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Chapter Three: A girl named Jonah and the boys named Peter and Remus
After the feast, the prefects of each house brought their students into their correct towers so that they could remember and head here whenever necessary.
"That's Trent Brown, Captain of the Quidditch team," James heard some girls say in giggle-ish voices. "He's so manly, look at him. Ooh, he's SOOO cute too!"
James examined Trent Brown from behind and could already tell off the bat that he was a Keeper. He was tall, built just like his cousin Charles Potter had been. (Who currently is playing on the all-star team of England as Keeper.) He was an African lad with long, messy dreadlocks that he kept the back in a messy ponytail while the rest hung relentlessly at his sides.
"This way, first years. Turn now... Watch out! Peeves!" He heard Trent yell as a first year girl had been drenched with water on top of her head and her whole attire had been soaked. "Get out of here Peeves, you nuisance! 'Drifico!'
Instantly, she dried up from being soaked and muttered her thanks.
"Alright, now, let's carry on, it's just this way... around this corner and there is that Fat Lady!"
A large portrait hung on the wall of a picture of a large lady sitting on a stool with a fan cooling her off. She looked down at the students below.
"Password?"
Trent turned to everyone who had been looking at each other hoping they knew the password, and turned back to the portrait.
"Davisaur."
The portrait swung open.
"Davisaur, remember that everyone!" Trent yelled out as they entered the Gryffindor Common Room to see a large, cozy area with a fire-place that gave the room a touch of class and nice, comfortable looking couches. James and Sirius playfully fought each other to dive on the nicest couch, making James the victor by tripping him and diving on the couch several feet away to be drawn right back.
"Accio Potter!"
Swish, James came flying right back into Sirius who had been trying to stand up from being tripped. Regaining their posture, both drew their wands standing up and looking threateningly at each of the Gryffindor members to see who had hexed James to fly back at Sirius. It was a small girl with long, blonde hair that came from the crowd with her hand on her wand. She had green eyes and a pretty face, but she had a frown on.
"We just got into the common room and already you are starting trouble?" She said coldly to James and Sirius. "That makes us look immature."
"And who the bloody hell are you, a prefect? You look old enough to be my little sister," Sirius replied coolly, the tip of his wand illuminating brightly and aiming at the girl. "Two on one? And I bet I'll still take you both out," the blonde one said as the tip of her wand illuminated deadly aiming it at both James and Sirius. "Though, I might jinx your friend first. PETRIFICUS TOTALUS!"
Before James could mutter a hex, his arms and legs snapped together while his wand flew out of his hands.
The crowd cheered for the girl, even Trent seemed to be enjoying this. Trent turned over his head to see the portrait closed, then turned back to the small duel.
Sirius caught James' wand and bellowed "Stupefy!" as two rays of light shot out speeding toward Jonah who muttered "Reflecto" and turned into a misty crimson color reflecting the two spells right back at Sirius who had been caught off guard.
"Jonah Lumina, that is enough!" Shouted a voice of a pale boy who had brushed past the crowd to put the girl's wand down. "I think you've proved that you are the victor?"
"Whatever, Remus. ("Remus Lupin?" Said Sirius under the Stupefy curse) Just proving that they are gits and don't know anything about hexes and jinxes' even though they pretend they do all they want. Fillio!"
Immediately, James' arms and legs unsnapped while Sirius could move again. James rose first and helped Sirius to his feet, glaring at Jonah threateningly as she headed up the flight of stairs into the girl's dormitory.
"Lucky shot, that old' witch." Sirius said angrily, brushing his shoulders off coolly to show that he wasn't offended or embarrassed when in fact, he was embarrassed to no limit.
"Alright, to beds... all of you!" Shouted Trent as the crowd cleared and James and Sirius headed to their dormitory.
They entered their dorm in quite a hurry to ignore discussion and entered their room to see the one named Remus and the easily pleased boy named Peter sitting on opposite beds. Remus had been unloading his clothes slowly while Peter had been drawing in a coloring book.
"Greetings, Black and Potter," said Remus, without even looking. He had been too busy placing stuff away in secret to bother looking up.
Peter immediately looked up to see Black and Potter and brushed his little blonde hair down.
"H-hi, James Potter and Sirius Black. M-my name is Peterpettigrew." He said in one swift motion, but immediately corrected himself. Twice, actually. "No, I mean Pettigrewpeter. No, no, I mean Peter Pettigrew, and I loved how you two knew so many jinxes already without even taking Defense against the Dark Arts!"
"My mum taught me some hexes and jinxes I might need if I am getting bullied," James said coolly, jumping on the bed that had been labeled 'Potter'.
"My cousin Bellatrix taught me some hexes she learned in her second year. She is a third year now, and plays Seeker for Slytherin." Sirius had said, sitting on the edge of his bed and running his hand through his hair coolly.
"Your cousin plays Quidditch? Wow!" Said Pettigrew as his eyes widened with amazement. "My sister, Dawn Pettigrew, plays Chaser for Gryffindor but is also a brat because she always jinxes me. Did you know they removed that rule where First Years aren't allowed to play? I think I might try out for Quidditch."
"Yeah, then maybe you'd get some girls." Said a girl as she came by their tower-door to peek into the room. "Lights out, now!"
Remus had been done packing and Peter tossed his coloring book to the side as the lights shut off and they all lay on their backs.
"I hate my sister." James heard Peter mutter.
"Your sister is hot, mate." He heard Sirius say. "But not as pretty as that Lumina girl."
And James, resting on his pillow, wondered if he would join Quidditch that Lily Evans would possibly notice him...
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A/N: Alright, so Jonah Lumina is a girl. If nobody noticed, and the rule about first-years not allowed to play Quidditch had been uplifted and is no longer is in use.
Will Peter play Quidditch?
Will JAMES play Quidditch?
Find out in the next chapter
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Chapter Three: A girl named Jonah and the boys named Peter and Remus
After the feast, the prefects of each house brought their students into their correct towers so that they could remember and head here whenever necessary.
"That's Trent Brown, Captain of the Quidditch team," James heard some girls say in giggle-ish voices. "He's so manly, look at him. Ooh, he's SOOO cute too!"
James examined Trent Brown from behind and could already tell off the bat that he was a Keeper. He was tall, built just like his cousin Charles Potter had been. (Who currently is playing on the all-star team of England as Keeper.) He was an African lad with long, messy dreadlocks that he kept the back in a messy ponytail while the rest hung relentlessly at his sides.
"This way, first years. Turn now... Watch out! Peeves!" He heard Trent yell as a first year girl had been drenched with water on top of her head and her whole attire had been soaked. "Get out of here Peeves, you nuisance! 'Drifico!'
Instantly, she dried up from being soaked and muttered her thanks.
"Alright, now, let's carry on, it's just this way... around this corner and there is that Fat Lady!"
A large portrait hung on the wall of a picture of a large lady sitting on a stool with a fan cooling her off. She looked down at the students below.
"Password?"
Trent turned to everyone who had been looking at each other hoping they knew the password, and turned back to the portrait.
"Davisaur."
The portrait swung open.
"Davisaur, remember that everyone!" Trent yelled out as they entered the Gryffindor Common Room to see a large, cozy area with a fire-place that gave the room a touch of class and nice, comfortable looking couches. James and Sirius playfully fought each other to dive on the nicest couch, making James the victor by tripping him and diving on the couch several feet away to be drawn right back.
"Accio Potter!"
Swish, James came flying right back into Sirius who had been trying to stand up from being tripped. Regaining their posture, both drew their wands standing up and looking threateningly at each of the Gryffindor members to see who had hexed James to fly back at Sirius. It was a small girl with long, blonde hair that came from the crowd with her hand on her wand. She had green eyes and a pretty face, but she had a frown on.
"We just got into the common room and already you are starting trouble?" She said coldly to James and Sirius. "That makes us look immature."
"And who the bloody hell are you, a prefect? You look old enough to be my little sister," Sirius replied coolly, the tip of his wand illuminating brightly and aiming at the girl. "Two on one? And I bet I'll still take you both out," the blonde one said as the tip of her wand illuminated deadly aiming it at both James and Sirius. "Though, I might jinx your friend first. PETRIFICUS TOTALUS!"
Before James could mutter a hex, his arms and legs snapped together while his wand flew out of his hands.
The crowd cheered for the girl, even Trent seemed to be enjoying this. Trent turned over his head to see the portrait closed, then turned back to the small duel.
Sirius caught James' wand and bellowed "Stupefy!" as two rays of light shot out speeding toward Jonah who muttered "Reflecto" and turned into a misty crimson color reflecting the two spells right back at Sirius who had been caught off guard.
"Jonah Lumina, that is enough!" Shouted a voice of a pale boy who had brushed past the crowd to put the girl's wand down. "I think you've proved that you are the victor?"
"Whatever, Remus. ("Remus Lupin?" Said Sirius under the Stupefy curse) Just proving that they are gits and don't know anything about hexes and jinxes' even though they pretend they do all they want. Fillio!"
Immediately, James' arms and legs unsnapped while Sirius could move again. James rose first and helped Sirius to his feet, glaring at Jonah threateningly as she headed up the flight of stairs into the girl's dormitory.
"Lucky shot, that old' witch." Sirius said angrily, brushing his shoulders off coolly to show that he wasn't offended or embarrassed when in fact, he was embarrassed to no limit.
"Alright, to beds... all of you!" Shouted Trent as the crowd cleared and James and Sirius headed to their dormitory.
They entered their dorm in quite a hurry to ignore discussion and entered their room to see the one named Remus and the easily pleased boy named Peter sitting on opposite beds. Remus had been unloading his clothes slowly while Peter had been drawing in a coloring book.
"Greetings, Black and Potter," said Remus, without even looking. He had been too busy placing stuff away in secret to bother looking up.
Peter immediately looked up to see Black and Potter and brushed his little blonde hair down.
"H-hi, James Potter and Sirius Black. M-my name is Peterpettigrew." He said in one swift motion, but immediately corrected himself. Twice, actually. "No, I mean Pettigrewpeter. No, no, I mean Peter Pettigrew, and I loved how you two knew so many jinxes already without even taking Defense against the Dark Arts!"
"My mum taught me some hexes and jinxes I might need if I am getting bullied," James said coolly, jumping on the bed that had been labeled 'Potter'.
"My cousin Bellatrix taught me some hexes she learned in her second year. She is a third year now, and plays Seeker for Slytherin." Sirius had said, sitting on the edge of his bed and running his hand through his hair coolly.
"Your cousin plays Quidditch? Wow!" Said Pettigrew as his eyes widened with amazement. "My sister, Dawn Pettigrew, plays Chaser for Gryffindor but is also a brat because she always jinxes me. Did you know they removed that rule where First Years aren't allowed to play? I think I might try out for Quidditch."
"Yeah, then maybe you'd get some girls." Said a girl as she came by their tower-door to peek into the room. "Lights out, now!"
Remus had been done packing and Peter tossed his coloring book to the side as the lights shut off and they all lay on their backs.
"I hate my sister." James heard Peter mutter.
"Your sister is hot, mate." He heard Sirius say. "But not as pretty as that Lumina girl."
And James, resting on his pillow, wondered if he would join Quidditch that Lily Evans would possibly notice him...
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A/N: Alright, so Jonah Lumina is a girl. If nobody noticed, and the rule about first-years not allowed to play Quidditch had been uplifted and is no longer is in use.
Will Peter play Quidditch?
Will JAMES play Quidditch?
Find out in the next chapter