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Kevin had been driving around town for more than an hour.He didn't want to go back, he couldn't.This was his girlfriend's daughter, but deep down inside he wished someday it would be his too.
He was coming to the dead end at the end of their street and was debating whether or not to go look in the bushes.Not having anywhere else to look he got out of the car.About to go into the dark, winding trail something caught his eye.On the bench under the beam of the streetlight, someone was curled into a ball.He rushed over finding Ray, her eyes closed and her breahting very shallow.Her lips were blue and her skin pale.He picked her up and rushed over to his car.He wasn't sure how long she had been here, or if anything had been done to her before this.The only thing he knew was that he couldn't waste time.He wished that she would at least wake up, but she stayed asleep even after being put into the backseat.He sped away.Pondering whether to go back to the Camden's first, or going to the hospital. He thought that her life could be in danger, so the hospital would be best.He put his siren on and sped through town.Once he arrived at the hospital he ran into the hospital, carrying a limp Ray in his arms.Meeting a doctor almost immediatley Ray was taken away.He didn't have her health card, but she needed immediate attention, so the paperwork could wait.
After calling the Camdens he paced worridly in the waiting room.About ten minutes later Lucy burst into the room followed by the rest of her family.Jamie was bawling her eyes out on Eric's shoulder.Ray was her best friend and the only one who understood what they had been going through, she just couldn't lose her.
L:How is she?! Is she going to be ok?!Where was she?!
K:I'm not sure.She was asleep when I found her and didn't wake up.The doctor's are still with her.
L:Asleep?Asleep where!?
K:I'm not sure if anything happened to her before I found her but she was asleep on the bench at the end of the street, at the dead end.She looked very cold, her lips were blue and she was very pale.
L:Oh my god. Tears started to form in her eyes.
L:I can't lose her.She's my baby.She doesn't deserve this.If anybody does I do.
K: Don't start blaming yourslef this was not your fault.Let's just hope that she'll be ok. Kevin sat down with Lucy in his arms.The family waited silently, until, what seemed like years later the doctor approached them.
Lucy jumped up. L:How's my daughter?Is she ok!?
Dr: She suffered from a long time of being in the cold.She could have gotten hypthermia.What was she doing outside for so long, and asleep at that?
K: She was on a bench outside asleep.
Dr: For what reason?
L:We aren't exactly sure.She went missing for about 2 hours and that was where she was found.
Dr:Well she's awake now so I want to go question her.
L:Is she going to be ok?
Dr:She was lucky.Some rest, indoors, should heal her.
L:Can she come home tonight?
Dr:Well I wanted to keep her overnight for observation, but seeing as it's Christmas, I could let her go home.As long as you watch her carefully and bring her here if anything goes wrong.
L:Really.Thank you so much.It would mean the world to her.It's her first Christmas with a real family.
After finding out Ray had run away herself and fallen asleep there, the police could breath, knowing that there wasn't a predator on the loose.Although they were going to check out Jimmy Moon.They didn't know where he was staying so they wanted to start looking for him right away so he wouldn't have time to leave.
Happy to go home on Christmas Eve Ray seemed much better.Wrapped up in a blanket she was brought out to the car.Kissing Lucy good night and saying good bye to everyone Kevin drove home.He was going over for Christmas Dinner tomorrow.The Camden house was definatley going to be full.
Kevin had been driving around town for more than an hour.He didn't want to go back, he couldn't.This was his girlfriend's daughter, but deep down inside he wished someday it would be his too.
He was coming to the dead end at the end of their street and was debating whether or not to go look in the bushes.Not having anywhere else to look he got out of the car.About to go into the dark, winding trail something caught his eye.On the bench under the beam of the streetlight, someone was curled into a ball.He rushed over finding Ray, her eyes closed and her breahting very shallow.Her lips were blue and her skin pale.He picked her up and rushed over to his car.He wasn't sure how long she had been here, or if anything had been done to her before this.The only thing he knew was that he couldn't waste time.He wished that she would at least wake up, but she stayed asleep even after being put into the backseat.He sped away.Pondering whether to go back to the Camden's first, or going to the hospital. He thought that her life could be in danger, so the hospital would be best.He put his siren on and sped through town.Once he arrived at the hospital he ran into the hospital, carrying a limp Ray in his arms.Meeting a doctor almost immediatley Ray was taken away.He didn't have her health card, but she needed immediate attention, so the paperwork could wait.
After calling the Camdens he paced worridly in the waiting room.About ten minutes later Lucy burst into the room followed by the rest of her family.Jamie was bawling her eyes out on Eric's shoulder.Ray was her best friend and the only one who understood what they had been going through, she just couldn't lose her.
L:How is she?! Is she going to be ok?!Where was she?!
K:I'm not sure.She was asleep when I found her and didn't wake up.The doctor's are still with her.
L:Asleep?Asleep where!?
K:I'm not sure if anything happened to her before I found her but she was asleep on the bench at the end of the street, at the dead end.She looked very cold, her lips were blue and she was very pale.
L:Oh my god. Tears started to form in her eyes.
L:I can't lose her.She's my baby.She doesn't deserve this.If anybody does I do.
K: Don't start blaming yourslef this was not your fault.Let's just hope that she'll be ok. Kevin sat down with Lucy in his arms.The family waited silently, until, what seemed like years later the doctor approached them.
Lucy jumped up. L:How's my daughter?Is she ok!?
Dr: She suffered from a long time of being in the cold.She could have gotten hypthermia.What was she doing outside for so long, and asleep at that?
K: She was on a bench outside asleep.
Dr: For what reason?
L:We aren't exactly sure.She went missing for about 2 hours and that was where she was found.
Dr:Well she's awake now so I want to go question her.
L:Is she going to be ok?
Dr:She was lucky.Some rest, indoors, should heal her.
L:Can she come home tonight?
Dr:Well I wanted to keep her overnight for observation, but seeing as it's Christmas, I could let her go home.As long as you watch her carefully and bring her here if anything goes wrong.
L:Really.Thank you so much.It would mean the world to her.It's her first Christmas with a real family.
After finding out Ray had run away herself and fallen asleep there, the police could breath, knowing that there wasn't a predator on the loose.Although they were going to check out Jimmy Moon.They didn't know where he was staying so they wanted to start looking for him right away so he wouldn't have time to leave.
Happy to go home on Christmas Eve Ray seemed much better.Wrapped up in a blanket she was brought out to the car.Kissing Lucy good night and saying good bye to everyone Kevin drove home.He was going over for Christmas Dinner tomorrow.The Camden house was definatley going to be full.