Say Yes
By: Cody
Ages:
Devon: 17
Raven: 16
Eddie: 16
Chelsea: 16
Cory: twelve
Ryan: 17
Chelsea came over the next day to apologize to Raven. She rang the doorbell and Cory answered. "Hey, baby! Lookin' for love?"
"Omigod, Cory, you are still not over this stupid phase?" Chelsea rolled her eyes.
"This ain't a phase baby! It's LOVE!"
"Whatever. Is Raven home?"
"Yeah. You made her PRETTY mad last night. She took it all out on me though, so I think she's better now."
"Whatever just got get her, please?"
"Fine. But I'll be back." Cory yelled, "RAE! GOT A VISITOR!"
"WHO IS IT?" Raven screamed back.
"DEVON!"
Chelsea made motions with her hands and whispered, "No! No!"
"DEVON?! YOU TELL THAT FAG THAT I NEVER WANNA SEE HIS PUTRID FACE AGAIN!"
"I'M JUST KIDDING, SIS! IT'S CHELSEA!"
"CHELSEA?"
"YEAH!"
"OH! I'LL BE RIGHT DOWN!"
Raven ran downstairs and let Chelsea in. "Hi."
"Hi, Rae. Look I came over to apolo-"
"No, Chelsea. Don't apologize. I lost my cool last night for no reason. It's not your fault she died."
"I still feel terrible, though."
"Don't."
"You really miss her, don't you?"
"More than you know. Mom and I were really tight."
"I'm sorry, Rae."
Raven smiled. "Let's change the subject. To something like..." she began to drool. "Ryan Fight..."
"Rae. You and I said that in our first weddings we'd be eachothers flower girls. How am I gonna do that if you're eloping?"
"Girl, once we're older and we get our parents used to the idea, then we'll have a big old fancy wedding. You can be my flower girl then."
Chelsea smiled. "Okay, Raven. Whatever you say."
Raven smiled. "Girl. I love you and everything, but...get out of my house. Ryan will be here any minuet. Wait...on second thought...I need you here..."
Ding dong!
Raven straightened out her dark red dress that she had sewn the night before.
Ding dong!
"Coming!" Raven answered the door. Ryan was standing in the nicest/casual clothes he had.
"Ready, darling?" Ryan asked.
"As I'll ever be." Raven smiled.
"Let's go then!" he took Raven's suitcase.
"I'll be right out!" She ran to Chelsea. "Back me up on this! Help me convince my dad we have a school trip."
Raven and Chelsea walked into the kitchen to find Victor chopping onions. "Hey, Dad! I'm going on a school trip today. Sorry I forgot to tell you. Bye."
"Wait one minuet young lady." Victor put down his knife. "How come I'm just now finding out about this school trip?"
"Dad, I'm sorry. I've just been thinking about Mom a lot. I've been kinda out of it. I'm sorry. But this trip is exactly what I need, Dad. It'll totally relieve the stress."
Victor thought it over. "Well when you put it that way...fine. When will you be back home?"
"Two weeks."
"Okay then. Bye, honey. I'll miss you." Victor hugged his daughter. "Goodbye."
Raven smiled. "Love you, Daddy." and she ran outside to Ryan.
"How long do you think you can pull this off, Rae?" Chelsea asked.
"I'd go for the next two minuets. Bye, Chelsea. I'll see you soon!" Raven hopped into Ryan's car.
There was an old man that answered the door. "Eh?" he asked.
"Umm...I am Ryan Fight and I am madly in love with Miss Raven here." Ryan said.
"Ah yes. Ryan Fight. We've been waiting for you two."
Raven and Ryan walked inside. An older woman was sitting at the piano. "Ah! There you are! Such a lovely young couple!" she began to play "Here Comes The Bride".
Ryan and Raven stood at the front of the room. The old man said, "Do you, Ryan Fight take Miss Raven Baxter to be your wife?"
"I do." a single tear fell from Ryan's face.
The old man looked to Raven. "Do you, Raven Baxter, take Ryan Fight to be your husband?"
to be continued...
By: Cody
Ages:
Devon: 17
Raven: 16
Eddie: 16
Chelsea: 16
Cory: twelve
Ryan: 17
Chelsea came over the next day to apologize to Raven. She rang the doorbell and Cory answered. "Hey, baby! Lookin' for love?"
"Omigod, Cory, you are still not over this stupid phase?" Chelsea rolled her eyes.
"This ain't a phase baby! It's LOVE!"
"Whatever. Is Raven home?"
"Yeah. You made her PRETTY mad last night. She took it all out on me though, so I think she's better now."
"Whatever just got get her, please?"
"Fine. But I'll be back." Cory yelled, "RAE! GOT A VISITOR!"
"WHO IS IT?" Raven screamed back.
"DEVON!"
Chelsea made motions with her hands and whispered, "No! No!"
"DEVON?! YOU TELL THAT FAG THAT I NEVER WANNA SEE HIS PUTRID FACE AGAIN!"
"I'M JUST KIDDING, SIS! IT'S CHELSEA!"
"CHELSEA?"
"YEAH!"
"OH! I'LL BE RIGHT DOWN!"
Raven ran downstairs and let Chelsea in. "Hi."
"Hi, Rae. Look I came over to apolo-"
"No, Chelsea. Don't apologize. I lost my cool last night for no reason. It's not your fault she died."
"I still feel terrible, though."
"Don't."
"You really miss her, don't you?"
"More than you know. Mom and I were really tight."
"I'm sorry, Rae."
Raven smiled. "Let's change the subject. To something like..." she began to drool. "Ryan Fight..."
"Rae. You and I said that in our first weddings we'd be eachothers flower girls. How am I gonna do that if you're eloping?"
"Girl, once we're older and we get our parents used to the idea, then we'll have a big old fancy wedding. You can be my flower girl then."
Chelsea smiled. "Okay, Raven. Whatever you say."
Raven smiled. "Girl. I love you and everything, but...get out of my house. Ryan will be here any minuet. Wait...on second thought...I need you here..."
Ding dong!
Raven straightened out her dark red dress that she had sewn the night before.
Ding dong!
"Coming!" Raven answered the door. Ryan was standing in the nicest/casual clothes he had.
"Ready, darling?" Ryan asked.
"As I'll ever be." Raven smiled.
"Let's go then!" he took Raven's suitcase.
"I'll be right out!" She ran to Chelsea. "Back me up on this! Help me convince my dad we have a school trip."
Raven and Chelsea walked into the kitchen to find Victor chopping onions. "Hey, Dad! I'm going on a school trip today. Sorry I forgot to tell you. Bye."
"Wait one minuet young lady." Victor put down his knife. "How come I'm just now finding out about this school trip?"
"Dad, I'm sorry. I've just been thinking about Mom a lot. I've been kinda out of it. I'm sorry. But this trip is exactly what I need, Dad. It'll totally relieve the stress."
Victor thought it over. "Well when you put it that way...fine. When will you be back home?"
"Two weeks."
"Okay then. Bye, honey. I'll miss you." Victor hugged his daughter. "Goodbye."
Raven smiled. "Love you, Daddy." and she ran outside to Ryan.
"How long do you think you can pull this off, Rae?" Chelsea asked.
"I'd go for the next two minuets. Bye, Chelsea. I'll see you soon!" Raven hopped into Ryan's car.
There was an old man that answered the door. "Eh?" he asked.
"Umm...I am Ryan Fight and I am madly in love with Miss Raven here." Ryan said.
"Ah yes. Ryan Fight. We've been waiting for you two."
Raven and Ryan walked inside. An older woman was sitting at the piano. "Ah! There you are! Such a lovely young couple!" she began to play "Here Comes The Bride".
Ryan and Raven stood at the front of the room. The old man said, "Do you, Ryan Fight take Miss Raven Baxter to be your wife?"
"I do." a single tear fell from Ryan's face.
The old man looked to Raven. "Do you, Raven Baxter, take Ryan Fight to be your husband?"
to be continued...