CHAPTER 5
(my side or side comments)
- narration
'character thinking in mind '
-Meanwhile, with Kagome and Inu-yasha…
Inu-yasha: "Why are you acting so weird, with Kouga?!!"
Kagome: "I'm not acting weird! Are you jealous?"
Inu-yasha: "Nnno! Why should I be jealous of a stupid girl like you?!"
Kagome: "SIT!!!"
Thud!!!
Inu-yasha: "Wench!!! Why did you do that for, I was trying to talk to you!" (Inu-yasha you don't get it *sigh*)
Kagome: "Well don't worry about me, instead you should start worrying about KIKYO!"
Miroku: (behind a rock watching, with Sango and Shippou) "That was a nice one."
Shippou: "Go Kagome!!!"
Miroku: "Sh, be quiet," he said in a whisper.
Sango: ' So that's why Kagome was acting odd, Inu-yasha saw Kikyo.'
Inu-yasha: " I'm not worried about you, wait a min you're mad about me seeing Kik-
Kagome: "SIT!! *Thud* I wish you were a lot nicer to me like (pause) 'Kouga'
Inu-yasha: 'Was she about to say KOUGA?!!!!'
-Then she heads back to the hut, then Sango, Miroku, and Shippou come out from behind the rock
Sango, Miroku, and Shippou: "You blew it"
Inu-yasha: (very surprised) "You, you, you TRAITORS!!!!" -Then he starts to chase them
-Later that day
Inu-yasha: (sitting on his favorite tree thinking) 'Kagome, she saw…"
-While Inu-yasha was thinking, Shippou climbed up on his head
Shippou: "I want you to know, that you're a two-timing slime ball"-then he jumps off Inu-yasha's head and runs as fast as he can to the hut
Inu-yasha: 'That lil brat' -then he sees Kagome and Kouga together 'What the HELL!!!'
End of Chapter 5
A/n: I'll think I'll leave it here 4 now. I got this stupid big violin concert in Jan and I got 2 practice a lot. Plus they gave me homework over winter break!!!! Teachers are so MEAN!!! Well neway, I hope u ppls like this chapter, O yeah, don't forget to REVIEW and REVIEW!!!!! So plz R&R!!!!
MERRY CHRISTMAS