Hey I'm back with more. Thank you to those who reviewed. And to those that didn't, twitch twitch its okay... I really don't want to get into all sorts of details; I'm just going to tell about what happened when Mihiro first came to the palace. Kay Kay?! By the way, it will switch from 1st person to 3rd person.
Chapter 2: Welcome to the Palace
A heartbroken Mihiro, looked back through the curtains of the carriage, a tear fell from her eyes as she whispered, "Mommy..." then clutched her doll even closer, "Dolly..."the tears began to flow, uncontrollably. /Mommy....why did you let them take me? Why did you abandon me mommy? Why? Mommy.../she thought as tears streamed down her cheeks.
"We're here..." declared the soldier
Mihiro forgot about her mom as she turned around to see the pale Blue Nile, flowing gently, as the glisten from the sun made it sparkle. It was beautiful; she'd never seen anything so beautiful. She looked past the Nile and set her tear-filled eyes on the palace. A gasp escaped her mouth as she wiped the tears from her eyes. Her eyes grew big as she gazed upon the palaces white painting, its gorgeous gold markings, and the beautiful green grass surrounding it, and the cream colored drapes which hang from the windows, as they smoothly curved with the rhythmic desert breeze,
. "T-t-the palace," she gasped "It's beautiful." She was interrupted from her gaze when a guard pulled her from the carriage.
"Go..." said the guard as he pointed her toward a boat that waited by the dock
Mihiro did not know whether she should go and sit in the boat or stay where she was, she looked back at the guard, his face was cold and stern she shuddered at the thought of being stuck with him and walked over to the boat and climbed in.
A man with a friendly gleam to his eyes, similar to the gleam from his bald head, turned to her and said, "Welcome to the palace, I am your ever faithful servant." Mihiro had no idea what was going on she did no what he meant, she had never had a servant, she was always one herself. Once again the bald man turned to Mihiro and said "my name is Nephran."
Mihiro stared up at him, still confused she asked "Excuse me, what do you mean 'you are my servant'?"
Nephran looked down at her, "Why dear little oracle, you are here to serve the Pharaoh I'm here to serve you, I will be at your beck and call, meaning when you need me I'll be there."
Mihiro stared up at him, 'At my beck and call' she thought 'I-I-I've never had someone to be there for me besides mother and father,' she gasped her eyes broadened as she stared up at Nephran, 'Maybe he can be my new daddy..."
Sorry 4 such a short chapter!!!!! Please review!!!! If you do you'll get a prize!!!!!
Chapter 2: Welcome to the Palace
A heartbroken Mihiro, looked back through the curtains of the carriage, a tear fell from her eyes as she whispered, "Mommy..." then clutched her doll even closer, "Dolly..."the tears began to flow, uncontrollably. /Mommy....why did you let them take me? Why did you abandon me mommy? Why? Mommy.../she thought as tears streamed down her cheeks.
"We're here..." declared the soldier
Mihiro forgot about her mom as she turned around to see the pale Blue Nile, flowing gently, as the glisten from the sun made it sparkle. It was beautiful; she'd never seen anything so beautiful. She looked past the Nile and set her tear-filled eyes on the palace. A gasp escaped her mouth as she wiped the tears from her eyes. Her eyes grew big as she gazed upon the palaces white painting, its gorgeous gold markings, and the beautiful green grass surrounding it, and the cream colored drapes which hang from the windows, as they smoothly curved with the rhythmic desert breeze,
. "T-t-the palace," she gasped "It's beautiful." She was interrupted from her gaze when a guard pulled her from the carriage.
"Go..." said the guard as he pointed her toward a boat that waited by the dock
Mihiro did not know whether she should go and sit in the boat or stay where she was, she looked back at the guard, his face was cold and stern she shuddered at the thought of being stuck with him and walked over to the boat and climbed in.
A man with a friendly gleam to his eyes, similar to the gleam from his bald head, turned to her and said, "Welcome to the palace, I am your ever faithful servant." Mihiro had no idea what was going on she did no what he meant, she had never had a servant, she was always one herself. Once again the bald man turned to Mihiro and said "my name is Nephran."
Mihiro stared up at him, still confused she asked "Excuse me, what do you mean 'you are my servant'?"
Nephran looked down at her, "Why dear little oracle, you are here to serve the Pharaoh I'm here to serve you, I will be at your beck and call, meaning when you need me I'll be there."
Mihiro stared up at him, 'At my beck and call' she thought 'I-I-I've never had someone to be there for me besides mother and father,' she gasped her eyes broadened as she stared up at Nephran, 'Maybe he can be my new daddy..."
Sorry 4 such a short chapter!!!!! Please review!!!! If you do you'll get a prize!!!!!