I'm new at this Fan Fiction thing so don't say it stinks just give me
advice on how to do better. When I put around my words it means they're
thinking it.This chapter is called... The New Beginning.
A tactician named Kai is running away from some soldiers in a castle. He's right in front of an open gate.
I'm gonna make it! Thought Kai One of the soldiers say, "Oh no you don't!" The soldier throws a spear at a lever and the gate starts to close. The gate gets to the bottom and Kai slides under just in time. "I'm free!" ,says Kai.
He gets so happy that he runs through a forest and runs into an Archer. "Watch where your going kid I was trying to hunt some deer for food.",says the archer.The archer looks at a badge that says Royal Tactician on Kai's shirt. "You're the Royal Tactician?",says the archer. "I was until now. I ran away.",says Kai.The archer bows. "I'm sorry I was so rude.My name is Satoro." "Hello Satoro I'm Kai." "So why did you run away from the castle?",says Satoro. "They were planning on using my tactical knowledge to rob other countries.",says Kai. "Well I'm all alone out here and I could use a tactician... would you like to journey with me?",says Satoro. "Sure.",says Kai.
They journey to a new country called Denobia.
"Ahh were finally here.",says Kai. "And it's a good thing too cause I don't think I could of walked any more.",says Satoro. "And also we need to get more food and more arrows for you.",says Kai. Just then some soldiers drag in a Cavalier in chains. They throw him in a jail. "I wonder what happened over there?",says Satoro. They walk over to the jail. "Lets go in.",says Satoro. "I'm not going.",says Kai. "Why not?",says Satoro. "If I go in the guards will see that I'm the Royal Tactician and will take me back.", says Kai.
So Satoro walks in alone. "What did the Cavalier do?",Satoro asks the soldier. "Why should I tell you?",says the guard. Satoro knocks the soldier to the ground and puts an arrow at his throught. "You tell me or this arrow goes straight through your throat.",says Satoro. "Ok.The Lord of this land said the Cavalier was getting too strong so he said that we dshould put him in jail and kill him at night.",says the soldier. Satoro kills the soldier and takes the keys. He unlocks the Cavaliers jail cell. "Thanks my name is Ronnen.",says the Cavalier named Ronnen. "No problem I'm Satoro and the tactician standing outside is Kai. Kai walks in. "Well we better go.",says Kai. "Could I come with you two?",says Ronnen. "Sure.",says Satoro. They walk out side and there are two shamen and three soldiers. "Well Kai we'll get to see how good of a tactician you really are.",says Satoro.
To be continued...
I will not write the next chapter untill I get at least 1 review.Bye.
A tactician named Kai is running away from some soldiers in a castle. He's right in front of an open gate.
I'm gonna make it! Thought Kai One of the soldiers say, "Oh no you don't!" The soldier throws a spear at a lever and the gate starts to close. The gate gets to the bottom and Kai slides under just in time. "I'm free!" ,says Kai.
He gets so happy that he runs through a forest and runs into an Archer. "Watch where your going kid I was trying to hunt some deer for food.",says the archer.The archer looks at a badge that says Royal Tactician on Kai's shirt. "You're the Royal Tactician?",says the archer. "I was until now. I ran away.",says Kai.The archer bows. "I'm sorry I was so rude.My name is Satoro." "Hello Satoro I'm Kai." "So why did you run away from the castle?",says Satoro. "They were planning on using my tactical knowledge to rob other countries.",says Kai. "Well I'm all alone out here and I could use a tactician... would you like to journey with me?",says Satoro. "Sure.",says Kai.
They journey to a new country called Denobia.
"Ahh were finally here.",says Kai. "And it's a good thing too cause I don't think I could of walked any more.",says Satoro. "And also we need to get more food and more arrows for you.",says Kai. Just then some soldiers drag in a Cavalier in chains. They throw him in a jail. "I wonder what happened over there?",says Satoro. They walk over to the jail. "Lets go in.",says Satoro. "I'm not going.",says Kai. "Why not?",says Satoro. "If I go in the guards will see that I'm the Royal Tactician and will take me back.", says Kai.
So Satoro walks in alone. "What did the Cavalier do?",Satoro asks the soldier. "Why should I tell you?",says the guard. Satoro knocks the soldier to the ground and puts an arrow at his throught. "You tell me or this arrow goes straight through your throat.",says Satoro. "Ok.The Lord of this land said the Cavalier was getting too strong so he said that we dshould put him in jail and kill him at night.",says the soldier. Satoro kills the soldier and takes the keys. He unlocks the Cavaliers jail cell. "Thanks my name is Ronnen.",says the Cavalier named Ronnen. "No problem I'm Satoro and the tactician standing outside is Kai. Kai walks in. "Well we better go.",says Kai. "Could I come with you two?",says Ronnen. "Sure.",says Satoro. They walk out side and there are two shamen and three soldiers. "Well Kai we'll get to see how good of a tactician you really are.",says Satoro.
To be continued...
I will not write the next chapter untill I get at least 1 review.Bye.