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- narration
'character thinking in mind '
Chapter 4
Kagome: (on her bed crying) "sniff sniff" 'Why does he always have to do this to me? He loves Kikyo… not me. Why can't I stop thinking about him? Maybe, I should just start liking Kouga more than a friend, and leave Inu-yasha alone since he loves Kikyo. I should go back, maybe in 3 days.
- Meanwhile back in Inu-yasha's time
Shippou: "It's all Inu-yasha's fault she left!!! You are always mean to her! No wonder she leaves, I'll bet she'll start liking Kouga soon, since he treats her nice."
Inu-yasha: (hits Shippou) Whack!!!
Miroku: "I think Inu-yasha should apologize."
Sango: "I agree"
Kouga: "Why don't I get her, she doesn't want to see it again.
Shippou: (just recovering) "I wish that too, but only it can go." 'Shoot now it will kill me' - Shippou now waiting for a blow from Inu-yasha but he doesn't hit him.
Inu-yasha: "No way I'm going to get her! I didn't even do anything!" Whack!!! (hits Shippou)
- Two days past
Shippou: "Kagome!!!" (he runs to Kagome and hugs her)
Kouga: "Kagome!!!" (and he does the exact thing as Shippou and, surprisingly Kagome hugs him back)
Kouga: (stunned)
Inu-yasha: (stunned) 'What the hell did she just do!!!'
Kagome: "I'm back everyone."
Miroku & Sango: "Welcome back!"
-When the group left to look for clues on Naraku's whereabouts, Kagome rode with Kouga instead of Inu-yasha.
Miroku & Sango: 'This is so weird'
Inu-yasha: 'what's going on?!'
Sango: 'I wonder what's going on, maybe I should talk to Kagome later.'
- The gang didn't find any clues on Naraku's whereabouts, so they all went back to Kade's hut
Sango: " Kagome lets go for a walk," she whispered.
Kagome: "ok" -both of them left, telling the rest they wanted to find Kagome's book together
Sango: "What's going on?"
Kagome: "What do you mean," trying to sound innocent.
Sango: " With Inu-yasha"
Kagome: "Nothing, ok" 'I can't even tell Sango about this' "Hey, lets go back, I promised Kouga I'd let him have ramen." -Then they both go back to the hut.
Miroku: "Get anything out of her?" he whispered to Sango.
Sango: "No, how did you know?"
Miroku: "um.."
Sango: "Whatever, I'm just worried about her."
Miroku: "Don't worry, I'm here for you." (and he gives her a perverted grin)
Sango: (holding her boomerang) "oh really"
Miroku: 'Dam it' "Ha ha ha ha" (laughing as in he gave up)
Kagome: "Kouga, I finished making your ramen."
Kouga: "Really, thank you my mate." (don't they sound like a married couple ^_^)
Inu-yasha: "Shut-up!!!" (then he starts to charge at Kouga)
Kagome: Inu-yasha SI - Inu-yasha stops before Kagome said the S word, grabs her hand, and takes her outside.
Kouga: "What the hell is he going to do with my Kagome?!! -He turns to rush outside, but Sango and Miroku stop him (they're standing in his way)
Miroku: "Let them makeup"
Kouga: "No way!!! Hey, since he grabbed her, he might be sited a thousand times!!! I gotta see this!!"
Miroku: "You should leave them alone." -Then he uses his staff, to knock Kouga unconscious on the head. " Now lets go."
Shippou: "Where to?"
Miroku: "To watch Inu-yasha and Kagome of course."
Shippou: "But I thought you
- He didn't get to finish because Miroku and Sango were already heading toward the door
Shippou: "Hey, wait for me!!!!"
End of chapter 4
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