Um.someone left a review that said I was mean to Ryou, sry bout that, this
is kinda a half tru story and half not. U c, mai mom has breast cancer,
except she delt with it very well. Well.if u guys have any ?'s or anything
don't bother to ask me about it at slitheringsnake0@hotmail.com and put
fanfiction as the subject thnx! Baiz! -slitheringsnake07
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."Like I said before, time is running out, and I suggest that you start to clean your ass off unless you want something bad to happen!" Bakura said angrily, and getting madder by the passing minute. Ryou sighed then turned around to start on the dishes.
~2 hours later~
It was 9:50, (close enough.ya, ya, ya.anyways, back to the story) Ryou was only able to get half of his chores done. So he tried to speed up the pace but that only made things much more messy. Then before he knew it, the house was just as it was before he started cleaning up, but only a tad cleaner. Just as quickly as Ryou had started to try and clean up, it was already 10:00. Just then Ryou started to prepare himself for the beating that he would receive soon. 'Why do the punishments always have to be beatings? Maybe he could take away my money, clothes, or even privacy, but NOO, it HAS to be beatings doesn't it?' Ryou thought while still trying to clean up the best he could, although his hands starting to shake because he could hear Bakura open his room door, heading his way downstairs.
While Bakura was heading down the stairs he was hoping that Ryou cleaned up so he wouldn't have to hurt him. He didn't know WHY he HAD to hurt Ryou, he thought that it was just a way he could show his feelings for him. 'I hope Ryou finished cleaning, I would hate to have to put another bruise on his nice, soft, perfect, silk like skin.' Just thinking things about Ryou started to get him aroused.
Finally Bakura was downstairs and saw that only a little bit of the living room was clean, the only part that he could definitely the carpet because you could see the vacuum marks. 'Hmph.that's funny, I don't remember hearing the vacuum cleaner on, I guess that means I'm a deep sleeper.' By seeing just the carpet, Bakura couldn't help but frown a little bit.
Ryou saw Bakura come down the stairs while looking at his eyes to see what he was thinking, and he didn't like the look he saw on his face, not one bit.
"Tsk, tsk, it's not as clean I was hoping Ryou. I guess you'll have to learn the hard way, and learn how to do things right." Saying this Ryou started to back away slowly until he hit the wall. Bakura smirked at the weak attempt of trying to get away. So Bakura started to approach Ryou, getting into his evil mode, he held an evil smirk on his face. Ryou started to shake in fear, and made sure not to cry during the beating, otherwise he would surely get it worse than he already has. "Your so weak, Ryou, maybe I should try and teach you to be a man." Bakura said getting mad that Ryou was shaking even if he hasn't done anything to him yet.
Then the beating began while Bakura landed punch on Ryou's left cheek, forming a bruise. Then when Ryou started to double over Bakura started to punch him in the stomach, Bakura hit him so much that Ryou started to loose count of how many hits he received. Ryou knew that there was no point in trying to fight back, because that would probably put him in more pain that he already is in. After Bakura got tired of punching Ryou in the stomach, he started to straddle Ryou's waist, and just sat there giving Ryou a little time to rest up and prepare for what was going to happen. When Ryou finally cought his breath he was thinking about asking Bakura if he could just stop, but then what good will that do? 'If I ask him to stop, what are the chances that he will actually stop? Plus, if I do ask that, he'll think I'm weaker and can't take any pain, and probably hurt me more. But what the heck, I won't know until I ask. Right?' Ryou thought while he was catching his breath. "Please.stop." Ryou gasped out since he was still catching his breath and it hurt so much to talk because he was screaming at every other blow that he recieved.
When Ryou said this, it made Bakura think, 'Maybe I should give him a little break. I think my feelings might start taking an effect on me.'
After seeing Bakura think about giving him a break Ryou was in total shock. 'Is Bakura actually thinking about giving me a break? I would really appreciate it, but what would make Bakura change this way?' Ryou thought as he continued to watch Bakura think.
When Bakura finished thinking, he said, "Fine, but just this once, I'm going to the bar." But just before Bakura gets up he punches Ryou in the face. Then goes towards the door, and leaves towards the closest bar.
Ryou lay on the floor shocked that Bakura actually stopped beating him. 'I think I should clean up the house before he gets home. Maybe he'll be surprised and not beat me anymore, or maybe start to love me.ha! Probably not, I'm just hurting myself more by thinking those things.' Ryou got up and went to the bathroom to try and cover up his wounds a little bit, and see how many bruises he got. After he cleaned himself up he headed back downstairs and started to clean up.
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."Like I said before, time is running out, and I suggest that you start to clean your ass off unless you want something bad to happen!" Bakura said angrily, and getting madder by the passing minute. Ryou sighed then turned around to start on the dishes.
~2 hours later~
It was 9:50, (close enough.ya, ya, ya.anyways, back to the story) Ryou was only able to get half of his chores done. So he tried to speed up the pace but that only made things much more messy. Then before he knew it, the house was just as it was before he started cleaning up, but only a tad cleaner. Just as quickly as Ryou had started to try and clean up, it was already 10:00. Just then Ryou started to prepare himself for the beating that he would receive soon. 'Why do the punishments always have to be beatings? Maybe he could take away my money, clothes, or even privacy, but NOO, it HAS to be beatings doesn't it?' Ryou thought while still trying to clean up the best he could, although his hands starting to shake because he could hear Bakura open his room door, heading his way downstairs.
While Bakura was heading down the stairs he was hoping that Ryou cleaned up so he wouldn't have to hurt him. He didn't know WHY he HAD to hurt Ryou, he thought that it was just a way he could show his feelings for him. 'I hope Ryou finished cleaning, I would hate to have to put another bruise on his nice, soft, perfect, silk like skin.' Just thinking things about Ryou started to get him aroused.
Finally Bakura was downstairs and saw that only a little bit of the living room was clean, the only part that he could definitely the carpet because you could see the vacuum marks. 'Hmph.that's funny, I don't remember hearing the vacuum cleaner on, I guess that means I'm a deep sleeper.' By seeing just the carpet, Bakura couldn't help but frown a little bit.
Ryou saw Bakura come down the stairs while looking at his eyes to see what he was thinking, and he didn't like the look he saw on his face, not one bit.
"Tsk, tsk, it's not as clean I was hoping Ryou. I guess you'll have to learn the hard way, and learn how to do things right." Saying this Ryou started to back away slowly until he hit the wall. Bakura smirked at the weak attempt of trying to get away. So Bakura started to approach Ryou, getting into his evil mode, he held an evil smirk on his face. Ryou started to shake in fear, and made sure not to cry during the beating, otherwise he would surely get it worse than he already has. "Your so weak, Ryou, maybe I should try and teach you to be a man." Bakura said getting mad that Ryou was shaking even if he hasn't done anything to him yet.
Then the beating began while Bakura landed punch on Ryou's left cheek, forming a bruise. Then when Ryou started to double over Bakura started to punch him in the stomach, Bakura hit him so much that Ryou started to loose count of how many hits he received. Ryou knew that there was no point in trying to fight back, because that would probably put him in more pain that he already is in. After Bakura got tired of punching Ryou in the stomach, he started to straddle Ryou's waist, and just sat there giving Ryou a little time to rest up and prepare for what was going to happen. When Ryou finally cought his breath he was thinking about asking Bakura if he could just stop, but then what good will that do? 'If I ask him to stop, what are the chances that he will actually stop? Plus, if I do ask that, he'll think I'm weaker and can't take any pain, and probably hurt me more. But what the heck, I won't know until I ask. Right?' Ryou thought while he was catching his breath. "Please.stop." Ryou gasped out since he was still catching his breath and it hurt so much to talk because he was screaming at every other blow that he recieved.
When Ryou said this, it made Bakura think, 'Maybe I should give him a little break. I think my feelings might start taking an effect on me.'
After seeing Bakura think about giving him a break Ryou was in total shock. 'Is Bakura actually thinking about giving me a break? I would really appreciate it, but what would make Bakura change this way?' Ryou thought as he continued to watch Bakura think.
When Bakura finished thinking, he said, "Fine, but just this once, I'm going to the bar." But just before Bakura gets up he punches Ryou in the face. Then goes towards the door, and leaves towards the closest bar.
Ryou lay on the floor shocked that Bakura actually stopped beating him. 'I think I should clean up the house before he gets home. Maybe he'll be surprised and not beat me anymore, or maybe start to love me.ha! Probably not, I'm just hurting myself more by thinking those things.' Ryou got up and went to the bathroom to try and cover up his wounds a little bit, and see how many bruises he got. After he cleaned himself up he headed back downstairs and started to clean up.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Ahh!! Mai chapters r getting shorter and shorter, I think I'll try to make them longer and less chapters!! O well..i guess I'll get going on the nxt chapter, baiz!! -slitheringsnake07