The Hidden Door
Chapter 1
By: Seraphim Eclipse
AN: I have decided to take my former CCS story, The Hidden Door, and change
the plot around along with an Inu Yasha character scheme. I hope you enjoy
the story! Also, sorry for the way everything is all scrunched together, I
can't seem to figure out what is wrong, this hasn't been a problem before.
Oh well, I did the best I could to make it more legible.
*~*~*
Everything was quite in their world. There was no fighting, no crime, just
peace. The sweat smells of flowers were constantly in the air. They lived
in a so called 'perfect' world, a world with no creatures called 'men.'
These vile creatures lived in the outside world, a world where the women
inside their protective world heard horrible things about. Though, inside
the world, there was a girl who yearned to go through the door.
"Please, just for a day mom! Come on! Auntie lives there, or so you say."
Kagome begged her mother every morning to visit the outside world; she was
a curious girl and would keep on begging until she got her way, which she
usually didn't get.
Her mother shook her head. "Your aunt is a much disrespected woman; she
left this world and entered that other terrible world! I don't want to have
a daughter be a disrespected person." Sasaki never could understand why any
girl would want to visit that world. It had to of smelled! Men were known
to go with out showers for days! Imagine how smelly it would be!
All Kagome would do when her mother said no was roll her eyes and walk
away. Were men really that bad?
**Kagome's PoV**
Men couldn't be that bad... I mean, it's because of them that we are here! Of
course no one here would believe me because we are all genetically grown.
Maybe Sango found some information from the library about the door. The
door... I have spent hours thinking about it, yet none of my conclusions seem
to make any sense... How is there a door that could connect two worlds? Was
it some sort of transporter? My mind was always full of questions. What did
the men think of us? Weren't they hurt when we just took off into a new
world? I've got to stop thinking so much.
There were many words the outside world had that we didn't. One word in
particular stuck out in my head, it was something called 'love.' She had
the definition memorized in her head. "A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of
affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from
kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying
oneness." Supposedly, in the old world, love existed because males and
females lived together, now, there wasn't any of that. Sure, they liked
their family members, but never thought of their feelings as love.
**Normal PoV**
"Kagome," Sasaki called, "Sango is here."
Hearing the news, she quickly jumped off her bed and ran to the railing
near her steps where she could see Sango and her mother talking. "I'm glad
you're here Sango! Did you get the information that we needed?!"
Sango nodded, "Yes, I did, this is some really cool info! I looked at it a
bit before I came over!" Sango was yelling because she was downstairs while
Kagome was still upstairs, she wanted to be sure Kagome could hear her,
though, she wasn't too sure what her mom would say.
"What kind of information Kagome?" Kagome's nosy mother asked there was
something going on here.
'Uh oh...' Kagome worriedly thought. 'Think of something quick!' Her brain
thought. "It's for science class!"
Sasaki wasn't sure if she believed her or not. "Science class?"
Sango smiled, "Yes, uh, science class!" And with that, she quickly ran up
the stairs so no more questions had to be asked. Both girls giggled as they
ran back to Kagome's room.
"Science class? What was I thinking!?"
"I have no idea Kagome!" Sango commented.
As Sango slowly unpacked the books, Kagome grew more and more anxious,
seconds seemed like hours, it got to the point where she just couldn't
stand it anymore. "Sango, do you know where the door is?!"
"Yeah..." She sort of backed away from Kagome with how demanding her voice
sounded. "I-I can tell you, its in the dark forest..."
Frantically, Kagome started running around the room throwing clothes and
various other items into a bag. Yet again, Sango was a bit freaked out with
how Kagome was acting. Her friend had never acted so rushed in her entire
life.
"Is there a problem Kagome?" Sango asked her friend.
Kagome stopped what she was doing. "You didn't just get the message?"
"No, I didn't, did they send you a message?" In their world, the main
headquarters could send messages telepathically to one person or a whole
group. Messages were mainly important unless of course it was just for
something they did wrong.
Kagome nodded. "They know what we are doing."
*~*~*
"Hey dumass get your butt over here!"
The young man gulped. "Stay back demon!! Please do not hurt me or my
family!" He took out his wallet that contained many various pictures. "I
have a family to get back to!" Taking his chance, the young man turned
around and quickly ran away.
"You idiot!! I just needed directions!"
Beside him was another man. "Yet again you have scared away another human.
I don't think we are ever going to get home."
"You act like you have a better idea Miroku! If you do, please tell me
because I am loosing my patients!!" Inu Yasha wasn't too happy at the
moment. Miroku had decided that were going to go on a little 'journey.'
Well, little did he know, Miroku wanted to find the door that led to the
female world. The lecherous monk was too perverted for his own good and got
them lost. For hours the two had been wandering around trying to get
directions back to where they needed to be. Unfortunately for them, Inu
Yasha ended up scaring away everyone that they tried to get directions
from.
Miroku put a smirk on his face. "You know, this isn't my fault entirely."
Inu Yasha just stared at Miroku. What on Earth was he thinking?! Of course
this was his fault! "You pervert what do you mean its not all your fault!!!
You're the one who tricked me into going!! I did nothing wrong! You said
that you wanted to go to a temple that was out of town! And where do we end
up? A dark forest! To make it worse this forest doesn't have very many
people here! So, that means they were walking around and around in circles.
He scratched the back of his head and took a few steps back. "Now that I
think about it, I guess it is really all my fauly."
Inu Yasha just continued to hit his head on a near by tree.
*~*~*
"So, are you really serious about going Kagome?" Sango asked her best
friend. She wasn't so sure if this was the greatest of ideas. What if
Kagome went and couldn't get back in? Then she might be stuck there
forever! Of course then there was the possibility that she might love this
new word and never want to come back. It was all very confusing to her.
Kagome was too busy to notice Sango's question. She was searching for all
the information she could on the door. Kagome looked up. "Did you say
something Sango?"
Sango shook her head. "Never mind Kagome."
"I've made up my mind."
"Kagome?"
"I'm going."
"Where to?"
"The door."
*~*~*~*~*
This is sort of an experimental fanfiction. This plot was stuck in my head
and I decided to write it down. Please, review and give me your input!
Thank you!
Chapter 1
By: Seraphim Eclipse
AN: I have decided to take my former CCS story, The Hidden Door, and change
the plot around along with an Inu Yasha character scheme. I hope you enjoy
the story! Also, sorry for the way everything is all scrunched together, I
can't seem to figure out what is wrong, this hasn't been a problem before.
Oh well, I did the best I could to make it more legible.
*~*~*
Everything was quite in their world. There was no fighting, no crime, just
peace. The sweat smells of flowers were constantly in the air. They lived
in a so called 'perfect' world, a world with no creatures called 'men.'
These vile creatures lived in the outside world, a world where the women
inside their protective world heard horrible things about. Though, inside
the world, there was a girl who yearned to go through the door.
"Please, just for a day mom! Come on! Auntie lives there, or so you say."
Kagome begged her mother every morning to visit the outside world; she was
a curious girl and would keep on begging until she got her way, which she
usually didn't get.
Her mother shook her head. "Your aunt is a much disrespected woman; she
left this world and entered that other terrible world! I don't want to have
a daughter be a disrespected person." Sasaki never could understand why any
girl would want to visit that world. It had to of smelled! Men were known
to go with out showers for days! Imagine how smelly it would be!
All Kagome would do when her mother said no was roll her eyes and walk
away. Were men really that bad?
**Kagome's PoV**
Men couldn't be that bad... I mean, it's because of them that we are here! Of
course no one here would believe me because we are all genetically grown.
Maybe Sango found some information from the library about the door. The
door... I have spent hours thinking about it, yet none of my conclusions seem
to make any sense... How is there a door that could connect two worlds? Was
it some sort of transporter? My mind was always full of questions. What did
the men think of us? Weren't they hurt when we just took off into a new
world? I've got to stop thinking so much.
There were many words the outside world had that we didn't. One word in
particular stuck out in my head, it was something called 'love.' She had
the definition memorized in her head. "A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of
affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from
kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying
oneness." Supposedly, in the old world, love existed because males and
females lived together, now, there wasn't any of that. Sure, they liked
their family members, but never thought of their feelings as love.
**Normal PoV**
"Kagome," Sasaki called, "Sango is here."
Hearing the news, she quickly jumped off her bed and ran to the railing
near her steps where she could see Sango and her mother talking. "I'm glad
you're here Sango! Did you get the information that we needed?!"
Sango nodded, "Yes, I did, this is some really cool info! I looked at it a
bit before I came over!" Sango was yelling because she was downstairs while
Kagome was still upstairs, she wanted to be sure Kagome could hear her,
though, she wasn't too sure what her mom would say.
"What kind of information Kagome?" Kagome's nosy mother asked there was
something going on here.
'Uh oh...' Kagome worriedly thought. 'Think of something quick!' Her brain
thought. "It's for science class!"
Sasaki wasn't sure if she believed her or not. "Science class?"
Sango smiled, "Yes, uh, science class!" And with that, she quickly ran up
the stairs so no more questions had to be asked. Both girls giggled as they
ran back to Kagome's room.
"Science class? What was I thinking!?"
"I have no idea Kagome!" Sango commented.
As Sango slowly unpacked the books, Kagome grew more and more anxious,
seconds seemed like hours, it got to the point where she just couldn't
stand it anymore. "Sango, do you know where the door is?!"
"Yeah..." She sort of backed away from Kagome with how demanding her voice
sounded. "I-I can tell you, its in the dark forest..."
Frantically, Kagome started running around the room throwing clothes and
various other items into a bag. Yet again, Sango was a bit freaked out with
how Kagome was acting. Her friend had never acted so rushed in her entire
life.
"Is there a problem Kagome?" Sango asked her friend.
Kagome stopped what she was doing. "You didn't just get the message?"
"No, I didn't, did they send you a message?" In their world, the main
headquarters could send messages telepathically to one person or a whole
group. Messages were mainly important unless of course it was just for
something they did wrong.
Kagome nodded. "They know what we are doing."
*~*~*
"Hey dumass get your butt over here!"
The young man gulped. "Stay back demon!! Please do not hurt me or my
family!" He took out his wallet that contained many various pictures. "I
have a family to get back to!" Taking his chance, the young man turned
around and quickly ran away.
"You idiot!! I just needed directions!"
Beside him was another man. "Yet again you have scared away another human.
I don't think we are ever going to get home."
"You act like you have a better idea Miroku! If you do, please tell me
because I am loosing my patients!!" Inu Yasha wasn't too happy at the
moment. Miroku had decided that were going to go on a little 'journey.'
Well, little did he know, Miroku wanted to find the door that led to the
female world. The lecherous monk was too perverted for his own good and got
them lost. For hours the two had been wandering around trying to get
directions back to where they needed to be. Unfortunately for them, Inu
Yasha ended up scaring away everyone that they tried to get directions
from.
Miroku put a smirk on his face. "You know, this isn't my fault entirely."
Inu Yasha just stared at Miroku. What on Earth was he thinking?! Of course
this was his fault! "You pervert what do you mean its not all your fault!!!
You're the one who tricked me into going!! I did nothing wrong! You said
that you wanted to go to a temple that was out of town! And where do we end
up? A dark forest! To make it worse this forest doesn't have very many
people here! So, that means they were walking around and around in circles.
He scratched the back of his head and took a few steps back. "Now that I
think about it, I guess it is really all my fauly."
Inu Yasha just continued to hit his head on a near by tree.
*~*~*
"So, are you really serious about going Kagome?" Sango asked her best
friend. She wasn't so sure if this was the greatest of ideas. What if
Kagome went and couldn't get back in? Then she might be stuck there
forever! Of course then there was the possibility that she might love this
new word and never want to come back. It was all very confusing to her.
Kagome was too busy to notice Sango's question. She was searching for all
the information she could on the door. Kagome looked up. "Did you say
something Sango?"
Sango shook her head. "Never mind Kagome."
"I've made up my mind."
"Kagome?"
"I'm going."
"Where to?"
"The door."
*~*~*~*~*
This is sort of an experimental fanfiction. This plot was stuck in my head
and I decided to write it down. Please, review and give me your input!
Thank you!