking as hard as the others.
"Why don't we just go back through the portal!" you say suddenly everyone looks at you,
"Eh Kurama your the smart one why didn't you think of that!" Kuwabara (Onna: I still say we should call him Kuwabaka it fits him) said stupidly.
"Baka" Hiei mumbled
"So who goes first?" Yusuke asked all eyes turned to him
"You spirit detective!" Hiei said smirking.
"What uh no way!" Yusuke said shaking his head,
"Whats wrong Uremeshi you scared or something?" Kuwabara said laughing.
"Fine!" he muttered glaring at no one in paticular and yet glaring at every one. Kurama threw Yusuke through the portal he soared through,
"Hm..WHo shoould go next?" Kurama asked. Suki: Cackles evilly
Onna: What are you doing?
Suki: I just finshed recruiting my new army!
Onna: Oh and what is it made up of
Suki: RRFG's
Onna: had been smirking now jaw drops open Random Rabied Fan girl's?
Suki:Oh yeah!!!
Onna: Well thanx to my many guy friends I was able to recruit the only thing to nuetralize your RRFG's. Grins
Suki: Yeah right!
Onna: Meet the RRFB's!!!
Suki: What?
Onna: Random Rabied Fan Boys!!! Laughs Evilly
Suki: Noooo!! I will get you!! Storms out of room
Onna: She will eventually get me!! Any way now that Suki's out of the room I can make this a HieixYou or KuramaxYou Chapter 4 is Kurama and Chapter 5 is Hiei although chapter 4 will be much more houmourous I still will drool over chappy 5! Gomen but it's late and I must get my growling in!
Kurama: Growling?
Onna: Duh you know sitting on my bed with the lights off growling at my closet! Any way the closet calls Buh-Bye!!
